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[General]
Low quality BG. I suggest to find another BG
Uncheck widescreen support in expert and Difficulty
Extra tags may required. see this source http://dancedancerevolutionddr.wikia.co ... Revolution
[Expert]
HP OD 8,5.
Some pattern are sooo difficult to read, yet no consistencies. and the hitsounds seems too loud.
00:06:294 (6294|1,6294|3,6294|4) - Should be placed in 2 ticks earlier(1/4)... Because of cymbal sound. Otherwise, the player will get ambigous to hit the notes, because the song isn't start from the big white tick.
00:06:544 (6544|2,6544|1,6544|0) - move to white tick below it
00:07:044 (7044|0,7044|3,7044|4) - move to white tick above it
00:07:461 - a cymbal sound
I'll leave this part to rearrange on your own...........
00:10:461 - a cymbal. why only one note while this - 00:10:378 - have 3 notes ? which is literally have less sound than - 00:10:461 -
00:10:794 - same problem
00:11:294 (11294|4,11378|1) - one note is enough. so delete this
00:13:544 (13544|3,13628|2,13711|1) - move on step to right and then - 00:13:794 (13794|2,13961|1) - to col 2|3 respectively
00:13:961 (13961|3) - to col 2
00:14:128 - why you're not add note here? there's a synth imo
00:15:378 (15378|2,15711|2) - To col 5|1 respectively for comfortability
00:16:878 (16878|2,17128|3) - ^5|1
00:18:544 (18544|1,18628|0) - ctrl+g
00:19:128 - add note. synth
00:19:461 (19461|0,19461|2,19794|2,19794|4) - move one step to right and left respectively
00:19:961 - add note
00:20:044 (20044|1,20044|3,20128|3,20128|1,20378|0,20378|1,20461|0,20461|1) - I'm honestly think there is no purpose to have jack, cause the sound is not same. change this somehow.....
00:20:294 - add note
00:20:628 - ^
00:22:128 - why not 3 notes? its a cymbal sound
00:22:544 - add a note on col 2 or 4
00:23:044 - ^3 or 4
There's many part like this. pls rearrange it
00:34:211 (34211|2,34294|0,34378|1) - col 1|2|3 respectively
00:34:461 (34461|3,34461|2) - move to right
00:34:544 (34544|1,34628|0) - ctrl+g
00:35:211 (35211|1,35294|0) - to col 5|4 respectively
00:35:794 (35794|2,35794|3,35878|1,35961|0) - to col 1,2|5|4 respectively
00:36:711 (36711|0) - to 4
00:38:294 (38294|3,38294|2) - move each note to col 2 and 5 respectively.
00:39:378 (39378|1) - delete
00:41:461 (41461|3,41461|2) - move to right
00:41:794 (41794|2,41794|3) - move to the very left
00:43:628 (43628|0,43711|1) - to 5|4 respectively
00:44:544 (44544|2) - to 1
00:44:794 (44794|3) - ^5
00:45:628 (45628|4,45711|3) - 1|2 respectively
00:46:294 (46294|4,46378|3) - ^
00:46:961 (46961|3,47044|2) - to 1|5 respectively
00:47:628 (47628|2) - to 5
00:50:961 (50961|0,51044|1) - 4|2 respectively
00:52:294 (52294|0,52378|1) - 5|4 ^
01:13:794 - why there is no notes here?
01:20:461 - a synth + kick sound. and no notes? why?
01:23:128 - ^
01:25:794 (85794|3,85794|1,85878|1,85878|3,85961|3,85961|1,86044|1,86044|3) - this is not comfortable. pls rearrange
01:28:628 - synth. add note
01:31:128 - synth + kick. ^
01:44:878 (104878|3,104878|1) - move to right
01:44:961 (104961|2) - move to 2
[Difficult]
Many notes aren't comfortable to hit. If you can't pass this with a 97% (cause you're more ET :v ) that's the proof. (Personal opinion only)
00:06:294 (6294|3,6294|4) - off beat again orz. same problem with "Difficult" I think you can find it by yourself
If you know kors K-Bad Maniac song mapped by shana lesus, this is probably the same thing like yours that map was DQ-ed because of diff spread. look at the differences between Difficult and Basic
This kind of Density isn't acceptable. and I believe this will be an Unrankable issue in the future.
I reccomend to add another diff between "Difficult" and " Basic".
00:31:544 (31544|2,31711|2,31878|2,32044|2,32211|2,32378|2) - Don't make a pattern like this. Its not comfortable at all.
