[General:]
- Yaoi on Ice.
Purple combo colours would be hot.
Hitsounds are really loud. Turn those drum noises down.
You need a difficulty between normal and your insane. Too big of a gap.
- 00:10:705 (3) - Beginners will not know how to play this. Just put a whistle note on a circle. Yes, it's more boring, but for beginners, it's not. I won't point this out the whole time, but please simplify these.
00:21:451 (4) - Soft whistle would sound better.
00:36:228 (1) - Ends on a clickable note.
00:37:272 (2,3,4,1,2) - These patterns are not for beginners. I would consider renaming this. It's Easy if you look at the SR, but the patterns that make this map up are very complicated for people who have just started playing the game.
00:46:228 (5,6,1) - Overlaps are not good in beginner difficulties.
00:53:690 (2,1) - ^
01:07:123 (2,4) - Confusing. Make sure the next note is closer to the last note.
01:15:780 (4,1) - This is way too hard for beginners.
01:23:242 (1,2) - Poor flow. Consider moving (2) to the left side of the grid.
- 00:06:228 (2) - This plays better.
00:21:451 (5) - Soft whistle sounds nicer.
00:24:138 (4,5) - map this like you did at 00:27:720 (4). As it is right now, this pattern is too hard to read.
00:28:914 (5,1) - Blanket needs work.
00:33:093 (1) - Move this up to improve flow.
00:36:228 (5,1) - Simplify this. the distance in time between these two notes is not good for normal players.This chorus is mapped so weeeeell
01:09:810 (6,7,1) - Yasssss
01:11:899 (4,5,1) - I like the overlap but I think you should remove it because normal players will struggle reading that.
01:16:974 (1,2,3) - Too confusing. Do this:
- AR 9 doesn't look right. please use AR 8.
00:52:496 (3,4) - Just stack this. Too confusing.
Check your spacing after the chorus. Really hard to follow.
- I like the use of the drum hitsounds. Just needs a bit of a quality check. Good luck.