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GiantZarz
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 พฤษภาคม 2561 at 19:36:14

Artist: Konuko
Title: WORLD'S END UMBRELLA
Tags: akesato utau vocaloid hatsune miku 緋惺
BPM: 90
Filesize: 6667kb
Play Time: 05:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. UMBRELLA (5.77 stars, 1493 notes)
Download: Konuko - WORLD'S END UMBRELLA
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Sylas
Hi M4M from my queue c:

- I think the offset should be at 00:01:413 (you can have an inherited point and a timing point on the same tick as long as you only use it to change slider velocity)
- 20% volume is too low, raise it to at least 25% (Might even be unrankable to have it lower)
- Be more consistent with NCs, there are a lot of places where you use NCs just for patterns. Generally, they go every downbeat (big white tick) but in this map there are some parts where they don't fit there. Consider removing some NCs in places where they happen too often
00:32:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - There are too many jumps in this part, consider changing some notes to sliders. I know jumps are fun and challenging but when you have too many it becomes really frustrating for the player.
00:40:413 (5) - This note is too close to 00:40:079 (4) and is not blanketed properly. Consider moving it or fixing the blanket at least
00:41:746 (2) - This note is touching the previous slider, move it to the right to prevent an overlap
00:43:079 (2) - ^
00:45:746 (1) - Move this further away from 00:45:413 (8)
00:59:913 (1,2) - The blanket could be improved (If you want some tips on how to blanket check this link)
01:11:079 (1) - Remove NC
01:18:413 (6,7) - I don't think a jump like this makes sense for the song, move them closer together
01:19:746 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - ^
01:24:663 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is a bit confusing, place the stream after the slider end instead of on the tail for better flow
01:25:246 (8,1) - The stack isn't perfect
01:25:413 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved
01:25:746 (2,3) - ^
01:43:413 (2,3,4,5) - Same problem as 01:24:663 (3,4,5,6)
02:14:079 (3) - NC bc of sudden slider velocity change
04:09:413 (1,2) - Improve the blanket
04:24:579 (6,7) - Reduce the jump a bit
Pretty nice map c:
Good luck with it!
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

TheKoala wrote:

- I think the offset should be at 00:01:413 (you can have an inherited point and a timing point on the same tick as long as you only use it to change slider velocity) nope
- 20% volume is too low, raise it to at least 25% (Might even be unrankable to have it lower) fixed
- Be more consistent with NCs, there are a lot of places where you use NCs just for patterns. Generally, they go every downbeat (big white tick) but in this map there are some parts where they don't fit there. Consider removing some NCs in places where they happen too often fixed
00:32:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - There are too many jumps in this part, consider changing some notes to sliders. I know jumps are fun and challenging but when you have too many it becomes really frustrating for the player. fixed
00:40:413 (5) - This note is too close to 00:40:079 (4) and is not blanketed properly. Consider moving it or fixing the blanket at least fixed
00:41:746 (2) - This note is touching the previous slider, move it to the right to prevent an overlap fixed
00:43:079 (2) - ^ fixed
00:45:746 (1) - Move this further away from 00:45:413 (8) fixed
00:59:913 (1,2) - The blanket could be improved (If you want some tips on how to blanket check this link) fixed
01:11:079 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:18:413 (6,7) - I don't think a jump like this makes sense for the song, move them closer together fixed
01:19:746 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - ^ fixed
01:24:663 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is a bit confusing, place the stream after the slider end instead of on the tail for better flow fixed
01:25:246 (8,1) - The stack isn't perfect fixed
01:25:413 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved fixed
01:25:746 (2,3) - ^ fixed
01:43:413 (2,3,4,5) - Same problem as 01:24:663 (3,4,5,6) fixed
02:14:079 (3) - NC bc of sudden slider velocity change fixed
04:09:413 (1,2) - Improve the blanket fixed
04:24:579 (6,7) - Reduce the jump a bit fixed
Thanks for mod!! :)
pishifat
hey, you posted in my form thing about timing.

the stuff at the end is just vocals, which aren't stable in the same way as other instruments would be. in the current case though, a single 140bpm line (or 70 if people complain about doublebpm) is acceptable

as a whole, timing would look like this (first offset was early and second was late)


it's common for timing points to line up with each other in electronically mastered songs, which is what's happening here. TheKoala also had the right idea of moving the offset forward since each downbeat (large white tick) is currently 2 beats off

good luck!
WriggleNightbug
NM from My Modding queue


General: please consider changing the diff name from "Rain", otherwise, the CtB players may mistake this for a CtB map that wasn't set to CtB only

00:02:913 (4,5) - These sliders feel like they'd be better off as singular hitcicles

00:08:246 (4,5) - ^^

00:13:579 (4,5) - ^^

00:22:246 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really like the look of this pattern, Thumbs up for that!

00:49:413 (1,2) - Having these two sliders seems a bit unnecessary, try removing (2) and extending (1) to end where (2) did
Topic Starter
GiantZarz
pishifat

pishifat wrote:

hey, you posted in my form thing about timing.

the stuff at the end is just vocals, which aren't stable in the same way as other instruments would be. in the current case though, a single 140bpm line (or 70 if people complain about doublebpm) is acceptable

as a whole, timing would look like this (first offset was early and second was late)
thanks a lot! it's now perfect

it's common for timing points to line up with each other in electronically mastered songs, which is what's happening here. TheKoala also had the right idea of moving the offset forward since each downbeat (large white tick) is currently 2 beats off

good luck!

TheBronyGames

TheBronyGames wrote:

NM from My Modding queue

General: please consider changing the diff name from "Rain", otherwise, the CtB players may mistake this for a CtB map that wasn't set to CtB only Changed to the singer of the song

00:02:913 (4,5) - These sliders feel like they'd be better off as singular hitcicles fine

00:08:246 (4,5) - ^^ fine

00:13:579 (4,5) - ^^ fine

00:22:246 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really like the look of this pattern, Thumbs up for that! thanks!

00:49:413 (1,2) - Having these two sliders seems a bit unnecessary, try removing (2) and extending (1) to end where (2) did (2) has hitsound so I can't remove
PS. So Glad that your friend like it!!

Thanks for mod! :)
Chaoslitz


[General]
  1. Background quality: The currently background lacks of quality which looks like enlarged from a small size of image, may consider to replace another background with a higher quality, however, if you want to use the same background, use this instead, the current one with 1365x768 pixels against the dimension of 16:9.
  2. Metadata issues: I tried to search from for the metadata, and I found the artist is Akesato but not こぬこ Konuko, what the information tells that Konuko is the one who tuned the vocal but not singer, you can find others to have a check in the metadata as well since this one may not be 100% correct

    Artist: 緋惺
    Romanised: Akesato
  3. Difficulty name: If you have confirmed the metadata, change the difficulty name as well, it is nonsence to have Artist for diff name, try to use other words which is more related to the song
  4. Over usage in soft-hitclap: Since the clap sound is loud, I am not suggest you to use clap in triplets or streams like 00:40:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) or 01:17:256 (8,9,1,2,3), you can add clap in every some beat to build up the clap pattern in the whole map
  5. Overmapping in part of the music: I will explain in the following mods

[Akesato]
  1. 00:03:422 (5,1) - Compared to 00:02:422 (3,4,5), 00:03:422 (5,1) have 1/1 gap in time line while 00:02:422 (3,4,5) have 1/2, so their distance among 00:02:922 (4,5,1) should not be same, placing with same spacing will mislead players hitting 00:04:089 (1) ealier than it does like the previous sliders containing 1/2 gap, so you have to increase the spacing, there are more same patterns need to be fixed like 00:08:756 (5,1), 00:14:089 (5,1)

  2. 00:18:756 - A higher pitch or whistle/bell sound starts, It need to be emphasized instead of placing slider end which is softer than either a slider head or a note, try this pattern, with a note at 00:18:422 followed by two 1/1 sliders 00:18:756 (4,5), which match with matches more with the rhythm of the music


  3. 00:21:756 (3,4,5,6,7) , 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Reduce the spacing in this stream, the piano music here is softer than the second intro starting at 00:22:756, which should not have the same spacing in streams like 00:23:339 (3,4,5,6) in this two parts. Moreover, I do not suggest stream patterns of 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6), that is hard to read when placing the first note of stream at centre, a straight or curve streams will be fine in this case

  4. 00:23:089 (2,3) - Increase the spacing here to map a jump as you did in other similar parts like 00:25:756 (2,3), 00:28:422 (2,3)

  5. 00:25:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - A sharp turn isn't needed when the music is not that strong, thus 00:25:756 (2) and 00:26:006 (3,4,5,6) are both curving down, after moving downward from 00:25:756 (2), then we need to move up immediately and then hit the stream with another downward movement again, it breaks the flow of the vertical movement

  6. 00:27:756 (7,8) - This jump across both side of the screen is kinda overmapping, a big distance jump with back and forth in does not match with the music, also the overlapping in 00:27:339 (3,7) looks untidy to play with, I would suggest to decrease the distance between 00:27:756 (7,8) so it will make sense and more related to the music

  7. 00:28:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - Another untidy stacking in 00:28:422 (2,4) which affect readability

  8. 00:30:756 (1,2,3) - Increase the distance here, it would definitely mislead players to read it as a spaced triplet when It the difference between this another streams is that small that having different gaps

  9. 00:32:589 (3,4,1) - Stack it properly when it is only differ 1 grid or even smaller

  10. 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7) - Reverse the direction in 00:35:672 (6,7), it is difficult to hit 00:35:922 (8) after playing two doubles which point in the same direction

  11. 00:38:422 (4) - NC it here since vocal and stream starts

  12. 00:47:089 (2,3) - Same problem as 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7), the overlapping here looks untidy as well, increase the spacing after reverse the direction 00:47:339 (3)

