dropping this here, i don't understand your rhythm choices in inner oni's kiais, the last one most of all; their structure doesn't reflect the music at all to me and it just seems random.
what i'd suggest as a basic core structure could be this 01:57:669 -
this would reflect way more efficiently the song than what you actually have which is mapped... quite randomly
then you can play around it by improvising stuff like this
this is just an exemple on how you could make the kiai more interesting, as of now you're not playing with the don/kat contrasts enough and it gives a somewhat messy results where you just dont feel like playing the song...
my two cents
what i'd suggest as a basic core structure could be this 01:57:669 -
this would reflect way more efficiently the song than what you actually have which is mapped... quite randomly
then you can play around it by improvising stuff like this
this is just an exemple on how you could make the kiai more interesting, as of now you're not playing with the don/kat contrasts enough and it gives a somewhat messy results where you just dont feel like playing the song...
my two cents