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Hobbes2 wrote:

m4m with rocket (he thinks he can get away with asking me to mod 1 diff c:)

[Easy]

The DS vs SV is too high imo. Usually in an easy You want a DS of between .8 and 1.2 so that it flows with the slider velocity naturally. When the DS is 1.5, while it's still in the "Easy" threshold, it's generally more uncomfortable because the cursor is changing speed between the movement of the sliders and the gaps between objects. I know its high, but I see it more comfortable in the 1/3 patterns like 2 sliders together, like you point in > 00:12:540 (2,3,1) -- and I really hate when the sliders overlaps for a low DS

00:12:540 (2,3,1) - Not a fan of how the gaps between these sliders isn't the same thickness. I think you want something like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6658085 fixed
00:39:406 (1) - Hm, NC should be 00:40:301 (2), no? fixed

00:46:869 (5,1) - Fix blanket c: fixed

01:10:749 (1) - remove NC fixed

Other than the DS thing this diff is pretty fine. Maybe ask a BN if it's okay before making any major changes. I do think that it's a problem worth fixing personally. Okay, I will ask o3o)/

[Normal]

00:08:064 (5) - Nc should be here?
00:14:928 (1) - NC should be 00:15:228 (2) - ?

For a song like this I prefer if you NC on the downbeats, as it feels like a more consistent pattern to me. Up to you I guess. nah, I prefer my NC variability, I follow the voice changes, and the strong changes in the music, but maybe some people can help me with that XD

00:24:183 (4,5,1) - You're switching from the 1/3 rhythm to a 1/2 rhythm here, I suggest doing this ina more passive way. Maybe make 00:24:182 (4) - a reverse slider and then putting a slider or circle on 00:25:376 - The pattern ypu suggest is too hard I think, I prefer this part more simple, so no change

(Just like you did for 00:27:765 (4,5) - )

00:39:407 (1) - move NC to 00:40:301 (2) - , and etc fixed

01:00:004 (3,4) - Maybe make the straight parts of these parallel fixed

01:17:019 (1,2,3) - eh...active 1/2 rhythm after the entire map is 1/3 is definitely gonna mess up the player, esp since this is a normal The voice caps in 1/2 here, I only follow the voice with the end of the slider, I think is better than put other element, more simple even if its 1/2

[Our History]

I suggest redoing the NCs so that they land on downbeats. I will try, but I like my NC pattern already

00:10:452 (8,1) - Why not perfect stack these? they are lol, fixed anyways

00:31:347 (6,7,8,9,10) - You don't usually change the spacing like this (00:31:347 (6,7) - vs the stream) fixed

00:36:720 (1,2) - Hm, why does it get faster here? If anything the music is less intense, so I'd almost expect it to get slower. is bc the gap of the music change, ilike the change here hehe

00:43:884 (1,2) - Better if they dont touch? fixed

00:48:661 (6,7,8) - Since 6's head is what you click, it would be neater of this pattern if 6's head, 7, and 8 were all equal distance from each other. fixed

