Hi, I'm a shit modder but I can't say no to Mir <3.
We did lots of play-testing beforehand, so i'm pretty much going to go over polish stuff.
[Papayapa!]
00:05:517 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent with 00:02:252 (1,2,3). I would personally use the spacing you have here for the previous pattern, but it's up to you.
00:06:844 - Just so you know, there is a fairly prominent beat on this tick. Just in case you wanted to map it.
00:07:354 (7,3) - Yes, it's neat. It would probably look better if you spaced this out more though.
00:07:354 (7,4) - While we're here, you could make a blanket here.
00:08:578 (4) - Before you weren't opposed to making 3/4 rhythms partially clickable, so why are you using a repeat arrow this time around as opposed to the rhythm at 00:02:864 (1,2,3) - or similar? This is where things are starting to pick up as well.
00:11:435 (5,6,7,8,1) - This stream could use some polish. The technique I use to fix things like this is a slider as a ruler. For this, I would make a slider that stacks on 5 and ends on 1 on the 1/8 tick before/after in order to see what the curve should look like, then adjust the notes accordingly. After that, delete the slider. Here's what it looks like: http://puu.sh/sobl7/823eed65d7.jpg
00:17:864 (2,3) - Not stacked correctly with 00:18:068 (4).
00:20:109 - Another missing blue tick.
00:37:150 (1,3,6) - I think there should be more even visual spacing here. Easy fix would be to move 3 since you've got so many other nice patterns going on.
00:38:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yeah I get it's a similar part of the song, but since this part is only repeated twice (this being the second time), it seems repetitive. This could be improved if you had this pattern rotated 90 degrees, but overall I think this would be better if it wasn't nearly identical to 00:37:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
00:40:007 (8,1) - I think counter-flow would be a good way to emphasize this vocal transition. This is an example of what I mean: http://puu.sh/sobNY/3c15dba0e2.jpg
00:46:334 (6,7,8) - Any reason for having 8 clickable when you had similar vocal patterns mapped like 00:39:803 (7,8)?
00:52:099 - 1/8 beat here that's part of the rhythm you're following. This is going to require a pattern change to implement properly though.
01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing needs to be tidier here.
01:24:803 (2,3) - Not stacked correctly with 01:25:007 (4).
01:31:844 (4,6,7) - This might be changed because of the below mod, but spacing isn't visually consistent here.
01:32:150 - Pretty loud blue tick being skipped here.
01:49:191 (2,3,4,5) - Tidy this curve up!
01:59:905 (1) - End of the song. I can see why you didn't want to increase SV here, but I think this should be much faster based on this end vocal.
[Insane]
00:01:946 (3,4,5,6) - If i told you it was possible to use the slider to create a blanket with 00:01:640 (2), have equal spacing between 00:01:946 (3,5,6) both without requiring drastic spacing changes or breaking your blanket on 5, would you do it?
00:11:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Tidy up this curve.
00:16:129 (2,3) - I think this should be a slider, since the main rhythm doesn't have a strong white tick.
00:16:538 (4,5) - ^
00:19:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know what this pattern is supposed to be... The flow isn't a problem here, I just cannot tell what pattern you're trying to construct here.
00:38:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same comments apply as higher diff.
00:52:252 (5,6,7,8,1) - Tidy this up. First part of the stream is OK.
01:10:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, I don't know what this pattern is. The reason I keep bringing this up is because I don't know how to help you improve the aesthetics of it since I don't know what you're going for here.
Nothing for the lower diffs because I don't think i'd be of much help there (They already look good to me.)
Good luck!
We did lots of play-testing beforehand, so i'm pretty much going to go over polish stuff.
[Papayapa!]
00:05:517 (1,2,3) - Spacing is inconsistent with 00:02:252 (1,2,3). I would personally use the spacing you have here for the previous pattern, but it's up to you.
00:06:844 - Just so you know, there is a fairly prominent beat on this tick. Just in case you wanted to map it.
00:07:354 (7,3) - Yes, it's neat. It would probably look better if you spaced this out more though.
00:07:354 (7,4) - While we're here, you could make a blanket here.
00:08:578 (4) - Before you weren't opposed to making 3/4 rhythms partially clickable, so why are you using a repeat arrow this time around as opposed to the rhythm at 00:02:864 (1,2,3) - or similar? This is where things are starting to pick up as well.
00:11:435 (5,6,7,8,1) - This stream could use some polish. The technique I use to fix things like this is a slider as a ruler. For this, I would make a slider that stacks on 5 and ends on 1 on the 1/8 tick before/after in order to see what the curve should look like, then adjust the notes accordingly. After that, delete the slider. Here's what it looks like: http://puu.sh/sobl7/823eed65d7.jpg
00:17:864 (2,3) - Not stacked correctly with 00:18:068 (4).
00:20:109 - Another missing blue tick.
00:37:150 (1,3,6) - I think there should be more even visual spacing here. Easy fix would be to move 3 since you've got so many other nice patterns going on.
00:38:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yeah I get it's a similar part of the song, but since this part is only repeated twice (this being the second time), it seems repetitive. This could be improved if you had this pattern rotated 90 degrees, but overall I think this would be better if it wasn't nearly identical to 00:37:150 (1,2,3,4,5,6).
00:40:007 (8,1) - I think counter-flow would be a good way to emphasize this vocal transition. This is an example of what I mean: http://puu.sh/sobNY/3c15dba0e2.jpg
00:46:334 (6,7,8) - Any reason for having 8 clickable when you had similar vocal patterns mapped like 00:39:803 (7,8)?
00:52:099 - 1/8 beat here that's part of the rhythm you're following. This is going to require a pattern change to implement properly though.
01:19:191 (1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing needs to be tidier here.
01:24:803 (2,3) - Not stacked correctly with 01:25:007 (4).
01:31:844 (4,6,7) - This might be changed because of the below mod, but spacing isn't visually consistent here.
01:32:150 - Pretty loud blue tick being skipped here.
01:49:191 (2,3,4,5) - Tidy this curve up!
01:59:905 (1) - End of the song. I can see why you didn't want to increase SV here, but I think this should be much faster based on this end vocal.
[Insane]
00:01:946 (3,4,5,6) - If i told you it was possible to use the slider to create a blanket with 00:01:640 (2), have equal spacing between 00:01:946 (3,5,6) both without requiring drastic spacing changes or breaking your blanket on 5, would you do it?
00:11:027 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Tidy up this curve.
00:16:129 (2,3) - I think this should be a slider, since the main rhythm doesn't have a strong white tick.
00:16:538 (4,5) - ^
00:19:191 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't know what this pattern is supposed to be... The flow isn't a problem here, I just cannot tell what pattern you're trying to construct here.
00:38:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same comments apply as higher diff.
00:52:252 (5,6,7,8,1) - Tidy this up. First part of the stream is OK.
01:10:211 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, I don't know what this pattern is. The reason I keep bringing this up is because I don't know how to help you improve the aesthetics of it since I don't know what you're going for here.
Nothing for the lower diffs because I don't think i'd be of much help there (They already look good to me.)
Good luck!