Hello! M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/454071
Please work more on this map. It needs a lot of help/mods :/
Lv.2
00:28:500 (28500|1) - I think it's best to map notes only for bell sounds, so that the beginner knows what is he playing (example - 00:25:500 (25500|3,27000|1,28875|2,29250|1) -
so I suggest to delete this note
00:31:500 (31500|3) - same
00:40:500 (40500|0) - same
00:48:750 - I suggest to remake this pattern to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5359421, because the [14] is better for high pitched chord unlike [12].
About the chorus: I see that you mapped blind 1/2 chords. I strongly suggest mapping only the most transparent sounds instead of what you did. I will point some of those chords in normal, but in Easy there are too much so I hope you can fix (remap) that in your own way
00:52:875 (52875|3,53062|2,54375|0,54562|1) - I am really unsure about those notes. 1/4 in the Easy diff is really too hard in my opinion (given that Easy diffs are for beginners who just start mania and completely don't know how to play), so I would do one of the following:
a) delete the 1/4 note (which may be kind of weird but works and it has been used in many EZ maps)
b) make the LN instead of the 1/4 (00:52:875 (52875|3,53062|2) - instead of those 2 notes one 1/2 LN etc), which is also an option to consider
c) delete the chord, so it becomes three single notes (I think it's acceptable)
01:07:875 (67875|3,68062|2) - like above
01:11:625 - I think you can follow the pitch better here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5359458
01:13:125 (73125|1,73875|3,74625|0,75375|3) - those notes don't exist in the higher diff and I think they aren't needed, they aren't very audible to be in a beginner diff. The chords alone suffice in my opinion.
01:19:125 (79125|0,79875|3,80625|0,81375|3,82125|2,82875|0,83625|3,84375|1,85125|3,85875|0,86625|3,87375|0,88125|3,88875|0,89625|0,90375|3) - those are the rest of the notes I'm speaking about. I would delete them and rearrange the chords so that it becomes an interesting pitch pattern for beginners \:D/
01:37:500 (97500|2) - I would delete this, too strong imo
01:39:375 (99375|1) - doesn't need 2-chord, delete. It's too dense here :/
01:42:375 (102375|1) - as above
01:45:375 (105375|1) - as above. Also, why is pattern the same?
01:48:375 (108375|1) - as above. Please remap this whole section because copy-paste sucks and it's really visible ;;;;;;
01:49:875 (109875|0,110062|1) - 1/4, you know what to do.
01:51:375 (111375|1) - ehh... I won't point more of those, just remap this chorus xD by the way, I think it's too hard. Focus only on the really loud piano/bell sounds.
02:00:000 (120000|0,120375|1) - not needed imo.
02:06:750 (126750|1,126750|0,127500|3,128250|1,128250|2) - ctrl+H for better pitch
so I suggest to delete this note
00:31:500 (31500|3) - same
00:40:500 (40500|0) - same
00:48:750 - I suggest to remake this pattern to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5359421, because the [14] is better for high pitched chord unlike [12].
About the chorus: I see that you mapped blind 1/2 chords. I strongly suggest mapping only the most transparent sounds instead of what you did. I will point some of those chords in normal, but in Easy there are too much so I hope you can fix (remap) that in your own way
00:52:875 (52875|3,53062|2,54375|0,54562|1) - I am really unsure about those notes. 1/4 in the Easy diff is really too hard in my opinion (given that Easy diffs are for beginners who just start mania and completely don't know how to play), so I would do one of the following:
a) delete the 1/4 note (which may be kind of weird but works and it has been used in many EZ maps)
b) make the LN instead of the 1/4 (00:52:875 (52875|3,53062|2) - instead of those 2 notes one 1/2 LN etc), which is also an option to consider
c) delete the chord, so it becomes three single notes (I think it's acceptable)
01:07:875 (67875|3,68062|2) - like above
01:11:625 - I think you can follow the pitch better here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5359458
01:13:125 (73125|1,73875|3,74625|0,75375|3) - those notes don't exist in the higher diff and I think they aren't needed, they aren't very audible to be in a beginner diff. The chords alone suffice in my opinion.
01:19:125 (79125|0,79875|3,80625|0,81375|3,82125|2,82875|0,83625|3,84375|1,85125|3,85875|0,86625|3,87375|0,88125|3,88875|0,89625|0,90375|3) - those are the rest of the notes I'm speaking about. I would delete them and rearrange the chords so that it becomes an interesting pitch pattern for beginners \:D/
01:37:500 (97500|2) - I would delete this, too strong imo
01:39:375 (99375|1) - doesn't need 2-chord, delete. It's too dense here :/
01:42:375 (102375|1) - as above
01:45:375 (105375|1) - as above. Also, why is pattern the same?
01:48:375 (108375|1) - as above. Please remap this whole section because copy-paste sucks and it's really visible ;;;;;;
01:49:875 (109875|0,110062|1) - 1/4, you know what to do.
01:51:375 (111375|1) - ehh... I won't point more of those, just remap this chorus xD by the way, I think it's too hard. Focus only on the really loud piano/bell sounds.
02:00:000 (120000|0,120375|1) - not needed imo.
02:06:750 (126750|1,126750|0,127500|3,128250|1,128250|2) - ctrl+H for better pitch
Lv.4
00:00:750 (750|1) - this doesn't need to be 3-chord at all. it's in fact weaker than other sounds. Delete this note.
