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thanks nishi! waiting for your next comments, helpful mod about consistency and pitches stuff ^^Nishizumi wrote:
hey o/ this is my mod but it hasn't finished. but hope my mod helpful hi nishi!
[Inner Oni]
00:11:619 (25,26) - swap these, on (26) the sound has same melody like (23),(24). also consistent to 00:14:019 - I'm holding the current one bc I think 1st and 3rd 8/1 (00:11:469 (24,25,26) - and 00:16:269 (63,64,65) -) have the same melody. 00:13:869 (43,44,45) - and this is having consistency with 00:18:669 (83,84,85) -
00:16:569 - kat here? same as above yeah applied this as above
00:18:969 - ^ holding this to dinamicity (don' want 4 kkk's on this section, so kkk kkd kkk kkd is fine imo)
00:20:469 - you could give an emphasize with finisher herelol applied I've did that on other diffs zz
00:25:569 - make the same like 00:20:769 - please. this seems inconsistent with other 2plets like, the 2plet should be start from 00:25:869 fixed as I told by irc xD
00:39:669 - you could give an emphasize this like like 00:20:469 - I think sounds and pitches are really different, first one is low and doesn't deserve big note imo
00:42:744 - delete this, looks overstream(?). i mean you should make easier on the quiet part. true, is more quiet than I thought xD
00:42:969 - change to kat and delete at 00:43:119 -, as i said this is quiet part so give a bit break here would be good I pref changing kat this one: 00:42:819 (297) - sounds even better and yeah, made the break
00:43:344 - same as 00:43:744 - this triplet is unnecessary hmmm yeah probably, but isn't bad imo cause it gives a good descendant sound, I'll leave it for now
00:43:569 - change to kat here, snare sound applied~
00:43:944 - delete this? 5 plet is kinda....unnecessary on this part same reason as above, also it's a good way to keep players not getting bored (also isn't the lowest part in the song)
00:47:319 - delete this ? for a bit break break here is enough I think 00:47:769 -
00:47:469 - start from this to 00:48:969 - nerf please. like 5plet reduce to triplet, and delete dkd triplet
my suggestion is d-kdk-d-d-d-k-d-k-kkd (from 00:47:669 - to 00:48:969 - with 1/4 beatsnap) well I've tried your suggestion lot of times and I think it can rest consistency with 00:43:269 - and considering there's a section change (and break after these notes) there shouldn't be problem about using some quintuple D:
00:50:469 - i think this 2plet is "forced", it doesn't even fit to the music. better to change to k ddk yeah probably kinda forced, but I think there's not a neccesary pitch on 00:50:619 - to get follow so I think current doubles are fine here
00:51:669 - same as above, better to change to d kkd. and two previous note is kat yeah here you're right, these doubles completely doesn't fill... it's different than the doubles that I mentioned above
00:52:869 - same as above, better to change to k ddd
00:55:269 - same as above, better to change to k ddd well I'm holding the current doubles for same reason that I did on last comment about first doubles
00:56:469 - ^, better to change to k kkd yeah, also changed the last note to don for emphasis
00:57:069 - 00:57:669 - ^, k ddd I pref moving 00:57:744 (409) - to 00:57:819 (409) - to hold a consistency about doubles from 00:55:269 (388,389,390,391) -
00:58:644 - delete this, unnecessary you're right, deleted the don
01:03:519 - better to change to kkd, more fit to the music again :3
01:05:769 - change to only 1/2 snap please, this is overstream(?) I currently deleted only 01:05:844 (462) - cuz on this section 01:05:919 (462,463,464) - you can hear a background musicalso made the triplet ddd
01:07:869 - ^ yeah now I'm applying completely you said, there's not any sound to use quintuple
01:08:469 - and other 40% volume greenlines, it doesn't need to change to decrease the volume since the volume with 50% is same. increase to 50% not totally sure about this, I think current 40% are fine considering it's slower and slightly lower than part before, for now I'm leaving but open to any other comment
01:27:669 - this sv change looks not smooth, better to decrease to 0.85x yeah I was about to do this xD
01:32:469 - to 01:37:269 - make only triplet please, no 5plet or more. the gap notes between 01:27:669 - and 01:32:469 - although the music is similar well I just didn't delete 01:34:419 (589,590,591,592,593) - to make it a little more interesting, but did only triples on other parts :3
01:51:519 - delete this to give a bit break,because start from 01:46:269 - there isn't a little break until the end I think it can cut so much the flow between the song and imo notes before kiai are neccesary. Also Inner players should be familiarized with 30 seconds of notes I think
01:56:233 (754,755) - delete these notes to give a bit break towards kiai and change 753 to kat to emphasize the contrast color same reason as above, but made the triplet kkk
will continue on tomorrow (maybe) :/