Thanks for advice!Osuology wrote:
00:20:089 (1,1) - um wow this jump
ending kiai time is awkward with patterns and streams sometimes. such as 04:18:172 (1,2,3,4) -
No Kds please
Thanks for advice!Osuology wrote:
00:20:089 (1,1) - um wow this jump
ending kiai time is awkward with patterns and streams sometimes. such as 04:18:172 (1,2,3,4) -
No Kds please
Thanks for mod!Deppyforce wrote:
M4M From My Queue Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
[Umbrella]
- 00:02:422 (3,4,5) - Make Spacing Even fixed
- 00:07:756 (3,4,5) - ^ fixed
- 00:23:089 (2) - The Red Dot Is Bit Too Close To The Start imo fine
- 00:32:589 (5,6,1) - I Suggest You To Map All Rhythm Here Like This fine
- 00:44:089 (1) - This Red Dot Too Close To The End? fine
- 00:59:589 (7,1) - I Think This Shouldn't Be Perfectly Stacked. fine
- 01:06:756 (1) - Move This A Bit Down wut?
- 01:34:756 (1,2) - If 2 Is The Copy Of 1 Will Look Better fixed
- 02:07:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Somehow This Looks Random To Me. Maybe Revise fine
- 02:17:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - Use DS To Stick It With Slider Behind fixed
- 02:25:756 (2) - This Is Ok. But I Suggest To Move It A Bit To Not Stack With 3 fixed
- 02:41:089 (5) - NC? fine
- 02:49:922 (1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - I Dont Know. This Looks Weird And Bit Hard To Read it's a lot easier like this
- 03:54:756 (1) - Change The Shape Of This Will Make It Looks More Interesting I Think fixed
- 04:26:922 (2,3,4,5,6) - Weird Star. I Think 3 And 5 Should Be Moved Closer To The Middle fixed with constant DS
- 04:41:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These Jumps Is Lot Bigger If Compare To Others. But Can Keep I Think fine
I'm Not Professional At Extra Diffs. That Is All I Can Find
Good Luck :3
Thanks for mod!Kuki wrote:
[Umbrella]
00:18:089 (2,3,4) - Fix spacing here. fixed
00:26:589 (8,8) - Stack. fixed
00:41:172 (7,3) - Stack. fixed
00:43:839 (7,8,4,5,6) - Really messy. Try to stack and if you can't, fix the overlap here. fixed
01:12:756 - I suggest you map this, it's quite clear. 01:12:422 (5) - can also be mapped here. a little break may not matter
01:44:006 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing. fixed
01:44:339 (4,5,6,7,8) - Fix spacing. fixed
02:20:422 (2,7) - Stack. fixed
02:26:006 (3,4,5,6) - Fix spacing. fixed
03:19:756 (5,1,2) - Fix spacing. fixed
03:58:256 (6,1) - Fix overlap or stack. a bit confused but, fixed
04:36:256 (2,3,4,5) - Quite a hard pattern not only to read but to play as well. I suggest using a different pattern here. fixed
Thanks for mod&adviceinspectorscout wrote:
yo, from my queue
00:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - curve this stream downwards, flow and aesthetics fixed
00:22:756 (1,2) - make them blanket, not overlap fixed
00:56:672 - the (overmapped) triples can be curved here, it looks so much better fixed
01:30:756 (1,2,3,4) - make a star fixed
01:34:089 (1,2,3,4) - why the spacing this big? 1/3
01:37:089 (4,5,6) - and why spacing this small? calm rhythm
01:56:089 (1) - place left anchor point higher for flow i'm confused
01:59:422 (6) - slider is so small, spread it out fixed
02:02:756 (3) - curve fixed
02:14:089 (1) - slowdown is good here, but you ignore the 'guuuuu', it can also be mapped I don't know what to do
02:20:672 (3,4,5,6) - curve fixed
02:22:756 (1,2) - fix overlap fixed
03:00:922 (1) - wat is this? lol new slider design lol. trying to make new one
do you make your streams with slider to stream converter? if not, please use it, your streams will look a lot better thanks for advice
03:30:089 (3) - NC for sv change fixed
Sometimes I have the feeling you don't follow the music, just because you want a hard map, and that is a waste, the song has so much to offer.
my advice:
-curve more
-neaten up overlaps/change them into blankets
-neaten up streams
-try to see what really fits the song and what is overmapped, and remap them/delete the bad notes
-slider shapes can be better at some points
Not to hurt you, but this might need some more work before it's rankable.
anyway, good luck!