  13. 00:51:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Having two angular jump is not a good idea, it breaks flow when 00:51:422 (3,4,5,6,7,8) is pointing to opposite direction

  14. 00:54:589 (8,1) - Spacing is too low here when it compared with 00:49:256 (9,1), 00:43:922 (8,1) they are all the place that new vocal starts, so increase it for consistence

  15. 00:57:672 (2) - Same as 00:47:089 (2,3)

  16. 00:59:922 (8) - NC here instead of 01:00:422 (1) as new vocal starts

  17. 01:13:089 (5) - NC here as there is changes in slider velocity

  18. 01:32:089 (1) - This overlapping looks weird, may consider to add a jump because a new vocal starts

  19. 01:34:089 (3,4,5,6) - Yea you mapped i correctly with 1/6, however, 1/6 have a less denser rhythm than 1/4, so the distance should be larger than those 1/4 streams

  20. 01:44:756 (6,7) - Another untidy overlapping, stack it will be fine

  21. 01:51:422 (3,4) - 1/2 gap here so increase the distance

  22. 01:55:589 (4) - Reverse is hided under 01:55:339 (2), which is against the ranking criteria

  23. 02:07:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapping, I don't see a reason why it needs that high spacing here

  24. 02:14:089 (1,1) - It looks weird when you curve both slider on left side, I would suggest curving 02:14:756 (1) to the right which looks more neat

  25. 02:19:089 (5,6) - This two sliders look great but the following objects breaks the flow, since 02:19:256 (6) is moving up, it is better for you to place further object above it instead of below, which gives out a smoother flow instead

  26. 02:36:089 (1,2) - This jump is too sharp when they are facing opposite direction, players may not react well in this pattern after moving cursor to the right and then move back to left immediately to continue to play the map

  27. 02:57:006 (5) - Why pointing downward? Point to left instead so that the flow won't breaker and players can play it smoothly

  28. 02:58:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another section which is seriously overmapped, there is no vocal and the background music is very soft which don't need that big jump when hitting bunch of 1/4 sliders, reduce the spacing in order to match with the music, the flow is not working well also in 02:59:756 (6,1) after hitting 1/4 sliders chain

  29. 03:00:672 (10) - Remove NC, there is nothing special which suitable for a new combo

  30. 03:08:589 (3) - Try to place it around x:318 y:125, the vocal is soft and a big jump is not required

  31. 03:20:756 (5,7) - nazi, but remove the overlap here to make it more tidy

  32. 03:23:422 (5,6,7) - A constant spacing here is enough since players may not be able to hit it after constant 1/2 notes in 03:22:756 (1,2,3,4,5), so a jump is not needed

  33. 03:30:756 - I think a break is better than placing note from 03:30:756 to 03:36:089 for players to have a short rest

  34. 03:57:422 (1) - Curve down this slider instead, since you already curved up streams 03:57:089 (1,2,3,4), it is better to curve it down for a smoother flow

  35. 04:11:756 (7,8) - Remove from overlapping 04:11:339 (3,4,5,6), the readability is pretty low here when it overlaps with streams, rhythm is hard to predict as well after hitting the streams and need to catch up notes that are overlapped

  36. 04:31:756 (1) - Reversion the direction, vocal is not strong enough for a sharp turn between 04:31:589 (6,1) and 04:31:756 (1,2)

  37. 04:40:422 (2,3) - Same as 00:23:089 (2,3), so on in this part


Overall i think most of the rhythm works well, but patterns can be improved to be more better
Good luck~!
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

Chaoslitz wrote:



[General]
  1. Background quality: The currently background lacks of quality which looks like enlarged from a small size of image, may consider to replace another background with a higher quality, however, if you want to use the same background, use this instead, the current one with 1365x768 pixels against the dimension of 16:9. changed
  2. Metadata issues: I tried to search from for the metadata, and I found the artist is Akesato but not こぬこ Konuko, what the information tells that Konuko is the one who tuned the vocal but not singer, you can find others to have a check in the metadata as well since this one may not be 100% correct I'm sure it is, Because the original song was sang by Miku and Konuko tune it to Akesato like in Toumei Elegy

    Artist: 緋惺 
    Romanised: Akesato
  3. Difficulty name: If you have confirmed the metadata, change the difficulty name as well, it is nonsence to have Artist for diff name, try to use other words which is more related to the song changed
  4. Over usage in soft-hitclap: Since the clap sound is loud, I am not suggest you to use clap in triplets or streams like 00:40:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) or 01:17:256 (8,9,1,2,3), you can add clap in every some beat to build up the clap pattern in the whole map I will lower the volume of the clap down a bit
  5. Overmapping in part of the music: I will explain in the following mods

[Akesato]
  1. 00:03:422 (5,1) - Compared to 00:02:422 (3,4,5), 00:03:422 (5,1) have 1/1 gap in time line while 00:02:422 (3,4,5) have 1/2, so their distance among 00:02:922 (4,5,1) should not be same, placing with same spacing will mislead players hitting 00:04:089 (1) ealier than it does like the previous sliders containing 1/2 gap, so you have to increase the spacing, there are more same patterns need to be fixed like 00:08:756 (5,1), 00:14:089 (5,1) fixed

  2. 00:18:756 - A higher pitch or whistle/bell sound starts, It need to be emphasized instead of placing slider end which is softer than either a slider head or a note, try this pattern, with a note at 00:18:422 followed by two 1/1 sliders 00:18:756 (4,5), which match with matches more with the rhythm of the music
    fixed

  3. 00:21:756 (3,4,5,6,7) , 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Reduce the spacing in this stream, the piano music here is softer than the second intro starting at 00:22:756, which should not have the same spacing in streams like 00:23:339 (3,4,5,6) in this two parts. Moreover, I do not suggest stream patterns of 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6), that is hard to read when placing the first note of stream at centre, a straight or curve streams will be fine in this case nah
  4. 00:23:089 (2,3) - Increase the spacing here to map a jump as you did in other similar parts like 00:25:756 (2,3), 00:28:422 (2,3) fixed

  5. 00:25:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - A sharp turn isn't needed when the music is not that strong, thus 00:25:756 (2) and 00:26:006 (3,4,5,6) are both curving down, after moving downward from 00:25:756 (2), then we need to move up immediately and then hit the stream with another downward movement again, it breaks the flow of the vertical movement fixed

  6. 00:27:756 (7,8) - This jump across both side of the screen is kinda overmapping, a big distance jump with back and forth in does not match with the music, also the overlapping in 00:27:339 (3,7) looks untidy to play with, I would suggest to decrease the distance between 00:27:756 (7,8) so it will make sense and more related to the music fixed

  7. 00:28:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - Another untidy stacking in 00:28:422 (2,4) which affect readability fixed

  8. 00:30:756 (1,2,3) - Increase the distance here, it would definitely mislead players to read it as a spaced triplet when It the difference between this another streams is that small that having different gaps fixed

  9. 00:32:589 (3,4,1) - Stack it properly when it is only differ 1 grid or even smaller fixed

  10. 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7) - Reverse the direction in 00:35:672 (6,7), it is difficult to hit 00:35:922 (8) after playing two doubles which point in the same direction I don't understand

  11. 00:38:422 (4) - NC it here since vocal and stream starts fixed

  12. 00:47:089 (2,3) - Same problem as 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7), the overlapping here looks untidy as well, increase the spacing after reverse the direction 00:47:339 (3) fixed

  13. 00:51:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Having two angular jump is not a good idea, it breaks flow when 00:51:422 (3,4,5,6,7,8) is pointing to opposite direction fixed

  14. 00:54:589 (8,1) - Spacing is too low here when it compared with 00:49:256 (9,1), 00:43:922 (8,1) they are all the place that new vocal starts, so increase it for consistence fixed

  15. 00:57:672 (2) - Same as 00:47:089 (2,3) fixed

  16. 00:59:922 (8) - NC here instead of 01:00:422 (1) as new vocal starts fixed

  17. 01:13:089 (5) - NC here as there is changes in slider velocity fixed

  18. 01:32:089 (1) - This overlapping looks weird, may consider to add a jump because a new vocal starts fixed

  19. 01:34:089 (3,4,5,6) - Yea you mapped i correctly with 1/6, however, 1/6 have a less denser rhythm than 1/4, so the distance should be larger than those 1/4 streams fixed

  20. 01:44:756 (6,7) - Another untidy overlapping, stack it will be fine fixed

  21. 01:51:422 (3,4) - 1/2 gap here so increase the distance fixed

  22. 01:55:589 (4) - Reverse is hided under 01:55:339 (2), which is against the ranking criteria fixed

  23. 02:07:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapping, I don't see a reason why it needs that high spacing here fixed

  24. 02:14:089 (1,1) - It looks weird when you curve both slider on left side, I would suggest curving 02:14:756 (1) to the right which looks more neat fixed

  25. 02:19:089 (5,6) - This two sliders look great but the following objects breaks the flow, since 02:19:256 (6) is moving up, it is better for you to place further object above it instead of below, which gives out a smoother flow instead fixed

  26. 02:36:089 (1,2) - This jump is too sharp when they are facing opposite direction, players may not react well in this pattern after moving cursor to the right and then move back to left immediately to continue to play the map fixed

  27. 02:57:006 (5) - Why pointing downward? Point to left instead so that the flow won't breaker and players can play it smoothly fixed

  28. 02:58:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another section which is seriously overmapped, there is no vocal and the background music is very soft which don't need that big jump when hitting bunch of 1/4 sliders, reduce the spacing in order to match with the music, the flow is not working well also in 02:59:756 (6,1) after hitting 1/4 sliders chain fixed

  29. 03:00:672 (10) - Remove NC, there is nothing special which suitable for a new combo fixed

  30. 03:08:589 (3) - Try to place it around x:318 y:125, the vocal is soft and a big jump is not required fixed

  31. 03:20:756 (5,7) - nazi, but remove the overlap here to make it more tidy fixed

  32. 03:23:422 (5,6,7) - A constant spacing here is enough since players may not be able to hit it after constant 1/2 notes in 03:22:756 (1,2,3,4,5), so a jump is not needed fixed

  33. 03:30:756 - I think a break is better than placing note from 03:30:756 to 03:36:089 for players to have a short rest nah, they have enogh rest per note

  34. 03:57:422 (1) - Curve down this slider instead, since you already curved up streams 03:57:089 (1,2,3,4), it is better to curve it down for a smoother flow fixed

  35. 04:11:756 (7,8) - Remove from overlapping 04:11:339 (3,4,5,6), the readability is pretty low here when it overlaps with streams, rhythm is hard to predict as well after hitting the streams and need to catch up notes that are overlapped fixed

  36. 04:31:756 (1) - Reversion the direction, vocal is not strong enough for a sharp turn between 04:31:589 (6,1) and 04:31:756 (1,2) fixed

  37. 04:40:422 (2,3) - Same as 00:23:089 (2,3), so on in this part fixed


Overall i think most of the rhythm works well, but patterns can be improved to be more better
Good luck~!
Thanks for mod! :)
Little
From my queue.

