heyo, m4m from queue. The maps you can choose from are posted in the queue, thanks!
[Easy]
00:16:400 (3,2) - Consdier making these parallel for the sake of aesthetics. I think it would look nice.
00:19:600 (1,2) - This blanket is very slightly off, adjust the end of 2
00:26:400 (2,3) - This blanket is off, adjust the top of 3 to curve around 2 better
00:29:599 (2,3) - I'm assuming this isn't a blanket, but if it is one then you should redo the slider
[Normal]
00:05:800 (6) - If you're gonna shape the slider like this, make it symmetrical
00:09:200 (5) - ^
00:10:400 (2,3) - 2 is not blanketed properly. Adjust it to make it smoother (less curved)
00:31:600 (5,6) - Blanket could be better. Curve 5 a bit more.
00:34:200 (1) - Kinda ugly. I'd redo this slider.
[Hard]
00:15:200 (2,3,4) - Consider making this an equilateral triangle (by using the create polygon circles feature)
00:16:400 (1) - If you do the above, stack this on 00:15:200 (2), and then move everything accordingly.
00:20:400 (3) - Move this up a hair, so it isn't as close to 00:19:600 (1)
00:22:000 (7) - Somewhat unattractive slider. I'd redo it.
00:35:600 (4) - NC
00:36:200 (1) - remove NC
00:37:800 (8,1,2) - fix blanket
00:41:900 - Missing a note
As another note, I think you should redo combos in your Hard, and try to see if you can do the NCs during downbeats whenever you can. Right now the combos just kinda seem all over the place.
Good luck!
[Easy]
00:16:400 (3,2) - Consdier making these parallel for the sake of aesthetics. I think it would look nice.
00:19:600 (1,2) - This blanket is very slightly off, adjust the end of 2
00:26:400 (2,3) - This blanket is off, adjust the top of 3 to curve around 2 better
00:29:599 (2,3) - I'm assuming this isn't a blanket, but if it is one then you should redo the slider
[Normal]
00:05:800 (6) - If you're gonna shape the slider like this, make it symmetrical
00:09:200 (5) - ^
00:10:400 (2,3) - 2 is not blanketed properly. Adjust it to make it smoother (less curved)
00:31:600 (5,6) - Blanket could be better. Curve 5 a bit more.
00:34:200 (1) - Kinda ugly. I'd redo this slider.
[Hard]
00:15:200 (2,3,4) - Consider making this an equilateral triangle (by using the create polygon circles feature)
00:16:400 (1) - If you do the above, stack this on 00:15:200 (2), and then move everything accordingly.
00:20:400 (3) - Move this up a hair, so it isn't as close to 00:19:600 (1)
00:22:000 (7) - Somewhat unattractive slider. I'd redo it.
00:35:600 (4) - NC
00:36:200 (1) - remove NC
00:37:800 (8,1,2) - fix blanket
00:41:900 - Missing a note
As another note, I think you should redo combos in your Hard, and try to see if you can do the NCs during downbeats whenever you can. Right now the combos just kinda seem all over the place.
Good luck!