1. UMBRELLA (5.77 stars, 1493 notes)

Banner by GiantZarz
UMBRELLA by GiantZarz
Hitsounds by GiantZarz

- I think the offset should be at 00:01:413 (you can have an inherited point and a timing point on the same tick as long as you only use it to change slider velocity)
- 20% volume is too low, raise it to at least 25% (Might even be unrankable to have it lower)
- Be more consistent with NCs, there are a lot of places where you use NCs just for patterns. Generally, they go every downbeat (big white tick) but in this map there are some parts where they don't fit there. Consider removing some NCs in places where they happen too often
00:32:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - There are too many jumps in this part, consider changing some notes to sliders. I know jumps are fun and challenging but when you have too many it becomes really frustrating for the player.
00:40:413 (5) - This note is too close to 00:40:079 (4) and is not blanketed properly. Consider moving it or fixing the blanket at least
00:41:746 (2) - This note is touching the previous slider, move it to the right to prevent an overlap
00:43:079 (2) - ^
00:45:746 (1) - Move this further away from 00:45:413 (8)
00:59:913 (1,2) - The blanket could be improved (If you want some tips on how to blanket check this link)
01:11:079 (1) - Remove NC
01:18:413 (6,7) - I don't think a jump like this makes sense for the song, move them closer together
01:19:746 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - ^
01:24:663 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is a bit confusing, place the stream after the slider end instead of on the tail for better flow
01:25:246 (8,1) - The stack isn't perfect
01:25:413 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved
01:25:746 (2,3) - ^
01:43:413 (2,3,4,5) - Same problem as 01:24:663 (3,4,5,6)
02:14:079 (3) - NC bc of sudden slider velocity change
04:09:413 (1,2) - Improve the blanket
04:24:579 (6,7) - Reduce the jump a bit

TheKoala wrote:

- I think the offset should be at 00:01:413 (you can have an inherited point and a timing point on the same tick as long as you only use it to change slider velocity) nope
- 20% volume is too low, raise it to at least 25% (Might even be unrankable to have it lower) fixed
- Be more consistent with NCs, there are a lot of places where you use NCs just for patterns. Generally, they go every downbeat (big white tick) but in this map there are some parts where they don't fit there. Consider removing some NCs in places where they happen too often fixed
00:32:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - There are too many jumps in this part, consider changing some notes to sliders. I know jumps are fun and challenging but when you have too many it becomes really frustrating for the player. fixed
00:40:413 (5) - This note is too close to 00:40:079 (4) and is not blanketed properly. Consider moving it or fixing the blanket at least fixed
00:41:746 (2) - This note is touching the previous slider, move it to the right to prevent an overlap fixed
00:43:079 (2) - ^ fixed
00:45:746 (1) - Move this further away from 00:45:413 (8) fixed
00:59:913 (1,2) - The blanket could be improved (If you want some tips on how to blanket check this link) fixed
01:11:079 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:18:413 (6,7) - I don't think a jump like this makes sense for the song, move them closer together fixed
01:19:746 (6,7,1,2,1,2) - ^ fixed
01:24:663 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern is a bit confusing, place the stream after the slider end instead of on the tail for better flow fixed
01:25:246 (8,1) - The stack isn't perfect fixed
01:25:413 (1,2) - Blanket could be improved fixed
01:25:746 (2,3) - ^ fixed
01:43:413 (2,3,4,5) - Same problem as 01:24:663 (3,4,5,6) fixed
02:14:079 (3) - NC bc of sudden slider velocity change fixed
04:09:413 (1,2) - Improve the blanket fixed
04:24:579 (6,7) - Reduce the jump a bit fixed

Chaoslitz wrote:

[General]

1. Background quality: The currently background lacks of quality which looks like enlarged from a small size of image, may consider to replace another background with a higher quality, however, if you want to use the same background, use this instead, the current one with 1365x768 pixels against the dimension of 16:9. changed
2. Metadata issues: I tried to search from for the metadata, and I found the artist is Akesato but not こぬこ Konuko, what the information tells that Konuko is the one who tuned the vocal but not singer, you can find others to have a check in the metadata as well since this one may not be 100% correct I'm sure it is, Because the original song was sang by Miku and Konuko tune it to Akesato like in Toumei Elegy
   
   