~Scout
All fixedneonat wrote:
Umbrella
00:12:756 (2) - shift it a little to be more in line with the slider:
00:22:756 (1,2) - blanket nicely
00:25:256 (8) - location of this object is really weird, in terms of angle, it's too low, shifting it up to be more symmetrical would be better, but then the next slider would have to change position and possibly shape:
00:29:422 (8) - NC
00:29:422 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what I find an issue with making patterns like this is the wrong emphasis with bigger spacing on the incorrect notes. Emphasis should be made on the beats at 00:29:422 and 00:30:089 - more than the rest, but the spacing would show otherwise right now, especially 00:29:422 - the spacing right now is anti-climatic right now, I feel there needs to be some re-positioning done
00:31:339 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - this double curve in the same direction is rather awkward movement I feel, pretty backwards oriented
00:32:089 (3,4) - reason for the huge spacing?
00:40:089 (1,2) - second slider's end doesn't blanket with the other slider
00:41:756 (2) - x:272 y:272
00:43:089 (2) - shouldn't be extended, end at 00:43:256
00:48:422 (3) - remove, there is no music starting at the point
00:50:089 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - really too sharp cut-backs here, very angular
00:54:089 (3) - do not have it start underneath as well as on the right of 00:53:756 (2) - there is no flow to it
00:56:089 (1,2) - blanket
00:57:672 (2,3) - aligning it with the slider would be nice:
01:10:756 (1,2,3) - why did you extend the sliders, having them 1/2 beat long would fit the music on the point
01:13:422 (1,2) - slight overlaps like these, usually can't be pulled off well and look decent, they usually look unpolished most of the time
01:16:089 (1,2) - slight overlaps too
01:24:089 (1,2) - this time is the slight overlap of the former slider onto the new slider start circle - overlapping the body is fine, but that touching of the slider head...
01:25:422 (1,2) - don't let them touch each other
01:27:922 (8) - slider end on a strong beat, puts the rhythm off by having it be so weak here: 01:28:089 is crucial
01:47:089 - ignoring the vocals here halts the rhythm
01:55:589 (4,5,1) - flow movement wavering everywhere
02:20:672 (3,4,5,6) - if you want it to stream the other way, flip it to curve the other way:
02:32:089 (3,4,5) - it's one pattern and section of the music, want to space it, space it evenly and nicely for more consistency
02:34:589 (1) - ending the slider on a strong on-beat again
02:44:589 (1,2,3) - I can see the curve in this line, it looks less structured well
02:41:422 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,1) - a lot of the stacks are really badly done, and destroys flow. Don't incessantly use it so repeatedly until it is a pain
02:55:422 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I see no good use of change of rhythm with circles or sliders to emphasize on the double 1/2 beats the music so strongly plays out in the song
03:19:756 (5) - shift it to lead better from the previous slider:
03:19:756 (5,1,2,3) - look at the spacing at 03:19:756 (5,1) and you can see that odd point is just sticking out sorely
03:24:922 (1,2,3,4) - changing spacing everywhere
04:00:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - the slider doesn't lead well to the stream, the stream being too low
04:09:422 (1,2) - blanket nicely
Spacing is problematic and the angle and movement is not quite there, it gets weird.
Good Luck
Thanks for modAlveryn wrote:
[General][Umbrella]
- soft-hitclap2.wav is only 15.51ms long and results in unrankable. Get a new one or remove it completely.