00:50:152 (4) - NC for SV change! fixed

Really fun kiai, good job! aww thanks you! <3 I really love to map it

nice set and song, gl :)
Thanks for the mod~
HappyRocket88
IRC with Cosmoe o3o
2016-11-25 19:27 Cosmolade: lets do it o3o)/
2016-11-25 19:27 HappyRocket88: YUS! >w<)/
2016-11-25 19:27 HappyRocket88: Empecemos por el Easy. :3
2016-11-25 19:27 Cosmolade: oh
2016-11-25 19:27 Cosmolade: okay xD
2016-11-25 19:28 HappyRocket88: Bueno. En las cosas generales del mapa no hay como
2016-11-25 19:28 HappyRocket88: cosas relevantes para subrayar. >w<
2016-11-25 19:29 HappyRocket88: Solo es revisar si el metadata es el correcto y estaríamos ready. \:3/
2016-11-25 19:30 Cosmolade: [https://puu.sh/suyyG/f22ada9df2.png cofcof]
2016-11-25 19:30 HappyRocket88: OHHHH!
2016-11-25 19:30 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 19:30 HappyRocket88: Génial. >w<
2016-11-25 19:30 Cosmolade: im fast
2016-11-25 19:30 Cosmolade: lmao
2016-11-25 19:31 Cosmolade: aunque ya me da cosita siempre preguntarle a kwan sobre metadata ; w;
2016-11-25 19:31 Cosmolade: no conozco a nadie mas que haga eso ; A;
2016-11-25 19:31 HappyRocket88: Ohhh!
2016-11-25 19:31 HappyRocket88: alacat
2016-11-25 19:31 HappyRocket88: Lanturn
2016-11-25 19:31 HappyRocket88: :3
2016-11-25 19:31 HappyRocket88: Son buenos. owo7
2016-11-25 19:31 HappyRocket88: Bueno. ya demosle chulito al metadata. >w<
2016-11-25 19:32 HappyRocket88: Cosmooooo!
2016-11-25 19:32 HappyRocket88: El BPM debería de empezar dónde empieza el spinner. ;w;
2016-11-25 19:32 Cosmolade: yuuuuu >w<
2016-11-25 19:32 Cosmolade: D:
2016-11-25 19:32 Cosmolade: bueno, lo muevo(?
2016-11-25 19:33 HappyRocket88: ok! >w<
2016-11-25 19:33 HappyRocket88: El BPM si es tan bajito? :o
2016-11-25 19:34 Cosmolade: yup
2016-11-25 19:34 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 19:35 HappyRocket88: Es que
2016-11-25 19:35 HappyRocket88: stalkeando el thread
2016-11-25 19:35 HappyRocket88: al parecer el amigo de mb también la está mapeando
2016-11-25 19:35 HappyRocket88: y dice que el bpm debería ser mayor como el de su set. :o
2016-11-25 19:35 Cosmolade: nah
2016-11-25 19:36 Cosmolade: este es el real
2016-11-25 19:36 Cosmolade: el bpm no puede ser tal alto
2016-11-25 19:36 Cosmolade: si se sigue la bateria de fondo
2016-11-25 19:36 Cosmolade: bum bum bum(?
2016-11-25 19:36 Cosmolade: osea, los toques fuertes o3o
2016-11-25 19:37 Cosmolade: o quizás pueda tener 2, como megalovania? (120/240)
2016-11-25 19:37 Cosmolade: quien sabe
2016-11-25 19:37 Cosmolade: D:
2016-11-25 19:37 Cosmolade: pero yo me quedo con este asdfg
2016-11-25 19:37 HappyRocket88: Ohhh
2016-11-25 19:37 HappyRocket88: Vale. >u<
2016-11-25 19:37 HappyRocket88: Le preguntamos a Bonsai o alguien
2016-11-25 19:37 HappyRocket88: cuando lo encontremos online. /w\
2016-11-25 19:38 HappyRocket88: Bueno, dejemos ese ahí pendiente. :3
2016-11-25 19:38 HappyRocket88: Vamos a la diff. >-<
2016-11-25 19:41 HappyRocket88: 00:00:899 (1,1) - En las Easys, debemos de dejar tan siquiera una stanza entre un spinner y la nota ya que se podrían confundir a la hora de cliclearlo ya que aparece muy rápido. /w\
2016-11-25 19:42 HappyRocket88: Para ello sugiero remover 00:05:377 (1) - y ubicar un círculo aquí 00:06:273 - para arreglar estu /w\
2016-11-25 19:45 Cosmolade: o lo otro seria hacer mas corto el spinner
2016-11-25 19:45 Cosmolade: o3o
2016-11-25 19:45 Cosmolade: ya que me gusta la simetría ahi ;_;
2016-11-25 19:45 HappyRocket88: Ohhhh
2016-11-25 19:45 HappyRocket88: Dale. :3
2016-11-25 19:45 HappyRocket88: Oh pero ten cuidado con el spacing. :o
2016-11-25 19:45 HappyRocket88: actualmente es muy pequeño comparado con los demás. /w\
2016-11-25 19:46 HappyRocket88: ay cosmo
2016-11-25 19:46 HappyRocket88: el bpm del mapa de taiko se siente todo raro
2016-11-25 19:46 HappyRocket88: XDDD
2016-11-25 19:46 HappyRocket88: mejor quedemonos con el tuyo. :>
2016-11-25 19:47 Cosmolade: XDDD te lo dije
2016-11-25 19:47 Cosmolade: arreglado lo del spacing al principio o3o)/
2016-11-25 19:47 HappyRocket88: YUS!
2016-11-25 19:48 HappyRocket88: 00:13:735 (3,1) - el ritmo aquí se siente un poquito débil ;w;
2016-11-25 19:48 HappyRocket88: el problema va en que 00:14:332 - este beat es relativamente fuerte y enfatizarlo con un slider-end crea un patrón un tanto incómodo para jugar
2016-11-25 19:49 HappyRocket88: Para esto, qué tal si removemos un reverse y ubicamos un 1/1 slider 00:14:332 - instead. :o
2016-11-25 19:49 Cosmolade: hm, entonces deberia borrar el slider y hacer solo 2 notas?
2016-11-25 19:50 Cosmolade: o:
2016-11-25 19:50 HappyRocket88: Podría funcionar también tu idea. >w<
2016-11-25 19:50 HappyRocket88: solo que muchos círculos seguidos suben el sr de la diff ;w;
2016-11-25 19:51 Cosmolade: me gusta mas la tuya
2016-11-25 19:51 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 19:51 Cosmolade: aunque eso no es un patrón muy dificil en easy?
2016-11-25 19:51 HappyRocket88: ohhh la verdad no. >w<
2016-11-25 19:51 Cosmolade: esque sigue siendo 1/3 pero todo seguido o:
2016-11-25 19:51 HappyRocket88: La razón es porque son sliders
2016-11-25 19:52 Cosmolade: ah bueno >-<
2016-11-25 19:52 HappyRocket88: y dos de ellos son 1/1 :3
2016-11-25 19:53 Cosmolade: arreglado >w<
2016-11-25 19:53 Cosmolade: y también me parecio al principio seguir lo tuyo en ves de acortar el spinner, porque se sentia raro ; v;
2016-11-25 19:54 Cosmolade: ayy, las easys siempre se me hacen dificiles de mapear >3<
2016-11-25 19:54 HappyRocket88: hahha
2016-11-25 19:54 HappyRocket88: ayy sii
2016-11-25 19:54 HappyRocket88: pero una vez le coges el tiro
2016-11-25 19:55 HappyRocket88: la música une armoniosamente tu imaginación y creas cosas maravillosas
2016-11-25 19:55 HappyRocket88: >u<
2016-11-25 19:56 Cosmolade: ayy <3 >w<
2016-11-25 19:56 Cosmolade: en fin, todo aplicado hasta ahora o3o)7
2016-11-25 19:57 HappyRocket88: Ay cosmo
2016-11-25 19:57 HappyRocket88: Necesito ir a la bñuuu >s<
2016-11-25 19:57 HappyRocket88: dfsdfdf
2016-11-25 19:57 HappyRocket88: pero mi mamá está allá jsfdsbhf
2016-11-25 19:57 HappyRocket88: ayyyy
2016-11-25 19:58 Cosmolade: khasjdk
2016-11-25 19:58 Cosmolade: aguantaa
2016-11-25 19:58 Cosmolade: >w<
2016-11-25 19:59 Cosmolade: gambatte XD!
2016-11-25 20:06 HappyRocket88: ayyy
2016-11-25 20:06 HappyRocket88: nada mejor que
2016-11-25 20:06 HappyRocket88: hacerlo cuando tienes ganas. <3
2016-11-25 20:07 Cosmolade: ayy
2016-11-25 20:07 Cosmolade: XDDDD
2016-11-25 20:07 HappyRocket88: ay eso suena tan
2016-11-25 20:07 HappyRocket88: raro
2016-11-25 20:07 HappyRocket88: xDDD
2016-11-25 20:07 Cosmolade: exacto, nada mejor XD!
2016-11-25 20:08 Cosmolade: si XDD
2016-11-25 20:08 Cosmolade: pero es la verdad o3o
2016-11-25 20:09 HappyRocket88: 00:22:093 (5) - aquí en términos de simplificar un poco el ritmo sería mejor removerlo y permitir el resto de la sección manejar este patrón
2016-11-25 20:10 Cosmolade: removido o3o)/
2016-11-25 20:12 Cosmolade: por cierto, crees que [https://puu.sh/suAFl/daa2aacac6.png este] ritmos ea mejor?
2016-11-25 20:13 Cosmolade: sea*
2016-11-25 20:13 Cosmolade: en el - 00:22:391 - y parecidos
2016-11-25 20:13 Cosmolade: ahora que lo veo, es más leible o3o
2016-11-25 20:14 HappyRocket88: voy voy
2016-11-25 20:15 HappyRocket88: está bien actually. :o
2016-11-25 20:16 HappyRocket88: solo que en ese segmento hay uno que podría confundir a los beginners
2016-11-25 20:16 HappyRocket88: 00:34:929 (2,3,1) -
2016-11-25 20:17 HappyRocket88: el cambio a 1/2 del 1/1 o 1/3 que venías mapeando es un poquito raro ya que no hiciste esta clase de flujos anteriormente
2016-11-25 20:17 HappyRocket88: haciendo que la transición sea algo confusa. /w\
2016-11-25 20:17 HappyRocket88: para ello, recomiendan eliminar un reverse
2016-11-25 20:17 HappyRocket88: y cambiar esto 00:34:929 (2,3) -
2016-11-25 20:18 HappyRocket88: por dos 1/2 sliders. :3
2016-11-25 20:18 Cosmolade: o3o okay >w<
2016-11-25 20:19 HappyRocket88: 00:15:228 (1,2) - también se sugiere evitar stacks /w\
2016-11-25 20:20 Cosmolade: bueno /w\
2016-11-25 20:20 HappyRocket88: 00:42:093 (4,1) - no es directamente un stack pero el hitburst cubre parcialmente la nota haciendo que pueda ser más confuso clickearlo ,w;
2016-11-25 20:22 HappyRocket88: 00:46:571 (5) - 2/3 slider mejor. /w\
2016-11-25 20:23 HappyRocket88: la intensidad de los 1/3 con reverses de adelante ya es muy alta para esta parte ;w;
2016-11-25 20:24 HappyRocket88: 00:53:735 (2,1) - same ;w;
2016-11-25 20:25 HappyRocket88: 01:04:481 (2,1) - blanket can be slightly improved. ;w;
2016-11-25 20:25 HappyRocket88: 01:15:825 (4,1) - nuuuu /u\
2016-11-25 20:28 HappyRocket88: Creo que eso es todo para la easy. >w<
2016-11-25 20:28 Cosmolade: dejame aplicar >0<
2016-11-25 20:28 Cosmolade: voy lentito SLJAD ;3;
2016-11-25 20:29 HappyRocket88: Vale. owo7
2016-11-25 20:29 HappyRocket88: Voy a ir pidiendo m4m >w<
2016-11-25 20:34 Cosmolade: bueno >w<
2016-11-25 20:39 Cosmolade: listo o3o
2016-11-25 20:40 HappyRocket88: ezek agreed to make
2016-11-25 20:40 HappyRocket88: the m4m! >w<
2016-11-25 20:40 Cosmolade: owo
2016-11-25 20:40 Cosmolade: yay!
2016-11-25 20:40 Cosmolade: but espera a que termines el irc tu lol
2016-11-25 20:40 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 20:40 Cosmolade: a ver, cambio un patron más y estaria listo el easy ovo
2016-11-25 20:41 HappyRocket88: Ohhh
2016-11-25 20:41 HappyRocket88: XDD
2016-11-25 20:41 HappyRocket88: OD-1
2016-11-25 20:43 HappyRocket88: y debería quedar ready. :3
2016-11-25 20:46 Cosmolade: listo >.<
2016-11-25 20:47 Cosmolade: hahaha
2016-11-25 20:47 Cosmolade: las stars bajaron
2016-11-25 20:47 Cosmolade: lol
2016-11-25 20:47 HappyRocket88: ♥w♥)/
2016-11-25 20:47 HappyRocket88: Mi proposal since the beginning. xD
2016-11-25 20:48 Cosmolade: now we have 1,33
2016-11-25 20:48 Cosmolade: lol
2016-11-25 20:48 Cosmolade: bueno, pasamos al normal(?
2016-11-25 20:48 HappyRocket88: Cosmo!
2016-11-25 20:48 HappyRocket88: la our history
2016-11-25 20:48 HappyRocket88: deberíamos mapearla como
2016-11-25 20:48 Cosmolade: digame o:
2016-11-25 20:48 HappyRocket88: magic bomb hizo
2016-11-25 20:48 HappyRocket88: la de él :oi
2016-11-25 20:48 HappyRocket88: con los 1/12 beats
2016-11-25 20:48 Cosmolade: D:
2016-11-25 20:48 Cosmolade: eso no es mucho?
2016-11-25 20:49 Cosmolade: además las estrellas subirian demasiado
2016-11-25 20:49 Cosmolade: XD!
2016-11-25 20:49 Cosmolade: osea, podria hacerlo
2016-11-25 20:49 Cosmolade: o3o
2016-11-25 20:49 Cosmolade: pero no tendria spinners(?
2016-11-25 20:50 HappyRocket88: XDDDD
2016-11-25 20:51 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 20:51 Cosmolade: osea, me gusta poner spinners por la simple razón de que los jugadores despues no tengan scores iguales ;w;
2016-11-25 20:51 Cosmolade: he visto mcuhas quejas en otros mapas por eso XD
2016-11-25 20:51 Cosmolade: muchas* u vu
2016-11-25 21:00 HappyRocket88: ay perdón /w\
2016-11-25 21:00 HappyRocket88: 00:14:331 - could be clickable. :3
2016-11-25 21:00 HappyRocket88: 00:28:959 (5,1) - blanket desu
2016-11-25 21:01 Cosmolade: esperame un poco
2016-11-25 21:01 Cosmolade: que estoy cambiando unas cosas porcuenta propia
2016-11-25 21:01 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 21:01 Cosmolade: yo te aviso cuando updatee o3o)/
2016-11-25 21:01 HappyRocket88: Seguro. owo
2016-11-25 21:09 Cosmolade: >w<
2016-11-25 21:10 Cosmolade: listo
2016-11-25 21:10 Cosmolade: revisa ahora owo
2016-11-25 21:11 HappyRocket88: Cosmo
2016-11-25 21:11 HappyRocket88: en la easy
2016-11-25 21:11 HappyRocket88: faltó un nc
2016-11-25 21:11 Cosmolade: D:
2016-11-25 21:11 Cosmolade: where
2016-11-25 21:11 HappyRocket88: casi al terminar la song
2016-11-25 21:11 Cosmolade: yo lo pongo de inmediato
2016-11-25 21:11 Cosmolade: >.<
2016-11-25 21:13 Cosmolade: oh ya
2016-11-25 21:13 Cosmolade: lo arreglé >.< luego de que me digas que tal la normal update o3o)/
2016-11-25 21:14 Cosmolade: eso del clickeable lo acabo de arreglar xD
2016-11-25 21:15 HappyRocket88: si
2016-11-25 21:15 HappyRocket88: ohhh
2016-11-25 21:15 HappyRocket88: 1vale
2016-11-25 21:15 HappyRocket88: >w<
2016-11-25 21:16 Cosmolade: >w<)/
2016-11-25 21:16 Cosmolade: todo arreglado lo que me dijiste(? o3o
2016-11-25 21:18 Cosmolade: en fin, le daré kds a ezek :3/
2016-11-25 21:18 HappyRocket88: YES!
2016-11-25 21:18 HappyRocket88: XDDD
2016-11-25 21:18 HappyRocket88: Creo que Hobbes2
2016-11-25 21:18 HappyRocket88: y Under la estarán modeando dentro de poco. :>
2016-11-25 21:18 Cosmolade: lo veo modeando
2016-11-25 21:18 Cosmolade: lol
2016-11-25 21:19 Cosmolade: hobbes lo esta haciendo ahora
2016-11-25 21:19 Cosmolade: como tanta rapidez XD!
2016-11-25 21:19 HappyRocket88: Indeed D:
2016-11-25 21:19 HappyRocket88: qué miedo lel
2016-11-25 21:20 HappyRocket88: 00:14:331 -
2016-11-25 21:20 HappyRocket88: click!
2016-11-25 21:20 Cosmolade: it clicks now
2016-11-25 21:20 Cosmolade: pero no he updateado XD
2016-11-25 21:20 Cosmolade: aslkdjkads
2016-11-25 21:20 Cosmolade: en fin, eso fue arreglado(=
2016-11-25 21:20 HappyRocket88: ahhh
2016-11-25 21:20 HappyRocket88: :>
2016-11-25 21:20 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 21:20 HappyRocket88: 00:33:734 - it feels a bit weird to skip this vocal. ;w;
2016-11-25 21:21 HappyRocket88: seeing that you followed it nicely in the previous patterns
2016-11-25 21:21 Cosmolade: hm
2016-11-25 21:21 HappyRocket88: 00:51:048 - aquí podrías incrementar el ds para enfatizar mejor la sección
2016-11-25 21:21 Cosmolade: okay, lo haré las corto, y pondré una nota o:
2016-11-25 21:22 HappyRocket88: o sea, no el ds
2016-11-25 21:22 HappyRocket88: el sv
2016-11-25 21:22 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-11-25 21:22 HappyRocket88: es que en la hard y la insane sube mucho
2016-11-25 21:22 Cosmolade: XD!
2016-11-25 21:22 HappyRocket88: entonces sería más intuitivo si incrementase gradualmente entre las dificultades. :3
2016-11-25 21:22 Cosmolade: hm
2016-11-25 21:22 Cosmolade: pero puede haber SV changes in normals?
2016-11-25 21:22 Cosmolade: o:
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: YES!
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: de hecho
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: en todas las diffs. xD
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: solo que
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: en las dificultades menores
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: i.e. easy
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: debe ser mucho menor
2016-11-25 21:23 HappyRocket88: e.g. 1.2x
2016-11-25 21:24 HappyRocket88: en la normal 1.4x could also work
2016-11-25 21:24 Cosmolade: oh
2016-11-25 21:24 Cosmolade: o:
2016-11-25 21:25 Cosmolade: y en cuanto más deberia subirle ahi XD?
2016-11-25 21:26 HappyRocket88: 1.3
2016-11-25 21:26 HappyRocket88: estaría bien. >w<
2016-11-25 21:26 HappyRocket88: en la easy tambiénle puedes subir
2016-11-25 21:26 Cosmolade: por cierto, tu crees que sea mejor copiar tus kia times o3o?
2016-11-25 21:26 HappyRocket88: ajajajaj
2016-11-25 21:26 HappyRocket88: ayyy /w\
2016-11-25 21:27 Cosmolade: yo creo que en al easy esta bien tal cual ;v;
2016-11-25 21:27 HappyRocket88: yeah. /w\
2016-11-25 21:27 HappyRocket88: ignore me
2016-11-25 21:27 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-11-25 21:27 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 21:27 HappyRocket88: pero en la normal si sería chévere subirlo un poco
2016-11-25 21:27 HappyRocket88: :3
2016-11-25 21:27 Cosmolade: me gustan tus kia times owo
2016-11-25 21:29 Cosmolade: si en la normal lo subiré
2016-11-25 21:29 Cosmolade: aunque el spacing tambiñen va a variar con eso
2016-11-25 21:29 Cosmolade: D:
2016-11-25 21:29 HappyRocket88: Yes! :3
2016-11-25 21:29 Cosmolade: y eso no importa? XD
2016-11-25 21:29 Cosmolade: osea
2016-11-25 21:30 Cosmolade: me gustaria mantener el spacing parecido
2016-11-25 21:30 Cosmolade: ldjkad
2016-11-25 21:30 Cosmolade: lo intentaré
2016-11-25 21:30 Cosmolade: >.<
2016-11-25 21:30 HappyRocket88: En 1.2x queda casi igual. :3
2016-11-25 21:31 HappyRocket88: por favor testealo con 1.3x y 1.4x a ver si te gusta la distancia. :3
2016-11-25 21:31 HappyRocket88: 01:17:019 (1,2) - confusing. /w\
2016-11-25 21:32 HappyRocket88: 01:22:392 (5,6,7) - feels a little bit monotonous to go in a line ;w;
2016-11-25 21:32 HappyRocket88: esta normal está super cool
2016-11-25 21:32 HappyRocket88: XDDD
2016-11-25 21:39 Cosmolade: yay <3
2016-11-25 21:40 Cosmolade: arreglando lo que me dijiste ahora o3o)/
2016-11-25 21:45 Cosmolade: y lo de la notas en linea me gusta mucho ;v; no creo cambiarlo uvu
2016-11-25 21:45 Cosmolade: fuera de eso todo listo con el normal yay
2016-11-25 21:45 Cosmolade: updateo~
2016-11-25 21:45 HappyRocket88: ohhh
2016-11-25 21:45 HappyRocket88: sugoeh!
2016-11-25 21:46 Cosmolade: listo >w<~
2016-11-25 21:46 HappyRocket88: cosmo, ahorita te mando el update mio del mod de ezek
2016-11-25 21:46 Cosmolade: okay~
2016-11-25 21:46 Cosmolade: :3c
2016-11-25 21:48 HappyRocket88: Con la insane!!!!! \owo/
2016-11-25 21:49 Cosmolade: \owo/
2016-11-25 21:49 HappyRocket88: yo le subí od 6 a la mia
2016-11-25 21:50 HappyRocket88: entonces para no tener el mismo od que la normal
2016-11-25 21:50 HappyRocket88: podríamos subirlo a 7 u 8 :3
2016-11-25 21:50 Cosmolade: o:
2016-11-25 21:50 Cosmolade: okay
2016-11-25 21:50 Cosmolade: yo creo que 7 esta bien
2016-11-25 21:50 Cosmolade: 8 es mucho XD
2016-11-25 21:51 HappyRocket88: you ok! :3
2016-11-25 21:51 HappyRocket88: 00:08:809 - feels weird to skip this one /w\
2016-11-25 21:52 HappyRocket88: 00:14:331 (1) - is this nc necessary? :o
2016-11-25 21:52 HappyRocket88: i think 00:15:228 (3) - this beat would deserve it more. /w\
2016-11-25 21:54 HappyRocket88: 00:17:914 (1) - same
2016-11-25 21:54 HappyRocket88: 00:25:824 - I think to make a more suitable rhythm
2016-11-25 21:56 Cosmolade: y ya esta el mod de hobbes XD!
2016-11-25 21:56 HappyRocket88: we could make this pattern 00:25:079 (3,4) - like
2016-11-25 21:57 HappyRocket88: https://mingi.s-ul.eu/KFG0cIAg
2016-11-25 21:57 HappyRocket88: :3
2016-11-25 21:58 HappyRocket88: SIII!
2016-11-25 21:58 HappyRocket88: D:
2016-11-25 21:58 HappyRocket88: OMG
2016-11-25 21:58 HappyRocket88: XDDD
2016-11-25 22:01 Cosmolade: XDDD
2016-11-25 22:05 Cosmolade: listo, aplicado lo que me dijiste :3/
2016-11-25 22:05 HappyRocket88: 00:31:347 (6,7) - deserve larger spacing. owo7
2016-11-25 22:05 HappyRocket88: just as 00:29:556 (1,2) -
2016-11-25 22:05 Cosmolade: y con respecto a los ncs, tendré que rehacerlos pero o3o)/ ando media confundida con ello XD
2016-11-25 22:05 Cosmolade: oh owo
2016-11-25 22:06 HappyRocket88: XDDDD
2016-11-25 22:06 HappyRocket88: Yeah ;w;
2016-11-25 22:06 HappyRocket88: 00:52:840 (5,6) - why lower spacing here? :o
2016-11-25 22:07 Cosmolade: [pattern]
2016-11-25 22:07 Cosmolade: lol
2016-11-25 22:07 Cosmolade: hm
2016-11-25 22:08 HappyRocket88: se ve bien! Xd
2016-11-25 22:08 HappyRocket88: pero luego podrían decir
2016-11-25 22:09 HappyRocket88: ayy si usaste mayor aquí
2016-11-25 22:09 HappyRocket88: :>
2016-11-25 22:10 HappyRocket88: 01:13:138 (2,3) -
2016-11-25 22:10 HappyRocket88: spacing should be higher Q_Q
2016-11-25 22:10 HappyRocket88: ay y la parte final de los triangles
2016-11-25 22:10 HappyRocket88: super hard ;w;
2016-11-25 22:11 Cosmolade: ; -; no se me ocurre algun pattern bonito en esa parte D:
2016-11-25 22:11 Cosmolade: la final es mi favorita yeah
2016-11-25 22:11 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 22:11 Cosmolade: arreglado lo del spacing o3o
2016-11-25 22:13 HappyRocket88: 01:25:377 (4,6) - we can avoid the overlap! :3
2016-11-25 22:14 Cosmolade: sure!
2016-11-25 22:14 Cosmolade: o3o
2016-11-25 22:15 HappyRocket88: anything else look actually fine. >w<
2016-11-25 22:15 HappyRocket88: el kiai es super hellow con dT!
2016-11-25 22:15 HappyRocket88: XDDD
2016-11-25 22:15 Cosmolade: XDDD
2016-11-25 22:17 Cosmolade: :3/
2016-11-25 22:17 Cosmolade: ahora aplicaré el mod de hobbes XD
2016-11-25 22:17 HappyRocket88: \>w</
2016-11-25 22:17 Cosmolade: apenas termine vemos cap? >w<?
2016-11-25 22:17 HappyRocket88: yo si quiero
2016-11-25 22:17 HappyRocket88: 7u7
2016-11-25 22:17 HappyRocket88: XDDDD
2016-11-25 22:17 Cosmolade: XD
2016-11-25 22:17 Cosmolade: bueno :3c
2016-11-25 22:17 Cosmolade: aplicaré rápido como sonic XD