   Artist: 緋惺 
   Romanised: Akesato

3. Difficulty name: If you have confirmed the metadata, change the difficulty name as well, it is nonsence to have Artist for diff name, try to use other words which is more related to the song changed
4. Over usage in soft-hitclap: Since the clap sound is loud, I am not suggest you to use clap in triplets or streams like 00:40:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) or 01:17:256 (8,9,1,2,3), you can add clap in every some beat to build up the clap pattern in the whole map I will lower the volume of the clap down a bit
5. Overmapping in part of the music: I will explain in the following mods

[Akesato]

1. 00:03:422 (5,1) - Compared to 00:02:422 (3,4,5), 00:03:422 (5,1) have 1/1 gap in time line while 00:02:422 (3,4,5) have 1/2, so their distance among 00:02:922 (4,5,1) should not be same, placing with same spacing will mislead players hitting 00:04:089 (1) ealier than it does like the previous sliders containing 1/2 gap, so you have to increase the spacing, there are more same patterns need to be fixed like 00:08:756 (5,1), 00:14:089 (5,1) fixed
   
   
2. 00:18:756 - A higher pitch or whistle/bell sound starts, It need to be emphasized instead of placing slider end which is softer than either a slider head or a note, try this pattern, with a note at 00:18:422 followed by two 1/1 sliders 00:18:756 (4,5), which match with matches more with the rhythm of the music
   fixed
   
   
3. 00:21:756 (3,4,5,6,7) , 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Reduce the spacing in this stream, the piano music here is softer than the second intro starting at 00:22:756, which should not have the same spacing in streams like 00:23:339 (3,4,5,6) in this two parts. Moreover, I do not suggest stream patterns of 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6), that is hard to read when placing the first note of stream at centre, a straight or curve streams will be fine in this case nah
   
4. 00:23:089 (2,3) - Increase the spacing here to map a jump as you did in other similar parts like 00:25:756 (2,3), 00:28:422 (2,3) fixed
   
   
5. 00:25:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - A sharp turn isn't needed when the music is not that strong, thus 00:25:756 (2) and 00:26:006 (3,4,5,6) are both curving down, after moving downward from 00:25:756 (2), then we need to move up immediately and then hit the stream with another downward movement again, it breaks the flow of the vertical movement fixed
   
   
6. 00:27:756 (7,8) - This jump across both side of the screen is kinda overmapping, a big distance jump with back and forth in does not match with the music, also the overlapping in 00:27:339 (3,7) looks untidy to play with, I would suggest to decrease the distance between 00:27:756 (7,8) so it will make sense and more related to the music fixed
   
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7. 00:28:422 (2,3,4,5,6) - Another untidy stacking in 00:28:422 (2,4) which affect readability fixed
   
   
8. 00:30:756 (1,2,3) - Increase the distance here, it would definitely mislead players to read it as a spaced triplet when It the difference between this another streams is that small that having different gaps fixed
   
   
9. 00:32:589 (3,4,1) - Stack it properly when it is only differ 1 grid or even smaller fixed
   
   
10. 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7) - Reverse the direction in 00:35:672 (6,7), it is difficult to hit 00:35:922 (8) after playing two doubles which point in the same direction I don't understand
    
    
11. 00:38:422 (4) - NC it here since vocal and stream starts fixed
    
    
12. 00:47:089 (2,3) - Same problem as 00:35:422 (4,5,6,7), the overlapping here looks untidy as well, increase the spacing after reverse the direction 00:47:339 (3) fixed
    
    
13. 00:51:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Having two angular jump is not a good idea, it breaks flow when 00:51:422 (3,4,5,6,7,8) is pointing to opposite direction fixed
    
    
14. 00:54:589 (8,1) - Spacing is too low here when it compared with 00:49:256 (9,1), 00:43:922 (8,1) they are all the place that new vocal starts, so increase it for consistence fixed
    
    
15. 00:57:672 (2) - Same as 00:47:089 (2,3) fixed
    
    
16. 00:59:922 (8) - NC here instead of 01:00:422 (1) as new vocal starts fixed
    
    
17. 01:13:089 (5) - NC here as there is changes in slider velocity fixed
    
    
18. 01:32:089 (1) - This overlapping looks weird, may consider to add a jump because a new vocal starts fixed
    
