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3R2 - Farewell [OsuMania]

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Gravey-
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Gravey-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, November 28, 2016 at 7:52:39 PM

Artist: 3R2
Title: Farewell
Source: Deemo
Tags: ラスト・リサイタル～ Collection 19 N.M.S.T. Exclusive song piano calm bells violin
BPM: 80
Filesize: 9473kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.2 'Easy' - 4Key (1.36 stars, 405 notes)
  2. Lv.4 'Adieu' - 4Key (1.6 stars, 502 notes)
Download: 3R2 - Farewell
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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“ ㄨㄨ Never left without saying goodbye ㄨㄨ ”

by Protastic101
by Maxus
by Alacat
☑ Lvl. 2 'Easy'
☑ Lvl. 4 'Adieu'


BIG THANKS TO:
Draftnell for Testplay! ♥
stryver12 for MOD! ♥
Akitoshi for Star! ♥
SurfChu85 for Star! ♥
DixonBlackwing for MOD! ♥
scissorsf for MOD! ♥
Aras25 for MOD and 2 Stars! ♥♥♥
Shiro-neechan for MOD and Star! ♥♥
KcHecKa for MOD! ♥
_underjoy for MOD! ♥
Davin Fortune for IRC MOD! ♥
Soul Evans for MOD and 3 Stars! ♥♥♥♥
Syadow- for MOD! ♥
dudehacker for Keysounds and Star! ♥♥
SpectorDG for MOD and Star! ♥♥
-SoraGami- for MOD and Star! ♥
CommandoBlack for MOD! ♥
Protastic101 for BN Check and Bubble! ♥♥
Maxus for BN Check and Qualify! ♥♥
To people who like and support my map! ♥
Last edited by Gravey- , edited 50 times in total.
stryver12
231 posts
Joined August 2012
stryver12
From #osumania XD

This song is mostly piano so I think pitch relevance is what matters the most in my opinion.
Column notation: 1, 2, 3, 4

* Feel free to reject any if it doesn't fit your mapping style, as these might break the pattern flow you have in mind. (I'll only point the 'safe' ones)

[Easy]
00:01:875 (1875|0,2250|3,2250|2) - Move 00:01:875 (1875|0) - to 4th column, shift 00:02:250 (2250|2,2250|3) - 1 column to the left?
01:32:250 (92250|1,93000|2) - Move 01:32:250 (92250|1) - to 3rd column, and 01:33:000 (93000|2) - to 2nd column ?
02:04:875 (124875|2,125250|3) - Move 02:04:875 (124875|2) - to 4th column, and 02:05:250 (125250|3) - to 3rd column?

[Adieu]
00:46:875 (46875|2,47250|1) - Move 00:46:875 (46875|2) - to 2nd column and 00:47:250 (47250|1) - to 3rd column?
01:21:687 - add note here should be fine... (unless you're working for another diff...)
01:31:875 (91875|2,92250|0) - Move 01:31:875 (91875|2) - to 4th column, and 01:32:250 (92250|0) - to 3rd column?

Beautiful song. Good luck!
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Gravey-
Thank you for the MOD stryver12! Fixed some of it! >w<)b

UPDATED!



Maxus
Nomination Assessment Team
1,238 posts
Joined May 2014
Maxus
I just wander around and found this nice and sad song :D
Will do a little mod here.

[General]
  1. Maybe make OD in easy 7? it's rare easy diff have 8 OD.
  2. volume settings 0%?

