hi, mod as requested
[Umbrella]
00:23:089 (2) - I don't think this slider shape is really necessary
00:29:089 (7) - ctlr+g, normal flows feels better than drop flow
00:47:339 (3) - I would use notes instead of a slider
00:57:672 (2) - ^
00:58:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this jump is too big and comes out from nowhere, lower spacing would be better
01:42:422 (6,8) - ctlr+g
01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole part feels so 2008-2009 mapping, it's way too linear
01:53:422 (3) - move this a little bit to the left just because of the 0.25x spacing
02:21:089 (7,8) - ctrl+g
02:43:756 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing randomly changes here mid-stream
04:28:256 (2,3,4) - stack these maybe for better flow
04:40:422 (2) - same as the beginning
04:46:006 (5,6,7,8) - same here, the spacing randomly changes
04:49:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - it would flow better if the stream would go to the other direction imo
hope it helped
[Umbrella]
00:23:089 (2) - I don't think this slider shape is really necessary
00:29:089 (7) - ctlr+g, normal flows feels better than drop flow
00:47:339 (3) - I would use notes instead of a slider
00:57:672 (2) - ^
00:58:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this jump is too big and comes out from nowhere, lower spacing would be better
01:42:422 (6,8) - ctlr+g
01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole part feels so 2008-2009 mapping, it's way too linear
01:53:422 (3) - move this a little bit to the left just because of the 0.25x spacing
02:21:089 (7,8) - ctrl+g
02:43:756 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing randomly changes here mid-stream
04:28:256 (2,3,4) - stack these maybe for better flow
04:40:422 (2) - same as the beginning
04:46:006 (5,6,7,8) - same here, the spacing randomly changes
04:49:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - it would flow better if the stream would go to the other direction imo
hope it helped