    
19. 01:34:089 (3,4,5,6) - Yea you mapped i correctly with 1/6, however, 1/6 have a less denser rhythm than 1/4, so the distance should be larger than those 1/4 streams fixed
    
    
20. 01:44:756 (6,7) - Another untidy overlapping, stack it will be fine fixed
    
    
21. 01:51:422 (3,4) - 1/2 gap here so increase the distance fixed
    
    
22. 01:55:589 (4) - Reverse is hided under 01:55:339 (2), which is against the ranking criteria fixed
    
    
23. 02:07:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapping, I don't see a reason why it needs that high spacing here fixed
    
    
24. 02:14:089 (1,1) - It looks weird when you curve both slider on left side, I would suggest curving 02:14:756 (1) to the right which looks more neat fixed
    
    
25. 02:19:089 (5,6) - This two sliders look great but the following objects breaks the flow, since 02:19:256 (6) is moving up, it is better for you to place further object above it instead of below, which gives out a smoother flow instead fixed
    
    
26. 02:36:089 (1,2) - This jump is too sharp when they are facing opposite direction, players may not react well in this pattern after moving cursor to the right and then move back to left immediately to continue to play the map fixed
    
    
27. 02:57:006 (5) - Why pointing downward? Point to left instead so that the flow won't breaker and players can play it smoothly fixed
    
    
28. 02:58:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Another section which is seriously overmapped, there is no vocal and the background music is very soft which don't need that big jump when hitting bunch of 1/4 sliders, reduce the spacing in order to match with the music, the flow is not working well also in 02:59:756 (6,1) after hitting 1/4 sliders chain fixed
    
    
29. 03:00:672 (10) - Remove NC, there is nothing special which suitable for a new combo fixed
    
    
30. 03:08:589 (3) - Try to place it around x:318 y:125, the vocal is soft and a big jump is not required fixed
    
    
31. 03:20:756 (5,7) - nazi, but remove the overlap here to make it more tidy fixed
    
    
32. 03:23:422 (5,6,7) - A constant spacing here is enough since players may not be able to hit it after constant 1/2 notes in 03:22:756 (1,2,3,4,5), so a jump is not needed fixed
    
    
33. 03:30:756 - I think a break is better than placing note from 03:30:756 to 03:36:089 for players to have a short rest nah, they have enogh rest per note
    
    
34. 03:57:422 (1) - Curve down this slider instead, since you already curved up streams 03:57:089 (1,2,3,4), it is better to curve it down for a smoother flow fixed
    
    
35. 04:11:756 (7,8) - Remove from overlapping 04:11:339 (3,4,5,6), the readability is pretty low here when it overlaps with streams, rhythm is hard to predict as well after hitting the streams and need to catch up notes that are overlapped fixed
    
    
36. 04:31:756 (1) - Reversion the direction, vocal is not strong enough for a sharp turn between 04:31:589 (6,1) and 04:31:756 (1,2) fixed
    
    
37. 04:40:422 (2,3) - Same as 00:23:089 (2,3), so on in this part fixed

Overall i think most of the rhythm works well, but patterns can be improved to be more better
Good luck~!

1. Current timing is incorrect because of doubled bpm in some sections. Here is the correct timing: http://puu.sh/i91Op/ad3991a54c.png
2. soft-hitclap.wav has more than 5ms of delay, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YKV/89dc709ed8.png
3. soft-hitclap2.wav is shorter than 100ms, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YTb/cfa368bb9d.png
4. soft-hitfinish.wav is significantly louder in the right channel. I suggest you give both channels equal volume.
5. In tags, I think utatu should be utau instead.
6. konuko is already in romanized artist, so the tag is redundant.

