Underforest wrote:

also re-dl for new MP3

1. Nothing!

1. 00:13:110 (4) - This should be circles, so that way these drums get better emphasis than being mapped the exact same way as the vocal right before it.
2. 01:20:715 (5,1) - Blanket could be fixed up a bit.

1. 00:01:912 (4,5) - It's okay to turn off distance snap to make this 1/2 pattern look like the other ones to avoid legibility issues.
2. 00:25:363 (4,5) - Blanket could be improved.

1. 00:00:856 (2,3,4) - ctrl + g this rhythm. Those circles do much better mapping the synth instead of nothing. Like what you did 00:02:546 (2,3,4) - here.
2. 00:04:236 (2) - Replace with circles for reasons as stated above.

1. 00:00:856 (2,3,4) - ctrl + g for reasons stated above. It makes a lot more sense for those circles to be on the synth. Please fix future cases too.
2. 00:15:645 (1,2,3) - This jump is giant for such soft vocals, don't you think?

1. Cute! Gl.

Meyrink wrote:

Underforest wrote:

also re-dl for new MP3

That's a nice mp3 u got there !
might consider add credit to description because i have done quite some work to make that mp3 good https://puu.sh/wBn87.jpg

PolkaMocha wrote:

[General:]

1. Nothing!

[Easy:]

1. 00:13:110 (4) - This should be circles, so that way these drums get better emphasis than being mapped the exact same way as the vocal right before it. fixed
2. 01:20:715 (5,1) - Blanket could be fixed up a bit. fixed

[Normal:]

1. 00:01:912 (4,5) - It's okay to turn off distance snap to make this 1/2 pattern look like the other ones to avoid legibility issues. I'll think about it
2. 00:25:363 (4,5) - Blanket could be improved. ^

[Hard:]

1. 00:00:856 (2,3,4) - ctrl + g this rhythm. Those circles do much better mapping the synth instead of nothing. Like what you did 00:02:546 (2,3,4) - here. fixed
2. 00:04:236 (2) - Replace with circles for reasons as stated above. fixed

[Insane:]

1. 00:00:856 (2,3,4) - ctrl + g for reasons stated above. It makes a lot more sense for those circles to be on the synth. Please fix future cases too. thinking about it, because it would break triangle pattern
2. 00:15:645 (1,2,3) - This jump is giant for such soft vocals, don't you think? reduced a bit

[Afteword:]

1. Cute! Gl.

[Nemesis] wrote:

M4M

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/621851

at least not overly happy anime girls this time ughhh

Love

00:02:969 (4,1) - stack's off I'll think about it
00:12:264 (1,3) - just blanket this, looks awkward (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8518753) ok
00:40:997 (1) - turn on the drum hs here, sounds awkward compared to 00:37:617 (1) - , 00:44:377 (1) - etc (if you're going for a full hitsound change in this section which I suppose you tried) finish is more important the drum
01:00:434 (5,6,7) - decrease it as it goes on, music seems to be really intense on 01:00:434 (5) - , while way less intense on 01:00:645 (7) - , so might as well use some ds changes to emphasize that that would look awkward
01:10:363 (3,6) - just copypaste one of these onto another, looks more aesthetically pleasing that way it's actually copied, but rotated

Hard

00:19:448 (2,4) - maybe add some more corelation between the two? (4) could slide in blanketing (2), which would improve both flow and aesthetics (01:10:152 (2,3) - something like this would be perfect imo) idk
00:19:976 (4,1) - maybe netpicky, but stack these up that jump is intended
00:40:997 (1) - drum hs again on the head for consistency same reason as insane

Normal

00:08:884 (4,5) - copypaste these for aesthetics it's actually copied, but rotated
01:15:645 (2,4) - blanket maybe? idk I'm bad at these diffs already fine
01:26:419 - add a circle there, you're clearly missing an important sound there. fixed

Easy

00:37:617 (1,2,3) - use copypasted 120 degree rotations instead? shapes are supposed to be spaced so player doesn't confuse
00:57:898 (1) - a long slider would fit in better imo spinner fits better

I get progressively worse with my mod quality as the difficulties get lower, sorry.

