Doormat wrote:

nice

Underforest wrote:

Doormat wrote:

nice

ye, that's why I put the "ask him first" label so people is not like me
again, I apologize

let's please not start a discussion with that lol gonna ask again for permission so everyone's happy
edit: got real permission to use them now so yeah, will keep them

Kyle Y wrote:

M4M request from your Q wrong map but ok lol

Kudosu please. I just write in different color haha.

Insane

00:04:659 (4,5) - melody here is same as 00:01:278 (4,5,6) - and 00:02:969 (4,5) - , I think better to have some rhythm.\ not really, it has a drum in blue tick
00:08:884 (1,4,5,6) - could you mind blanket 00:09:307 (3) - , just becasue of my perfectionism lol i don't think it needs blanket
00:14:377 (3,5,6,7) - overlapping here is not that good in looking. ok
00:34:448 - skipped? I think you can follow words here and 00:35:081 - follow beat, it is acceptable for me. following drums
00:54:518 (1,2,3) - maybe make very small ds? drums
01:08:462 (3) - for here, I will treat it as 2 beat for twice making 4 beat. 1,2,3 below as a group, and same as 4,5,6, rhythm I think is like that.
vocal stops so will keep this slider
01:26:419 (10,1) - jumping could bigger as both beats are strong beats. I don't see need to increase the jump

00:35:081 (2) - nc for SV change? nah, no need
01:14:588 (10,1) - if it is stacked, it is fun to play haha. suggestion only. that would confuse the players
You place the extented slide in the same similar position, it is good if you can have different pattern.

Hard

most of the rhythm you just follow Insane, then if you accept part of the modding above, then change for Hard also if needed.
00:32:546 (1) - changed to stream? It is also okay for Hard diff. that would highly break map sense and increase sr
00:57:898 (1) - you can try this: same reason as above

01:00:645 (9) - this sound end at 01:00:856 - , maybe 1/2 slider could be used. the sound you linked is an echo, so is not really a sound lol

Is it enough for only 2 diff?
Yes -> finish
No -> called me back
Not sure -> Yes.

Naotoshi wrote:

chill, i'm working... yea ik xd

[insane]
00:02:757 (3,4) - imo looks kinda ugly cuz it doesn't line up with the follow points made them a bit rectal

00:15:222 (7,8) - having a jump here is kinda weird, considering there's no vocal and the drum isn't too strong. 1/2 slider better imo ok

00:23:462 (4,5,6) - blanket these right? also 00:22:405 (1) - yes, fixed

01:10:363 (3,4) - same issue as first point

01:16:067 (4,5) - seems rly randomly big unstacked
[normal]
00:01:279 (3,4) - check all of these types of things cuz of stacking unstacked

everything else looks ok

Naotoshi wrote:

can i get 2 years of supporter for this icon too

Sinnoh wrote:

no kd
01:08:884 (2) - 01:22:405 (2) - i think you're missing whistles here will probably fix before qualify
00:58:110 (1) - For normal I'd suggest moving this back to red tick so there's a bit more gap between the last note and start of spinner I don't think there's need to do that

Glow Layer wrote:

Wow no me esperaba nada mejor ,actualmente estoy viendo este anime y me ha parecido muy bueno y me encontre con tu beatmap he de admitir que me encanto :.3

pishifat wrote:

can i qualify

Agatsu wrote:

gratz!