We talked and discussed regarding:

  1. The song quality and spots which deserved to be clickable objects among the whole difficulties.
  2. Nazi Blankets and overall placement of objects.
  3. More fitting difficulty settings according to the way they increase up.
  4. The sexy and cute Yuri desu ~ Intuitive usage of New Combos and Slider Speeds.
¡Estamos en racha! \(o3o)/
[]
REPLIIEESS

ezek, the sexy pokemon

ezek wrote:

Just checking Rocket's diff as per his request~ Gracias papi! <u<

Rocket
  1. 00:23:884 (4) - toca la puntuacion en resoluciones 4:3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6657988. JESÚS SANTO WHYYY! FIXED! O3O
  2. 00:41:198 (2) - I believe this note deserves a jump just as 00:41:496 (3) - since they belong to the same word and they're expressed with the same intensity~ I understand your point but for consistency purposes, I wanted to leave the first note just after the kiai with lower DS to emphasize the momentum of the vocals offer here. Examples of similar cases are:
    1. 00:37:317 (2,3) -
    2. 00:38:511 (5,6) -
    That's why I think it does make sense to apply it here 00:40:302 (1,2) - too. :3
  3. 01:04:780 (1,2,3,4,1) - No soy fan de este patron~ Supongo que esta bien, pero personalmente no me gusta como las notas cubren el cuerpo del slider y luego uno tiene que cruzar por ahi .-. Hmm.. creo saber de donde sacaste esa idea~ Talvez no debiste c: ;__; Took some points as suggested in the IRC talk! >w<
  4. 01:11:646 (1,2,3) - You used antijumps in similar places to this where there are just 3 notes emphasizing a word~ Why the inconsistency? The parts I mentioned are: 00:50:153 (1,2,3) - 00:42:989 (1,2,3) - 00:57:317 (1,2,3) - Yee! In this case the music isn't slowing down as per reference, the ones provided have small spacing. /w\ However, did To-To-To-TOUCHED the ones which were inconsistent. >u<
  5. 01:18:810 (1,2,3) - En esta parte si lo consideraria una excepcion mas justificada ya que enfatiza bien el final del kiai~ <3
  6. 01:16:123 (1) - It would look nicer by not touching the head with the tail~ QvQ ay but contact looks nice 7u7r
  7. 01:26:870 (1) - ya que es la parte donde empiezan los sonidos fuertes + el final intenso de la cancion, yo creo que tendria mas sentido que esta nota fuera un jump~ You're right, but after figuring out how to place them I lost my hopes. :cry:
Good Suerte~ EHHHH! Gracias por el mod wuapetón. :3
Hobbes2, the wild pokemon.

Hobbes2 wrote:

m4m with rocket (he thinks he can get away with asking me to mod 1 diff c:) I forgot I'd met the faster modder of the Far East. :>>>

[Rocket's Hard]

00:06:272 (4) - Eh, not really a fan of skipping 00:06:570 - it's just as important of a sound as all of these other clickable objects, so at least making it a slidertail would be appropriate. You're right but seeing from another perspective, I don't really think adding more objects to the difficulty would be a good idea since this is one of the slowest part of the song. Hence, skipping up some beats with 1/1 sliders should hurt no one. /w\

00:42:989 (1,2,3) - I don't agree with making the spacing for these smaller since "history" is the most intense part of the line. To contrast, I like the small spacing 00:50:153 (1,2,3) - here because the instrumental turns off. *POURS HOLY WATER IN HERSELF* How could I HAVE MISSED THISSSSSSSS?!!!?!?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAA fixed! o3o

00:53:735 (2,1) - Make these perfectly parallel! *Gives to Hobbes2 the medal of official blanket detector desu~ o3o)/*

01:05:377 (1,3) - Blanket needs work. Mom doesn't love me ;w;

01:22:392 (1,2,3) - Like I said earlier I don't like that the "Histories" have low spacing. we WERE BOOORN to make h i s t o r y

01:26:869 (1) - Change color? Yellow is reserved for "history" Ayy here I could do it but then everything wll be yellow and players might get blind. x.x

nice set and song, gl :) Thanks for moddding!!!!!!!!! ♥
Izzywing
AR 8.5 for Our History? That last jump pattern is very cluttered with AR 8
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Hobbes2 wrote:

AR 8.5 for Our History? That last jump pattern is very cluttered with AR 8
I agree! Fixed /o3o)/
Senkiu~
kanor
Yuri on ICE !
exciting song and anime ><
[Genel]
because the beginning of the song is a little confusing , so i recommend you to use 5376 as its offest, and so you should change the NC.

[Easy]
no need to ar2, ar3 is well imo
00:34:928 (2,3) - DS warning in the AImod
00:30:451 (2,3) - uncomfortable lap
00:50:152 (2) - ctrl+h can get a better flow

[Hard]
00:42:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - if need to make a star pattern, we can make it better
00:47:467 (1,2,3) - from the flow before, i deeply recommend to ctrl+G the 1 and 3,then ctrl+j the 2
01:00:004 (1) - ctrl+G may get a better flow imo

[History]
00:57:317 (4,1) - the lap doesnt fit the pattern imo
01:26:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the jump here is defferent from the difficulty at other places, theres no need to put a such a big jump

Thats all. GL~ :)
Worldwide
Our History

00:40:301 (3,5) - Could make these sliders longer
00:49:108 (8,1) - Move these closer to each other.

In general, really nice hitsounding and layout, don't really have nothing much to say. Good luck!
CrystilonZ
Expect a mod from me tonight
Placeeedesu


k here comes

Diffs are pretty great! this is gonna be nazi lolll

Easy

Pretty rankable, but there're rooms for improvements~
  1. 00:44:779 (2,3,4,5) - For example, there notes right here can be improved by making 00:44:779 (2,3) - parallel with 00:46:272 (4,5) -
  2. 00:24:182 (3,1,2) - thought this was gonna be one of that symmetrical pattern
  3. 00:42:093 (3,1) - lol rip overlap
  4. 00:50:152 (2) - nazi but i'd rather make this go with the flow coming from 00:49:257 (1) - like this. The turn after (2) is good for emphasis
  5. 00:54:630 (1) - y:257 for nazi symmetry
  6. 01:15:824 (4,1,2) - idk my suggestion would be something like this that keeps the angular momentum rather than linear momentum going like you've done before on 01:13:436 (2,3) - etc.

Normal

solid. nice
  1. 00:07:168 (4) - how about making this slider curvy rather than pointy. This is kinda like 00:05:377 (1,2) - imo
  2. 00:26:870 (2) - rip blanket? put this at 31/97
  3. 00:41:795 (3) - eh pretty sure this is overmapped
  4. 00:45:377 (3) - shouldn't have that reverse. Imo these 2/3 gap should be empty to emphasize the vocals and to represent the music correctly.
  5. 00:56:422 (4,5) - blanket the slider, not the sliderhead lol
  6. 01:05:377 (1) - pretty asymmetrical and stuff. Improve this if you can
  7. 01:25:974 (7) - hmm this should be 3 circles like 01:22:392 (5,6,7) - . This one is even more intense.