[General]
  1. Current timing is incorrect because of doubled bpm in some sections. Here is the correct timing: http://puu.sh/i91Op/ad3991a54c.png
  2. soft-hitclap.wav has more than 5ms of delay, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YKV/89dc709ed8.png
  3. soft-hitclap2.wav is shorter than 100ms, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YTb/cfa368bb9d.png
  4. soft-hitfinish.wav is significantly louder in the right channel. I suggest you give both channels equal volume.
  5. In tags, I think utatu should be utau instead.
  6. konuko is already in romanized artist, so the tag is redundant.
[Umbrella]
  1. AR9.5 seems too high for this map. I think AR9.2 is enough.
  2. 00:01:423 - Why not use SC:2 in this section too? I think the soft-hitwhistle2 fits the downbeats well.
  3. 00:02:422 (3,4) - It will look better if you make them perfectly parallel by copying and pasting. Same for other similar parts.
  4. 00:14:089 (5,1) - These feel too close, and it's awkward to play. Try to space them out a bit more like 00:08:756 (5,1)
  5. 00:19:422 (5,1) - The stack doesn't fit well here in my opinion. I think it'd be better if you did a direction change like this: http://puu.sh/i90Dt/0ad282c335.jpg
  6. 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is confusing to read. I recommend that you try a different pattern. If you keep this pattern, please at least make the pentagon more equal, either by using the polygon tool, or by using 72/108 degree rotations.
  7. 00:22:672 (6) - This is overmapped. I recommend removing it, because there is no sound in the song here.
  8. 00:26:422 (7,8) - Distance here is relatively small, and it feels awkward to play because of the large jump between (6,7).
  9. 00:27:922 (8,1) - Flow here is extremely harsh. It's too sharp of an angle on the head of (1). Try a rounder motion: http://puu.sh/i90T6/27d4910b09.jpg
  10. 00:31:589 (7,8) - Distance feels too small here.
  11. 00:32:589 (3,4,1) - Let it stack naturally.
  12. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Try to make a more even blanket. That is, make the edge of (2) equidistant from the end of (1) all the way around. It will look better. The same applies to all blankets in the map. Try to make it look as clean as possible.
  13. 00:42:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - The variation in spacing is very confusing. There's a massive jump between (1,2), but (2,3) is overlapped, even though they are the same beat spacing. Try to make it more intuitive to play.
  14. 00:46:089 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The squareness of this pattern is oddly rigid, and unfitting in this context. Try a rounder and more flowy pattern like this: http://puu.sh/i92p7/aa37d891b4.jpg I think it's more fun this way too.
  15. 00:46:756 (1,2) - This drop-off feels strange, and I don't understand why you did it. Why not just make it flow directly instead of pulling back at the beat gap? Even pulling to the inside like this would be better: http://puu.sh/i92uy/fe65b11833.jpg
  16. 00:49:256 (9,1) - This jump feels too harsh because the direction and curve of (1) are both opposing the motion of (9,1). Just try to make this movement with your cursor. You should feel that it's an extremely sharp angle, and uncomfortable to play: http://puu.sh/i92Jk/ca77acd12e.jpg So try to at least make it curve in the same direction: http://puu.sh/i92Ng/56fdeaa4e2.jpg
  17. 00:51:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow here is really weird. It would flow a lot nicer if you rotated (3,4,5) like this: http://puu.sh/i92Ra/b2d23e1050.jpg
  18. 00:56:089 (1) - I think you should rotate this clockwise a bit to catch the movement from (7) better.
  19. 00:57:089 (6,7,8) - Feels better if you reverse this in my opinion.
  20. 00:59:922 (1) - The shape could be made more even.
  21. 00:59:922 to 01:08:089 - Wow, the jumps in this section are fun. :)
  22. 01:10:339 (3) - I think it's best to avoid using really short sliders like this because it's confusing and difficult to read. I suggest to change it into two circles.
  23. 01:13:089 (1) - I recommend either making this into a circle, or a low velocity slider, to make greater contrast with the speed of 01:13:422 (1) I think it would make a nice effect.
  24. 01:14:756 (1) - Sounds empty here. I think you should add a whistle. It also matches with 01:25:422 (1)
  25. 01:16:089 (1) - Add a whistle? I think you should also do the same whistles in all the kiai sections.
  26. 01:17:256 (8,9,1,2,3) - Shape of this stream is too awkward to play. Try to make something with a more natural motion.
  27. 01:25:089 (7,8,1) - I think this kind of placement doesn't play well. It plays better and has stronger effect on the downbeat if you make (7,8) and (8,1) different directions. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/i93OQ/b15c2c995d.jpg
  28. 01:26:089 (3) - Shape of this slider doesn't make sense. It just makes an uncomfortable bump at the head: http://puu.sh/i93X7/1e1bf08655.jpg Try something else.
  29. 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - Same as 01:25:089 (7,8,1) Try something like this: http://puu.sh/i941X/aad10b5806.jpg
  30. 01:31:256 (4,5) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
  31. 01:41:506 (2,3) - There's not really any reason for these 1/4 sliders to start on blue ticks. It doesn't play well, so try to have them start on white or red tick.
  32. 02:02:089 (6,7,1) - Flow here feels awkward. Better to change directions with something like this: http://puu.sh/i94gn/483f0ccdc7.jpg
  33. 02:17:006 (3) - Same as 01:10:339 (3)
  34. 02:21:089 (7,8,1) - I feel like this doesn't flow well. I think a cross over would like this would feel better: http://puu.sh/i94py/eb4642cca9.jpg
  35. 02:25:256 (6,1) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
  36. 03:00:922 (1) - The first red node has a bit of an awkward corner on it. Try moving the first two white nodes closer to the head to achieve a smoother curve: http://puu.sh/i94BH/f9528b358f.jpg
  37. 03:51:422 (6) - Try to make the inner shape of the first part closer to a perfect circle.
  38. 03:59:756 (5,6,1) - I think it plays better if you make it less direct, and put a bit of angle in: http://puu.sh/i94M9/51a1b677e9.jpg
  39. 00:31:756 (8,1) - Swap the combo start to match the division of the music. I recommend using combos like this: http://puu.sh/i92bs/0ad54d3674.jpg , http://puu.sh/i92e8/d81b3c676d.jpg
  40. 00:40:756 (1) - Remove new combo to be consistent with 00:43:422 (3) and 00:46:089 (3) etc.
  41. 05:03:898 (6) - Add new combo to match the musical phrasing?
In general, the map needs more attention to flow and aesthetics.
As advertised, you may call me back to recheck once.
Topic Starter
GiantZarz
Green = Comments
No answer = Fixed