1. AR9.5 seems too high for this map. I think AR9.2 is enough.
2. 00:01:423 - Why not use SC:2 in this section too? I think the soft-hitwhistle2 fits the downbeats well.
3. 00:02:422 (3,4) - It will look better if you make them perfectly parallel by copying and pasting. Same for other similar parts.
4. 00:14:089 (5,1) - These feel too close, and it's awkward to play. Try to space them out a bit more like 00:08:756 (5,1)
5. 00:19:422 (5,1) - The stack doesn't fit well here in my opinion. I think it'd be better if you did a direction change like this: http://puu.sh/i90Dt/0ad282c335.jpg
6. 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is confusing to read. I recommend that you try a different pattern. If you keep this pattern, please at least make the pentagon more equal, either by using the polygon tool, or by using 72/108 degree rotations.
7. 00:22:672 (6) - This is overmapped. I recommend removing it, because there is no sound in the song here.
8. 00:26:422 (7,8) - Distance here is relatively small, and it feels awkward to play because of the large jump between (6,7).
9. 00:27:922 (8,1) - Flow here is extremely harsh. It's too sharp of an angle on the head of (1). Try a rounder motion: http://puu.sh/i90T6/27d4910b09.jpg
10. 00:31:589 (7,8) - Distance feels too small here.
11. 00:32:589 (3,4,1) - Let it stack naturally.
12. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Try to make a more even blanket. That is, make the edge of (2) equidistant from the end of (1) all the way around. It will look better. The same applies to all blankets in the map. Try to make it look as clean as possible.
13. 00:42:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - The variation in spacing is very confusing. There's a massive jump between (1,2), but (2,3) is overlapped, even though they are the same beat spacing. Try to make it more intuitive to play.
14. 00:46:089 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The squareness of this pattern is oddly rigid, and unfitting in this context. Try a rounder and more flowy pattern like this: http://puu.sh/i92p7/aa37d891b4.jpg I think it's more fun this way too.
15. 00:46:756 (1,2) - This drop-off feels strange, and I don't understand why you did it. Why not just make it flow directly instead of pulling back at the beat gap? Even pulling to the inside like this would be better: http://puu.sh/i92uy/fe65b11833.jpg
16. 00:49:256 (9,1) - This jump feels too harsh because the direction and curve of (1) are both opposing the motion of (9,1). Just try to make this movement with your cursor. You should feel that it's an extremely sharp angle, and uncomfortable to play: http://puu.sh/i92Jk/ca77acd12e.jpg So try to at least make it curve in the same direction: http://puu.sh/i92Ng/56fdeaa4e2.jpg
17. 00:51:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow here is really weird. It would flow a lot nicer if you rotated (3,4,5) like this: http://puu.sh/i92Ra/b2d23e1050.jpg
18. 00:56:089 (1) - I think you should rotate this clockwise a bit to catch the movement from (7) better.
19. 00:57:089 (6,7,8) - Feels better if you reverse this in my opinion.
20. 00:59:922 (1) - The shape could be made more even.
21. 00:59:922 to 01:08:089 - Wow, the jumps in this section are fun.
22. 01:10:339 (3) - I think it's best to avoid using really short sliders like this because it's confusing and difficult to read. I suggest to change it into two circles.
23. 01:13:089 (1) - I recommend either making this into a circle, or a low velocity slider, to make greater contrast with the speed of 01:13:422 (1) I think it would make a nice effect.
24. 01:14:756 (1) - Sounds empty here. I think you should add a whistle. It also matches with 01:25:422 (1)
25. 01:16:089 (1) - Add a whistle? I think you should also do the same whistles in all the kiai sections.
26. 01:17:256 (8,9,1,2,3) - Shape of this stream is too awkward to play. Try to make something with a more natural motion.
27. 01:25:089 (7,8,1) - I think this kind of placement doesn't play well. It plays better and has stronger effect on the downbeat if you make (7,8) and (8,1) different directions. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/i93OQ/b15c2c995d.jpg
28. 01:26:089 (3) - Shape of this slider doesn't make sense. It just makes an uncomfortable bump at the head: http://puu.sh/i93X7/1e1bf08655.jpg Try something else.
29. 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - Same as 01:25:089 (7,8,1) Try something like this: http://puu.sh/i941X/aad10b5806.jpg
30. 01:31:256 (4,5) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
31. 01:41:506 (2,3) - There's not really any reason for these 1/4 sliders to start on blue ticks. It doesn't play well, so try to have them start on white or red tick.
32. 02:02:089 (6,7,1) - Flow here feels awkward. Better to change directions with something like this: http://puu.sh/i94gn/483f0ccdc7.jpg
33. 02:17:006 (3) - Same as 01:10:339 (3)
34. 02:21:089 (7,8,1) - I feel like this doesn't flow well. I think a cross over would like this would feel better: http://puu.sh/i94py/eb4642cca9.jpg
35. 02:25:256 (6,1) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
36. 03:00:922 (1) - The first red node has a bit of an awkward corner on it. Try moving the first two white nodes closer to the head to achieve a smoother curve: http://puu.sh/i94BH/f9528b358f.jpg
37. 03:51:422 (6) - Try to make the inner shape of the first part closer to a perfect circle.
38. 03:59:756 (5,6,1) - I think it plays better if you make it less direct, and put a bit of angle in: http://puu.sh/i94M9/51a1b677e9.jpg
39. 00:31:756 (8,1) - Swap the combo start to match the division of the music. I recommend using combos like this: http://puu.sh/i92bs/0ad54d3674.jpg , http://puu.sh/i92e8/d81b3c676d.jpg
40. 00:40:756 (1) - Remove new combo to be consistent with 00:43:422 (3) and 00:46:089 (3) etc.
41. 05:03:898 (6) - Add new combo to match the musical phrasing?