Rocket's Hard

good day señorita rocket~ how are you doing
  1. nice as always lol i can hardly find anything
  2. 00:34:929 (1) - this should have jump for consistency... hmm.. i guess a ctrl+G and repositioning stuff should be enough
  3. that's literally all lol

gonna continue on Your History later if i have the mood to do so looool

Goodluck!
HappyRocket88
KANORZASO

kanor wrote:

Yuri on ICE !
exciting song and anime >< You're one of us!!!! <3
[Hard]
00:42:093 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - if need to make a star pattern, we can make it better. TOTALLY! ♥
00:47:467 (1,2,3) - from the flow before, i deeply recommend to ctrl+G the 1 and 3,then ctrl+j the 2 Hmm... But that would make the distance from (7) to (1) somewhat harsh ;w;
01:00:004 (1) - ctrl+G may get a better flow imo You're right! But, for spacing purposes, I'd rather leave it as is since while doing Ctrl + G there, the main spacing would be a bit messed up. ;w;
Cryztilonzaso

CrystilonZ wrote:

Rocket's Hard

good day señorita rocket~ how are you doing CRYZZZZ!!!! >w< How's everything going?! o3o/ Long time no see. Will get into your map soonish! o:
  1. nice as always lol i can hardly find anything QvQ7 Thank you very much! >-<
  2. 00:34:929 (1) - this should have jump for consistency... hmm.. i guess a ctrl+G and repositioning stuff should be enough. AY CARAMBA FIXEXASO DESU!
  3. that's literally all lol Short > long. >< Well it doesn't come to hair though. xD

Thank you very much for modding! >u<
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

kanor wrote:

Yuri on ICE !
exciting song and anime >< ayy, best anime of this season QvQ
[Genel]
because the beginning of the song is a little confusing , so i recommend you to use 5376 as its offest, and so you should change the NC. Happy told me yo put the offset when the spinner begins, so I can't change it now /w\

[Easy]
no need to ar2, ar3 is well imo changes to 3, okay~
00:34:928 (2,3) - DS warning in the AImod yah, I know, but with DS active, its the same spacing I have already, and AiMod tells this error every time I check this part, I think is a bug or something :/
00:30:451 (2,3) - uncomfortable lap I don't think is uncomfortable ;_;
00:50:152 (2) - ctrl+h can get a better flow but it hurts the pattern reverse-slider I have D: I really like more my pattern here, sorry

[History]
00:57:317 (4,1) - the lap doesnt fit the pattern imo Fixed
01:26:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the jump here is defferent from the difficulty at other places, theres no need to put a such a big jump tha song in this part so much hype to not make jumps here >.<

Thats all. GL~ :)
--

donkat wrote:

Our History

00:40:301 (3,5) - Could make these sliders longer na, they are short for emphasize the vocals
00:49:108 (8,1) - Move these closer to each other. here is a purpose jump!

In general, really nice hitsounding and layout, don't really have nothing much to say. Good luck!
sorry I don't apply anything :c but thanks for the suggestions~
--

CrystilonZ wrote:

Expect a mod from me tonight
Placeeedesu
A wild CrystilonZ appeared! o3o

k here comes

Diffs are pretty great! this is gonna be nazi lolll ayy thanks, btw I like nazi mods, bc this type of mods make the diffs more awesome & perfect/beautiful >w<

Easy

Pretty rankable, but there're rooms for improvements~
  1. 00:44:779 (2,3,4,5) - For example, there notes right here can be improved by making 00:44:779 (2,3) - parallel with 00:46:272 (4,5) - Fixed~
  2. 00:24:182 (3,1,2) - thought this was gonna be one of that symmetrical pattern Fixed~
  3. 00:42:093 (3,1) - lol rip overlap yeah XD
  4. 00:50:152 (2) - nazi but i'd rather make this go with the flow coming from 00:49:257 (1) - like this. The turn after (2) is good for emphasis Fixed~
  5. 00:54:630 (1) - y:257 for nazi symmetry I move (1) so the new y for symmetry is different than that, but already fixed :)
  6. 01:15:824 (4,1,2) - idk my suggestion would be something like this that keeps the angular momentum rather than linear momentum going like you've done before on 01:13:436 (2,3) - etc. o3ô Fixed~

Normal

solid. nice yes~
  1. 00:07:168 (4) - how about making this slider curvy rather than pointy. This is kinda like 00:05:377 (1,2) - Fixsu o3o
  2. 00:26:870 (2) - rip blanket? put this at 31/97 Fixed
  3. 00:41:795 (3) - eh pretty sure this is overmapped you're right, deleted this note ><
  4. 00:45:377 (3) - shouldn't have that reverse. Imo these 2/3 gap should be empty to emphasize the vocals and to represent the music correctly. Fixed
  5. 00:56:422 (4,5) - blanket the slider, not the sliderhead lol nah, I like blanket the sliderhead more
  6. 01:05:377 (1) - pretty asymmetrical and stuff. Improve this if you can I can try ; v;
  7. 01:25:974 (7) - hmm this should be 3 circles like 01:22:392 (5,6,7) - . This one is even more intense. Fixed!

gonna continue on Your History later if i have the mood to do so looool hahaha XD okay, dont worry~ I can wait o3o)/

Goodluck!
Thanks all for the mods♥♥♥~
PD:

wowowowo
Aistre
WE WE WE WERE BORN TO MAKE HISTORY
Modding for Rocket :3

Rocket's Hard


  1. 00:34:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern is friendly to players that can't yet properly play hard maps, the spacing is weird and even I didn't read it properly the first time through playing.
  2. 00:36:570 (4,1) - Again with the spacing, I think this is a little too extreme especially for a 1/3 pattern that was spaced smaller before.
  3. 00:43:287 (2,3) - The way he sings "History" doesn't lower in dynamics and I don't see why the spacing gets smaller here. I suggest you space out 3 from 2.
  4. 00:43:884 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved here.
  5. 00:50:749 (3,1) - The spacing here could throw people off because it's unexpected due to how large the jump is, however it's justified because of the transition in the song.
  6. 00:57:317 (1,2,3) - In gameplay it's hard to see 3 on top of the burst and it causes reading issues.
  7. 01:13:437 (2,1) - It's a pixel off the overlap and it makes me uncomfortable xd

Good luck~
CuteFunnyCat
Hi im here form the mod que.

Easy Difficulty:

00:33:137 (1,2) - Spacing difference.

00:33:137 (1,2) - Overlap you could move it a little higher to blanket it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6665405 like this.

Hi this is all for my mod and good luck ranking the map its great.
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

CuteFunnyCat wrote:

Hi im here form the mod que.

Easy Difficulty:

00:33:137 (1,2) - Spacing difference. fix

00:33:137 (1,2) - Overlap you could move it a little higher to blanket it https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6665405 like this. It's already a blanket, but I will remake it

Hi this is all for my mod and good luck ranking the map its great.
Thank~
HappyRocket88

Alphabet wrote:

WE WE WE WERE BORN TO MAKE HISTORY SIIIIIIIIIIIIII! >w<
Modding for Rocket :3 Thanks Alphabet! >u<

Rocket's Hard


  1. 00:34:929 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't think this pattern is friendly to players that can't yet properly play hard maps, the spacing is weird and even I didn't read it properly the first time through playing. Yee, I tried it but I don't know how else should I map this part. ;w; Any suggestion? o:
  2. 00:36:570 (4,1) - Again with the spacing, I think this is a little too extreme especially for a 1/3 pattern that was spaced smaller before. ReducedDDDDDddDDDdDD
  3. 00:43:287 (2,3) - The way he sings "History" doesn't lower in dynamics and I don't see why the spacing gets smaller here. I suggest you space out 3 from 2. OwO! Nice catch! >w<)////
  4. 00:43:884 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved here. MY MOM LOVES BLANKETS!
  5. 00:50:749 (3,1) - The spacing here could throw people off because it's unexpected due to how large the jump is, however it's justified because of the transition in the song. Yeee ;v;7
  6. 00:57:317 (1,2,3) - In gameplay it's hard to see 3 on top of the burst and it causes reading issues. UHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhh Yeah changed. Rip linear momemtu desu
  7. 01:13:437 (2,1) - It's a pixel off the overlap and it makes me uncomfortable xd YES PIXELS ARE NOW ALIGNED! ♥w♥)7

Good luck~ Thank you!!! Will get in to your map soon! < nsasfdkfnslf
CrystilonZ

Cosmolade wrote:

A wild CrystilonZ appeared! o3o


HappyRocket88 wrote:

Short > long. >< Well it doesn't come to hair though. xD
^ so much motivation lolol

Your History
I will try to keep this as concise as possible lol

These are major stuff. Fix them ONLY if they don't go against your preferences and you want to
  1. 00:51:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo 00:51:944 (2) - should be extended like this. The priority here should be the dragging sound right there. This will also be more consistent since 00:51:049 (1,2) - are pretty much similar xd. The "ry" echo doesn't stand out imo, and doesn't need to be mapped
  2. 00:59:108 (2) - ^ the same applies to here
  3. 01:17:914 (1,2,3,4) - eh i'm guessing this happened because you ran out of space lol. The pattern looks half-baked and a bit random imo. My suggestion would be something similar to the thing in the box below, but you should try to map this yourself without copying it.
  4. 01:24:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for these notes the flow should be in one direction: clockwise or anticlockwise, but not mixed. Right now 01:24:481 (1,2,3) - are acw and 01:25:376 (4,5,6) - are cw. Changing the flow direction will put stress on the player and is not very comfortable to play. Try changing this if you could.
  5. 01:26:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is worse than ^ orz. tbh this is something people call difficulty spike. If possible, please make them go in one direction and make the DS between them equal so they're a bit more comfortable to play.
And these are normal-minor stuff
  1. 00:21:795 (8,9,1) - make the distance between them equal for aesthetic purposes
  2. 00:25:525 (7) - this jump right here doesn't fit really well imo. It makes jumps at 00:23:287 (3) - etc. less intense uwu.
  3. 00:50:153 (1) - just go with the flow xd. Blanketing here make the turn a bit too sharp
  4. 00:52:840 (5,6) - i'm quite curious why there's an anti-jump here @_@
  5. 00:57:765 (5) - is this overmapped?
  6. 01:03:586 (5,6,7) - this pattern looks half-baked again QwQ something like this is more intuitive imo
  7. 01:14:929 (2,4) - lol overlap. Besides, a curvy flow goes better with 01:15:825 (5) - that a straight flow.
  8. 01:25:676 (5,1) - in case you didn't change this from above, stack them lol. also overlap 01:25:974 (6,1) -

no kds on this post
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

CrystilonZ wrote:

Cosmolade wrote:

A wild CrystilonZ appeared! o3o

OOOUUW I want to buy Pokemon Sun now XD

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Short > long. >< Well it doesn't come to hair though. xD
^ so much motivation lolol