Easy
  1. 00:16:500 (16500|2,16875|1) - you should Ctrl+G this, the pitch going down from low to high, similar with 00:04:500 (4500|1,4875|2) -
  2. 00:40:875 (40875|3,41250|3) - can you do something about this? the notes are cramped because of LN, moreover, it's 2 notes instead of one, i don't think beginner would be happy with this.
  3. 00:48:750 - http://puu.sh/p0XKz/831fddbbee.jpg this would presented the pitch far better than the current trill.
  4. 01:01:500 - why not double?
  5. 01:10:500 (70500|1,70875|2) - Ctrl+G this, the pitch at 01:10:875 (70875|2) - is the same as 01:11:625 (71625|1) -
  6. 01:12:375 (72375|2,72750|2) - i don't think you should jack this one, you should jack with 01:13:125 (73125|0) - instead, because you're jack with the hithat sound after this, but this doesn't , maybe like:http://puu.sh/p0YFc/ee53c4648b.png
  7. 01:18:750 - i don't think you should make the pattern same along the way , because 01:18:750 (78750|1,78750|0,79125|0) - and 01:20:250 (80250|1,80250|0,80625|0) - have different pitch, which makes it kinda awkward. you can do something like http://puu.sh/p0YQT/483145ab63.png instead. this applies at other part as well.
  8. 01:35:250 (95250|1,96000|2) - I think these should be double? the sound also have the bell beside the piano , worth emphasize because it's loud and near the kiai time.
  9. 01:36:750 - are you sure you want to put triple on easy diff? i know this want to emphasize beginning of kiai , but still.
  10. 01:57:000 (117000|2,117000|0,117375|3,117375|1,117750|0,117750|1) - why you repeat this pattern in all second kiai? maybe you want to keep it simple , but no matter what , i felt it not necessary to just repeat all of them.

Normal
  1. 00:30:000 - http://puu.sh/p0ZBU/67bd2323c1.png i think this would flow better, and pattern at 00:30:750 - will mirror with 00:33:750 - , it should be nice.
  2. 00:48:000 (48000|1) - what is this note for? following hithat? but there's other sound around here that's also hithat, i think this can be change into LN to cover the rising sound.
  3. 00:51:375 (51375|2) - move to 4, for balance and pitch, because this pitch is higher than 00:50:625 (50625|2) -
  4. 01:07:125 (67125|2,67500|1) - ctrl+G to maintain the jack?
  5. 01:17:625 (77625|1) - is this note for hithat? but you only follow piano around here.
  6. 01:35:812 - add here? have the same sound as 01:34:687 (94687|1) -
  7. 01:49:500 (109500|1,109875|1,110250|1,110625|1,111375|1,111750|1,112125|1) - as much as you maybe want to keep this pattern, i do think this is a bit too much, even with low bpm , it's 7 note ...
  8. 02:09:750 (129750|0,129812|1,129875|2) - to be honest, i listen this closely, and realized that this is actually 4 piano sound 1/16 snap instead of 3 piano sound 1/12 snap, listen it again, or ask others for confirmation.
I hope you will keysound this map :D
Good luck for your map :3
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Gravey-
Thank you very much for the MOD DixonBlackwing! It's really helpful applied all actually! but change some of the patterns~

About the hitsounds and the volume settings i'll add hitsounds soon! and yes i did intentionally make the volume settings 0%~

UPDATED!

my angel zhla
16 posts
Joined April 2015
my angel zhla
since you are following piano (obviously!)
ill suggest some note placement changes

Lv. 3 'Adieu'
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00:00:375 - move to 2
00:00:562 - move to 3
00:00:750 - change to 124
00:04:125 - move to 1
00:10:875 - move to 4
00:12:000 - move to 1
00:12:375 - move to 2
00:12:562 - move to 3
00:12:750 - change to 124
00:52:875 - move to 3
00:52:875 - move to 2
00:53:250 - change to 134
00:54:375 - move to 1
00:55:125 - move to 1
00:55:500 - move to 2
00:55:875 - move to 4
01:02:625 - move to 1
01:04:125 - move to 2
01:05:250 - change to 234
01:06:000 - change to 124
01:06:750 - change to 134
01:07:125 - move to 3
01:07:875 - change to 14
01:07:875 - move to 2
01:08:625 - move to 1
01:09:000 - change to 24
01:09:375 - move to 3
01:09:750 - change to 124
01:10:500 - move to 1
01:10:875 - move to 3
01:11:250 - move to 4
01:21:687 - move to 2
01:21:750 - move to 3
01:49:875 - move to 2
01:50:062 - move to 3
01:50:250 - change to 124
01:51:000 - change to 134
01:51:750 - change to 234
02:01:125 - move to 2
02:01:500 - move to 4
02:02:250 - change to 123
02:04:125 - move to 1