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
  1. Current timing is incorrect because of doubled bpm in some sections. Here is the correct timing: http://puu.sh/i91Op/ad3991a54c.png
  2. soft-hitclap.wav has more than 5ms of delay, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YKV/89dc709ed8.png
  3. soft-hitclap2.wav is shorter than 100ms, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YTb/cfa368bb9d.png
  4. soft-hitfinish.wav is significantly louder in the right channel. I suggest you give both channels equal volume.
  5. In tags, I think utatu should be utau instead. lol missed that
  6. konuko is already in romanized artist, so the tag is redundant.
[Umbrella]
  1. AR9.5 seems too high for this map. I think AR9.2 is enough.
  2. 00:01:423 - Why not use SC:2 in this section too? I think the soft-hitwhistle2 fits the downbeats well.
  3. 00:02:422 (3,4) - It will look better if you make them perfectly parallel by copying and pasting. Same for other similar parts.
  4. 00:14:089 (5,1) - These feel too close, and it's awkward to play. Try to space them out a bit more like 00:08:756 (5,1)
  5. 00:19:422 (5,1) - The stack doesn't fit well here in my opinion. I think it'd be better if you did a direction change like this: http://puu.sh/i90Dt/0ad282c335.jpg
  6. 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is confusing to read. I recommend that you try a different pattern. If you keep this pattern, please at least make the pentagon more equal, either by using the polygon tool, or by using 72/108 degree rotations.
  7. 00:22:672 (6) - This is overmapped. I recommend removing it, because there is no sound in the song here.
  8. 00:26:422 (7,8) - Distance here is relatively small, and it feels awkward to play because of the large jump between (6,7).
  9. 00:27:922 (8,1) - Flow here is extremely harsh. It's too sharp of an angle on the head of (1). Try a rounder motion: http://puu.sh/i90T6/27d4910b09.jpg
  10. 00:31:589 (7,8) - Distance feels too small here.
  11. 00:32:589 (3,4,1) - Let it stack naturally.
  12. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Try to make a more even blanket. That is, make the edge of (2) equidistant from the end of (1) all the way around. It will look better. The same applies to all blankets in the map. Try to make it look as clean as possible.
  13. 00:42:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - The variation in spacing is very confusing. There's a massive jump between (1,2), but (2,3) is overlapped, even though they are the same beat spacing. Try to make it more intuitive to play.
  14. 00:46:089 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The squareness of this pattern is oddly rigid, and unfitting in this context. Try a rounder and more flowy pattern like this: http://puu.sh/i92p7/aa37d891b4.jpg I think it's more fun this way too.
  15. 00:46:756 (1,2) - This drop-off feels strange, and I don't understand why you did it. Why not just make it flow directly instead of pulling back at the beat gap? Even pulling to the inside like this would be better: http://puu.sh/i92uy/fe65b11833.jpg
  16. 00:49:256 (9,1) - This jump feels too harsh because the direction and curve of (1) are both opposing the motion of (9,1). Just try to make this movement with your cursor. You should feel that it's an extremely sharp angle, and uncomfortable to play: http://puu.sh/i92Jk/ca77acd12e.jpg So try to at least make it curve in the same direction: http://puu.sh/i92Ng/56fdeaa4e2.jpg
  17. 00:51:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow here is really weird. It would flow a lot nicer if you rotated (3,4,5) like this: http://puu.sh/i92Ra/b2d23e1050.jpg
  18. 00:56:089 (1) - I think you should rotate this clockwise a bit to catch the movement from (7) better.
  19. 00:57:089 (6,7,8) - Feels better if you reverse this in my opinion.
  20. 00:59:922 (1) - The shape could be made more even.
  21. 00:59:922 to 01:08:089 - Wow, the jumps in this section are fun. :) Thanks!
  22. 01:10:339 (3) - I think it's best to avoid using really short sliders like this because it's confusing and difficult to read. I suggest to change it into two circles.
  23. 01:13:089 (1) - I recommend either making this into a circle, or a low velocity slider, to make greater contrast with the speed of 01:13:422 (1) I think it would make a nice effect.
  24. 01:14:756 (1) - Sounds empty here. I think you should add a whistle. It also matches with 01:25:422 (1)
  25. 01:16:089 (1) - Add a whistle? I think you should also do the same whistles in all the kiai sections.
  26. 01:17:256 (8,9,1,2,3) - Shape of this stream is too awkward to play. Try to make something with a more natural motion.
  27. 01:25:089 (7,8,1) - I think this kind of placement doesn't play well. It plays better and has stronger effect on the downbeat if you make (7,8) and (8,1) different directions. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/i93OQ/b15c2c995d.jpg
  28. 01:26:089 (3) - Shape of this slider doesn't make sense. It just makes an uncomfortable bump at the head: http://puu.sh/i93X7/1e1bf08655.jpg Try something else.
  29. 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - Same as 01:25:089 (7,8,1) Try something like this: http://puu.sh/i941X/aad10b5806.jpg
  30. 01:31:256 (4,5) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
  31. 01:41:506 (2,3) - There's not really any reason for these 1/4 sliders to start on blue ticks. It doesn't play well, so try to have them start on white or red tick.
  32. 02:02:089 (6,7,1) - Flow here feels awkward. Better to change directions with something like this: http://puu.sh/i94gn/483f0ccdc7.jpg
  33. 02:17:006 (3) - Same as 01:10:339 (3)
  34. 02:21:089 (7,8,1) - I feel like this doesn't flow well. I think a cross over would like this would feel better: http://puu.sh/i94py/eb4642cca9.jpg
  35. 02:25:256 (6,1) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
  36. 03:00:922 (1) - The first red node has a bit of an awkward corner on it. Try moving the first two white nodes closer to the head to achieve a smoother curve: http://puu.sh/i94BH/f9528b358f.jpg
  37. 03:51:422 (6) - Try to make the inner shape of the first part closer to a perfect circle.
  38. 03:59:756 (5,6,1) - I think it plays better if you make it less direct, and put a bit of angle in: http://puu.sh/i94M9/51a1b677e9.jpg
  39. 00:31:756 (8,1) - Swap the combo start to match the division of the music. I recommend using combos like this: http://puu.sh/i92bs/0ad54d3674.jpg , http://puu.sh/i92e8/d81b3c676d.jpg
  40. 00:40:756 (1) - Remove new combo to be consistent with 00:43:422 (3) and 00:46:089 (3) etc.
  41. 05:03:898 (6) - Add new combo to match the musical phrasing?
In general, the map needs more attention to flow and aesthetics.
As advertised, you may call me back to recheck once.
Thanks for mod! :)
Sarawatlism
go :)
Little
Hi, rechecking as requested.
No kds.

[General]
  1. soft-hitclap2.wav is still too short. All hitsounds must have at least 100ms length.
  2. Starting at 03:56:256 and after, the inheriting sections are unsnapped. Please check.
[Umbrella]
  1. 00:13:589 (4,5,1) - They all feel to close together. Try to avoid the overlap, and make larger distance between (5,1).
  2. 00:31:089 (3,4) - A bit hard to read the beat spacing. Maybe you could overlap them?
  3. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Make it equally spaced all around like this: http://puu.sh/idYAE/8bbed90e6d.jpg The same applies to other blankets, like 00:39:756 (6,1) and 00:53:422 (1,2) etc.
  4. 01:08:089 (1) - Maybe you can curve it less. It feels too sharply curved to me. You could also blanket it around 01:07:089 (3)
  5. 01:34:089 (3) - Maybe you could use a new combo here to denote special uncommon rhythm, so the player can recognize it is 1/3.
  6. 02:56:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow of the stream here is a bit awkward. I don't really understand why you did it this way. Can you make it play smoother?
  7. 04:30:422 (7,8) - I think it flows better this way: http://puu.sh/idZ7b/01c342553b.jpg
Good luck.
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, rechecking as requested.
No kds.

[General]
  1. soft-hitclap2.wav is still too short. All hitsounds must have at least 100ms length.
  2. Starting at 03:56:256 and after, the inheriting sections are unsnapped. Please check.


[Umbrella]
  1. 00:13:589 (4,5,1) - They all feel to close together. Try to avoid the overlap, and make larger distance between (5,1).
  2. 00:31:089 (3,4) - A bit hard to read the beat spacing. Maybe you could overlap them?
  3. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Make it equally spaced all around like this: http://puu.sh/idYAE/8bbed90e6d.jpg The same applies to other blankets, like 00:39:756 (6,1) and 00:53:422 (1,2) etc.
  4. 01:08:089 (1) - Maybe you can curve it less. It feels too sharply curved to me. You could also blanket it around 01:07:089 (3)
  5. 01:34:089 (3) - Maybe you could use a new combo here to denote special uncommon rhythm, so the player can recognize it is 1/3.
  6. 02:56:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow of the stream here is a bit awkward. I don't really understand why you did it this way. Can you make it play smoother?
  7. 04:30:422 (7,8) - I think it flows better this way: http://puu.sh/idZ7b/01c342553b.jpg
Good luck.
All fixed!
Thanks again! :)
Del05
Hi
From \o\ Recaro! Mania & Std Modding Team /o/
Will do it part by part. Status DONE.

Mod
[Umbrella]
  1. 00:14:089 (5) - How about like this ?
  2. 00:19:423 (5) - Move it to x:176;y:128
  3. 00:46:172 (4) - How about stack this with 00:45:422 (1) end. If you do that move 3 and 5 too, like this
  4. 00:55:922 (7) - How about stack with 00:55:089 (2) end ?
  5. 00:56:089 (1) - You can make the blanket more neat
  6. 01:01:089 (4) - How about stack this with 01:00:422 (2) head ?
  7. 01:40:756 (2,3,4) - Overlap with 01:40:089 (1), so move it please
  8. 01:44:089 (2) - Stack with 01:43:672 (5) end ?, like this
  9. 01:52:256 (4) - Make farther
  10. 02:29:422 (1) - Blanket with 02:29:922 (2) ?
  11. 04:03:755 (5) - How about stack with 04:04:089 (1) end ?
  12. 04:09:089 (7) - How about stack this with 04:09:422 (1) end ?
  13. 04:13:755 (3) - You can improve this blanket
  14. 04:15:588 (4) - Move to x:468;y:290

    I think that's all from me. So many improvement than your previous map :) . I like it and nice song
Monstrata
[Umbrella]

