It was wonderful, really wonderful. I hope that one day, I'll learn how, just like you I'll never forget what you've done for me. Good luck with everything!-Nya- wrote:
Heya~ M4M! Hi^^General:
- The BG has to be 1366X768. It’s an easy fix. Fixed
Hard:
- 00:02:600 (3,1) –Try to avoid this overlap by blanketing 00:03:200 (6,1) – Fixed
- 00:05:200 (7) –I think you can break this up into more notes, just to make it more challenging. Maybe try this: Good idea. Fixed
- 00:09:200 (8) –I suggest turning this circle into a slider to catch that long vocal. Like this: Fixed
- 00:10:700 –I think I can hear a beat here so I suggest you add a circle here to catch it. Indeed. I fixed it
- 00:11:100 –Also, the vocal actually ends here so I suggest ending this slider: 00:10:800 (4) – there. On the contrary vocal starts at 00:11:100 - . But is sounds better. I fixed it
- 00:22:800 (1,4,5) –Please try to avoid this overlap by placing (4) and (5) somewhere else where they aren’t touching any other objects. Ye, I changed the pattern
- 00:34:000 –Add a circle here. It feels a bit empty without one. There's nothing here. I'll think about it
- 00:32:200 (1,2,3,4) –I think it would be better to add a long slider somewhere here and change this slider: 00:34:200 (1) – into circles to catch the vocals. I follow russian lyrics here. So I think it's my best option.
- 00:39:400 (7) –Rather place this slider like this for better flow: Fixed
- 00:40:700 (6) –Make this slider longer to this tick: 00:40:900 – Nah, I have every confidence in this part. It has taken me a long time to find right rhythm.
- 00:41:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –This stream is too difficult for a Hard. Rather replace it with short repeat sliders. Something like this: I'll think about it
It will also be a good idea to change that stream into multiple short sliders.- 00:44:400 (9) –I don’t think a circle is enough here. Maybe try this: I don't want to map too much. I follow lyrics here, so i think it's fine
- 00:46:400 (8) –This repeat slider shouldn’t be here but rather here: 00:46:200 -, so something like this: I changed the whole pattern.
- 00:47:600 (10) –The same as 00:44:400 (9) –
- 00:49:600 (5) –You can make this slider longer so that it ends here: 00:50:000 –
- 00:50:800 (3) –Shorten this slider so it’s here: 00:51:200 – and then place a circle here: 00:51:400 – I really like my choice. Anyway I'll think about it
- 00:55:700 (6,7) –Rather stack these two to prevent confusion. Good idea. Fixed
Normal:
- 00:05:200 –This is quite an important beat so I really think that this has to be mapped out. So you can just place a circle there. Indeed. I missed it. Fixed
- 00:04:200 (3) –Since this vocal is a bit long, I suggest changing this circle into a slider. Like this: I think so too. Fixed
- 00:07:000 –This vocal is quite important so change this circle: 00:06:800 (1) – into a short slider as well: Great idea. Fixed
- 00:07:200 (2) –This is not following the vocals and it sounds a bit off. I suggest doing this: I like it. Fixed
- 00:08:000 (3) –Same thing here. Place a circle here: 00:08:000 – and start the slider here: 00:08:200 – Fixed
- 00:42:000 –The vocal actually starts here so the slider is starting too early. Try this: Fixed
- 00:43:200 (3) –Bad flow. Try something like this instead: Reworked
Easy:
- 00:01:999 (3,1) –Perfect this stack. Fixed
- 00:13:200 (4) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:14:800 (1) – then add new combo here: 00:16:400 (3) – and remove new combo here: 00:17:200 (1) – Yeah, It's for the best. Fixed
- 00:22:800 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed
- 00:29:199 (1) –Place this circle somewhere else so it doesn’t overlap. Maybe something like this: I can't find overlap here or I don't understand you
- 00:35:600 (5) –Add new combo here and remove new combo here: 00:37:199 (1) – Fixed
- 00:48:400 (5) –Add new combo here. Fixed
Good Luck~!