Your History
I will try to keep this as concise as possible lol

These are major stuff. Fix them ONLY if they don't go against your preferences and you want to oh, okay o3ò
  1. 00:51:049 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo 00:51:944 (2) - should be extended like this. The priority here should be the dragging sound right there. This will also be more consistent since 00:51:049 (1,2) - are pretty much similar xd. The "ry" echo doesn't stand out imo, and doesn't need to be mapped nice catchy! Fixed
  2. 00:59:108 (2) - ^ the same applies to here ^
  3. 01:17:914 (1,2,3,4) - eh i'm guessing this happened because you ran out of space lol. The pattern looks half-baked and a bit random imo. My suggestion would be something similar to the thing in the box below, but you should try to map this yourself without copying it. omg this pattern is amazing! thanks you <3 <3 fixed of course!
  4. 01:24:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for these notes the flow should be in one direction: clockwise or anticlockwise, but not mixed. Right now 01:24:481 (1,2,3) - are acw and 01:25:376 (4,5,6) - are cw. Changing the flow direction will put stress on the player and is not very comfortable to play. Try changing this if you could. I changed it a little, but I still like the cursor change direction here lol
  5. 01:26:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this is worse than ^ orz. tbh this is something people call difficulty spike. If possible, please make them go in one direction and make the DS between them equal so they're a bit more comfortable to play. okay, changed the pattern here, now all the jumps have the same DS space :3/
And these are normal-minor stuff
  1. 00:21:795 (8,9,1) - make the distance between them equal for aesthetic purposes fix
  2. 00:25:525 (7) - this jump right here doesn't fit really well imo. It makes jumps at 00:23:287 (3) - etc. less intense uwu. fix
  3. 00:50:153 (1) - just go with the flow xd. Blanketing here make the turn a bit too sharp fix
  4. 00:52:840 (5,6) - i'm quite curious why there's an anti-jump here @_@ I like it @w@ I don't want to change it </3
  5. 00:57:765 (5) - is this overmapped? yes LOL deleted
  6. 01:03:586 (5,6,7) - this pattern looks half-baked again QwQ something like this is more intuitive imo fix<3
  7. 01:14:929 (2,4) - lol overlap. Besides, a curvy flow goes better with 01:15:825 (5) - that a straight flow. fix
  8. 01:25:676 (5,1) - in case you didn't change this from above, stack them lol. also overlap 01:25:974 (6,1) - yuush~

no kds on this post
Holy, thats was a really helpfull mod ヽ(* ´ ▽ ` *)ノ
Thanks you♥~
Lumael
M4M
BOLD means: highly questionable/unrankeable
not BOLD means: it's only a suggestion/comment, whether you may or may not apply
[General]
  1. Some combo colors look weird with the current slider body colors, the yellow for example doesn't seen to make a good combination there. Moreover the actual colors are not on the background, I know that the clean white that covers most of the bg makes it possible to use other colors, but it seens that your following the ciano blue of the background (used on the slider body) so why not make a combination of a silver combo color and a bluish combo color to match both background and the current slider body color?
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:331 (1) - What about this rhythm instead here? It will cover the white tick better, since there's a strong sound that worth clicking, even for a beginner difficulty.
  2. 00:41:197 (2) - A pattern like this one seens much more interesting here, the flow will be much better, since the transition between these notes 00:40:301 (1,2) - is quite precarious, and it would be better if the (2) was rotated clockwize to improve the flow.
  3. The first half of the kiai, is much easier than all the rest of the map, but in fact it's clearly densier than the prev. part, I'd recommend you to add more objects there, to make it represents better the song.
[Normal]
  1. 00:32:541 (5,1) - Minor: These objects are so close that makes it look a bit weird.
[Rocket's Hard]
  1. 00:35:825 (1) - 00:34:929 (1) - I think these NCs were missplaced, since you didn't use NC in the middle of the same measurement, you just did on the downbeat normally. Is it for patterning?
  2. This difficulty has a different ending point because of the spinner, I think it's better to remove, since the other difficulties stop here: 01:28:660 - .
[Our History]
  1. 01:05:376 - AiMod says that there are two timing points at the same time, fix it
  2. What happened to the downbeat on the first part of the song? It seens out of place (not on the big white tick), are you sure the timing is correct there?
  3. 00:14:929 (5,1) - This is quite a huge jump compared to everything else on this part of the song, there are some sounds that worth much more emphasislike 00:22:392 (1) - with actually lower spacing, try nerfing a bit the spacing there, it doesn't make a great consistency with the rest of the song.
  4. 00:45:676 (6) - This beat woth a NC, it starts a new measurement on the song.
  5. 00:52:690 (3,4) - Auto stacking is making them overlap with the prev. slider, try to replace it manually.
  6. 00:52:840 (4,5) - I kind of don't like the way such an important beat on (5) gets so undermapped by having this incredible short DS between these two objects, I'd rather something more like what you did here: 00:54:631 (1,2) - 00:58:213 (1,2) - etc.
  7. 00:59:855 (3,4) - Here we have the same auto stacking issue I pointed earlier, just make sure to fix so the map looks cleaner.
  8. 01:03:586 (5) - I would add a NC here, in fact you should add a NC every half measurement, because you're playing the BPM doubled which makes one measurement equivallent to two. You did it sometimes, but it seens that you either forgot to add to every location, or you were a bit distracted. 01:14:332 (1) - here for example is good.
  9. 01:06:870 (5,6) - I reckon this deserves more emphasis, the (6) beat is very important, as the background instrument changes the note it was playing suddenly and with a lot of intensity.
  10. 01:26:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I quite don't agree with these jumps, they are over everything we have seen in this difficulty (like, waaaay over) every other jump wasn't this high, and this is actually 1/6 jump. And for consistency, every other time that you placed individual circles together (examples: 00:28:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:31:795 (2,3,4,5) - ) It was something that looked like a stream, with low DS, but here you just blew everything up with these stars :p They are too hard for this kind of difficulty and they are not consistent with the way you used this kind of rhythm before, You could try to use some high spacing, enough to make each circle don't touch each other, but not this kind of star.
  11. If you still decide to keep the stars, I recommend you to place 01:28:660 (1) - (the last note) out of the stars to make it with a bigger impact on the player.
Good Luck!
HappyRocket88

Lumael wrote:

[Rocket's Hard]
  1. 00:35:825 (1) - 00:34:929 (1) - I think these NCs were missplaced, since you didn't use NC in the middle of the same measurement, you just did on the downbeat normally. Is it for patterning? YES! >w<)/
  2. This difficulty has a different ending point because of the spinner, I think it's better to remove, since the other difficulties stop here: 01:28:660 - . Ohh, but I think the spinner fits well since it catches the wave of the last tile.
Thank you very much! Luma Luma EL! o3o)/
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Lumael wrote:

M4M yush~
BOLD means: highly questionable/unrankeable
not BOLD means: it's only a suggestion/comment, whether you may or may not apply
[General]
  1. Some combo colors look weird with the current slider body colors, the yellow for example doesn't seen to make a good combination there. Moreover the actual colors are not on the background, I know that the clean white that covers most of the bg makes it possible to use other colors, but it seens that your following the ciano blue of the background (used on the slider body) so why not make a combination of a silver combo color and a bluish combo color to match both background and the current slider body color? will discuss it with Rocket, she is the expert with this things xD

    edit: by the way, dan you give me the code of the combocolours you suggest here? o:
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:331 (1) - What about this rhythm instead here? It will cover the white tick better, since there's a strong sound that worth clicking, even for a beginner difficulty. okay~ fixed
  2. 00:41:197 (2) - A pattern like this one seens much more interesting here, the flow will be much better, since the transition between these notes 00:40:301 (1,2) - is quite precarious, and it would be better if the (2) was rotated clockwize to improve the flow. nice~ fixed!
  3. The first half of the kiai, is much easier than all the rest of the map, but in fact it's clearly densier than the prev. part, I'd recommend you to add more objects there, to make it represents better the song. I will try ovo
[Normal]
  1. 00:32:541 (5,1) - Minor: These objects are so close that makes it look a bit weird. fixed
[Our History]
  1. 01:05:376 - AiMod says that there are two timing points at the same time, fix it OOPS lol fixed
  2. What happened to the downbeat on the first part of the song? It seens out of place (not on the big white tick), are you sure the timing is correct there? yeah, the timing is correct o.o maybe redown can fix it? I change the mp3 a few days ago
  3. 00:14:929 (5,1) - This is quite a huge jump compared to everything else on this part of the song, there are some sounds that worth much more emphasislike 00:22:392 (1) - with actually lower spacing, try nerfing a bit the spacing there, it doesn't make a great consistency with the rest of the song. fix
  4. 00:45:676 (6) - This beat woth a NC, it starts a new measurement on the song. fix
  5. 00:52:690 (3,4) - Auto stacking is making them overlap with the prev. slider, try to replace it manually. fix
  6. 00:52:840 (4,5) - I kind of don't like the way such an important beat on (5) gets so undermapped by having this incredible short DS between these two objects, I'd rather something more like what you did here: 00:54:631 (1,2) - 00:58:213 (1,2) - etc. I really liked the antijump here, but NGH okay, you win, fixed xD
  7. 00:59:855 (3,4) - Here we have the same auto stacking issue I pointed earlier, just make sure to fix so the map looks cleaner. fix
  8. 01:03:586 (5) - I would add a NC here, in fact you should add a NC every half measurement, because you're playing the BPM doubled which makes one measurement equivallent to two. You did it sometimes, but it seens that you either forgot to add to every location, or you were a bit distracted. 01:14:332 (1) - here for example is good. yeah, I really have a mess with the NCs, I need some help to fix them XD
  9. 01:06:870 (5,6) - I reckon this deserves more emphasis, the (6) beat is very important, as the background instrument changes the note it was playing suddenly and with a lot of intensity. fix
  10. 01:26:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I quite don't agree with these jumps, they are over everything we have seen in this difficulty (like, waaaay over) every other jump wasn't this high, and this is actually 1/6 jump. And for consistency, every other time that you placed individual circles together (examples: 00:28:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:31:795 (2,3,4,5) - ) It was something that looked like a stream, with low DS, but here you just blew everything up with these stars :p They are too hard for this kind of difficulty and they are not consistent with the way you used this kind of rhythm before, You could try to use some high spacing, enough to make each circle don't touch each other, but not this kind of star. I will keep the star, sorry, xD but remake it with less DS spacing
  11. If you still decide to keep the stars, I recommend you to place 01:28:660 (1) - (the last note) out of the stars to make it with a bigger impact on the player. fixed!
Good Luck!
Lumael
@Rocket: <3
@Cosmolade: I just headed to bed.. I will look tomorrow :3
Topic Starter
Cosmolade
@Lumael: Okay :3/

Hey~
I remapped the first part of "Our History"
I hope is better now~
Cirno no Baka
Hola :D /
Desde #modreqs

Mod
Rocket's Hard :

00:13:437 (3) - posible blanket?.
00:18:810 (1,2) - intenta hacerle un poco mas de spacing a la nota (1) para que valla directo a la nota (2) ( sin exagerar).
00:24:631 (6) - intenta transformar esto como en 00:20:899 (4,5,6) - haber q tal suena.
00:34:034 (2) - blanket.
00:35:377 (2,3,4) - esto es aproposito? .
00:36:272 (2,3,4) - esto tambien?.
01:02:988 (3,4) - mucho spacing .
01:27:765 (1,1) - intenta rotar las notas para que se distingan mejor, asi confunden :S .

Our History

00:27:467 (5,6,7) - se ve confuso, intenta mover la nota del reverse para que pueda notarse mejor.
00:29:854 (2) - no hay ningun sonido significativo como parta que haya una nota ahi, andaria bien si la mueves detras de 00:30:153 (3) - .
01:19:555 (4) - esta muy lejos de la siguiente , nai nai .
01:27:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - intenta moverlos entre los espacios que estan en 01:26:869 (1,2,3,4,5) - para que se distingan los jumps diferentes ( un aproximado de -18º desde el centro )
01:28:361 (1,2,1) - seria bueno algo como esto https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6684544 .

Eso es todo Buenas noches :3 /
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

ItzShintaro wrote:

Hola :D / Holis >w</
Desde #modreqs

Mod
Our History

00:27:467 (5,6,7) - se ve confuso, intenta mover la nota del reverse para que pueda notarse mejor. el reverse se ve perfectamente, no es necesario reposicionar nada >.<
00:29:854 (2) - no hay ningun sonido significativo como parta que haya una nota ahi, andaria bien si la mueves detras de 00:30:153 (3) - . esta nota está aqui para seguir la fluidez del ritmo, si bien no representa un sonido significativo, si sigue la melodia de fondo xD
01:19:555 (4) - esta muy lejos de la siguiente , nai nai . jump intencional~
01:27:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - intenta moverlos entre los espacios que estan en 01:26:869 (1,2,3,4,5) - para que se distingan los jumps diferentes ( un aproximado de -18º desde el centro ) done o3o)/
01:28:361 (1,2,1) - seria bueno algo como esto https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6684544 . con (1) y (2) esta bien, pero el siguiente (1) necesita énfasis como la ultima nota, por lo cual debe estar separada del resto :3/

Eso es todo Buenas noches :3 /
Buenas noches, y muchas gracias~
Lumael
Ok, here it goes:

NO KDS

Combo colors I recommend:

etc

NCs:

The song plays doubled, so you can also double the comboing by adding one at the middle of a measurement, eg:



I think I explained everything you asked, let me know if you have any doubts :3

Gameplay


I think it's fine enough now, the star is much easier now, I got one miss there though xD
HappyRocket88
Thank you very much! LUMA LUMA EL! >e<)/

Just for reference but if you could add the code of the combo colors would be much easier to apply it. /w\
Lumael

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Thank you very much! LUMA LUMA EL! >e<)/

Just for reference but if you could add the code of the combo colors would be much easier to apply it. /w\
I tried to but for some reason when I got into the code it wouldn't update with the colors I changed :p I tried a lot of things but It just keept the old colors, and now I lost everything because I updated ...
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Lumael wrote:

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Thank you very much! LUMA LUMA EL! >e<)/

Just for reference but if you could add the code of the combo colors would be much easier to apply it. /w\
I tried to but for some reason when I got into the code it wouldn't update with the colors I changed :p I tried a lot of things but It just keept the old colors, and now I lost everything because I updated ...
Oh no ; _;
Pentori
hey
[Easy]
00:06:272 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - feels like ur just throwing objects around without really taking the music into consideration. 00:08:063 - you end slider on downbeat here and the vocals pick up some time after this. it'd be better if you started the slider on the downbeat so the vocals pick up some time during the slide. 00:08:958 (1,2,3,1) - no sense of flow here. why not use reverse sliders and include circles every so often
00:12:540 (2,3,4,1) - why do you skip all the vocals then map them now? this creates an awkward difficulty spike
00:16:122 (2) - offscreen
00:56:421 (2) - ^
01:08:958 (4) - nc
01:14:331 (3,4) - such an awkward rhythm gap to include in an easy

[Normal]
there are like almost double the amount of objects in this diff compared to easy. isn't really appropriate for spread since you have huge chains of 1/3, try nerf some of the single tapping you have and allow for some more 1/1 gaps
00:28:959 (5) - what is this mapped to? i'd just remove it imo
00:36:273 (5,1) - why do this? the gap between the two is too small, just make this a slider instead and nc 00:37:316 (6)
01:08:958 (5,1) - swap nc for downbeat
01:16:123 (5,1) - ^

[Rocket's Hard]
01:08:959 (1,2) - might be troublesome as you dont get to see the reverse arrow until the very last few milliseconds
01:28:661 (1) - ending like this is kinda meh, the spinner is too short imo. ending on a circle instead would be more appropriate

really good

[Our History]
00:08:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you're mostly recycling the same rhythm over and over here. since the vocals kick in here, why not use variations to represent that? 00:08:361 - could be made into a slider etc. same for rest of these
00:14:033 (4,5) - make this a slider? the vocals are only on 00:13:734 (2,3,4)
00:28:660 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - idk about this. i assume your goal with 00:27:764 (1,2) - was to make the vocals clickable. at 00:28:660 - the vocals are held so spamming circles is the like opposite of the intensity you should aim for. yes, there is a violin that plays constant 1/6 notes, but you can follow this with other methods that doesn't include single tapping all of them
00:31:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:47:765 (2,3) - these overlap because of the stack
00:49:258 (1,2) - not rly a fan of this overlap, try to not overlap slider heads
00:59:108 (2,3) - too close because of stack

gl
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Pentori wrote:

hey OH hey hey!! >w<)/!!
[Easy]
00:06:272 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - feels like ur just throwing objects around without really taking the music into consideration. 00:08:063 - you end slider on downbeat here and the vocals pick up some time after this. it'd be better if you started the slider on the downbeat so the vocals pick up some time during the slide. 00:08:958 (1,2,3,1) - no sense of flow here. why not use reverse sliders and include circles every so often
00:12:540 (2,3,4,1) - why do you skip all the vocals then map them now? this creates an awkward difficulty spike
00:16:122 (2) - offscreen
00:56:421 (2) - ^
01:08:958 (4) - nc
01:14:331 (3,4) - such an awkward rhythm gap to include in an easy
All fixed here!

[Normal]
there are like almost double the amount of objects in this diff compared to easy. isn't really appropriate for spread since you have huge chains of 1/3, try nerf some of the single tapping you have and allow for some more 1/1 gaps
00:28:959 (5) - what is this mapped to? i'd just remove it imo
00:36:273 (5,1) - why do this? the gap between the two is too small, just make this a slider instead and nc 00:37:316 (6)
01:08:958 (5,1) - swap nc for downbeat
01:16:123 (5,1) - ^
All fixed, and nerfed some rhythms in the kia

[Our History]
00:08:063 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you're mostly recycling the same rhythm over and over here. since the vocals kick in here, why not use variations to represent that? 00:08:361 - could be made into a slider etc. same for rest of these
00:14:033 (4,5) - make this a slider? the vocals are only on 00:13:734 (2,3,4)
00:28:660 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - idk about this. i assume your goal with 00:27:764 (1,2) - was to make the vocals clickable. at 00:28:660 - the vocals are held so spamming circles is the like opposite of the intensity you should aim for. yes, there is a violin that plays constant 1/6 notes, but you can follow this with other methods that doesn't include single tapping all of them In this part I really want the singletap for the violin, this is the purpose here, not only make the vocals clickeable
00:31:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ here I really follow the violin lol and, I test other means, and I don't like the reverse sliders, or tiny sliders spam
00:47:765 (2,3) - these overlap because of the stack
00:49:258 (1,2) - not rly a fan of this overlap, try to not overlap slider heads
00:59:108 (2,3) - too close because of stack
All of the rest fixed!
gl
Thank you so much~♥
Hollow Delta
Was doing m4m, but decided to call it off. So consider it a free mod.
Hard
00:24:631 (6) - I thought transitioning from the instruments to the vocals here was awkward. Try 00:24:183 (5,6) - this rhythm.
01:08:959 (1,2) - Although this could be argued due to the AR, you can't have the reverse arrow covered. Try removing the reverse and placing a circle on the right of it. So it overlaps one of the notes of the yellow combo. http://puu.sh/sFrMO/c6f21156c3.jpg
Chuiya
Not sure if I'm helpful but since I'm kinda in love with the anime I would like to see your map ranked :)


Our History
01:25:376 (4,5,6) - Maybe a bit nitpicky and not needed but the pattern would maybe look a bit nicer if you give it a look like a blanket.. http://puu.sh/sHzgo.jpg
01:27:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd space it a bit with ctrl+shift+s up to ~1.200 ? (look at the next link to see what I mean)
01:28:361 (1,2) - Noticed that those two arent like in the middle of the pattern before.. Maybe something unnecessary but I'd do it like that http://puu.sh/sHzvy.jpg

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Froschi wrote:

Not sure if I'm helpful but since I'm kinda in love with the anime I would like to see your map ranked :)


Our History
01:25:376 (4,5,6) - Maybe a bit nitpicky and not needed but the pattern would maybe look a bit nicer if you give it a look like a blanket.. http://puu.sh/sHzgo.jpg
01:27:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd space it a bit with ctrl+shift+s up to ~1.200 ? (look at the next link to see what I mean)
01:28:361 (1,2) - Noticed that those two arent like in the middle of the pattern before.. Maybe something unnecessary but I'd do it like that http://puu.sh/sHzvy.jpg
All fixed!!
Good Luck!
Thanks you! <3
HappyRocket88

Bubblun wrote:

Was doing m4m, but decided to call it off. So consider it a free mod.
Hard
00:24:631 (6) - I thought transitioning from the instruments to the vocals here was awkward. Try 00:24:183 (5,6) - this rhythm. ayyy ;w; I don't really don't get this TwT
01:08:959 (1,2) - Although this could be argued due to the AR, you can't have the reverse arrow covered. Try removing the reverse and placing a circle on the right of it. So it overlaps one of the notes of the yellow combo. http://puu.sh/sFrMO/c6f21156c3.jpg YEEEEESSS! >w<)/
Thank you very much for modding! Will get in your map ASAP! >w<)/
Hazu-
hihi
Easy
  1. Creo que el OD está muy alto para una Easy, ¿Bajarlo a 3?
  2. 00:18:809 (1,1) - Creo que sería mejor si fuera overlap, osea, solo digo (?
  3. 00:30:451 (2,3) - Este tipo de overlaps pueden resultar difíciles de leer para los mas nuevos.
  4. 01:08:958 (1) - Esta blanket está bien rara xd
  5. 01:17:913 (3,1) - Lo mismo de antes, sería mas fácil de leer si pones 01:19:704 (1) - abajo de 01:17:913 (3) -
Normal
  1. 00:22:392 (1) - No estoy muy seguro si eso es un blanket, pero si lo es, we ya sabes xd
  2. 00:53:734 - Sería mejor si este sonido fuera clickable, es mucho mas prominente que 00:54:034 (5) - (Y ademas es la única diff en donde no lo es)
  3. 01:05:377 (1,2) - También quedaría bien como blanket.
  4. 01:08:064 (4) - plox las blankets en esta diff xDD
Rocket's Hard
  1. 00:10:750 (8) - Mueve el puntito ese que se me olvidó el nombre un poco a la izquierda (x:440 | y:172)
Our History
  1. No se como modear esto x.x Lo único raro que encontré es que siendo que 00:53:735 (5) - y 01:00:899 (1) - son el mismo sonido, uno tiene NC y el otro no.
Ten un pacman con un gorro de navidad y una estrella •<|:v
HappyRocket88

Hazu- wrote:

Rocket's Hard
  1. 00:10:750 (8) - Mueve el puntito ese que se me olvidó el nombre un poco a la izquierda (x:440 | y:172) Yes! Se llaman nodos xD
Gracias por el mod Hazu! ojo de águila D: D:
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480,292,7168,2,0,P|468:260|444:236,1,62.6666666666667,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,200,7765,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,152,8064,5,8,3:0:0:0:
392,92,8362,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,144,8661,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,144,8810,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,144,8959,2,0,P|268:146|227:101,1,125.333333333333,8|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,144,11646,6,0,B|312:148|288:134|288:134|294:178|258:206,1,125.333333333333,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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263,201,13437,1,8,3:0:0:0:
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333,227,17019,1,8,3:0:0:0:
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402,194,17616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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437,327,19705,2,0,B|413:303|380:301|380:301|347:319|307:302,1,125.333333333333,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,263,20601,1,8,3:0:0:0:
199,308,20899,2,0,P|184:278|188:243,1,62.6666666666667,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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204,176,21496,2,0,P|204:146|190:117,1,62.6666666666667,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,164,22093,1,2,0:0:0:0:
279,192,22392,6,0,P|280:127|244:61,1,137.866670874024,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,10,23287,1,8,3:0:0:0:
380,51,23586,1,2,0:0:0:0:
454,14,23884,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,51,24183,2,0,P|375:85|393:123,1,68.9333354370118,8|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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78,214,42988,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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240,188,48959,1,8,3:0:0:0:
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264,188,49258,1,4,1:0:0:0:
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349,135,49855,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,304,50153,5,2,0:0:0:0:
408,324,50452,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,336,50749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,56,56422,21,10,3:0:0:0:
256,148,56720,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,168,56869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,57019,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,208,57168,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,57317,5,10,3:0:0:0:
298,295,57615,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,337,57913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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426,287,62690,1,8,3:0:0:0:
432,88,62989,2,0,P|400:92|372:120,1,62.3533348794175,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,238,63287,2,0,P|245:234|273:206,1,62.3533348794175,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,68,63586,21,8,3:0:0:0:
332,268,63884,1,2,0:0:0:0:
377,110,64183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,160,64481,1,8,3:0:0:0:
411,117,64780,5,0,0:0:0:0:
435,147,64928,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,189,65079,1,8,3:0:0:0:
410,223,65228,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,175,65377,6,0,P|411:121|408:224,1,249.41333951767,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
201,247,66273,1,8,3:0:0:0:
323,175,66571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
346,338,66870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,214,67168,6,0,P|210:178|184:314,1,249.41333951767,8|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,282,68064,2,0,P|339:238|332:167,1,124.706669758835,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
202,247,68661,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,349,68959,6,0,P|410:246|380:113,1,249.41333951767,8|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,286,69854,2,0,B|281:314|279:349|279:349|308:330|354:359,2,124.706669758835,8|2|2,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,94,70750,21,8,3:0:0:0:
301,183,71049,1,2,0:0:0:0:
262,286,71347,1,2,0:0:0:0:
470,344,71646,5,8,3:0:0:0:
351,254,71944,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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416,349,74929,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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92,112,75825,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,80,76123,6,0,P|284:152|192:108,1,249.41333951767,8|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,77019,2,0,P|352:96|328:208,2,187.060004638252,8|2|8,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,196,78511,1,8,3:0:0:0:
192,256,78810,37,8,3:0:0:0:
188,52,79108,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,79407,1,8,3:0:0:0:
336,196,79705,53,4,0:0:0:0:
344,196,80601,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,196,81496,1,8,3:0:0:0:
364,196,82392,21,8,3:0:0:0:
437,255,82690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
445,164,82989,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Cosmolade