  1. 00:23:089 (2,3,4) - Make the spacing from 2>3 same as the stream.
  2. 00:25:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can you make this stream curved? weird that 2>3>4 is straight and then 4>5>6 is curved.
  3. 00:30:256 (5,6) - Larger jump imo. 6 is a strong beat.
  4. 00:42:256 (4,5,6) - The spacing for this triplet isnt the same as the other triplets :S feels inconsistent
  5. 00:53:422 (1,2) - Flows really weird :S Ctrl+G'ing 2 would flow a lot better.
  6. 01:17:089 (7,8) - This jump is really unjustified... 01:17:256 (8) - isn't even a strong beat... its just a vocal note...
  7. 01:21:089 (6) - Compare it with here, where the vocals are actually emphasized here. But you don't put a large jump here :P
  8. 01:26:089 (3,4,1) - Could improve the flow here.
  9. 01:33:089 (7,8) - 1/2 slider better. I can't hear anything on 8... its feint so a slider-end fits better.
  10. 01:39:422 (2,3,4) - uneven
  11. 01:40:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This is a lot of unnecessary overlap ;c Cut down on it and make it more open. It's unnecessarily difficult to read, and its not even supposed to be a challenging part of the song :S
  12. 01:42:756 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Here too. This is like a calm section in the song without the vocals... why make it so visually complicated :S
  13. 02:10:589 (7,1) - This should be the largest jump in the sequence since it's the note that the singer emphasizes... not 02:10:089 (4,5) - .
  14. 02:13:922 (2,1) - Here too, pitch increase. Singer is emphasizing this vocal, so you *could* put a larger jump here if you want. and then lead into a reduced SV.
  15. 02:15:256 (2) - This slider ends on a really strong beat though...
  16. 02:58:506 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - You have to many places to put slider 2. why put it so that its being overlapped by the stream right before it? It doesn't flow that well either :P.
  17. 03:35:422 (1,2,3,4) - Consider using sliders instead. since this is a calm section. It will emphasize 5 much better because they are not circles so there is a difference in how you play them.
  18. 04:10:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - :P Too much overlap honestly. You're making things really difficult to read. Your overlapping patterns are quite random. There is no real pattern so its not like your map is using overlaps as a general theme. I wouldn't bring this up if your entire map was filled with overlaps because then they were be part of your map. These overlaps are just random :P.
  19. 04:36:756 (5,6,1) - Incorrect emphasis here. You should be emphasizing 6>1 with a jump, not 5>6 because 6 isnt mapped to a strong beat at all. Actually, 6 is barely audible... a 1/2 slider on 5 would work just as well..
Recurring problems i'm seeing are
1. You need to take into account Emphasis more in your mapping. That means, asking yourself why you're putting a jump from a note to another. Your answer should be that you are emphasizing that note in some way (otherwise, why use a larger spacing?) but you need to make sure the note you're emphasizing is actually a strong beat, or something that the vocals or instruments/drums are emphasizing.

2. Re-evaluate the playability of some of your patterns,. Especially those with extensive overlaps. Try and get testplays from other people, because you probably already know how to play your patterns.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
GiantZarz
Del05
[Umbrella]
  1. 00:14:089 (5) - How about like this ? ok
  2. 00:19:423 (5) - Move it to x:176;y:128 ok
  3. 00:46:172 (4) - How about stack this with 00:45:422 (1) end. If you do that move 3 and 5 too, like this I'll do blanket
  4. 00:55:922 (7) - How about stack with 00:55:089 (2) end ? ok
  5. 00:56:089 (1) - You can make the blanket more neat ok
  6. 01:01:089 (4) - How about stack this with 01:00:422 (2) head ? no
  7. 01:40:756 (2,3,4) - Overlap with 01:40:089 (1), so move it please ok
  8. 01:44:089 (2) - Stack with 01:43:672 (5) end ?, like this ok
  9. 01:52:256 (4) - Make farther ok
  10. 02:29:422 (1) - Blanket with 02:29:922 (2) ? ok
  11. 04:03:755 (5) - How about stack with 04:04:089 (1) end ? ok
  12. 04:09:089 (7) - How about stack this with 04:09:422 (1) end ? ok
  13. 04:13:755 (3) - You can improve this blanket ok
  14. 04:15:588 (4) - Move to x:468;y:290 ok

    I think that's all from me. So many improvement than your previous map :) . I like it and nice song
monstrata

monstrata wrote:

[Umbrella]

  1. 00:23:089 (2,3,4) - Make the spacing from 2>3 same as the stream. ok
  2. 00:25:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can you make this stream curved? weird that 2>3>4 is straight and then 4>5>6 is curved. can't
  3. 00:30:256 (5,6) - Larger jump imo. 6 is a strong beat. ok
  4. 00:42:256 (4,5,6) - The spacing for this triplet isnt the same as the other triplets :S feels inconsistent ok
  5. 00:53:422 (1,2) - Flows really weird :S Ctrl+G'ing 2 would flow a lot better. ok
  6. 01:17:089 (7,8) - This jump is really unjustified... 01:17:256 (8) - isn't even a strong beat... its just a vocal note... ok
  7. 01:21:089 (6) - Compare it with here, where the vocals are actually emphasized here. But you don't put a large jump here :P ok
  8. 01:26:089 (3,4,1) - Could improve the flow here. ok
  9. 01:33:089 (7,8) - 1/2 slider better. I can't hear anything on 8... its feint so a slider-end fits better. ok
  10. 01:39:422 (2,3,4) - uneven ok
  11. 01:40:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This is a lot of unnecessary overlap ;c Cut down on it and make it more open. It's unnecessarily difficult to read, and its not even supposed to be a challenging part of the song :S changed a bit
  12. 01:42:756 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Here too. This is like a calm section in the song without the vocals... why make it so visually complicated :S changed a bit
  13. 02:10:589 (7,1) - This should be the largest jump in the sequence since it's the note that the singer emphasizes... not 02:10:089 (4,5) - . ok
  14. 02:13:922 (2,1) - Here too, pitch increase. Singer is emphasizing this vocal, so you *could* put a larger jump here if you want. and then lead into a reduced SV. ok
  15. 02:15:256 (2) - This slider ends on a really strong beat though... what?
  16. 02:58:506 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - You have to many places to put slider 2. why put it so that its being overlapped by the stream right before it? It doesn't flow that well either :P. ok
  17. 03:35:422 (1,2,3,4) - Consider using sliders instead. since this is a calm section. It will emphasize 5 much better because they are not circles so there is a difference in how you play them. ok
  18. 04:10:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - :P Too much overlap honestly. You're making things really difficult to read. Your overlapping patterns are quite random. There is no real pattern so its not like your map is using overlaps as a general theme. I wouldn't bring this up if your entire map was filled with overlaps because then they were be part of your map. These overlaps are just random :P. ok
  19. 04:36:756 (5,6,1) - Incorrect emphasis here. You should be emphasizing 6>1 with a jump, not 5>6 because 6 isnt mapped to a strong beat at all. Actually, 6 is barely audible... a 1/2 slider on 5 would work just as well.. ok but not 5>slider


Good luck!

Thanks For mod!
koyomiya
umbrella
[General]
the map go with same difficult until the end. some part of them shoud be make it easier.

[inherited points]
00:06:923 - place it nicely, is nothing you want to change the hit sound there, move to 00:07:256
00:12:256 - ^, move to 00:12:589
00:17:589 - ^, move to 00:17:923

from koyomiya queue
00:12:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing suddenly difference than previous spacing. example: 00:12:756 (2,3) - why suddenly so far? 00:13:589 (4,5) - why suddenly so close?
00:18:089 (2,3,4,5) - too close, more DS, atleast 00:18:756 (4,5) - dont let it touch. the pitch is difference than the previous, you may put more DS here.
00:20:089 (1,2) - too far for intro, reduce DS, recommend put it same DS with 00:21:589 (2,3) .
00:21:589 (2) - NC, for new timing and second intro
00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - is not a good flow here, ctrl+G, ctrl+shift+R : selection-center, clockwise -72, may better.
00:24:589 (4,5) - reduce DS, i think no need to make it difficult at here, small or medium jump for intro is enough.
00:24:756 (5,6) - ^, reduce DS
00:24:922 (6,7) - closer a bit , around 2.5 is better
00:26:006 (3,4,5,6) - reduce DS, set stream maximum DS as 1.0 is enough. here is not chorus or climax place, is not recommend to make it hard at here.
00:26:256 (6,7) - reduce DS keep it below 2.5, set 2.5 as maximun DS at intro.
00:27:339 (3,4,5,6) - reduse DS to 1.0
00:28:672 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - too much DS, reduse it to 2.5
00:32:006 (2,3) - reduse DS to 2.5 or less
00:32:422 (4,5) - ^
00:33:089 (2) - reduse DS, the pitch is gradually going up, it too much DS for the beginning.
00:33:422 (5,6) - ^, expand +0.25 than previous
00:34:422 (5,6) - ^, minus -0.11.
00:35:256 (3,4) - reduse DS. 00:35:422 (4) - recommend previous DS with 3.5
00:36:589 (4,6) - nothing there, strongly recommend to delete
00:40:922 (5,6) - reduse DS, calm down here.
00:41:756 (2,3) - ^, 00:42:089 (3) - 342,135
00:42:756 (1,2) - dont overused this, is strongly not recommended. 00:42:756 (1) - shorter it to 00:42:922
00:44:756 (3,4) - reduse DS, too sudden.make it constantly as you can.
00:45:256 (7,1) - seem the verse is same part, and jump suddenly, join it together with DS 1.7~1.8
00:46:256 (5,6) - reduse DS a bit.
00:47:756 (6,7) - ^
00:47:922 (7,1) - ^
00:48:756 (6,7) - ^
00:49:256 (9,1) - start point is too huge than previous, reduse DS
00:50:089 (3) - reduse DS,
00:52:756 (3,4) - reduse DS
00:54:256 (5,6) - reduse DS
00:55:422 (3,4) - make it constanly DS than previous., reduse DS
00:55:922 (7,1) - too huge for same verse, reduse DS
00:56:922 (5,6) - reduse DS.
00:58:089 (5,6) - reduse DS
00:58:589 (9,1) - ^
00:58:922 (2,3) - ^
stop from here..map is not mapping for star...
Please be sure why you expand DS, and reduse DS, hear the song, and manage them properly, and the flow, it strongly recommended recheck all spacing, note placement and the overall flow. map it to make player to comfortable to play, not just doing hard difficulty.
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

koyomiya wrote:

umbrella
[General]
the map go with same difficult until the end. some part of them shoud be make it easier.

