m4m from ur queue
General
-why is Easy the only diff without glaring copypaste
since that isn't copypasted like the other diffs, it makes me think that the copypaste isn't done for some sort of meaningful purpose, so please fix the other diffs
Love
00:01:130 (2,3,4) - 4 sounds like the same pitch as 3 but slightly weaker (also missing the kick drum). I think that the DS of 2-3 should be larger than 3-4
00:07:468 (1,4) - blanket?
00:10:426 (6,7,1,2) - 7 sounds weaker than 2 so i would expect the DS of 6-7 to be smaller than 1-2
00:12:538 (1,3) - fix blanket
00:14:229 (1,2) - could use a little more spacing imo
00:07:468 - 00:15:919 - is this entire section supposed to be copy-pasted over here 00:20:989 - 00:29:440 =w= i really dont agree with this because the vocal rhythms change in some places, the guitar does some more stuff, etc.
00:37:046 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:38:736 (3,4) - ^
01:01:553 (1,2,3) - ^ blankets
01:04:827 - sounds overmapped to me
01:07:046 (2,7) - spacing is pretty close, but timing might be far enough. you can space them out further if you want i guess
01:07:151 - this should be mapped not this 01:07:362
01:07:891 (7,1) - could increase DS here imo (for more emphasis on "ka" and NC and background vocals)
00:09:158 - 00:12:538 - more copypaste, these arent really similar at all 01:08:313 - 01:11:693
01:21:834 - 01:25:215 - im more ok with this being copypasted from 01:08:313 - 01:11:693 because it sounds similar to the "kanashii" line. copying from the intro still doesnt make sense though.
Easy
00:14:229 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:15:919 (2,1) - blanket the reverse side of 2 with 1?
00:27:750 (1,2) - is this supposed to make a straight line lol
00:48:031 (1,2,3) - would look better as a straight line (flow of 1->2->3) imo
00:51:412 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:229 (4,1) - fix blanket
Normal
00:01:553 (3,4) - overlap doesnt look good
00:12:115 (4,5) - fix blanket (or dump the blanket and rotate by 60 degrees or something)
00:18:031 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:07:468 - 00:20:989 - copypaste thing again
01:01:553 - 01:15:074 - the entire second half of the kiai is copypasted from the first half of the kiai
Hard
00:18:031 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:07:468 - 00:20:989 - copypaste thing again
00:38:736 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:40:426 (5,1) - very slight overlap here doesnt look good imo
01:00:708 (4,5) - the jump here caught me off guard, the DS is pretty high and i thought the timing was 1 beat away. compared to other places, this is DS 2.0x, and the other jumps you put in the kiai are only 1.6x (with the exception of 01:26:905 (1,2) which is 1.8x).
01:01:553 - 01:15:074 - the entire second half of the kiai is copypasted from the first half of the kiai
Good luck
General
-why is Easy the only diff without glaring copypaste
since that isn't copypasted like the other diffs, it makes me think that the copypaste isn't done for some sort of meaningful purpose, so please fix the other diffs
Love
00:01:130 (2,3,4) - 4 sounds like the same pitch as 3 but slightly weaker (also missing the kick drum). I think that the DS of 2-3 should be larger than 3-4
00:07:468 (1,4) - blanket?
00:10:426 (6,7,1,2) - 7 sounds weaker than 2 so i would expect the DS of 6-7 to be smaller than 1-2
00:12:538 (1,3) - fix blanket
00:14:229 (1,2) - could use a little more spacing imo
00:07:468 - 00:15:919 - is this entire section supposed to be copy-pasted over here 00:20:989 - 00:29:440 =w= i really dont agree with this because the vocal rhythms change in some places, the guitar does some more stuff, etc.
00:37:046 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:38:736 (3,4) - ^
01:01:553 (1,2,3) - ^ blankets
01:04:827 - sounds overmapped to me
01:07:046 (2,7) - spacing is pretty close, but timing might be far enough. you can space them out further if you want i guess
01:07:151 - this should be mapped not this 01:07:362
01:07:891 (7,1) - could increase DS here imo (for more emphasis on "ka" and NC and background vocals)
00:09:158 - 00:12:538 - more copypaste, these arent really similar at all 01:08:313 - 01:11:693
01:21:834 - 01:25:215 - im more ok with this being copypasted from 01:08:313 - 01:11:693 because it sounds similar to the "kanashii" line. copying from the intro still doesnt make sense though.
hitsounding
im assuming you arent gonna apply any of these since ur hitsounding pattern sounds fine and seems consistent, but heres some stuff based on what i hear in the music. if you want me to hitsound mod further then let me know.
00:10:637 (7) - add whistle
00:11:905 (4) - remove whistle
00:13:595 (4) - remove whistle
00:15:708 (7) - add whistle
00:17:398 - ^
00:18:665 - remove whistle
00:19:088 (7) - add whistle
00:20:461 (8) - ^
00:20:884 (11) - remove whistle
00:22:046 - ^
00:22:468 (7) - add whistle
00:23:736 (4) - remove whistle
00:56:060 - add clap
00:10:637 (7) - add whistle
00:11:905 (4) - remove whistle
00:13:595 (4) - remove whistle
00:15:708 (7) - add whistle
00:17:398 - ^
00:18:665 - remove whistle
00:19:088 (7) - add whistle
00:20:461 (8) - ^
00:20:884 (11) - remove whistle
00:22:046 - ^
00:22:468 (7) - add whistle
00:23:736 (4) - remove whistle
00:56:060 - add clap
Easy
00:14:229 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:15:919 (2,1) - blanket the reverse side of 2 with 1?
00:27:750 (1,2) - is this supposed to make a straight line lol
00:48:031 (1,2,3) - would look better as a straight line (flow of 1->2->3) imo
00:51:412 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:229 (4,1) - fix blanket
Normal
00:01:553 (3,4) - overlap doesnt look good
00:12:115 (4,5) - fix blanket (or dump the blanket and rotate by 60 degrees or something)
00:18:031 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:07:468 - 00:20:989 - copypaste thing again
01:01:553 - 01:15:074 - the entire second half of the kiai is copypasted from the first half of the kiai
Hard
00:18:031 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:07:468 - 00:20:989 - copypaste thing again
00:38:736 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:40:426 (5,1) - very slight overlap here doesnt look good imo
01:00:708 (4,5) - the jump here caught me off guard, the DS is pretty high and i thought the timing was 1 beat away. compared to other places, this is DS 2.0x, and the other jumps you put in the kiai are only 1.6x (with the exception of 01:26:905 (1,2) which is 1.8x).
01:01:553 - 01:15:074 - the entire second half of the kiai is copypasted from the first half of the kiai
Good luck