CloudSplash16 wrote:

From my queue.

[General]

1. Current timing is incorrect because of doubled bpm in some sections. Here is the correct timing: http://puu.sh/i91Op/ad3991a54c.png
2. soft-hitclap.wav has more than 5ms of delay, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YKV/89dc709ed8.png
3. soft-hitclap2.wav is shorter than 100ms, which is unrankable: http://puu.sh/i8YTb/cfa368bb9d.png
4. soft-hitfinish.wav is significantly louder in the right channel. I suggest you give both channels equal volume.
5. In tags, I think utatu should be utau instead. lol missed that
6. konuko is already in romanized artist, so the tag is redundant.

[Umbrella]

1. AR9.5 seems too high for this map. I think AR9.2 is enough.
2. 00:01:423 - Why not use SC:2 in this section too? I think the soft-hitwhistle2 fits the downbeats well.
3. 00:02:422 (3,4) - It will look better if you make them perfectly parallel by copying and pasting. Same for other similar parts.
4. 00:14:089 (5,1) - These feel too close, and it's awkward to play. Try to space them out a bit more like 00:08:756 (5,1)
5. 00:19:422 (5,1) - The stack doesn't fit well here in my opinion. I think it'd be better if you did a direction change like this: http://puu.sh/i90Dt/0ad282c335.jpg
6. 00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is confusing to read. I recommend that you try a different pattern. If you keep this pattern, please at least make the pentagon more equal, either by using the polygon tool, or by using 72/108 degree rotations.
7. 00:22:672 (6) - This is overmapped. I recommend removing it, because there is no sound in the song here.
8. 00:26:422 (7,8) - Distance here is relatively small, and it feels awkward to play because of the large jump between (6,7).
9. 00:27:922 (8,1) - Flow here is extremely harsh. It's too sharp of an angle on the head of (1). Try a rounder motion: http://puu.sh/i90T6/27d4910b09.jpg
10. 00:31:589 (7,8) - Distance feels too small here.
11. 00:32:589 (3,4,1) - Let it stack naturally.
12. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Try to make a more even blanket. That is, make the edge of (2) equidistant from the end of (1) all the way around. It will look better. The same applies to all blankets in the map. Try to make it look as clean as possible.
13. 00:42:756 (1,2,3,4,5) - The variation in spacing is very confusing. There's a massive jump between (1,2), but (2,3) is overlapped, even though they are the same beat spacing. Try to make it more intuitive to play.
14. 00:46:089 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The squareness of this pattern is oddly rigid, and unfitting in this context. Try a rounder and more flowy pattern like this: http://puu.sh/i92p7/aa37d891b4.jpg I think it's more fun this way too.
15. 00:46:756 (1,2) - This drop-off feels strange, and I don't understand why you did it. Why not just make it flow directly instead of pulling back at the beat gap? Even pulling to the inside like this would be better: http://puu.sh/i92uy/fe65b11833.jpg
16. 00:49:256 (9,1) - This jump feels too harsh because the direction and curve of (1) are both opposing the motion of (9,1). Just try to make this movement with your cursor. You should feel that it's an extremely sharp angle, and uncomfortable to play: http://puu.sh/i92Jk/ca77acd12e.jpg So try to at least make it curve in the same direction: http://puu.sh/i92Ng/56fdeaa4e2.jpg
17. 00:51:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - Flow here is really weird. It would flow a lot nicer if you rotated (3,4,5) like this: http://puu.sh/i92Ra/b2d23e1050.jpg
18. 00:56:089 (1) - I think you should rotate this clockwise a bit to catch the movement from (7) better.
19. 00:57:089 (6,7,8) - Feels better if you reverse this in my opinion.
20. 00:59:922 (1) - The shape could be made more even.
21. 00:59:922 to 01:08:089 - Wow, the jumps in this section are fun. Thanks!
