Hi~
From my queue
Good luck!
From my queue
Umbrella
hp6 it's too easy for this imo, hp7 it's ok- 00:22:589 (5,1) - add more distance between those, looks like if the streams continue and it's a bit confusing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265099
- 00:24:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like how these jumps side by side are played, maybe trying some triangle patterns? Code
144,268,24089,5,2,0:0:0:0:
if you have doubts on how to apply this, tell me
56,156,24256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,182,24422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,312,24589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,148,24756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,160,24922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,268,25089,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,84,25256,1,0,0:0:0:0: - 00:26:756 (1,2,3) - Try to be consistend in the distance, You should try to keep the same distance of this 00:25:422 (1,2,3) - in all the similar patterns, I'm not talking to apply just in this one
- 00:29:089 (7,8) - Try to keep keep the strong beat clickable, change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/irT9Z.jpg
- 00:29:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be cool if you cool do this star symmetrical, use "create polygon circles" in the compose tap
- 00:30:256 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - The flow here feels awkward cuz the change of distance, maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265151
- 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7,8) - This is hard to catch I would do something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265157 like this and ctrl+h in 00:36:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - to keep the flow
- 00:42:089 (3,4,5,6,7) - flow here it's a bit awkward too,try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265162
- 00:49:422 (1) - Fix this slider to do blanket with 00:50:089 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265171
- 00:50:256 (4,5,6) - I would like if this triplet weren't hiden
- 01:18:589 (1,2) - Sounds better if you do a 1/1 slider here http://puu.sh/irUSq.jpg
- 01:39:672 - add a circle. Just continue the stream
- 02:57:672 (3,4,5,6) - Move these more close to 02:57:506 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265190
- 03:51:422 (6) - NC?
Good luck!