Requirements for lenght of hitsound file is at least 100ms (unless it's a silent sliderslide), check https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Audio fixed- Check AiMod for unsnapped object fixed
- You have two different custom numbers at 00:01:423 - 's timing points. Both should be using S:C2,
04:58:756 - Same here because inherited point on top of a uninherited results in the uninherited taking over so S:C1 is not used in both cases. fixed- 01:34:089 (1,2,3,4) - Not consistent spacing, they should all be the same. Use 1,0x distance snap on all 4 fixed
- 01:34:589 (5) - overmapped distance fixed
- 00:21:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - polish distance on these with distancesnap fixed
- 00:22:339 (2,3,4,5) - same here as above fixed
Thanks for good polishing modbrdzxh wrote:
very late nm from my queue~Umbrella00:27:339 (3,4,5,6) - upwards curve maybe? I'd like straight stream better
00:27:089 (2,3) - also do 1x spacing here so its the same as the stream fixed
00:31:339 (4,5,6,7) - move a bit down? fixed
00:35:672 (6) - no snare sound in the music here, so consider removing it fixed
01:22:006 (3,4,5,6) - curve towards 01:22:422 (7) - fixed
01:23:671 (4,5) - shorten the spacing between those two fixed
01:57:089 (9) - stack with 01:56:089 (3) - fixed
02:19:006 (4,1) - decrease the spacing between those two, the rest of the stream is fine fixed
02:26:589 (1) - remove NC fixed
02:26:756 (2) - NC fixed
02:30:089 (4) - NC? ok nc
02:40:339 (2) - move to x448 y188 fixed
02:45:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - wouldnt do this in a straight line since there is changes in the music did a curve
02:48:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ fixed
03:22:089 (3) - move to x328 fixed
04:09:756 (2) - stack with 04:08:922 (6) - I moved 04:08:922 (6) to 04:09:756 (2) -
Wasn't a big fan of all the straight streams but its fine anyways
gl with ranking!
[quote="Yukiyo"]Wishkey wrote:
Yow!
From my queue
UmbrellasNice map and song! GL with ranked
- 00:24:756 (5,6) - really big jump for the weak (6) compared to the strong (5) would reduce this jump a bit, maybe place (5,6,7) like this or something
- 00:29:756 (3) - can make the visual distance betwen (1,3,5) even so it looks nicer by move (3) down left a bit
- 00:33:422 (5) - song is building up to this, why not make this the biggest ds instead of 00:32:756 (1,2) - during this combo to emphasize that
- 00:36:756 (5) - same as ^, you the ds building up so why not increase this aswell, could stack this at 00:35:922 (8) - for example
- 00:42:756 (1,2,3) - flows a bit weird, control+g (2) works nicely here I think so you have the flow breaks on the chaning tune of the vocals aswell
- 00:52:089 (1,2) - you can improve the double blanket here
- 00:56:756 (3,4,5) - rotate by 50° for better circular flow from (2)
- 01:06:422 (5,6,1,2) - this flows pretty forced and I feel you should emphasize the downbeat of (1) here more, a suggestion here for something similar you have
- 01:13:339 - unnesseray timing point
- 01:15:422 (3) - theres the small drum in the middle here an the vocal also stop at the middle, a 1/2 slider + circle fits better here then a 1/1
- 01:23:671 (4) - NC bc of the change of spacing in the stream
- 01:31:422 (5,6) - increase the spacing a bit for better readability since its the same as all your 1/4s currently
- 01:41:422 (1,2) - swapping the rythm fits better here imo since you follow the piano better
- 02:03:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - really sharp angles with that ds, would place the (4,2) more the the left to create some more natural flow
- 02:14:589 - has a drum and piano change, wouldn't skip it
- 02:25:089 (5,6,1) - make (6,1) the biggest ds instead to emphasize the strong (1)
- 02:30:422 (5) - NC, also check the ds between (4,5) should be the same as (1,2,3) still
- 02:49:422 (1) - felt really forced to play, would just make it the same ds/slight increased like you do later on
- 03:56:589 (5) - NC and increase spacing of (6) to 0.9x aswell
