LiousPL wrote:
Still no homo mod~
General
- All looks good, love hitsounds <3
Rain- 00:07:385 (4) - Ctrl+H and take it to x:200, for add movement here~
- 00:22:675 (3) - Ctrl+H and take it to x:208 (and 4 to x:248), for add movement again
- 00:55:578 (1) - Maybe do this spinner longer? To 00:57:707 ~
- 01:18:030 (3) - Take this to x:392, for a better entry into the further triplet
- 01:21:030 - Set a note in this place, becouse there are a drum sound
- 01:22:675 (3) - Set to x:136, for a better entry into the further triplet again
Platter
Looks good, don't see any issues
Grapes's Salad- Maybe add notes here? no, you provided no reasons to why i should add the notes and if i add those notes the mapp becomes overmapped for a salad.
SPOILER- 00:40:288
- 00:42:223
- 00:42:610
- 00:49:191
- 00:53:836
Cup
Patterns and Flow are OK, didn't see anyting wrong again
GL~
Nokashi wrote:
Hello There!
[ Salad]
- 00:05:062 (4) - Feels off that there isnt any noticable movement to get to this beat 00:05:256 - which is really strong to be fair i dont really hear anything.
- 00:11:062 (3,1) - Inconsistent with 00:12:223 (3,1) - in terms of spacing. 00:11:062 (3,1) - This should have had more spacing in my opinion i fucking hate this part, its a pain to balance. i moved some notes around.
- 00:14:159 (2,3) - Im rather skeptical about the fact that this jump and the intensity provided the downbeat movement here 00:14:546 (3,1) - goes unnoticed, as it is spaced like a walk. I Would suggest rearranging rhythm here rearranged this section.
- 00:21:514 (4,1) - Should have been a dash here to be consistent with 00:18:417 (4,1) - youre right
- 00:27:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - You followed these here, yet you didnt take advantage of the last piano note here 00:28:675 - i added it but i didnt add it before because it would be hell to balance.
- 00:30:804 (3,1) - I Feel like this should have had the dash instead i dont wanna dash spam to the next note.
- 00:39:320 (3) - The sound at the entry point of this slider is really prominent and i would expect a more energetic movement to get to it, a dash maybe? Up to you. 00:41:643 (3) - Similar point here however as an added note i dont think the subtle antiflow movement is really needed here so as an extra i would recommend the ctrl h and the reposition of 00:41:643 (3) - this somewhere where the movement is more fluid, and more intense i see your point but i dont know exactly how i would do this without making it straining or a dash.
- 01:01:385 (4,1) - I Would actually buff this a bit since its ambiguous in my eyes agreed.
- 01:04:288 (4,5) - This might be strainful to position as a newer player, you could simplify the movement here nerfd
- 01:06:417 (4,5) - Again i dont really see a reason for this to have the dash and consequently making the movement to the strong beat 01:06:804 (5,1) - underwhelming yea
- 01:10:675 (2) - dude nice anchors :thinking: grats for noticing though
Good Luck~
xd
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