22. 01:10:339 (3) - I think it's best to avoid using really short sliders like this because it's confusing and difficult to read. I suggest to change it into two circles.
23. 01:13:089 (1) - I recommend either making this into a circle, or a low velocity slider, to make greater contrast with the speed of 01:13:422 (1) I think it would make a nice effect.
24. 01:14:756 (1) - Sounds empty here. I think you should add a whistle. It also matches with 01:25:422 (1)
25. 01:16:089 (1) - Add a whistle? I think you should also do the same whistles in all the kiai sections.
26. 01:17:256 (8,9,1,2,3) - Shape of this stream is too awkward to play. Try to make something with a more natural motion.
27. 01:25:089 (7,8,1) - I think this kind of placement doesn't play well. It plays better and has stronger effect on the downbeat if you make (7,8) and (8,1) different directions. Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/i93OQ/b15c2c995d.jpg
28. 01:26:089 (3) - Shape of this slider doesn't make sense. It just makes an uncomfortable bump at the head: http://puu.sh/i93X7/1e1bf08655.jpg Try something else.
29. 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - Same as 01:25:089 (7,8,1) Try something like this: http://puu.sh/i941X/aad10b5806.jpg
30. 01:31:256 (4,5) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
31. 01:41:506 (2,3) - There's not really any reason for these 1/4 sliders to start on blue ticks. It doesn't play well, so try to have them start on white or red tick.
32. 02:02:089 (6,7,1) - Flow here feels awkward. Better to change directions with something like this: http://puu.sh/i94gn/483f0ccdc7.jpg
33. 02:17:006 (3) - Same as 01:10:339 (3)
34. 02:21:089 (7,8,1) - I feel like this doesn't flow well. I think a cross over would like this would feel better: http://puu.sh/i94py/eb4642cca9.jpg
35. 02:25:256 (6,1) - Same as 00:49:256 (9,1)
36. 03:00:922 (1) - The first red node has a bit of an awkward corner on it. Try moving the first two white nodes closer to the head to achieve a smoother curve: http://puu.sh/i94BH/f9528b358f.jpg
37. 03:51:422 (6) - Try to make the inner shape of the first part closer to a perfect circle.
38. 03:59:756 (5,6,1) - I think it plays better if you make it less direct, and put a bit of angle in: http://puu.sh/i94M9/51a1b677e9.jpg
39. 00:31:756 (8,1) - Swap the combo start to match the division of the music. I recommend using combos like this: http://puu.sh/i92bs/0ad54d3674.jpg , http://puu.sh/i92e8/d81b3c676d.jpg
40. 00:40:756 (1) - Remove new combo to be consistent with 00:43:422 (3) and 00:46:089 (3) etc.
41. 05:03:898 (6) - Add new combo to match the musical phrasing?

In general, the map needs more attention to flow and aesthetics.
As advertised, you may call me back to recheck once.

1. soft-hitclap2.wav is still too short. All hitsounds must have at least 100ms length.
2. Starting at 03:56:256 and after, the inheriting sections are unsnapped. Please check.

1. 00:13:589 (4,5,1) - They all feel to close together. Try to avoid the overlap, and make larger distance between (5,1).
2. 00:31:089 (3,4) - A bit hard to read the beat spacing. Maybe you could overlap them?
3. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Make it equally spaced all around like this: http://puu.sh/idYAE/8bbed90e6d.jpg The same applies to other blankets, like 00:39:756 (6,1) and 00:53:422 (1,2) etc.
4. 01:08:089 (1) - Maybe you can curve it less. It feels too sharply curved to me. You could also blanket it around 01:07:089 (3)
5. 01:34:089 (3) - Maybe you could use a new combo here to denote special uncommon rhythm, so the player can recognize it is 1/3.
6. 02:56:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow of the stream here is a bit awkward. I don't really understand why you did it this way. Can you make it play smoother?
7. 04:30:422 (7,8) - I think it flows better this way: http://puu.sh/idZ7b/01c342553b.jpg

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, rechecking as requested.
No kds.