[inherited points]
00:06:923 - place it nicely, is nothing you want to change the hit sound there, move to 00:07:256
00:12:256 - ^, move to 00:12:589
00:17:589 - ^, move to 00:17:923

from koyomiya queue
00:12:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing suddenly difference than previous spacing. example: 00:12:756 (2,3) - why suddenly so far? 00:13:589 (4,5) - why suddenly so close?
00:18:089 (2,3,4,5) - too close, more DS, atleast 00:18:756 (4,5) - dont let it touch. the pitch is difference than the previous, you may put more DS here.
00:20:089 (1,2) - too far for intro, reduce DS, recommend put it same DS with 00:21:589 (2,3) .
00:21:589 (2) - NC, for new timing and second intro
00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - is not a good flow here, ctrl+G, ctrl+shift+R : selection-center, clockwise -72, may better.
00:24:589 (4,5) - reduce DS, i think no need to make it difficult at here, small or medium jump for intro is enough.
00:24:756 (5,6) - ^, reduce DS
00:24:922 (6,7) - closer a bit , around 2.5 is better
00:26:006 (3,4,5,6) - reduce DS, set stream maximum DS as 1.0 is enough. here is not chorus or climax place, is not recommend to make it hard at here.
00:26:256 (6,7) - reduce DS keep it below 2.5, set 2.5 as maximun DS at intro.
00:27:339 (3,4,5,6) - reduse DS to 1.0
00:28:672 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - too much DS, reduse it to 2.5
00:32:006 (2,3) - reduse DS to 2.5 or less
00:32:422 (4,5) - ^
00:33:089 (2) - reduse DS, the pitch is gradually going up, it too much DS for the beginning.
00:33:422 (5,6) - ^, expand +0.25 than previous
00:34:422 (5,6) - ^, minus -0.11.
00:35:256 (3,4) - reduse DS. 00:35:422 (4) - recommend previous DS with 3.5
00:36:589 (4,6) - nothing there, strongly recommend to delete
00:40:922 (5,6) - reduse DS, calm down here.
00:41:756 (2,3) - ^, 00:42:089 (3) - 342,135
00:42:756 (1,2) - dont overused this, is strongly not recommended. 00:42:756 (1) - shorter it to 00:42:922
00:44:756 (3,4) - reduse DS, too sudden.make it constantly as you can.
00:45:256 (7,1) - seem the verse is same part, and jump suddenly, join it together with DS 1.7~1.8
00:46:256 (5,6) - reduse DS a bit.
00:47:756 (6,7) - ^
00:47:922 (7,1) - ^
00:48:756 (6,7) - ^
00:49:256 (9,1) - start point is too huge than previous, reduse DS
00:50:089 (3) - reduse DS,
00:52:756 (3,4) - reduse DS
00:54:256 (5,6) - reduse DS
00:55:422 (3,4) - make it constanly DS than previous., reduse DS
00:55:922 (7,1) - too huge for same verse, reduse DS
00:56:922 (5,6) - reduse DS.
00:58:089 (5,6) - reduse DS
00:58:589 (9,1) - ^
00:58:922 (2,3) - ^
stop from here..map is not mapping for star...
Please be sure why you expand DS, and reduse DS, hear the song, and manage them properly, and the flow, it strongly recommended recheck all spacing, note placement and the overall flow. map it to make player to comfortable to play, not just doing hard difficulty.
Good luck! :)
Fixed through irc already
Thanks a lot!
kunka
From Modding Queues

Umbrella

00:39:756 (6,6) - Please clean stack.x:324 y:68

00:53:422 (1,2) - Please clean blanket.00:53:422 (1) - center point x:160 y:136 and end point x:220 y:144

00:56:089 (1,2) - ^.00:56:089 (1) - end point x:130 y:224

01:26:089 (3,4) - ^.01:26:422 (4) - move x:228 y:152

01:26:756 (1,2) - That overlap bothers me.01:26:756 (1) - please move this to little left.

01:44:756 (6,7) - Please clean stack.

02:32:089 (3,4) - Please clean blanket.02:32:089 (3) - center point x:264 y:269 and end point x:190 y:325

03:27:422 (6) - 2 turn reverse is confusing.I think that I don't have any problem in "four circles" either.

04:03:756 (5,2) - Please clean blanket.04:04:422 (2) - center point x:80 y:236 and end point x:47 y:144

04:24:756 (7,1) - Please clean stack.

04:50:006 (2,3,4,5) - I think that I should move to the top right corner.04:50:006 (2,3,4,5) - In the state that chose these x:108 y:144 is better.

04:50:422 (6,7) - Do not "ctrl + G"? I think that a flow is good.

Good luck.
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From Modding Queues

Umbrella

00:39:756 (6,6) - Please clean stack.x:324 y:68

00:53:422 (1,2) - Please clean blanket.00:53:422 (1) - center point x:160 y:136 and end point x:220 y:144

00:56:089 (1,2) - ^.00:56:089 (1) - end point x:130 y:224

01:26:089 (3,4) - ^.01:26:422 (4) - move x:228 y:152

01:26:756 (1,2) - That overlap bothers me.01:26:756 (1) - please move this to little left.

01:44:756 (6,7) - Please clean stack.

02:32:089 (3,4) - Please clean blanket.02:32:089 (3) - center point x:264 y:269 and end point x:190 y:325

03:27:422 (6) - 2 turn reverse is confusing.I think that I don't have any problem in "four circles" either.

04:03:756 (5,2) - Please clean blanket.04:04:422 (2) - center point x:80 y:236 and end point x:47 y:144

04:24:756 (7,1) - Please clean stack.

04:50:006 (2,3,4,5) - I think that I should move to the top right corner.04:50:006 (2,3,4,5) - In the state that chose these x:108 y:144 is better.

04:50:422 (6,7) - Do not "ctrl + G"? I think that a flow is good.

Good luck.
No answer = Fixed

Thanks a lot! This helped my design better :)
Luna-
Hi~

From my queue

Umbrella

hp6 it's too easy for this imo, hp7 it's ok

  1. 00:22:589 (5,1) - add more distance between those, looks like if the streams continue and it's a bit confusing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265099
  2. 00:24:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like how these jumps side by side are played, maybe trying some triangle patterns?
    Code
    144,268,24089,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    56,156,24256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    254,182,24422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    264,312,24589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    164,148,24756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    344,160,24922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    144,268,25089,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    296,84,25256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    if you have doubts on how to apply this, tell me
  3. 00:26:756 (1,2,3) - Try to be consistend in the distance, You should try to keep the same distance of this 00:25:422 (1,2,3) - in all the similar patterns, I'm not talking to apply just in this one
  4. 00:29:089 (7,8) - Try to keep keep the strong beat clickable, change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/irT9Z.jpg
  5. 00:29:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be cool if you cool do this star symmetrical, use "create polygon circles" in the compose tap
  6. 00:30:256 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - The flow here feels awkward cuz the change of distance, maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265151
  7. 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7,8) - This is hard to catch I would do something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265157 like this and ctrl+h in 00:36:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - to keep the flow
  8. 00:42:089 (3,4,5,6,7) - flow here it's a bit awkward too,try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265162
  9. 00:49:422 (1) - Fix this slider to do blanket with 00:50:089 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265171
  10. 00:50:256 (4,5,6) - I would like if this triplet weren't hiden
  11. 01:18:589 (1,2) - Sounds better if you do a 1/1 slider here http://puu.sh/irUSq.jpg
  12. 01:39:672 - add a circle. Just continue the stream
  13. 02:57:672 (3,4,5,6) - Move these more close to 02:57:506 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265190
  14. 03:51:422 (6) - NC?

Good luck!
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

Dark Accelerator wrote:

Hi~

From my queue

Umbrella

hp6 it's too easy for this imo, hp7 it's ok 6.5 enough

  1. 00:22:589 (5,1) - add more distance between those, looks like if the streams continue and it's a bit confusing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265099
  2. 00:24:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like how these jumps side by side are played, maybe trying some triangle patterns? Bottom left>Bottom right>Top left>Top right and repeat
    Code
    144,268,24089,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    56,156,24256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    254,182,24422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    264,312,24589,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    164,148,24756,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    344,160,24922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    144,268,25089,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    296,84,25256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    if you have doubts on how to apply this, tell me
  3. 00:26:756 (1,2,3) - Try to be consistend in the distance, You should try to keep the same distance of this 00:25:422 (1,2,3) - in all the similar patterns, I'm not talking to apply just in this one fixed
  4. 00:29:089 (7,8) - Try to keep keep the strong beat clickable, change the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/irT9Z.jpg fixed
  5. 00:29:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be cool if you cool do this star symmetrical, use "create polygon circles" in the compose tap fixed
  6. 00:30:256 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - The flow here feels awkward cuz the change of distance, maybe something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265151 fixed
  7. 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7,8) - This is hard to catch I would do something https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265157 like this and ctrl+h in 00:36:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - to keep the flow fixed
  8. 00:42:089 (3,4,5,6,7) - flow here it's a bit awkward too,try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265162 fixed
  9. 00:49:422 (1) - Fix this slider to do blanket with 00:50:089 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265171 fixed
  10. 00:50:256 (4,5,6) - I would like if this triplet weren't hiden fixed
  11. 01:18:589 (1,2) - Sounds better if you do a 1/1 slider here http://puu.sh/irUSq.jpg nope
  12. 01:39:672 - add a circle. Just continue the stream fixed
  13. 02:57:672 (3,4,5,6) - Move these more close to 02:57:506 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3265190 fixed
  14. 03:51:422 (6) - NC? fixed

Good luck!
Thanks for mod! :)
ZLOdeuka-
hello~ m4m req!

[General]

clear

Kiai Time

2nd kiai time to end here 02:41:422

[Umbrella]

01:23:756 (5) - new combo.because it changes dramatically spacings
05:08:184 (1) - end here 05:12:470

Map in order. I do not find anything o.o

Good luck!
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hello~ m4m req!