it will fit the piano more ' w'b
good lucky for rank ~ ' w'b
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Gravey-
Thank you very much for MOD scissorsf! I applied most of it, but as i checked it once again i change some of the pattern.

UPDATED!

Aras
827 posts
Joined September 2014
Aras
From my queue, I'll focus on pitch relevancy 7k is better for pitch mapping imo, but first, sorry before if this isn't helpful at all u.u
Adieu ;w;;w;
- the pitch is right, but just seems too left handed 00:54:375 (54375|0,54562|1,54750|0,55125|0,55500|1) -
- 00:58:500 (58500|2,58875|1) - to 1 and 3? Better flow I thought
- I don't know what else to fix, but maybe you can variate the triplet like [123] and [234] I found them so rare to use here u.u
- 01:49:125 (109125|2) - to 2, 01:49:500 (109500|1) - move to 3 or 4, I prefer 4, why? I guess this 1,2,1 is better 01:48:375 (108375|1,108750|2,108750|0,109125|1) - than 01:48:375 (108375|2,108750|2,109125|2) -
and in case this doesn't helping at all, I'll shot some star instead
and I think offset should be around 740-743 edit : I think the current offset is fine ==, I find the HS sound and the piano sound at the last 1/16 kinda errr =-=
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Gravey-
Applied and fix some patterns! Thank you very much for the MOD! <3

UPDATED!



Hitsounds will be applied soon!
AyeAries
880 posts
Joined June 2015
AyeAries
Here's my mod from osu!mania PH discord group #kudosu-farm :D

4k Column Pattern: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Lvl. 1 'Easy'
00:00:375 (375|0,562|2) - this one, i think you should remove this one even there's a sound for newbies.

00:26:250 (26250|0,26250|2) - this one, i think you should only use long notes for Easy. Newbies can't handle 2 note with different variations (1 LN 1 note at the time) and you can find it to change until 00:45:750

00:28:875 (28875|3,29062|2,29250|1) - this one, omg stairs! newbies can't handle 3 notes stairs with 1 LN @_@. i think you should remove this one.

Lvl. 3 'Adieu'
02:01:125 (121125|1) - move to col 3
02:01:500 (121500|3) - move to col 2

i hope you like my mod and it's okay if you don't accept all my suggestions. Shoot a star! nice map btw :D
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Gravey-

Shiro-neechan wrote:

Here's my mod from osu!mania PH discord group #kudosu-farm :D

4k Column Pattern: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Lvl. 1 'Easy'
00:00:375 (375|0,562|2) - this one, i think you should remove this one even there's a sound for newbies. Sorry nope, for consistency

00:26:250 (26250|0,26250|2) - this one, i think you should only use long notes for Easy. Newbies can't handle 2 note with different variations (1 LN 1 note at the time) and you can find it to change until 00:45:750 Sorry nope, for consistency. Changed diff name instead since it's a bit hard indeed

00:28:875 (28875|3,29062|2,29250|1) - this one, omg stairs! newbies can't handle 3 notes stairs with 1 LN @_@. i think you should remove this one. Fixed. Changed pattern


Lvl. 3 'Adieu'
02:01:125 (121125|1) - move to col 3 Fixed
02:01:500 (121500|3) - move to col 2 Fixed

i hope you like my mod and it's okay if you don't accept all my suggestions. Shoot a star! nice map btw :D Thanks la <3
Thank you very much for MOD and Star Shiro-neechan! ♥

UPDATED!

