Thank you very much guys
Sonnyc's mod
Sonnyc wrote:
[Easy]
Rhythm of the intro felt less fitting. 00:00:401 (1) this reverse slider doesn't follow a particular element of the song. To follow the long melody, a single 2/1 slider without a reverse would fit better. Due to how the song is structured, 00:04:000 (2,3) this rhythm is not snapped properly to the drums. In this case, I just suggest to make a long slider starting at 00:03:600. Thanks for the advice, I fixed it
00:32:400 (6,1) - Starting combo from (6) will fit the song better. It's right. Fixed
[Normal]
00:06:700 (1) - Wrong snapped. Yeah, I know it but the vocals and the drums start at 00:06:736 - between blue and white ticks so I do not know what to do. If you think it's wrong then I will fix
00:32:400 (7,1) - Same combo suggestion with easy. Ok, fixed
00:50:400 (6) - NC would do good. Ok, fixed
[Hard]
00:36:200 ~ 00:41:000 - Do you really think the best rhythm for this song is this? Currently it is just spammed with 1/2 while the song provides something more. Listen to the song more carefully, and use a rhythm that could best reflect the song please. For example, 00:36:400 has nearly no beat that doesn't demands a note. 00:36:700 there is a beat here that could be expressed as 1/4, but it is just empty. Yes, I thought about it. I reworked this part. Now it is much better
Not bad, but I've got a feeling that you've just toggled distance snap on, and placed objects according to the distance snapping without a proper understanding of patterning. Besides, the Hard diff worked out nicely among these three diffs.
Hope you can have some more mapping experience yourself by making several beatmaps. Also looking other mapper's beatmap (preferably a ranked beatmap) would help you forming a better idea of mapping.
Good luck.
Hobbes2's mod
Hobbes2 wrote:
heyo, m4m from queue. The maps you can choose from are posted in the queue, thanks!
[Easy]
00:16:400 (3,2) - Consdier making these parallel for the sake of aesthetics. I think it would look nice. I do not like parallel. I specifically tried to avoid it here
00:19:600 (1,2) - This blanket is very slightly off, adjust the end of 2 Thank you for your attention. Fixed
00:26:400 (2,3) - This blanket is off, adjust the top of 3 to curve around 2 better ^
00:29:599 (2,3) - I'm assuming this isn't a blanket, but if it is one then you should redo the slider ^
[Normal]
00:05:800 (6) - If you're gonna shape the slider like this, make it symmetrical I tried to fix it, it is much better now
00:09:200 (5) - ^ ^
00:10:400 (2,3) - 2 is not blanketed properly. Adjust it to make it smoother (less curved) Thank you for your attention. Fixed
00:31:600 (5,6) - Blanket could be better. Curve 5 a bit more. Fixed
00:34:200 (1) - Kinda ugly. I'd redo this slider. Fixed
[Hard]
00:15:200 (2,3,4) - Consider making this an equilateral triangle (by using the create polygon circles feature)
00:16:400 (1) - If you do the above, stack this on 00:15:200 (2), and then move everything accordingly. Thank you for a good idea
00:20:400 (3) - Move this up a hair, so it isn't as close to 00:19:600 (1) I reworked this part
00:22:000 (7) - Somewhat unattractive slider. I'd redo it. This is my favorite slider
00:35:600 (4) - NC I follow the Russian vocal here. 00:34:800 (2,3,4) - It is 1 word. So NC at 00:36:200 (1) -
00:36:200 (1) - remove NC For the same reason
00:37:800 (8,1,2) - fix blanket I reworked this part
00:41:900 - Missing a note Nah, i don't think so
As another note, I think you should redo combos in your Hard, and try to see if you can do the NCs during downbeats whenever you can. Right now the combos just kinda seem all over the place.
Good luck!