[General]

clear

Kiai Time

2nd kiai time to end here 02:41:422 ok

[Umbrella]

01:23:756 (5) - new combo.because it changes dramatically spacings agreed
05:08:184 (1) - end here 05:12:470 ok

Map in order. I do not find anything o.o

Good luck!
Thanks for mod! :)
Loughje
<3
Osuology
00:20:089 (1,1) - um wow this jump
ending kiai time is awkward with patterns and streams sometimes. such as 04:18:172 (1,2,3,4) -
No Kds please
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

Osuology wrote:

00:20:089 (1,1) - um wow this jump
ending kiai time is awkward with patterns and streams sometimes. such as 04:18:172 (1,2,3,4) -
No Kds please
Thanks for advice! :)
Deppyforce
M4M From My Queue Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[Umbrella]
  1. 00:02:422 (3,4,5) - Make Spacing Even
  2. 00:07:756 (3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:23:089 (2) - The Red Dot Is Bit Too Close To The Start imo
  4. 00:32:589 (5,6,1) - I Suggest You To Map All Rhythm Here Like This
  5. 00:44:089 (1) - This Red Dot Too Close To The End?
  6. 00:59:589 (7,1) - I Think This Shouldn't Be Perfectly Stacked.
  7. 01:06:756 (1) - Move This A Bit Down
  8. 01:34:756 (1,2) - If 2 Is The Copy Of 1 Will Look Better
  9. 02:07:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Somehow This Looks Random To Me. Maybe Revise
  10. 02:17:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use DS To Stick It With Slider Behind
  11. 02:25:756 (2) - This Is Ok. But I Suggest To Move It A Bit To Not Stack With 3
  12. 02:41:089 (5) - NC?
  13. 02:49:922 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - I Dont Know. This Looks Weird And Bit Hard To Read
  14. 03:54:756 (1) - Change The Shape Of This Will Make It Looks More Interesting I Think
  15. 04:26:922 (2,3,4,5,6) - Weird Star. I Think 3 And 5 Should Be Moved Closer To The Middle
  16. 04:41:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These Jumps Is Lot Bigger If Compare To Others. But Can Keep I Think
I'm Not Professional At Extra Diffs. That Is All I Can Find
Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

Deppyforce wrote:

M4M From My Queue Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[Umbrella]
  1. 00:02:422 (3,4,5) - Make Spacing Even fixed
  2. 00:07:756 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed
  3. 00:23:089 (2) - The Red Dot Is Bit Too Close To The Start imo fine
  4. 00:32:589 (5,6,1) - I Suggest You To Map All Rhythm Here Like This fine
  5. 00:44:089 (1) - This Red Dot Too Close To The End? fine
  6. 00:59:589 (7,1) - I Think This Shouldn't Be Perfectly Stacked. fine
  7. 01:06:756 (1) - Move This A Bit Down wut?
  8. 01:34:756 (1,2) - If 2 Is The Copy Of 1 Will Look Better fixed
  9. 02:07:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Somehow This Looks Random To Me. Maybe Revise fine
  10. 02:17:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use DS To Stick It With Slider Behind fixed
  11. 02:25:756 (2) - This Is Ok. But I Suggest To Move It A Bit To Not Stack With 3 fixed
  12. 02:41:089 (5) - NC? fine
  13. 02:49:922 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - I Dont Know. This Looks Weird And Bit Hard To Read it's a lot easier like this
  14. 03:54:756 (1) - Change The Shape Of This Will Make It Looks More Interesting I Think fixed
  15. 04:26:922 (2,3,4,5,6) - Weird Star. I Think 3 And 5 Should Be Moved Closer To The Middle fixed with constant DS
  16. 04:41:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These Jumps Is Lot Bigger If Compare To Others. But Can Keep I Think fine

I'm Not Professional At Extra Diffs. That Is All I Can Find
Good Luck :3
Thanks for mod! :)
Kuki


[Umbrella]
00:18:089 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing here.
00:26:589 (8,8) - Stack.
00:41:172 (7,3) - Stack.
00:43:839 (7,8,4,5,6) - Really messy. Try to stack and if you can't, fix the overlap here.
01:12:756 - I suggest you map this, it's quite clear. 01:12:422 (5) - can also be mapped here.
01:44:006 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing.
01:44:339 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix spacing.
02:20:422 (2,7) - Stack.
02:26:006 (3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing.
03:19:756 (5,1,2) - Fix spacing.
03:58:256 (6,1) - Fix overlap or stack.
04:36:256 (2,3,4,5) - Quite a hard pattern not only to read but to play as well. I suggest using a different pattern here.
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

Kuki wrote:



[Umbrella]
00:18:089 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing here. fixed
00:26:589 (8,8) - Stack. fixed
00:41:172 (7,3) - Stack. fixed
00:43:839 (7,8,4,5,6) - Really messy. Try to stack and if you can't, fix the overlap here. fixed
01:12:756 - I suggest you map this, it's quite clear. 01:12:422 (5) - can also be mapped here. a little break may not matter :)
01:44:006 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing. fixed
01:44:339 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix spacing. fixed
02:20:422 (2,7) - Stack. fixed
02:26:006 (3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing. fixed
03:19:756 (5,1,2) - Fix spacing. fixed
03:58:256 (6,1) - Fix overlap or stack. a bit confused but, fixed
04:36:256 (2,3,4,5) - Quite a hard pattern not only to read but to play as well. I suggest using a different pattern here. fixed
Thanks for mod! :)
gregest
hi, mod as requested

[Umbrella]

00:23:089 (2) - I don't think this slider shape is really necessary

00:29:089 (7) - ctlr+g, normal flows feels better than drop flow

00:47:339 (3) - I would use notes instead of a slider

00:57:672 (2) - ^

00:58:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this jump is too big and comes out from nowhere, lower spacing would be better

01:42:422 (6,8) - ctlr+g

01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole part feels so 2008-2009 mapping, it's way too linear

01:53:422 (3) - move this a little bit to the left just because of the 0.25x spacing

02:21:089 (7,8) - ctrl+g

02:43:756 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing randomly changes here mid-stream

04:28:256 (2,3,4) - stack these maybe for better flow

04:40:422 (2) - same as the beginning

04:46:006 (5,6,7,8) - same here, the spacing randomly changes

04:49:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - it would flow better if the stream would go to the other direction imo


hope it helped
pkhg
hi

[umbrellas]
uncheck letterbox during breaks since u dont have any breaks
also your bg has a bad quality, post here for a free bg mod t/191777
nice song

00:29:422 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont think theres something in the music to make that big jumps
00:37:089 (6,1) - swap nc, will be easier to read imo
01:09:756 (1,2) - space them a bit more to make the 1/2 gap more evident
01:38:922 (7,1) - that stack is really confusing lol
02:17:589 - dont ignore this
02:18:006 (5) - theres no sound here, delete
02:41:422 - 02:54:922 - wow its really cool how you used the stacks here :3

im bad at modding hard stuff, but the map looks cool and the hitsounds are great :3

good luck !
Topic Starter
GiantZarz
CptBlackBird
[Umbrella]

00:23:089 (2) - I don't think this slider shape is really necessary fixed

00:29:089 (7) - ctlr+g, normal flows feels better than drop flow fixed

00:47:339 (3) - I would use notes instead of a slider fixed

00:57:672 (2) - ^ fixed

00:58:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this jump is too big and comes out from nowhere, lower spacing would be better fixed

01:42:422 (6,8) - ctlr+g fixed

01:51:256 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this whole part feels so 2008-2009 mapping, it's way too linear will consider later

01:53:422 (3) - move this a little bit to the left just because of the 0.25x spacing fixed

02:21:089 (7,8) - ctrl+g no

02:43:756 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing randomly changes here mid-stream fixed

04:28:256 (2,3,4) - stack these maybe for better flow no

04:40:422 (2) - same as the beginning fixed

04:46:006 (5,6,7,8) - same here, the spacing randomly changes fixed

04:49:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - it would flow better if the stream would go to the other direction imo fixed


hope it helped

pkhg
hi

[umbrellas]
uncheck letterbox during breaks since u dont have any breaks
also your bg has a bad quality, post here for a free bg mod t/191777
nice song ok

00:29:422 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - i dont think theres something in the music to make that big jumps fixed
00:37:089 (6,1) - swap nc, will be easier to read imo fixed
01:09:756 (1,2) - space them a bit more to make the 1/2 gap more evident fixed
01:38:922 (7,1) - that stack is really confusing lol fixed
02:17:589 - dont ignore this fixed
02:18:006 (5) - theres no sound here, delete fixed
02:41:422 - 02:54:922 - wow its really cool how you used the stacks here :3 thanks

im bad at modding hard stuff, but the map looks cool and the hitsounds are great :3

good luck !

Thanks for mod!
Zaphkael


yo, from my queue

00:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - curve this stream downwards, flow and aesthetics

00:22:756 (1,2) - make them blanket, not overlap

00:56:672 - the (overmapped) triples can be curved here, it looks so much better

01:30:756 (1,2,3,4) - make a star

01:34:089 (1,2,3,4) - why the spacing this big?

01:37:089 (4,5,6) - and why spacing this small?