KcHecKa
279 posts
Joined June 2014
KcHecKa
osu!mania mod whatever
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Overall:
>less than 3 stars
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Lv.4 'Adieu':
1 | 2 | 3 | 4
00:55:125 (55125|0) - Move to 2
ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
For this to be an easy difficulty map, I really dislike the usage of Hands (3 notes on one line)
I get that this is done due to the fact of it being a slow song, but it just becomes really "cluttered"
Examples of what i mean can be found here

01:38:250 (98250|3,98250|2,98250|0,98625|2,99000|1,99000|0,99000|3,99375|1,99375|2,99750|0,99750|2,99750|3) -

Just looks really bad or whatever

But theres nothing that can really be "fixed" and not really a tip i can give, other than "map a faster song" but its a bit too late for that.

Good luck with this little map thingy.. ahah
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_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
_underjoy
Hello! M4M for https://osu.ppy.sh/s/454071 :D
Lv.2
00:28:500 (28500|1) - I think it's best to map notes only for bell sounds, so that the beginner knows what is he playing (example - 00:25:500 (25500|3,27000|1,28875|2,29250|1) -
so I suggest to delete this note :)
00:31:500 (31500|3) - same
00:40:500 (40500|0) - same
00:48:750 - I suggest to remake this pattern to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5359421, because the [14] is better for high pitched chord unlike [12].
About the chorus: I see that you mapped blind 1/2 chords. I strongly suggest mapping only the most transparent sounds instead of what you did. I will point some of those chords in normal, but in Easy there are too much so I hope you can fix (remap) that in your own way ;)
00:52:875 (52875|3,53062|2,54375|0,54562|1) - I am really unsure about those notes. 1/4 in the Easy diff is really too hard in my opinion (given that Easy diffs are for beginners who just start mania and completely don't know how to play), so I would do one of the following:
a) delete the 1/4 note (which may be kind of weird but works and it has been used in many EZ maps)
b) make the LN instead of the 1/4 (00:52:875 (52875|3,53062|2) - instead of those 2 notes one 1/2 LN etc), which is also an option to consider
c) delete the chord, so it becomes three single notes (I think it's acceptable)
01:07:875 (67875|3,68062|2) - like above
01:11:625 - I think you can follow the pitch better here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5359458
01:13:125 (73125|1,73875|3,74625|0,75375|3) - those notes don't exist in the higher diff and I think they aren't needed, they aren't very audible to be in a beginner diff. The chords alone suffice in my opinion.
01:19:125 (79125|0,79875|3,80625|0,81375|3,82125|2,82875|0,83625|3,84375|1,85125|3,85875|0,86625|3,87375|0,88125|3,88875|0,89625|0,90375|3) - those are the rest of the notes I'm speaking about. I would delete them and rearrange the chords so that it becomes an interesting pitch pattern for beginners \:D/
01:37:500 (97500|2) - I would delete this, too strong imo
01:39:375 (99375|1) - doesn't need 2-chord, delete. It's too dense here :/
01:42:375 (102375|1) - as above
01:45:375 (105375|1) - as above. Also, why is pattern the same?
01:48:375 (108375|1) - as above. Please remap this whole section because copy-paste sucks and it's really visible ;;;;;;
01:49:875 (109875|0,110062|1) - 1/4, you know what to do.
01:51:375 (111375|1) - ehh... I won't point more of those, just remap this chorus xD by the way, I think it's too hard. Focus only on the really loud piano/bell sounds.
02:00:000 (120000|0,120375|1) - not needed imo.
02:06:750 (126750|1,126750|0,127500|3,128250|1,128250|2) - ctrl+H for better pitch :)