Good luck, hope I helped somehow lol

Underforest wrote:

Video and MP3 stolen from Meylink

Meyrink wrote:

maybe bg too soon or maybe the map

Sinnoh wrote:

they just did what in ep 1

Insane
00:33:814 (5,1) - Raise the OD, this is too easy to hit slider early intended to announce a rhythm change
00:47:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is too repetitive/circular, use different flow ok
00:59:166 (1,2,3,4) - Can you angle these a bit more so it has a less sharp angle to the first slider? It's much harder than it should really be done
01:08:462 (3) - 01:21:983 (3) - Use 3/4 slider? Vocal doesn't feel too well emphasised on tail since it's same as one before I'll think about it

Hard
00:04:659 (4,5) - can't this be avoided? Feels really weird/harder to play compared to insane done
00:13:955 (1) - use 1/2 circles like 00:15:645 (1) - ? same vocal it feels different for me, will think
01:23:673 (2,3) - this is a bit of a stretch to play, I don't think blanket should be used here. hmm

Normal
00:05:504 (5) - imo should really be 1/1 sliders but that's like an opinion circles are better
00:25:363 (3,4) - blanket is too close it has same distance
00:47:757 (1) - this section is too much of a diffspike, there aren't any 1/1s for a while, add one somewhere following drums

Easy
00:57:053 (3) - this is fine if you just replace slider with a circle for larger break idk how to answer to this, it won't fit

Doormat wrote:

nice

Underforest wrote:

Doormat wrote:

nice

ye, that's why I put the "ask him first" label so people is not like me
again, I apologize

let's please not start a discussion with that lol gonna ask again for permission so everyone's happy
edit: got real permission to use them now so yeah, will keep them

Kyle Y wrote:

M4M request from your Q wrong map but ok lol

Kudosu please. I just write in different color haha.

Insane

00:04:659 (4,5) - melody here is same as 00:01:278 (4,5,6) - and 00:02:969 (4,5) - , I think better to have some rhythm.\ not really, it has a drum in blue tick
00:08:884 (1,4,5,6) - could you mind blanket 00:09:307 (3) - , just becasue of my perfectionism lol i don't think it needs blanket
00:14:377 (3,5,6,7) - overlapping here is not that good in looking. ok
00:34:448 - skipped? I think you can follow words here and 00:35:081 - follow beat, it is acceptable for me. following drums
00:54:518 (1,2,3) - maybe make very small ds? drums
01:08:462 (3) - for here, I will treat it as 2 beat for twice making 4 beat. 1,2,3 below as a group, and same as 4,5,6, rhythm I think is like that.
vocal stops so will keep this slider
01:26:419 (10,1) - jumping could bigger as both beats are strong beats. I don't see need to increase the jump

00:35:081 (2) - nc for SV change? nah, no need
01:14:588 (10,1) - if it is stacked, it is fun to play haha. suggestion only. that would confuse the players
You place the extented slide in the same similar position, it is good if you can have different pattern.

Hard

most of the rhythm you just follow Insane, then if you accept part of the modding above, then change for Hard also if needed.
00:32:546 (1) - changed to stream? It is also okay for Hard diff. that would highly break map sense and increase sr
00:57:898 (1) - you can try this: same reason as above

01:00:645 (9) - this sound end at 01:00:856 - , maybe 1/2 slider could be used. the sound you linked is an echo, so is not really a sound lol

Is it enough for only 2 diff?
Yes -> finish
No -> called me back
Not sure -> Yes.

Naotoshi wrote:

chill, i'm working... yea ik xd

[insane]
00:02:757 (3,4) - imo looks kinda ugly cuz it doesn't line up with the follow points made them a bit rectal

00:15:222 (7,8) - having a jump here is kinda weird, considering there's no vocal and the drum isn't too strong. 1/2 slider better imo ok

00:23:462 (4,5,6) - blanket these right? also 00:22:405 (1) - yes, fixed

01:10:363 (3,4) - same issue as first point

01:16:067 (4,5) - seems rly randomly big unstacked
[normal]
00:01:279 (3,4) - check all of these types of things cuz of stacking unstacked

everything else looks ok

Naotoshi wrote:

can i get 2 years of supporter for this icon too

Sinnoh wrote:

no kd
01:08:884 (2) - 01:22:405 (2) - i think you're missing whistles here will probably fix before qualify
00:58:110 (1) - For normal I'd suggest moving this back to red tick so there's a bit more gap between the last note and start of spinner I don't think there's need to do that

Glow Layer wrote:

Wow no me esperaba nada mejor ,actualmente estoy viendo este anime y me ha parecido muy bueno y me encontre con tu beatmap he de admitir que me encanto :.3

pishifat wrote:

can i qualify

Agatsu wrote:

gratz!