Hazu- wrote:

hihi hoi hoooi
Easy
  1. Creo que el OD está muy alto para una Easy, ¿Bajarlo a 3? oh, okay o:
  2. 00:18:809 (1,1) - Creo que sería mejor si fuera overlap, osea, solo digo (? xD buen ojo!, fixed
  3. 00:30:451 (2,3) - Este tipo de overlaps pueden resultar difíciles de leer para los mas nuevos. que esto es un easy, no un begginer man :^) sigue en los estándares de un easy xD
  4. 01:08:958 (1) - Esta blanket está bien rara xd de hecho es perfecta, no sé que le veas de raro xd
  5. 01:17:913 (3,1) - Lo mismo de antes, sería mas fácil de leer si pones 01:19:704 (1) - abajo de 01:17:913 (3) - ya sé, pero ese si es un tipo de overlap que no se permite en las easys ; v;

Normal
  1. 00:22:392 (1) - No estoy muy seguro si eso es un blanket, pero si lo es, we ya sabes xd hahaha fixed
  2. 00:53:734 - Sería mejor si este sonido fuera clickable, es mucho mas prominente que 00:54:034 (5) - (Y ademas es la única diff en donde no lo es) yep, eso es por aligerar un poco la cantidad de notas dentro del normal, veré si a futuro me trae problemas y lo arreglo xd
  3. 01:05:377 (1,2) - También quedaría bien como blanket. he rehecho ese blannket mil veces, no puede ser mejor a esto, sorry xD
  4. 01:08:064 (4) - plox las blankets en esta diff xDD XD fixed I guess(?
Our History
  1. No se como modear esto x.x Lo único raro que encontré es que siendo que 00:53:735 (5) - y 01:00:899 (1) - son el mismo sonido, uno tiene NC y el otro no. yup, es por cantidad de notas, ambas partes tiene el mismo sonido, pero poseen cantidad y notas diferentes xD
Ten un pacman con un gorro de navidad y una estrella •<|:v haha buena esa
Gracias man♥ o3o
DivineEnigma
Hiya, NM request from my queue~

General
  1. Isn't Widescreen Support used for SB's? Turn it off unless you're planning on adding a storyboard to the set. This setting is turned on Rocket's Hard and Our History.
Our History
  1. 00:13:734 (2,3,4) - Stack these to keep consistency like at 00:06:870 (3,4,5) - , 00:08:660 (3,4,5) - , 00:13:734 (2,3,4) -
  2. 00:17:615 (3) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:35:824 (3,4) - Blanket these like you did at 01:02:989 (3,4) - .
  4. 00:30:451 (5) - Why is there a red anchor on the slider?
  5. 00:54:630 (3,4) - I really think this would look nicer if you did something like this since you did a blanket with the previous notes (00:52:839 (4,5) - )
  6. 01:26:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - I think this is really harsh for a low BPM song, even though it does match the song here. These notes are why the difficulty at a 3.6* but, it wouldn't hurt to change some to sliders even if it means to reduce the star rating... But, if you do decide to keep this, possibly lower the OD to 6.5.
  7. 01:28:361 (1,2,1) - Maybe do something like this rather?


I love the song and map, good luck with the set~~ Hope it gets ranked <3
Topic Starter
Cosmolade

DivineEnigma wrote:

Hiya, NM request from my queue~

General
  1. Isn't Widescreen Support used for SB's? Turn it off unless you're planning on adding a storyboard to the set. This setting is turned on Rocket's Hard and Our History.OOPS my bad, fixed!xD
Our History
  1. 00:13:734 (2,3,4) - Stack these to keep consistency like at 00:06:870 (3,4,5) - , 00:08:660 (3,4,5) - , 00:13:734 (2,3,4) - hm... I test it and I really dont like them stacked, even if it brokes the consistency, is more like a visual thing
  2. 00:17:615 (3) - ctrl+g I prefer Ctrl+G (2) here lol, because the I like the flow in (3) to (4)
  3. 00:35:824 (3,4) - Blanket these like you did at 01:02:989 (3,4) - . fix!
  4. 00:30:451 (5) - Why is there a red anchor on the slider? slider variety, I feel boring to make a simply curve slider here
  5. 00:54:630 (3,4) - I really think this would look nicer if you did something like this since you did a blanket with the previous notes (00:52:839 (4,5) - ) oh nice! fixed
  6. 01:26:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - I think this is really harsh for a low BPM song, even though it does match the song here. These notes are why the difficulty at a 3.6* but, it wouldn't hurt to change some to sliders even if it means to reduce the star rating... But, if you do decide to keep this, possibly lower the OD to 6.5. oh yeah I will keep this, so the OD change is agreed! fix
  7. 01:28:361 (1,2,1) - Maybe do something like this rather? oh, thats nice! fix

SPOILER

VKUSNO!!!!

I love the song and map, good luck with the set~~ Hope it gets ranked <3
Thanks you for the mod♥ and I hope rank this too >w<
GIDZ
NM from my queue~

General
  1. Easy utilizes 1.5x DS while Normal uses 1.2x DS, this isnt good for the diff spread imo when a higher diff has lower spacing than the easier one.

Easy
  1. 00:08:958 (4) - This note isnt following the flow u've built up at 00:07:167 (2,3) - . Just place note after slider end to keep consistency with flow pattern?
  2. 00:22:391 (1) - No crash is hit on the drums in the music here, so removing the hit-finish might be better to be coherent to the music imo.
  3. 01:04:481 (4) - Would flow better if moved up imo
  4. 01:11:645 (3) - Flip this so it flows more naturally? http://puu.sh/sMZ7F/d1f997c5da.jpg
  5. 01:17:913 (3,1) - The overlap here could be fixed, try smth like http://puu.sh/sMZem/16b59095f5.jpg

Normal
  1. 00:11:646 (1,2) - Use either one of the slider shapes? Just to make the map look more consistent cuz instrumentals dun change here and I dun think the slider shapes should as well.
  2. 00:15:228 (1,2) - Same
  3. 00:21:496 (4,1) - Flows a bit inconsistent here, try http://puu.sh/sMZpq/6e9044ca38.jpg ? I just rotated 00:21:496 (4) - by 45 degrees, and 00:22:392 (1) - by like 30 degrees.
  4. 00:34:929 (4) - Move this down to keep circular flow?
  5. 00:58:213 (1,2,3) - Slider shapes here change completely from 00:51:049 (1,2,3) - when the music is the same, u might wanna copy and paste the pattern from the first part to keep the map more consistent.
  6. 01:13:437 (2) - Curve this slider for better flow? http://puu.sh/sMZED/f9aa4fdf7b.jpg
  7. 01:16:123 (1) - Stack properly on 01:14:332 (3) - tail.

Rocket's Hard
  1. 00:07:019 (5,6) - This feels a bit far from slider end and isnt good for flow imo. Move it down closer to slider end? http://puu.sh/sMZOB/9d8f052a47.jpg
  2. 00:35:376 (1,1,1,1) - I would avoid these types of overlaps in Hard. Make them similar to 01:26:870 (1,1,1,1) - ? Or u could just make them go in circles instead? http://puu.sh/sMZWw/2655980c0a.jpg
  3. 00:48:959 (4,5,6) - Stacking them would increase the emphasis on the jumps 00:49:258 (6,7) - as the music is in suspense imo.
  4. 00:59:108 (2) - I dun think this is a good shape to use in Hard diff cuz the slider path isnt clear.
  5. 01:04:780 (1,2,3,4,1) - This half stack could be misleading players to read 01:05:377 (1) - as a 1/2 rhythm slider. U could mirror it instead http://puu.sh/sN0bx/cb30b85cf1.jpg .

Our History
  1. 00:08:361 (2) - Move to the right a bit so it doesnt overlap with 00:07:765 (6) - ?
  2. 00:12:240 (3) - Object isnt snapped
  3. 00:13:734 (2,3,4) - Why out of ur patterns, this one needs cursor movement to hit the triplets whit the previous and the next are stacked triplets? I recommend stacking these as well to keep consistency.
  4. 00:31:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol, I would just keep the stream flow simple here cuz there isnt any distortion in the music that suggests the stream to flow this way imo.
  5. 00:37:317 (2) - Stack on 00:35:824 (3) - head?
  6. 00:49:108 (8) - This would flow better if u made a jump imo. Smth like http://puu.sh/sN0BQ/ed63bf7282.jpg .
  7. 01:14:034 (5) - I dun think stacking is a good idea here cuz its unnecessarily confusing to players and it also doesnt emphsize anything in particular in the music. Smth like http://puu.sh/sN0SF/9201cdad66.jpg might be better for flow and readability.
  8. 01:15:228 (3) - Curve this slider to make better flow? http://puu.sh/sN0Wb/c9eb277efd.jpg
  9. 01:16:720 (2) - Stack on 01:15:825 (5) - tail? Since u've also stacked 01:17:019 (3) - .
  10. 01:23:287 (1) - Nothing in the music at 01:23:436 - to make that slider stand out imo. Just use regular curved slider would be fine.
  11. 01:26:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - Since u havent used many jumps on the other parts of ur map, this would catch players by surprise as they cannot recognize this pattern subconsciously. Well if u rly wanna keep the jumps to emphasize the ending, u can move it down so its actually easier to read than putting 01:26:869 (1) - on slider body. Try Ctrl > the pattern and place it down http://puu.sh/sN1fW/07d1b8c618.jpg . Furthermore, there are also many overlaps in the last pattern which isnt good for the sake of aesthetics imo.
  12. 01:28:361 (1,2) - I would just use jumps here as well since the music doesnt change here at all. http://puu.sh/sN1mR/ea60615409.jpg , I've just stacked on 01:27:316 (4,5) - .

Thats all from me, GL~
Zyl
From my Queue


General


  1. Artist doesn't accord with the information from internet:
    ディーン・フジオカ

    ディーン・フジオカ
  2. Try to make the end time of the difficulties consistent.
    ET
    01:28:660 - Easy
    01:28:661 - Normal
    01:29:705 - Rocket's Hard
    01:28:660 - Our History
    01:28:661 - MBomb's Rain
  3. Mostly of the diffs have too much unsnapped objects.
    EUO
    Easy


    00:07:465 - Slider repeat
    00:07:764 - Slider end
    00:08:660 - Slider end
    00:10:152 - Slider repeat
    00:10:451 - Slider end
    00:12:242 - Slider end
    00:14:928 - Slider end
    00:18:510 - Slider end
    00:23:884 - Slider end
    00:27:466 - Slider end
    00:31:048 - Slider end
    00:37:316 - Slider end
    00:37:913 - Slider repeat
    00:38:212 - Slider end
    00:39:704 - Slider repeat
    00:40:003 - Slider end
    00:41:495 - Slider end
    00:42:391 - Slider repeat
    00:42:690 - Slider end
    00:43:286 - Slider repeat
    00:43:585 - Slider end
    00:45:077 - Slider repeat
    00:45:376 - Slider end
    00:46:272 - Circle
    00:47:167 - Slider end
    00:47:764 - Slider repeat
    00:48:063 - Slider end
    00:48:659 - Slider repeat
    00:48:958 - Slider end
    00:50:450 - Slider repeat
    00:50:749 - Slider end
    00:57:018 - Slider end
    01:02:988 - Slider start
    01:03:286 - Slider end
    01:04:182 - Slider end
    01:04:779 - Slider repeat
    01:05:078 - Slider end
    01:08:660 - Slider end
    01:11:047 - Slider repeat
    01:11:346 - Slider end
    01:11:943 - Slider repeat
    01:12:242 - Slider end
    01:14:033 - Slider end
    01:14:928 - Slider end
    01:16:719 - Slider end
    01:18:211 - Slider repeat
    01:18:510 - Slider end
    01:19:107 - Slider repeat
    01:19:406 - Slider end
    01:21:794 - Slider repeat
    01:22:093 - Slider end
    01:22:689 - Slider repeat
    01:22:988 - Slider end
    01:25:376 - Slider repeat
    01:25:675 - Slider end
    01:26:570 - Slider end

    HUO
    Rocket's Hard


    00:07:019 - Circle
    00:08:810 - Circle
    00:21:347 - Circle
    00:32:391 - Slider repeat
    00:35:077 - Slider repeat
    00:35:674 - Slider end
    00:35:973 - Slider repeat
    00:36:570 - Slider end
    00:49:108 - Circle
    00:57:168 - Circle
    01:03:436 - Slider end
    01:05:228 - Circle
    01:27:019 - Slider repeat
    01:27:614 - Slider end
    01:27:914 - Slider repeat
    01:28:510 - Slider end
    01:28:661 - Spinner end