- 04:20:589 (5) - rotate a bit to the right more for a better lead in to (6) pretty large jump alrdy, so could benefit some more flow
- 04:27:922 (1) - control+g andd move a bit up for better angles from previous combo and into next combo
- 04:36:754 (6,7,1) - make (7,1) the biggest ds here to emphaze (1) instead of the weak (7)
- 04:47:422 (1) - could NC for better readablility
Thanks for modyaleufeu wrote:
ayy, from my modding queue
Will mod 01:34:756 - 02:20:089
Umbrella01:37:089 (4,5,6) - Hitsounds maybe ? I like how it sounds maybe another mention I will fix
01:42:256 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^ ^
01:56:589 (5,6,7) - 137,241 moved to how I like it to be =w=
01:56:922 (8) - 112,80 ^
01:58:589 (1,2,3) - Spacing is not the same fixed
01:59:922 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Reduce the spacing, the rhythm hasn't changed fixed
02:01:256 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
02:02:589 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
02:03:256 (5,6,7) - ^ fixed
02:04:589 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
02:19:006 (4,1) - ^ The rhythm is changing
02:20:006 (4,1) - Spacing should be the same as the stream fixed
Thanks for mod I'll take a look at Monstrata's mod again1Computer wrote:
Hello~ from my queue.SPOILER🌏🔚☔
- 00:38:756 (1,2) - You can have a better blanket here. fixed
- 00:39:756 (6,1,2) - Here, it seems like your blanket and your stack is messed up. fixed
- 01:30:006 (3,4,5,6) - This curve should be moved up slightly so it that it look like it is flowing off of the slider. fixed
- 01:31:422 (5) - This turn is a bit abrupt. Rotate it by -60 degrees? You can then rotate 01:31:756 (6) by -60 and move it downwards. will look for more mention about this.
- 01:33:422 (1,2) - Blanket. fixed
- 01:44:006 (1,2,3) - This is probably hard to read. fixed
- 01:50:589 (1,2,3) - Why not continue your previous patterns here? Some notes are missing. There's no beat
- 02:01:422 (3) - Eh, a normal slider would suffice instead of this. High SV sliders like these are awkward. fixed
- 02:23:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - That stream doesn't flow well placed like that with the slider. A quick fix would be to do something like this: https://a.pomf.cat/fidqtc.png fixed
- 02:27:089 (3,5) - Blanket. fixed
- 02:29:422 (1,2) - ^ fixed
- 02:41:422 - This entire section is interesting... Feels like you went back to 2007. lol
- 03:00:922 (1) - It's a nice umbrella, but something feels off. Not sure what. idk too lol
- 03:58:589 (8,1,2) - Your stacks are off here. I think there were some stacks off earlier too. fixed
- 04:07:089 (1,2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. fixed
- 04:37:422 (2,3) - Blanket. fixed
- 04:41:089 (7,8,1) - This would be awkward to play. I suggest unstacking 7 and 8 and making jumps from 6. fixed
- 04:58:755 - This entire part is unneeded. Just have it play when the player finished the song in the results screen.This is already good.
You should take a look at Monstrata's mod. He made some good points on emphasis and readability.
There are a lot of spacing issues so I decided to polish the sliders and streamsYahuri wrote:
from queue~
General
-DS keeps changing, but i dont really understand why its changing? for example, 00:41:422 (1,2) is different from 00:44:089 (1,2) and 00:38:756 (1,2) and 00:46:756 (1,2) and 00:54:756 (1,2) sooooo i would suggest making all of those 1/4 DS the same unless you have good reason to change them.
Umbrella
00:23:089 (2,8) - spacing uncomfortably close imo
00:46:089 (3,4,5) - move so that they dont overlap 00:45:422 (1)
01:34:756 (1,2) - change the angles of these sliders to make them have a more circle-ish flow. you could put in a circle (temporarily, so you can use the approach circle) so you can make a blanket of the sliders. remade
01:38:756 (6,7) - spacing too close
01:56:089 (3) - 01:56:589 (5,6,7) - not liking this overlap
01:58:756 (3,6) - stack? remade
02:02:756 (3) - 02:02:089 (6) - clone one of these sliders to replace the other?