01:56:089 (1) - place left anchor point higher for flow

01:59:422 (6) - slider is so small, spread it out

02:02:756 (3) - curve

02:14:089 (1) - slowdown is good here, but you ignore the 'guuuuu', it can also be mapped

02:20:672 (3,4,5,6) - curve

02:22:756 (1,2) - fix overlap

03:00:922 (1) - wat is this? lol

do you make your streams with slider to stream converter? if not, please use it, your streams will look a lot better

03:30:089 (3) - NC for sv change

Sometimes I have the feeling you don't follow the music, just because you want a hard map, and that is a waste, the song has so much to offer.

my advice:
-curve more
-neaten up overlaps/change them into blankets
-neaten up streams
-try to see what really fits the song and what is overmapped, and remap them/delete the bad notes
-slider shapes can be better at some points


Not to hurt you, but this might need some more work before it's rankable.

anyway, good luck!
~Scout
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

inspectorscout wrote:



yo, from my queue

00:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - curve this stream downwards, flow and aesthetics fixed

00:22:756 (1,2) - make them blanket, not overlap fixed

00:56:672 - the (overmapped) triples can be curved here, it looks so much better fixed

01:30:756 (1,2,3,4) - make a star fixed

01:34:089 (1,2,3,4) - why the spacing this big? 1/3

01:37:089 (4,5,6) - and why spacing this small? calm rhythm

01:56:089 (1) - place left anchor point higher for flow i'm confused

01:59:422 (6) - slider is so small, spread it out fixed

02:02:756 (3) - curve fixed

02:14:089 (1) - slowdown is good here, but you ignore the 'guuuuu', it can also be mapped I don't know what to do

02:20:672 (3,4,5,6) - curve fixed

02:22:756 (1,2) - fix overlap fixed

03:00:922 (1) - wat is this? lol new slider design lol. trying to make new one

do you make your streams with slider to stream converter? if not, please use it, your streams will look a lot better thanks for advice

03:30:089 (3) - NC for sv change fixed

Sometimes I have the feeling you don't follow the music, just because you want a hard map, and that is a waste, the song has so much to offer.

my advice:
-curve more
-neaten up overlaps/change them into blankets
-neaten up streams
-try to see what really fits the song and what is overmapped, and remap them/delete the bad notes
-slider shapes can be better at some points


Not to hurt you, but this might need some more work before it's rankable.

anyway, good luck!
~Scout
Thanks for mod&advice :)
neonat
Umbrella

00:12:756 (2) - shift it a little to be more in line with the slider:
00:22:756 (1,2) - blanket nicely
00:25:256 (8) - location of this object is really weird, in terms of angle, it's too low, shifting it up to be more symmetrical would be better, but then the next slider would have to change position and possibly shape:
00:29:422 (8) - NC
00:29:422 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what I find an issue with making patterns like this is the wrong emphasis with bigger spacing on the incorrect notes. Emphasis should be made on the beats at 00:29:422 and 00:30:089 - more than the rest, but the spacing would show otherwise right now, especially 00:29:422 - the spacing right now is anti-climatic right now, I feel there needs to be some re-positioning done
00:31:339 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this double curve in the same direction is rather awkward movement I feel, pretty backwards oriented
00:32:089 (3,4) - reason for the huge spacing?
00:40:089 (1,2) - second slider's end doesn't blanket with the other slider
00:41:756 (2) - x:272 y:272
00:43:089 (2) - shouldn't be extended, end at 00:43:256
00:48:422 (3) - remove, there is no music starting at the point
00:50:089 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - really too sharp cut-backs here, very angular
00:54:089 (3) - do not have it start underneath as well as on the right of 00:53:756 (2) - there is no flow to it
00:56:089 (1,2) - blanket
00:57:672 (2,3) - aligning it with the slider would be nice:
01:10:756 (1,2,3) - why did you extend the sliders, having them 1/2 beat long would fit the music on the point
01:13:422 (1,2) - slight overlaps like these, usually can't be pulled off well and look decent, they usually look unpolished most of the time
01:16:089 (1,2) - slight overlaps too
01:24:089 (1,2) - this time is the slight overlap of the former slider onto the new slider start circle - overlapping the body is fine, but that touching of the slider head...
01:25:422 (1,2) - don't let them touch each other
01:27:922 (8) - slider end on a strong beat, puts the rhythm off by having it be so weak here: 01:28:089 is crucial
01:47:089 - ignoring the vocals here halts the rhythm
01:55:589 (4,5,1) - flow movement wavering everywhere
02:20:672 (3,4,5,6) - if you want it to stream the other way, flip it to curve the other way:
02:32:089 (3,4,5) - it's one pattern and section of the music, want to space it, space it evenly and nicely for more consistency
02:34:589 (1) - ending the slider on a strong on-beat again
02:44:589 (1,2,3) - I can see the curve in this line, it looks less structured well
02:41:422 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - a lot of the stacks are really badly done, and destroys flow. Don't incessantly use it so repeatedly until it is a pain
02:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I see no good use of change of rhythm with circles or sliders to emphasize on the double 1/2 beats the music so strongly plays out in the song
03:19:756 (5) - shift it to lead better from the previous slider:
03:19:756 (5,1,2,3) - look at the spacing at 03:19:756 (5,1) and you can see that odd point is just sticking out sorely
03:24:922 (1,2,3,4) - changing spacing everywhere
04:00:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - the slider doesn't lead well to the stream, the stream being too low
04:09:422 (1,2) - blanket nicely


Spacing is problematic and the angle and movement is not quite there, it gets weird.


Good Luck
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

neonat wrote:

Umbrella

00:12:756 (2) - shift it a little to be more in line with the slider:
00:22:756 (1,2) - blanket nicely
00:25:256 (8) - location of this object is really weird, in terms of angle, it's too low, shifting it up to be more symmetrical would be better, but then the next slider would have to change position and possibly shape:
00:29:422 (8) - NC
00:29:422 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what I find an issue with making patterns like this is the wrong emphasis with bigger spacing on the incorrect notes. Emphasis should be made on the beats at 00:29:422 and 00:30:089 - more than the rest, but the spacing would show otherwise right now, especially 00:29:422 - the spacing right now is anti-climatic right now, I feel there needs to be some re-positioning done
00:31:339 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this double curve in the same direction is rather awkward movement I feel, pretty backwards oriented
00:32:089 (3,4) - reason for the huge spacing?
00:40:089 (1,2) - second slider's end doesn't blanket with the other slider
00:41:756 (2) - x:272 y:272
00:43:089 (2) - shouldn't be extended, end at 00:43:256
00:48:422 (3) - remove, there is no music starting at the point
00:50:089 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - really too sharp cut-backs here, very angular
00:54:089 (3) - do not have it start underneath as well as on the right of 00:53:756 (2) - there is no flow to it
00:56:089 (1,2) - blanket
00:57:672 (2,3) - aligning it with the slider would be nice:
01:10:756 (1,2,3) - why did you extend the sliders, having them 1/2 beat long would fit the music on the point
01:13:422 (1,2) - slight overlaps like these, usually can't be pulled off well and look decent, they usually look unpolished most of the time
01:16:089 (1,2) - slight overlaps too
01:24:089 (1,2) - this time is the slight overlap of the former slider onto the new slider start circle - overlapping the body is fine, but that touching of the slider head...
01:25:422 (1,2) - don't let them touch each other
01:27:922 (8) - slider end on a strong beat, puts the rhythm off by having it be so weak here: 01:28:089 is crucial
01:47:089 - ignoring the vocals here halts the rhythm
01:55:589 (4,5,1) - flow movement wavering everywhere
02:20:672 (3,4,5,6) - if you want it to stream the other way, flip it to curve the other way:
02:32:089 (3,4,5) - it's one pattern and section of the music, want to space it, space it evenly and nicely for more consistency
02:34:589 (1) - ending the slider on a strong on-beat again
02:44:589 (1,2,3) - I can see the curve in this line, it looks less structured well
02:41:422 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - a lot of the stacks are really badly done, and destroys flow. Don't incessantly use it so repeatedly until it is a pain
02:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I see no good use of change of rhythm with circles or sliders to emphasize on the double 1/2 beats the music so strongly plays out in the song
03:19:756 (5) - shift it to lead better from the previous slider:
03:19:756 (5,1,2,3) - look at the spacing at 03:19:756 (5,1) and you can see that odd point is just sticking out sorely
03:24:922 (1,2,3,4) - changing spacing everywhere
04:00:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - the slider doesn't lead well to the stream, the stream being too low
04:09:422 (1,2) - blanket nicely


Spacing is problematic and the angle and movement is not quite there, it gets weird.


Good Luck
All fixed
Thanks for mod :) sorry for SUPER late reply
hyouri
[General]
  1. soft-hitclap2.wav is only 15.51ms long and results in unrankable. Get a new one or remove it completely.
    Requirements for lenght of hitsound file is at least 100ms (unless it's a silent sliderslide), check https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Audio
  2. Check AiMod for unsnapped object
[Umbrella]
  1. You have two different custom numbers at 00:01:423 - 's timing points. Both should be using S:C2,
    04:58:756 - Same here because inherited point on top of a uninherited results in the uninherited taking over so S:C1 is not used in both cases.
  2. 01:34:089 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent spacing, they should all be the same. Use 1,0x distance snap on all 4
  3. 01:34:589 (5) - overmapped distance
  4. 00:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - polish distance on these with distancesnap
  5. 00:22:339 (2,3,4,5) - same here as above
Topic Starter
GiantZarz

Alveryn wrote:

[General]
  1. soft-hitclap2.wav is only 15.51ms long and results in unrankable. Get a new one or remove it completely.
    Requirements for lenght of hitsound file is at least 100ms (unless it's a silent sliderslide), check https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Audio fixed
  2. Check AiMod for unsnapped object fixed
[Umbrella]
  1. You have two different custom numbers at 00:01:423 - 's timing points. Both should be using S:C2,
    04:58:756 - Same here because inherited point on top of a uninherited results in the uninherited taking over so S:C1 is not used in both cases. fixed
  2. 01:34:089 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent spacing, they should all be the same. Use 1,0x distance snap on all 4 fixed
  3. 01:34:589 (5) - overmapped distance fixed
  4. 00:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - polish distance on these with distancesnap fixed
  5. 00:22:339 (2,3,4,5) - same here as above fixed
Thanks for mod :)
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