    OHUO
    Our History

    00:05:228 - Circle
    00:07:019 - Circle
    00:08:809 - Circle
    00:10:601 - Slider end
    00:12:390 - Circle
    00:14:182 - Slider end
    00:15:973 - Circle
    00:17:764 - Slider end
    00:18:660 - Slider end
    00:19:556 - Circle
    00:21:347 - Circle
    00:22:242 - Slider end
    00:23:138 - Slider end
    00:24:928 - Slider end
    00:25:228 - Slider repeat
    00:25:824 - Slider end
    00:27:019 - Slider end
    00:27:616 - Circle
    00:27:913 - Slider repeat
    00:28:510 - Slider end
    00:28:810 - Circle
    00:29:407 - Circle
    00:30:302 - Circle
    00:32:093 - Circle
    00:32:989 - Slider end
    00:33:883 - Slider end
    00:35:078 - Slider repeat
    00:35:675 - Slider end
    00:36:570 - Slider end
    00:37:765 - Slider end
    00:41:347 - Slider end
    00:42:242 - Slider end
    00:42:839 - Slider end
    00:43:735 - Slider end
    00:44:630 - Slider end
    00:44:929 - Slider end
    00:45:526 - Slider end
    00:46:422 - Slider end
    00:47:317 - Slider end
    00:47:616 - Slider end
    00:48:213 - Circle
    00:48:511 - Slider end
    00:49:108 - Circle
    00:49:407 - Slider end
    00:50:004 - Circle
    00:52:690 - Circle
    00:54:481 - Circle
    00:56:571 - Slider end
    00:57:168 - Slider end
    00:58:063 - Slider end
    00:59:855 - Circle
    01:01:048 - Slider end
    01:01:645 - Slider end
    01:03:436 - Slider end
    01:03:735 - Slider end
    01:04:332 - Slider end
    01:05:227 - Slider end
    01:06:123 - Slider end
    01:06:422 - Slider end
    01:07:019 - Slider end
    01:07:914 - Slider end
    01:08:810 - Circle
    01:09:108 - Slider end
    01:09:705 - Circle
    01:10:004 - Slider end
    01:10:601 - Circle
    01:11:496 - Slider end
    01:11:795 - Slider end
    01:12:392 - Circle
    01:13:287 - Slider end
    01:14:183 - Slider end
    01:15:078 - Slider end
    01:15:974 - Slider end
    01:16:869 - Slider end
    01:17:765 - Slider end
    01:18:063 - Slider end
    01:18:659 - Slider end
    01:18:959 - Slider end
    01:19:555 - Circle
    01:20:452 - Circle
    01:20:750 - Slider end
    01:21:347 - Slider end
    01:22:242 - Slider end
    01:23:138 - Circle
    01:24:033 - Slider end
    01:24:929 - Slider end
    01:25:228 - Slider end
    01:25:824 - Slider end
    01:27:018 - Circle
    01:27:615 - Circle
    01:27:913 - Circle
    01:28:510 - Circle

    MBUO
    MBomb's Rain


    00:01:048 - CtB score node
    00:01:645 - CtB score node
    00:02:540 - CtB score node
    00:03:436 - CtB score node
    00:04:556 - CtB score node
    00:04:631 - CtB score node
    00:04:855 - CtB score node
    00:05:004 - CtB score node
    00:05:228 - CtB score node
    00:07:019 - CtB score node
    00:08:810 - CtB score node
    00:14:182 - CtB score node
    00:15:974 - CtB score node
    00:21:347 - CtB score node
    00:22:541 - CtB score node
    00:24:929 - CtB score node
    00:25:228 - CtB score node
    00:25:825 - CtB score node
    00:26:123 - CtB score node
    00:28:735 - CtB score node
    00:28:810 - CtB score node
    00:29:034 - CtB score node
    00:29:183 - CtB score node
    00:29:407 - CtB score node
    00:30:302 - CtB score node
    00:31:197 - CtB score node
    00:32:093 - CtB score node
    00:33:884 - CtB score node
    00:34:779 - CtB score node
    00:46:422 - CtB score node
    01:05:526 - CtB score node
    01:07:317 - CtB score node
    01:09:705 - CtB score node
    01:10:600 - CtB score node
    01:12:690 - CtB score node
    01:14:481 - CtB score node
    01:16:272 - CtB score node
    01:17:765 - CtB score node
    01:19:854 - CtB score node
    01:20:451 - CtB score node
    01:23:362 - CtB score node
    01:23:437 - CtB score node
    01:23:661 - CtB score node
    01:27:019 - CtB score node
    01:27:616 - CtB score node
    01:27:914 - CtB score node
    01:28:511 - CtB score node
    ¿why there are so many unsnapped objects dude?
  4. Hyperdashes on MBomb's Rain
    HPMB
    MBomb's Rain

    00:02:839
    00:03:735
    00:04:332
    00:10:601
    00:14:182
    00:17:765
    00:21:347
    00:22:093
    00:23:138
    00:24:929
    00:25:825
    00:26:720
    00:28:511
    00:29:407
    00:32:093
    00:32:989
    00:34:779
    00:35:675
    00:36:123
    00:36:571
    00:39:108
    00:40:003
    00:42:690
    00:43:586
    00:45:377
    00:46:422
    00:47:168
    00:48:959
    00:49:855
    00:50:750
    00:51:795
    00:54:332
    00:55:377
    00:56:272
    00:57:019
    00:57:914
    00:58:959
    01:01:496
    01:02:541
    01:03:138
    01:03:436
    01:04:183
    01:05:078
    01:06:123
    01:07:019
    01:07:914
    01:08:810
    01:09:705
    01:10:600
    01:11:496
    01:11:795
    01:12:392
    01:13:287
    01:14:183
    01:15:078
    01:15:974
    01:16:869
    01:17:765
    01:18:660
    01:18:959
    01:19:556
    01:20:451
    01:21:347
    01:22:242
    01:22:541
    01:23:138
    01:24:033
    01:24:929
    01:25:825
    01:26:123
    01:26:720
    01:27:616
    01:28:511
  5. The song will make a better effect if you put the previem point here: 00:48:212 (3) - , in the part that say "Yes we were born to make history", the actual one sounds too much repentine & sounds too forced, please try to search the best preview point for a song, if you want to keep the "we were born to make history" put the preview point here: 00:48:585 (4) - , please do not decline this because that references that i gave you make sound better the map and have a better effect on the player.
  6. Also i uploaded the map by error and:

i will mod later the rest
Topic Starter
Cosmolade
@Zyl: for the objects unsnapped, redownload please, I change the mp3 some time ago, maybe you have the older mp3 and the older timing./or maybe you have the editor in 1/4, the song is 1/3 - 1/6!
* For the end time, I will fix it! edit: all the diff have the same end, except happy's gd (He knows it and he do it on purpose)
* For the image file, is normal because HappyRocket88 have other bg in his GD
* For the artist, I take him for the discography!! and Kwan confirm it
http://yurionice.com/discography/detail.php?id=1014332
* And for the preview point, I really have reason for this here, first, I don't like the "YES[...]" in the begin, because I only want to take the most important sentence here, the most hype vocal, so: "WE WERE BORN TO MAKE HISTORY" is the only important one, and what I want is: repentine, and shocking intro, so here is!

-----

- G I D Z - wrote:

NM from my queue~

General
  1. Easy utilizes 1.5x DS while Normal uses 1.2x DS, this isnt good for the diff spread imo when a higher diff has lower spacing than the easier one. the spacing setting really have variety, while the difficulty is listed as easy, there should be no problem

Easy
  1. 00:08:958 (4) - This note isnt following the flow u've built up at 00:07:167 (2,3) - . Just place note after slider end to keep consistency with flow pattern? I think is not necessary to follow this here, because the pattern new will be broken (and it will add more dificulty where it's not requested
  2. 00:22:391 (1) - No crash is hit on the drums in the music here, so removing the hit-finish might be better to be coherent to the music imo. the finish is for the change of the music, it clearly mark a new tone
  3. 01:04:481 (4) - Would flow better if moved up imo fixed
  4. 01:11:645 (3) - Flip this so it flows more naturally? http://puu.sh/sMZ7F/d1f997c5da.jpg nice idea, fixed
  5. 01:17:913 (3,1) - The overlap here could be fixed, try smth like http://puu.sh/sMZem/16b59095f5.jpg fix

Normal
  1. 00:11:646 (1,2) - Use either one of the slider shapes? Just to make the map look more consistent cuz instrumentals dun change here and I dun think the slider shapes should as well. hm I think use other will be fine, a triangle one owo
  2. 00:15:228 (1,2) - Same no, here is for the vocal, so I will not change the form
  3. 00:21:496 (4,1) - Flows a bit inconsistent here, try http://puu.sh/sMZpq/6e9044ca38.jpg ? I just rotated 00:21:496 (4) - by 45 degrees, and 00:22:392 (1) - by like 30 degrees. oh yeah! I like the flow here, fixed, and thanks!!
  4. 00:34:929 (4) - Move this down to keep circular flow? okay
  5. 00:58:213 (1,2,3) - Slider shapes here change completely from 00:51:049 (1,2,3) - when the music is the same, u might wanna copy and paste the pattern from the first part to keep the map more consistent. yeah, but it gonna make the map boring! I respect consistency but I love more variery and a really fun/enjoyable map
  6. 01:13:437 (2) - Curve this slider for better flow? http://puu.sh/sMZED/f9aa4fdf7b.jpg fix!
  7. 01:16:123 (1) - Stack properly on 01:14:332 (3) - tail. fix!

Our History
  1. 00:08:361 (2) - Move to the right a bit so it doesnt overlap with 00:07:765 (6) - ? done!
  2. 00:12:240 (3) - Object isnt snapped omg nice eye, fixed
  3. 00:13:734 (2,3,4) - Why out of ur patterns, this one needs cursor movement to hit the triplets whit the previous and the next are stacked triplets? I recommend stacking these as well to keep consistency. the previous stacked streams are for readability only, the next can have cursor movement because is really readable, not like the others (and I really dislike who is looks stacked lol)
  4. 00:31:645 (2,3,4,5,6) - lol, I would just keep the stream flow simple here cuz there isnt any distortion in the music that suggests the stream to flow this way imo. fix
  5. 00:37:317 (2) - Stack on 00:35:824 (3) - head? done
  6. 00:49:108 (8) - This would flow better if u made a jump imo. Smth like http://puu.sh/sN0BQ/ed63bf7282.jpg . uuh, I like how it looks >w< fix
  7. 01:14:034 (5) - I dun think stacking is a good idea here cuz its unnecessarily confusing to players and it also doesnt emphsize anything in particular in the music. Smth like http://puu.sh/sN0SF/9201cdad66.jpg might be better for flow and readability. this emphasizes the next jump on (1) is this the reason of the stack and the reversed flow for this note, I really like the sudden jump in the cursor movement here
  8. 01:15:228 (3) - Curve this slider to make better flow? http://puu.sh/sN0Wb/c9eb277efd.jpg fix
  9. 01:16:720 (2) - Stack on 01:15:825 (5) - tail? Since u've also stacked 01:17:019 (3) - . oh sure! but it brokes a little my spacing lol
  10. 01:23:287 (1) - Nothing in the music at 01:23:436 - to make that slider stand out imo. Just use regular curved slider would be fine. okay~
  11. 01:26:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - Since u havent used many jumps on the other parts of ur map, this would catch players by surprise as they cannot recognize this pattern subconsciously. Well if u rly wanna keep the jumps to emphasize the ending, u can move it down so its actually easier to read than putting 01:26:869 (1) - on slider body. Try Ctrl > the pattern and place it down http://puu.sh/sN1fW/07d1b8c618.jpg . Furthermore, there are also many overlaps in the last pattern which isnt good for the sake of aesthetics imo. yeah, I can't think a better thin to fix the overlaps, but I thinks they are fine for the pattern, moved down the pattern, I like the idea!
  12. 01:28:361 (1,2) - I would just use jumps here as well since the music doesnt change here at all. http://puu.sh/sN1mR/ea60615409.jpg , I've just stacked on 01:27:316 (4,5) - . fixed!

Thats all from me, GL~
Thanks for the mod!
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