Lv.4
00:00:750 (750|1) - this doesn't need to be 3-chord at all. it's in fact weaker than other sounds. Delete this note.
In fact, I would delete all 3-chords in this map. They are too heavy and don't work here. 2-chords suffice :) (that's a normal diff anyway)
I won't point the 3-chords from now on, you just should delete them.
00:04:875 (4875|0,4875|3) - delete one of the notes, it's a single sound
00:07:875 (7875|3) - another unneeded note. Also I don't like the fact that you use COPYPASTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please remap this beginning because it's awful at the moment, this copypaste is disgusting :/
00:16:875 (16875|0) - this note is unneeded too
00:18:750 (18750|2,18750|3,18750|0,20250|0,20250|1,20250|3,21750|3,21750|0,21750|1,23250|2,23250|0,23250|3) - those 3-chords are actually ok, you don't have to delete notes from them
00:33:000 - you forgot a note on 1 here
00:49:500 (49500|3) - delete, it's the same sound as all other
00:54:000 (54000|3) - delete this one too, it's single sound
00:55:125 (55125|0) - move to 2
00:55:875 - on the contrary, you forgot a note here - there's a piano chord
00:57:000 - single sound
00:58:500 - 01:00:000 - 01:03:000 - 01:07:500 - another unneeded notes in those chords
01:02:250 (62250|3,62250|1,62250|0,62625|0,63000|2,63000|3) - change this placement a bit, it's weird.
01:04:125 (64125|3,64875|2,65250|1,65250|2,65625|1,66000|1) - this too
01:05:250 (65250|1,65250|2,65250|3,66000|3,66000|0,66000|1,66750|2,66750|0,66750|3) - those are in fact single sounds but they should be AT MOST doubles, I would map all of them single note to be honest
01:12:000 (72000|0) - delete
01:33:750 (93750|0,93750|2,93750|3) - there's a grace you missed ;) check it out
01:36:375 (96375|2,96375|1) - delete one note
01:36:750 (96750|1,96750|3,96750|0) - this 3-chord is okay
01:37:500 - 01:39:375 - 01:42:000 - 01:42:375 - 01:43:500 - 01:45:375 - 01:46:875 - 01:48:375 - 01:49:500 - 01:51:375 - 01:52:875 - 01:54:375 - 01:55:500 (115500|3,115500|2,115875|0,115875|1) - 01:57:375 - 01:58:500 (118500|3,118500|2,118875|1,118875|0) - 02:00:000 (120000|0,120000|1,120375|2,120375|3) - all of those are unneeded chords.
In fact I think it would be better if you remapped this chorus considering the actual piano sounds. It's a little work but it will be a better map.
02:04:875 - unneeded note
02:06:750 (126750|3,126750|2,126750|0,128250|1,128250|3,128250|0) - those triples are ok too

Please work more on this map. It needs a lot of help/mods :/
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Gravey-
Lmao i see what you guys did there HAHA oh well i tried making it hard but it seems like it becomes a shithole pinned down. Oh well thank you very much for the MODs and support guys! I plan on re-mapping this and i hope i can do it soon or else rip HAHA abandon~ Nice MODs and insight!

RE-MAPPING!

_underjoy
704 posts
Joined January 2013
_underjoy

Gravey- wrote:

Lmao i see what you guys did there HAHA oh well i tried making it hard but it seems like it becomes a shithole pinned down. Oh well thank you very much for the MODs and support guys! I plan on re-mapping this and i hope i can do it soon or else rip HAHA abandon~ Nice MODs and insight!

RE-MAPPING!

