2017-06-11 13:00 ByBy: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1263655 USAO - Aeropolis [Place of Rejoice]]
2017-06-11 13:00 ByBy: let's start
2017-06-11 13:00 C00L: sik
2017-06-11 13:02 ByBy: the hitwhistle in the louder parts of the song (basically drum-hitwhistle) is kinda barely audible
2017-06-11 13:03 C00L: 00:10:804 (1) -
2017-06-11 13:03 C00L: like this one?
2017-06-11 13:03 ByBy: might considering raise its volume a bit to make enough audible for louder parts too not only for calmer parts
2017-06-11 13:03 ByBy: yeah
2017-06-11 13:03 C00L: hmm
2017-06-11 13:04 C00L: i mean its p audible for me
2017-06-11 13:04 C00L: and its volume its p high already
2017-06-11 13:04 C00L: idk
2017-06-11 13:04 ByBy: checked it deeply
2017-06-11 13:04 ByBy: and yeh
2017-06-11 13:06 ByBy: 00:02:958 (3) - here's no any new stanza as i can see
2017-06-11 13:06 ByBy: so no nc here
2017-06-11 13:06 C00L: done
2017-06-11 13:06 C00L: also done another one
2017-06-11 13:06 C00L: 00:07:881 (3) -
2017-06-11 13:07 ByBy: nice
2017-06-11 13:08 ByBy: 00:00:650 (3,1) - both of them have the same emphasis because (1)- has a stronger vocal and (3)- a stronger snare would be nice to space them more
2017-06-11 13:08 ByBy: same for 00:03:111 (2,1) - // 00:05:573 (3,1) - // 00:08:035 (2,1) - and so on
2017-06-11 13:09 C00L: `hmm
2017-06-11 13:09 C00L: i dont agree here
2017-06-11 13:09 C00L: the vocal is much less intense
2017-06-11 13:09 ByBy: why so?
2017-06-11 13:09 C00L: because the drum hit makes the whole thing stand out
2017-06-11 13:09 ByBy: no is not
2017-06-11 13:09 C00L: whilst the vocal isnt as strong imo
2017-06-11 13:10 ByBy: hmm
2017-06-11 13:12 C00L: the drum makes it stand out whilst the vocal not so much
2017-06-11 13:12 ByBy: i see
2017-06-11 13:20 ByBy: 00:07:111 (1,2) - i'm not a fan of this kind of pattern so something like
http://puu.sh/wgXzq/631a19e3e1.jpg would look much better
2017-06-11 13:22 C00L: done
2017-06-11 13:25 ByBy: 00:14:650 (5,1) - tbh it doesn't flow really nice here since it is kinda broken something like this
https://puu.sh/wgXM1/b1156a3e13.jpg would improve the flow
2017-06-11 13:26 ByBy: 00:15:881 (2,3) - consider spacing them more since the downbeat i mean (3)- is more dominant than (2)-
2017-06-11 13:28 C00L: done first and i felt like these 00:15:727 (1,2) - are more dominant
2017-06-11 13:28 ByBy: 00:16:958 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - i think this one should be considered i was kinda able to read it but i'm afraid that someone would confuse 00:16:958 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - with a stream so better unstack both of them
2017-06-11 13:29 C00L: thats what nc's are for
2017-06-11 13:29 C00L: for me it just depends on how ppl play
2017-06-11 13:29 ByBy:
2017-06-11 13:29 C00L: some hit it without any problem some dont
2017-06-11 13:29 ByBy: i see
2017-06-11 13:34 ByBy: 00:36:958 (1,2) - from 00:34:496 (1) - you started to use 1/2 slider + 2 notes but here you came back to 2 1/2 sliders which breaks the consistency with this section replacing 00:37:265 (2) - with 2 notes would make this section more consistent in terms of rhythm
2017-06-11 13:37 C00L: fixd
2017-06-11 13:46 ByBy: 00:39:266 (4,1) - space them more since (1)- has more emphasis than (4)-
2017-06-11 13:49 C00L: done
2017-06-11 13:51 ByBy: 00:39:419 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1) - i have concerns about this whole section you're following the vocals but suddenly on 00:44:342 (1) - you swipped to instruments which make it inconsistent plus less dense because there are kinda the same instruments like from 00:44:342 (1) - too
2017-06-11 13:51 C00L: 00:44:342 (1) -
2017-06-11 13:51 C00L: the flute comes in
2017-06-11 13:52 ByBy: that's not true
2017-06-11 13:52 ByBy: the instruments are the same in both parts :C
2017-06-11 13:52 C00L: hmm
2017-06-11 13:52 C00L: but like the flute is kinda herable here
2017-06-11 13:52 C00L: 00:44:342 (1) -
2017-06-11 13:52 C00L: intense owo
2017-06-11 13:52 C00L: but tbh
2017-06-11 13:53 C00L: ill remap this section
2017-06-11 13:53 C00L: dw
2017-06-11 13:53 C00L: i dont like it either
2017-06-11 13:53 C00L: old C00l mapping C:
2017-06-11 13:53 ByBy: oki
2017-06-11 13:53 C00L: ill remap it later doe
2017-06-11 13:53 ByBy: xD
2017-06-11 13:53 ByBy: okay
2017-06-11 13:54 ByBy: 00:02:188 (1) - why only 30%? ;w; the song is not tranquil here which can make the hitobjects barely audible consider increasing the volume to 60% for the sake of hitobjects's audability
2017-06-11 13:55 C00L: hm
2017-06-11 13:55 C00L: i remember doing it for the background sounds
2017-06-11 13:55 C00L: but that makes more sense
2017-06-11 13:55 C00L: done!