whats yaoi
(didnt mod cup cause inexperience)
[rain]
there's a lot of unfollowed rhythms here - even if its supposed to be a non-advanced rain its still a good idea to follow them
00:02:159 (4,5,6) - missed vocal line at the middle of (5), try something like this:
00:06:804 (3,4,5) - same as 00:02:159 (4,5,6) -
00:07:385 (4,1) - this flows weirdly because (4) is shaped in a way where it's deccelerating, but then suddenly there's an increase of movement in (1). can be fixed by either moving (1) to the left of (4) or making (4) a straight slidernot that i have a right to dictate a slider's orientation /s
00:14:933 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make this follow the rhythm of 00:10:288 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - cause that seems more correct
00:19:965 - unmapped note (sliderticks aren't really effective for representing notes for higher diffs)
00:21:127 - unmapped series of 1/2 notes
00:22:288 - same as 00:19:965
00:24:610 - same (at this point im no longer gonna point out these cause u should see where the others are)
00:25:772 - same as 00:21:127
00:50:352 - missed vocal line
00:54:417 (1) - make the slider repeat once, add a note a 1/2 beat after, adjust spinner to accomodate to the extra notes
01:04:288 - unmapped strong note
(if i didnt point out some unmapped notes its because i think its fine for this diff (unless i say otherwise))
[platter]
00:02:546 (5,1) - this hyper seems out-of-place considering that the following parts have no hypers, maybe remove the hyper
00:43:965 (1,2,3,4) - try spacing these out more
01:21:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - try finding a way to flip these sideways
[salad]
00:11:449 (1,2,3) - make these evenly spaced to flow better to the next part - (1,2) has a distance of 0.96x while (2,3) has a distance of 0.74x
00:37:965 (7,8) - im not sure but i think this is kinda big for a salad?
00:38:546 (1,2) - space these out a little bit more
00:49:385 (5) - move this further away from (4) because a stop seems weird flow-wise
01:24:610 - try adding a note here and then adjusting the spinner
thats gay
(didnt mod cup cause inexperience)
[rain]
there's a lot of unfollowed rhythms here - even if its supposed to be a non-advanced rain its still a good idea to follow them
00:02:159 (4,5,6) - missed vocal line at the middle of (5), try something like this:
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how u map it is up to u but try following that rhythmic placement
00:03:320 (1) - missed note at the slidertick, try shortening the note to a 1/1 slider and adding a note to where it originally endedhow u map it is up to u but try following that rhythmic placement
00:06:804 (3,4,5) - same as 00:02:159 (4,5,6) -
00:07:385 (4,1) - this flows weirdly because (4) is shaped in a way where it's deccelerating, but then suddenly there's an increase of movement in (1). can be fixed by either moving (1) to the left of (4) or making (4) a straight slider
00:14:933 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make this follow the rhythm of 00:10:288 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - cause that seems more correct
00:19:965 - unmapped note (sliderticks aren't really effective for representing notes for higher diffs)
00:21:127 - unmapped series of 1/2 notes
00:22:288 - same as 00:19:965
00:24:610 - same (at this point im no longer gonna point out these cause u should see where the others are)
00:25:772 - same as 00:21:127
00:50:352 - missed vocal line
00:54:417 (1) - make the slider repeat once, add a note a 1/2 beat after, adjust spinner to accomodate to the extra notes
01:04:288 - unmapped strong note
(if i didnt point out some unmapped notes its because i think its fine for this diff (unless i say otherwise))
[platter]
00:02:546 (5,1) - this hyper seems out-of-place considering that the following parts have no hypers, maybe remove the hyper
00:43:965 (1,2,3,4) - try spacing these out more
01:21:127 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - try finding a way to flip these sideways
[salad]
00:11:449 (1,2,3) - make these evenly spaced to flow better to the next part - (1,2) has a distance of 0.96x while (2,3) has a distance of 0.74x
00:37:965 (7,8) - im not sure but i think this is kinda big for a salad?
00:38:546 (1,2) - space these out a little bit more
00:49:385 (5) - move this further away from (4) because a stop seems weird flow-wise
01:24:610 - try adding a note here and then adjusting the spinner
thats gay