Good luck man~ :P
Davin Fortune
584 posts
Joined June 2014
Davin Fortune
click!
2016-09-11 12:31 Gravey-: Hi Davin
2016-09-11 12:32 Davin Fortune: hi gravey chan! >w<
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: Ayy ughmm.. i would like to ask for your opinion
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: If you don't mind
2016-09-11 12:32 Davin Fortune: just ask, i will answer as i can
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: With regards to my map this
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/940400 3R2 - Farewell]
2016-09-11 12:33 Gravey-: Because some told me that it is hard enough for this type of song
2016-09-11 12:33 Gravey-: Well imo the density is fine based also in BPM
2016-09-11 12:33 Gravey-: What do you think? Should i nerf this?
2016-09-11 12:34 Davin Fortune: density? i never heard that :3
2016-09-11 12:34 Davin Fortune: explain pls 
2016-09-11 12:34 Gravey-: Lol the notes on how many and how hard it is for the map/song
2016-09-11 12:36 Davin Fortune: nerf like decrease the note?
2016-09-11 12:36 Gravey-: Yep
2016-09-11 12:39 Davin Fortune: 01:34:687 -  maybe start at this part, the density become higher
2016-09-11 12:39 Gravey-: Ughmm.. on what diff?
2016-09-11 12:39 Davin Fortune: normal
2016-09-11 12:40 Gravey-: Oh so i nerf that part till the end?
2016-09-11 12:41 Davin Fortune: 02:00:750 -  until here
2016-09-11 12:41 Oh i see *noted*
2016-09-11 12:42 Gravey-: I'll fix that part thank you and pls do post it to the thread i shall give you Kudos for that :3
2016-09-11 12:43 Davin Fortune: the easy diff is fine, the density is stabil
2016-09-11 12:45 Gravey-: I see thank you :3

Post to raise this map's SP XD
Gravey-
1,491 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
Gravey-

Davin Fortune wrote:

click!
2016-09-11 12:31 Gravey-: Hi Davin
2016-09-11 12:32 Davin Fortune: hi gravey chan! >w<
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: Ayy ughmm.. i would like to ask for your opinion
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: If you don't mind
2016-09-11 12:32 Davin Fortune: just ask, i will answer as i can
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: With regards to my map this
2016-09-11 12:32 Gravey-: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/940400 3R2 - Farewell]
2016-09-11 12:33 Gravey-: Because some told me that it is hard enough for this type of song
2016-09-11 12:33 Gravey-: Well imo the density is fine based also in BPM
2016-09-11 12:33 Gravey-: What do you think? Should i nerf this?
2016-09-11 12:34 Davin Fortune: density? i never heard that :3
2016-09-11 12:34 Davin Fortune: explain pls 
2016-09-11 12:34 Gravey-: Lol the notes on how many and how hard it is for the map/song
2016-09-11 12:36 Davin Fortune: nerf like decrease the note?
2016-09-11 12:36 Gravey-: Yep
2016-09-11 12:39 Davin Fortune: 01:34:687 -  maybe start at this part, the density become higher
2016-09-11 12:39 Gravey-: Ughmm.. on what diff?
2016-09-11 12:39 Davin Fortune: normal
2016-09-11 12:40 Gravey-: Oh so i nerf that part till the end?
2016-09-11 12:41 Davin Fortune: 02:00:750 -  until here
2016-09-11 12:41 Oh i see *noted*
2016-09-11 12:42 Gravey-: I'll fix that part thank you and pls do post it to the thread i shall give you Kudos for that :3
2016-09-11 12:43 Davin Fortune: the easy diff is fine, the density is stabil
2016-09-11 12:45 Gravey-: I see thank you :3

Post to raise this map's SP XD
Thank you very much! :3
Soul Evans
Elite Mapper
425 posts
Joined June 2014
Soul Evans
Heres a m4m mod that i talked to you about in pm