00:35:711 (35711|0) - This LN seems to long
oh well, many things can be change but I'm tired orz X3
Low quality BG. I suggest to find another BG
Uncheck widescreen support in expert and Difficulty
Extra tags may required. see this source http://dancedancerevolutionddr.wikia.co ... Revolution
[Expert]
HP OD 8,5.
Some pattern are sooo difficult to read, yet no consistencies. and the hitsounds seems too loud.
00:06:294 (6294|1,6294|3,6294|4) - Should be placed in 2 ticks earlier(1/4)... Because of cymbal sound. Otherwise, the player will get ambigous to hit the notes, because the song isn't start from the big white tick.
00:06:544 (6544|2,6544|1,6544|0) - move to white tick below it
00:07:044 (7044|0,7044|3,7044|4) - move to white tick above it
00:07:461 - a cymbal sound
I'll leave this part to rearrange on your own...........
00:10:461 - a cymbal. why only one note while this - 00:10:378 - have 3 notes ? which is literally have less sound than - 00:10:461 -
00:10:794 - same problem
00:11:294 (11294|4,11378|1) - one note is enough. so delete this
00:13:544 (13544|3,13628|2,13711|1) - move on step to right and then - 00:13:794 (13794|2,13961|1) - to col 2|3 respectively
00:13:961 (13961|3) - to col 2
00:14:128 - why you're not add note here? there's a synth imo
00:15:378 (15378|2,15711|2) - To col 5|1 respectively for comfortability
00:16:878 (16878|2,17128|3) - ^5|1
00:18:544 (18544|1,18628|0) - ctrl+g
00:19:128 - add note. synth
00:19:461 (19461|0,19461|2,19794|2,19794|4) - move one step to right and left respectively
00:19:961 - add note
00:20:044 (20044|1,20044|3,20128|3,20128|1,20378|0,20378|1,20461|0,20461|1) - I'm honestly think there is no purpose to have jack, cause the sound is not same. change this somehow.....
00:20:294 - add note
00:20:628 - ^
00:22:128 - why not 3 notes? its a cymbal sound
00:22:544 - add a note on col 2 or 4
00:23:044 - ^3 or 4
There's many part like this. pls rearrange it
00:34:211 (34211|2,34294|0,34378|1) - col 1|2|3 respectively
00:34:461 (34461|3,34461|2) - move to right
00:34:544 (34544|1,34628|0) - ctrl+g
00:35:211 (35211|1,35294|0) - to col 5|4 respectively
00:35:794 (35794|2,35794|3,35878|1,35961|0) - to col 1,2|5|4 respectively
00:36:711 (36711|0) - to 4
00:38:294 (38294|3,38294|2) - move each note to col 2 and 5 respectively.
00:39:378 (39378|1) - delete
00:41:461 (41461|3,41461|2) - move to right
00:41:794 (41794|2,41794|3) - move to the very left
00:43:628 (43628|0,43711|1) - to 5|4 respectively
00:44:544 (44544|2) - to 1
00:44:794 (44794|3) - ^5
00:45:628 (45628|4,45711|3) - 1|2 respectively
00:46:294 (46294|4,46378|3) - ^
00:46:961 (46961|3,47044|2) - to 1|5 respectively
00:47:628 (47628|2) - to 5
00:50:961 (50961|0,51044|1) - 4|2 respectively
00:52:294 (52294|0,52378|1) - 5|4 ^
01:13:794 - why there is no notes here?
01:20:461 - a synth + kick sound. and no notes? why?
01:23:128 - ^
01:25:794 (85794|3,85794|1,85878|1,85878|3,85961|3,85961|1,86044|1,86044|3) - this is not comfortable. pls rearrange
01:28:628 - synth. add note
01:31:128 - synth + kick. ^
01:44:878 (104878|3,104878|1) - move to right
01:44:961 (104961|2) - move to 2
[Difficult]
Many notes aren't comfortable to hit. If you can't pass this with a 97% (cause you're more ET :v ) that's the proof. (Personal opinion only)
00:06:294 (6294|3,6294|4) - off beat again orz. same problem with "Difficult" I think you can find it by yourself
If you know kors K-Bad Maniac song mapped by shana lesus, this is probably the same thing like yours that map was DQ-ed because of diff spread. look at the differences between Difficult and Basic
This kind of Density isn't acceptable. and I believe this will be an Unrankable issue in the future.
I reccomend to add another diff between "Difficult" and " Basic".
00:31:544 (31544|2,31711|2,31878|2,32044|2,32211|2,32378|2) - Don't make a pattern like this. Its not comfortable at all.
00:35:711 (35711|0) - This LN seems to long
oh well, many things can be change but I'm tired orz X3
Good Luck ~