[General]

1. soft-hitclap2.wav is still too short. All hitsounds must have at least 100ms length.
2. Starting at 03:56:256 and after, the inheriting sections are unsnapped. Please check.

[Umbrella]

1. 00:13:589 (4,5,1) - They all feel to close together. Try to avoid the overlap, and make larger distance between (5,1).
2. 00:31:089 (3,4) - A bit hard to read the beat spacing. Maybe you could overlap them?
3. 00:38:756 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Make it equally spaced all around like this: http://puu.sh/idYAE/8bbed90e6d.jpg The same applies to other blankets, like 00:39:756 (6,1) and 00:53:422 (1,2) etc.
4. 01:08:089 (1) - Maybe you can curve it less. It feels too sharply curved to me. You could also blanket it around 01:07:089 (3)
5. 01:34:089 (3) - Maybe you could use a new combo here to denote special uncommon rhythm, so the player can recognize it is 1/3.
6. 02:56:672 (1,2,3,4,5) - Flow of the stream here is a bit awkward. I don't really understand why you did it this way. Can you make it play smoother?
7. 04:30:422 (7,8) - I think it flows better this way: http://puu.sh/idZ7b/01c342553b.jpg

Good luck.

1. 00:23:089 (2,3,4) - Make the spacing from 2>3 same as the stream.
2. 00:25:756 (2,3,4,5,6) - Can you make this stream curved? weird that 2>3>4 is straight and then 4>5>6 is curved.
3. 00:30:256 (5,6) - Larger jump imo. 6 is a strong beat.
4. 00:42:256 (4,5,6) - The spacing for this triplet isnt the same as the other triplets :S feels inconsistent
5. 00:53:422 (1,2) - Flows really weird :S Ctrl+G'ing 2 would flow a lot better.
6. 01:17:089 (7,8) - This jump is really unjustified... 01:17:256 (8) - isn't even a strong beat... its just a vocal note...
7. 01:21:089 (6) - Compare it with here, where the vocals are actually emphasized here. But you don't put a large jump here
8. 01:26:089 (3,4,1) - Could improve the flow here.
9. 01:33:089 (7,8) - 1/2 slider better. I can't hear anything on 8... its feint so a slider-end fits better.
10. 01:39:422 (2,3,4) - uneven
11. 01:40:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - This is a lot of unnecessary overlap ;c Cut down on it and make it more open. It's unnecessarily difficult to read, and its not even supposed to be a challenging part of the song :S
12. 01:42:756 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Here too. This is like a calm section in the song without the vocals... why make it so visually complicated :S
13. 02:10:589 (7,1) - This should be the largest jump in the sequence since it's the note that the singer emphasizes... not 02:10:089 (4,5) - .
14. 02:13:922 (2,1) - Here too, pitch increase. Singer is emphasizing this vocal, so you *could* put a larger jump here if you want. and then lead into a reduced SV.
15. 02:15:256 (2) - This slider ends on a really strong beat though...
16. 02:58:506 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - You have to many places to put slider 2. why put it so that its being overlapped by the stream right before it? It doesn't flow that well either .
17. 03:35:422 (1,2,3,4) - Consider using sliders instead. since this is a calm section. It will emphasize 5 much better because they are not circles so there is a difference in how you play them.
18. 04:10:756 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too much overlap honestly. You're making things really difficult to read. Your overlapping patterns are quite random. There is no real pattern so its not like your map is using overlaps as a general theme. I wouldn't bring this up if your entire map was filled with overlaps because then they were be part of your map. These overlaps are just random .
19. 04:36:756 (5,6,1) - Incorrect emphasis here. You should be emphasizing 6>1 with a jump, not 5>6 because 6 isnt mapped to a strong beat at all. Actually, 6 is barely audible... a 1/2 slider on 5 would work just as well..

koyomiya wrote:

umbrella
[General]
the map go with same difficult until the end. some part of them shoud be make it easier.