02:25:756 (2,7) - overlap
05:00:041 (3,1,2) - minor spacing discrepancy, move 3 to the left a bit remade
hope this helps, good luck!
Garden wrote:
[Umbrella]
- actually capitalized the diffname would be cool, just like the title lol ok
- 00:31:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - this part is too much of anti-clockwise rotating, consider remaking some flows ok
- 00:34:422 (5,6,7,1) - this jump is definitely overdone considering the music doesn't get much more intense, suddenly rush ppl into a cross-screen jump is not a wise choice ok
- 00:38:672 (4) - i suppose u would like to ds the stream, but 4->1 is different from the rest ok
- 00:48:422 - leaving the downbeat empty here seems a bit weird to me ok
- 00:54:756 (1,2) - refering to ur other patterns this shouldn't be overlapped for consistency ok
- 01:26:422 (3,1) - can move 1 down a bit to avoid overlap, looks cleaner moved 3
- 01:43:672 (5) - maybe add a whistle on the slider-head to let ppl know u r following instrument here, like 01:42:756 (1) - ok
- 01:50:756 - 3/2 gap feels weird playing here, consider rearranging ur rhythm pattern, 01:50:756 (3) - change to a slider like previous patterns or whatever u like It doesn't have a beat so gap feels better
- 02:18:756 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - nice pattern, maybe u can consider increasing the distance gradually, now 02:19:089 (1,2,3,4) - 02:19:422 (1,2,3,4) - are both 1.0x, try 0.8-0.9x for the first one instead ok
- 02:30:422 (1,2,3,4) - i think this pattern should not be used too often.. sth like 04:07:422 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is pretty enough for emphasizing I think it's not too often
- 02:39:089 (2) - touching the hpbar, can move 02:38:756 (1,2) - together down a bit ok
- 03:07:922 (1,2) - swap nc? ok
- 03:27:922 (9,1) - use different spacing from 03:28:089 (1,2) - would be better cuz 03:28:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - feels different from previous section musically ok
- 05:08:184 - add a note here and start spinner from 05:08:291 - makes the vocal clickable, probably nicer ok
Thanks for mod-himei wrote:
from my queue:
00:04:089 (6,7) - i think u shud put nc on both of them fixed
00:09:422 (6,7) - ^ fixed
00:14:756 (6,7) - ^ fixed
00:24:089 (1,2,3,4) - i think the spacing inbetween 1/3 and 2/4 is inconsistent, also i think they shud be angled evenly, that means 1/3 with ctrl+h shud be the same as 2/4 fixed
01:19:339 (10) - nc? lmao NC'ed at (8)
01:25:089 (7) - ^ NC'ed at (9)
01:29:756 (9) - ^ NC'ed at (8)
i mean u shud avoid using 9+ numbers in ur combos
01:53:256 (15,16,1) - make it linear or curved properly It's already curved properly
01:55:922 (15,16,1) - ^ ^
02:40:589 (4,5,6) - all of them shud be nc i think
02:43:422 (6) - ^ nc'ed
idk if you like such type of mods, there are shit tons of similar nc issues
03:00:922 (1) - nice lol it took me a day
03:14:589 (1,2,3) - handplacement (move 1 by 1 pixel to the bottom) sound not much necessary
04:06:755 (1,2,3,4) - i dont really like this flow actually, i would suggest to It looks fine for me
04:12:754 (3,4,5) - also this transition seems unneeded, just move the lider to the bottom for a bit fixed
or what about this? http://puu.sh/rHWYR/80aaabd0f9.jpg SeemsGood
04:46:755 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - you can improve the structure here, something like http://puu.sh/rHXgV/b5be7918ff.jpg fixed
thats it! gl~
if you mind m4m:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/496609