Hello~ from in-game req
[Easy]
* OD 2? since there are lots of 3/4s.
* 00:08:776 (1) - shouldn't this start at 00:08:614 - ?
* 00:36:830 (2,3) - rearrange them like this ? http://puu.sh/tNxEL/d634f0b2df.jpg
to have flow change at strong sound 00:37:154 -
* 00:59:371 (1,2) - just a suggestion, this feels a bit empty so how about extending the sliders? http://puu.sh/tNxZq/a00539e041.jpg
* 01:31:641 (2) - I bet most of newbies who plays this map first will misclick this at 01:31:479 -, cuz 01:30:506 (1,2) - these are spaced visually similar with 1/1 gap. maybe rotate 01:30:506 (1) - this a bit http://puu.sh/tNydg/ba5b14a918.jpg
* 01:40:884 (1) - why not just 3 point slider? I see no reason not to blanket it perfectly. http://puu.sh/tNywN/720d8f66e5.jpg
* 01:59:046 (1) - extend this to 3/1 ? like you did at 02:04:236 (1) -
* 02:01:641 (1) - ^
* 03:01:965 (2,3) - this is the only 1/2 gap overlap throughout the map,
maybe you could simplify this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/tNyPB/778969f4f1.jpg
[Normal]
* 00:28:073 (5,1) - stack? since you stacked most of other parts; with 2 clickables in a row with 1/2 gap.
* 01:21:100 (2) - 02:05:533 (3) - minor ds error
* 03:34:884 (1,2) - move a bit like this? http://puu.sh/tNzBI/c59308a6b2.jpg since it's a new phase.
[Hard]
* 00:09:749 (6,7) - why not triple here? you used triple at 00:14:938 (4,5,6) - weaker sound.
* 00:21:263 (4,5) - maybe ctrl+g? 00:21:100 (3,4) - this back & forth flow is kinda unexpected since you used circular flow at 00:18:181 (1,2,3,4) - here.
* 00:46:073 (4,5) - ^
* 01:37:641 (3) - this 5 times repeat slider is unexpected, it looks like 3 times repeating one since it looks like continuing rhythm according to how it's structured with 01:37:317 (2) - and 01:38:127 (1,2,3) -
maybe move it a bit like this http://puu.sh/tNBgh/94b5827a93.jpg
or change the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/tNAHg/003ef546ae.jpg
* 01:59:371 (2) - stack with 01:59:533 (3) - ?
* 02:12:992 (2) - it feels it lacks movement compared to 02:10:398 (3) -
maybe move like this? http://puu.sh/tNBu1/2d27211116.jpg
* 02:37:479 (6,7) - kinda ugly overlap, maybe you could fix like this http://puu.sh/tNBG4/eb52cff40a.jpg
* 02:59:046 (1) - most of players will click this right after 02:58:398 (4) - cuz of this 02:57:749 (2,3) - stack,
maybe you could move 02:58:398 (4) - a bit http://puu.sh/tNBNF/e8ed3bebcb.jpg
* 03:31:965 (3) - ^ same issue, maybe this? http://puu.sh/tNBYd/f79bb5b236.jpg
Ending my mod here. Very nice map & huge respect for mapping this whole mapset by your own!
Good Luck!
[Easy]
* OD 2? since there are lots of 3/4s.
* 00:08:776 (1) - shouldn't this start at 00:08:614 - ?
* 00:36:830 (2,3) - rearrange them like this ? http://puu.sh/tNxEL/d634f0b2df.jpg
to have flow change at strong sound 00:37:154 -
* 00:59:371 (1,2) - just a suggestion, this feels a bit empty so how about extending the sliders? http://puu.sh/tNxZq/a00539e041.jpg
* 01:31:641 (2) - I bet most of newbies who plays this map first will misclick this at 01:31:479 -, cuz 01:30:506 (1,2) - these are spaced visually similar with 1/1 gap. maybe rotate 01:30:506 (1) - this a bit http://puu.sh/tNydg/ba5b14a918.jpg
* 01:40:884 (1) - why not just 3 point slider? I see no reason not to blanket it perfectly. http://puu.sh/tNywN/720d8f66e5.jpg
* 01:59:046 (1) - extend this to 3/1 ? like you did at 02:04:236 (1) -
* 02:01:641 (1) - ^
* 03:01:965 (2,3) - this is the only 1/2 gap overlap throughout the map,
maybe you could simplify this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/tNyPB/778969f4f1.jpg
[Normal]
* 00:28:073 (5,1) - stack? since you stacked most of other parts; with 2 clickables in a row with 1/2 gap.
* 01:21:100 (2) - 02:05:533 (3) - minor ds error
* 03:34:884 (1,2) - move a bit like this? http://puu.sh/tNzBI/c59308a6b2.jpg since it's a new phase.
[Hard]
* 00:09:749 (6,7) - why not triple here? you used triple at 00:14:938 (4,5,6) - weaker sound.
* 00:21:263 (4,5) - maybe ctrl+g? 00:21:100 (3,4) - this back & forth flow is kinda unexpected since you used circular flow at 00:18:181 (1,2,3,4) - here.
* 00:46:073 (4,5) - ^
* 01:37:641 (3) - this 5 times repeat slider is unexpected, it looks like 3 times repeating one since it looks like continuing rhythm according to how it's structured with 01:37:317 (2) - and 01:38:127 (1,2,3) -
maybe move it a bit like this http://puu.sh/tNBgh/94b5827a93.jpg
or change the rhythm like this? http://puu.sh/tNAHg/003ef546ae.jpg
* 01:59:371 (2) - stack with 01:59:533 (3) - ?
* 02:12:992 (2) - it feels it lacks movement compared to 02:10:398 (3) -
maybe move like this? http://puu.sh/tNBu1/2d27211116.jpg
* 02:37:479 (6,7) - kinda ugly overlap, maybe you could fix like this http://puu.sh/tNBG4/eb52cff40a.jpg
* 02:59:046 (1) - most of players will click this right after 02:58:398 (4) - cuz of this 02:57:749 (2,3) - stack,
maybe you could move 02:58:398 (4) - a bit http://puu.sh/tNBNF/e8ed3bebcb.jpg
* 03:31:965 (3) - ^ same issue, maybe this? http://puu.sh/tNBYd/f79bb5b236.jpg
Ending my mod here. Very nice map & huge respect for mapping this whole mapset by your own!
Good Luck!