In fact, I would delete all 3-chords in this map. They are too heavy and don't work here. 2-chords suffice (that's a normal diff anyway)
I won't point the 3-chords from now on, you just should delete them.
00:04:875 (4875|0,4875|3) - delete one of the notes, it's a single sound
00:07:875 (7875|3) - another unneeded note. Also I don't like the fact that you use COPYPASTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please remap this beginning because it's awful at the moment, this copypaste is disgusting :/
00:16:875 (16875|0) - this note is unneeded too
00:18:750 (18750|2,18750|3,18750|0,20250|0,20250|1,20250|3,21750|3,21750|0,21750|1,23250|2,23250|0,23250|3) - those 3-chords are actually ok, you don't have to delete notes from them
00:33:000 - you forgot a note on 1 here
00:49:500 (49500|3) - delete, it's the same sound as all other
00:54:000 (54000|3) - delete this one too, it's single sound
00:55:125 (55125|0) - move to 2
00:55:875 - on the contrary, you forgot a note here - there's a piano chord
00:57:000 - single sound
00:58:500 - 01:00:000 - 01:03:000 - 01:07:500 - another unneeded notes in those chords
01:02:250 (62250|3,62250|1,62250|0,62625|0,63000|2,63000|3) - change this placement a bit, it's weird.
01:04:125 (64125|3,64875|2,65250|1,65250|2,65625|1,66000|1) - this too
01:05:250 (65250|1,65250|2,65250|3,66000|3,66000|0,66000|1,66750|2,66750|0,66750|3) - those are in fact single sounds but they should be AT MOST doubles, I would map all of them single note to be honest
01:12:000 (72000|0) - delete
01:33:750 (93750|0,93750|2,93750|3) - there's a grace you missed check it out
01:36:375 (96375|2,96375|1) - delete one note
01:36:750 (96750|1,96750|3,96750|0) - this 3-chord is okay
01:37:500 - 01:39:375 - 01:42:000 - 01:42:375 - 01:43:500 - 01:45:375 - 01:46:875 - 01:48:375 - 01:49:500 - 01:51:375 - 01:52:875 - 01:54:375 - 01:55:500 (115500|3,115500|2,115875|0,115875|1) - 01:57:375 - 01:58:500 (118500|3,118500|2,118875|1,118875|0) - 02:00:000 (120000|0,120000|1,120375|2,120375|3) - all of those are unneeded chords.
In fact I think it would be better if you remapped this chorus considering the actual piano sounds. It's a little work but it will be a better map.
02:04:875 - unneeded note
02:06:750 (126750|3,126750|2,126750|0,128250|1,128250|3,128250|0) - those triples are ok too
In fact, I would delete all 3-chords in this map. They are too heavy and don't work here. 2-chords suffice (that's a normal diff anyway)
I won't point the 3-chords from now on, you just should delete them.
00:04:875 (4875|0,4875|3) - delete one of the notes, it's a single sound
00:07:875 (7875|3) - another unneeded note. Also I don't like the fact that you use COPYPASTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please remap this beginning because it's awful at the moment, this copypaste is disgusting :/
00:16:875 (16875|0) - this note is unneeded too
00:18:750 (18750|2,18750|3,18750|0,20250|0,20250|1,20250|3,21750|3,21750|0,21750|1,23250|2,23250|0,23250|3) - those 3-chords are actually ok, you don't have to delete notes from them
00:33:000 - you forgot a note on 1 here
00:49:500 (49500|3) - delete, it's the same sound as all other
00:54:000 (54000|3) - delete this one too, it's single sound
00:55:125 (55125|0) - move to 2
00:55:875 - on the contrary, you forgot a note here - there's a piano chord
00:57:000 - single sound
00:58:500 - 01:00:000 - 01:03:000 - 01:07:500 - another unneeded notes in those chords
01:02:250 (62250|3,62250|1,62250|0,62625|0,63000|2,63000|3) - change this placement a bit, it's weird.
01:04:125 (64125|3,64875|2,65250|1,65250|2,65625|1,66000|1) - this too
01:05:250 (65250|1,65250|2,65250|3,66000|3,66000|0,66000|1,66750|2,66750|0,66750|3) - those are in fact single sounds but they should be AT MOST doubles, I would map all of them single note to be honest
01:12:000 (72000|0) - delete
01:33:750 (93750|0,93750|2,93750|3) - there's a grace you missed check it out
01:36:375 (96375|2,96375|1) - delete one note
01:36:750 (96750|1,96750|3,96750|0) - this 3-chord is okay
01:37:500 - 01:39:375 - 01:42:000 - 01:42:375 - 01:43:500 - 01:45:375 - 01:46:875 - 01:48:375 - 01:49:500 - 01:51:375 - 01:52:875 - 01:54:375 - 01:55:500 (115500|3,115500|2,115875|0,115875|1) - 01:57:375 - 01:58:500 (118500|3,118500|2,118875|1,118875|0) - 02:00:000 (120000|0,120000|1,120375|2,120375|3) - all of those are unneeded chords.
In fact I think it would be better if you remapped this chorus considering the actual piano sounds. It's a little work but it will be a better map.
02:04:875 - unneeded note
02:06:750 (126750|3,126750|2,126750|0,128250|1,128250|3,128250|0) - those triples are ok too
Please work more on this map. It needs a lot of help/mods :/