[inherited points]
00:06:923 - place it nicely, is nothing you want to change the hit sound there, move to 00:07:256
00:12:256 - ^, move to 00:12:589
00:17:589 - ^, move to 00:17:923

from koyomiya queue

00:12:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing suddenly difference than previous spacing. example: 00:12:756 (2,3) - why suddenly so far? 00:13:589 (4,5) - why suddenly so close?
00:18:089 (2,3,4,5) - too close, more DS, atleast 00:18:756 (4,5) - dont let it touch. the pitch is difference than the previous, you may put more DS here.
00:20:089 (1,2) - too far for intro, reduce DS, recommend put it same DS with 00:21:589 (2,3) .
00:21:589 (2) - NC, for new timing and second intro
00:22:256 (1,2,3,4,5) - is not a good flow here, ctrl+G, ctrl+shift+R : selection-center, clockwise -72, may better.
00:24:589 (4,5) - reduce DS, i think no need to make it difficult at here, small or medium jump for intro is enough.
00:24:756 (5,6) - ^, reduce DS
00:24:922 (6,7) - closer a bit , around 2.5 is better
00:26:006 (3,4,5,6) - reduce DS, set stream maximum DS as 1.0 is enough. here is not chorus or climax place, is not recommend to make it hard at here.
00:26:256 (6,7) - reduce DS keep it below 2.5, set 2.5 as maximun DS at intro.
00:27:339 (3,4,5,6) - reduse DS to 1.0
00:28:672 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:29:589 (1,2,3,4,5) - too much DS, reduse it to 2.5
00:32:006 (2,3) - reduse DS to 2.5 or less
00:32:422 (4,5) - ^
00:33:089 (2) - reduse DS, the pitch is gradually going up, it too much DS for the beginning.
00:33:422 (5,6) - ^, expand +0.25 than previous
00:34:422 (5,6) - ^, minus -0.11.
00:35:256 (3,4) - reduse DS. 00:35:422 (4) - recommend previous DS with 3.5
00:36:589 (4,6) - nothing there, strongly recommend to delete
00:40:922 (5,6) - reduse DS, calm down here.
00:41:756 (2,3) - ^, 00:42:089 (3) - 342,135
00:42:756 (1,2) - dont overused this, is strongly not recommended. 00:42:756 (1) - shorter it to 00:42:922
00:44:756 (3,4) - reduse DS, too sudden.make it constantly as you can.
00:45:256 (7,1) - seem the verse is same part, and jump suddenly, join it together with DS 1.7~1.8
00:46:256 (5,6) - reduse DS a bit.
00:47:756 (6,7) - ^
00:47:922 (7,1) - ^
00:48:756 (6,7) - ^
00:49:256 (9,1) - start point is too huge than previous, reduse DS
00:50:089 (3) - reduse DS,
00:52:756 (3,4) - reduse DS
00:54:256 (5,6) - reduse DS
00:55:422 (3,4) - make it constanly DS than previous., reduse DS
00:55:922 (7,1) - too huge for same verse, reduse DS
00:56:922 (5,6) - reduse DS.
00:58:089 (5,6) - reduse DS
00:58:589 (9,1) - ^
00:58:922 (2,3) - ^
stop from here..map is not mapping for star...

Please be sure why you expand DS, and reduse DS, hear the song, and manage them properly, and the flow, it strongly recommended recheck all spacing, note placement and the overall flow. map it to make player to comfortable to play, not just doing hard difficulty.
Good luck!

kunkakunkakunkakunka wrote:

From Modding Queues

Umbrella
00:39:756 (6,6) - Please clean stack.x:324 y:68

00:53:422 (1,2) - Please clean blanket.00:53:422 (1) - center point x:160 y:136 and end point x:220 y:144

00:56:089 (1,2) - ^.00:56:089 (1) - end point x:130 y:224

01:26:089 (3,4) - ^.01:26:422 (4) - move x:228 y:152

01:26:756 (1,2) - That overlap bothers me.01:26:756 (1) - please move this to little left.

01:44:756 (6,7) - Please clean stack.

02:32:089 (3,4) - Please clean blanket.02:32:089 (3) - center point x:264 y:269 and end point x:190 y:325

03:27:422 (6) - 2 turn reverse is confusing.I think that I don't have any problem in "four circles" either.

04:03:756 (5,2) - Please clean blanket.04:04:422 (2) - center point x:80 y:236 and end point x:47 y:144

04:24:756 (7,1) - Please clean stack.

04:50:006 (2,3,4,5) - I think that I should move to the top right corner.04:50:006 (2,3,4,5) - In the state that chose these x:108 y:144 is better.

04:50:422 (6,7) - Do not "ctrl + G"? I think that a flow is good.

Good luck.