Lv.4 'adieu'
00:01:125 (1125|1,1500|2) - Think this would be better reversed from [2,3] to [3,2] for better flow
00:01:828 - I think you need to do something with the snap,you either low it to where i time-stampeded it or add a note there, would be better i believe
00:31:125 (31125|3,31500|2,31875|1,32250|3,32625|0) - Think rearranging this would give better flow i suggest : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6248987
00:34:125 (34125|2,34500|1,34875|0,35250|2,35625|0,36000|2,36375|3,36750|0) - Same thing here, the pattern choice you seem to be going with are only streams 2 4 2 4 or 1 3 1 3 i suggest doing it like this :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6248996
00:36:750 (36750|0,37125|0) - This may be a NM diff but surely would be better to keep the chart consistent enough, rearrange it if you want to keep tell me why it's there so i can keep track of stuff like this
00:40:875 - Maybe give the pattern for it a little more smoother instead of {1,3,2,1] suggestion for that and other part :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249006
00:47:437 - Add a Ln for the other sound at 1 until 00:48:750 - and also move 00:48:750 (48750|2) - To 3
00:57:750 (57750|2) - If it's going to include that piano part i'd advise to remove that note and if you don't like the style you might make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249028
01:05:250 (65250|1,65625|1,66000|1) - I don't think that's suitable


You have a very relaxing song and a map i like this song alot, i hope you rank it and take care when you leave osu, here have three stars from me
Gravey-
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Topic Starter
Gravey-

Soul Evans wrote:

Heres a m4m mod that i talked to you about in pm

Lv.4 'adieu'
00:01:125 (1125|1,1500|2) - Think this would be better reversed from [2,3] to [3,2] for better flow
00:01:828 - I think you need to do something with the snap,you either low it to where i time-stampeded it or add a note there, would be better i believe
00:31:125 (31125|3,31500|2,31875|1,32250|3,32625|0) - Think rearranging this would give better flow i suggest : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6248987
00:34:125 (34125|2,34500|1,34875|0,35250|2,35625|0,36000|2,36375|3,36750|0) - Same thing here, the pattern choice you seem to be going with are only streams 2 4 2 4 or 1 3 1 3 i suggest doing it like this :https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6248996
00:36:750 (36750|0,37125|0) - This may be a NM diff but surely would be better to keep the chart consistent enough, rearrange it if you want to keep tell me why it's there so i can keep track of stuff like this
00:40:875 - Maybe give the pattern for it a little more smoother instead of {1,3,2,1] suggestion for that and other part :http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249006
00:47:437 - Add a Ln for the other sound at 1 until 00:48:750 - and also move 00:48:750 (48750|2) - To 3
00:57:750 (57750|2) - If it's going to include that piano part i'd advise to remove that note and if you don't like the style you might make it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6249028
01:05:250 (65250|1,65625|1,66000|1) - I don't think that's suitable


You have a very relaxing song and a map i like this song alot, i hope you rank it and take care when you leave osu, here have three stars from me
Applied all! Thank you very much for the nice MOD! I fixed some patterns also!

UPDATED!

Syadow-
Beatmap Nominator
1,514 posts
Joined October 2013
Syadow-
NM req from Ly0 and Syadow's MANiA QUEUE
Feel Free To Reject, NO KUDOS if didn't help much
Nasi goreng :3
[easy]
00:28:478 (28478|1) - maybe remove this, since the sound isn't loud
00:31:478 (31478|3) - ^
00:40:478 (40478|0) - ^
01:15:728 - maybe u can change to this for variation https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6305987
[adieu]
00:03:728 - maybe make double here since almost same sound like 00:04:853 - n low sound
00:06:728 - ^
00:28:290 - add note here
00:30:165 - ^
00:31:290 - 00:34:290 - 00:36:165 - 00:37:290 - 00:38:415 - ^
00:39:915 - 00:40:290 - 00:42:165 - 00:43:290 - 00:44:415 - ^
00:45:915 - 00:46:290 - 00:47:603 - 00:47:978 - 00:48:353 - ^
00:48:728 - ^
01:13:103 - add note, this part almost have a sound in red tick until 01:30:728 -
01:35:134 - add note
01:35:415 - ^
01:37:290 - ^
01:40:290 - ^
01:41:415 - 01:43:290 - 01:44:415 - 01:46:290 - 01:47:040 -
01:49:290 - 01:52:290 - 01:55:290 - 01:58:290 -
Good Luck >w<)b
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