Thanks a lot Ava! <3[ A v a l o n ] wrote:
Hi Sora . . .
here is my mod, i'm sorry for delay in long time
really busy this time, so i will only point out some issues for now|1|2|3|4| mod insideHope it Helps
[4K]sorry for some of the rejects especially on the later part ;_; dont kill me pls
- 00:24:343 (24343|2) - ghost note, this part is not contains any sound . . . i suggest you to delete it gonna wait for others to point this out, idk but im hearing something
- 00:24:579 (24579|2,24736|3) - switch that pattern to 4 3 column (LN at 4th column) it's good to make a different feel with this 00:24:893 (24893|2) - since it's different sound but... ._. they have same sound
- 00:31:333 (31333|3,31647|2) - any important sound that need to be LN here ? maybe it's better to delete that, since you didn't use any short LN this on other next section repatterned
- 00:40:286 (40286|1,40600|1) - suggest to not make it same column, since that part is have different music feels sure, fixed
- 01:00:233 (60233|2,60233|3,60312|1,60312|0,60391|3,60391|2,60469|0,60469|1) - overmap, the sound in this part is still low as 01:00:155 (60155|1) - it's more better to keep using 1 note here too soft to press for a loud sound, and also that single is only single because it is not that loud
- 01:00:705 (60705|1,61019|3) - i don't get the purpose of this LN following for what, better to change it into single note only . . . since in this part is not contains any special long sound for the synth, idk in these ears of mine xD repatterned as stated below
- 01:05:731 (65731|2,66045|0) - same reason as above ^ repatterned as stated below
- 01:01:490 - until 01:05:574 - why the LN . . . uhhh XD feels inconsistency and weird to plays . . . since the amount of LN itself it's not fit with the sound itself slap me then xD repatterned
- 01:07:459 - same goes ^ repatterned
- 01:10:364 (70364|2) - delete this ? . . . okay, it have a very very little sound, but not strong as 01:10:521 (70521|2) - okay
- 01:33:218 (93218|0) - it just same as this part 01:31:961 (91961|0) - aaaand 01:33:846 (93846|1) - this is abuse LN @_@ . . . please make short LN on this 01:34:003 (94003|3,94160|2,94317|0) - for exchange aaaaa sorry, will change it into normal notes
- 01:38:244 (98244|2) - same reason as above . . . should be ended here 01:39:186 - and make short LN for this 01:39:186 (99186|2,99343|0) - repatterned
- 01:40:024 (100024|0,100076|1,100129|2) - wrong snap ? i can only hear 3 piano sound here, which 01:40:050 - are really clear sound . . . please listen it again carefully there's a sound actually xD
- 02:05:888 (125888|3,126516|0) - you broke the rhytim and flow T_T and really abuse LN . . . why not continue like this 02:04:946 (124946|3,125260|2,125574|0) - that's already good imo, do dhat short LN until here 02:06:830 - aww i thought it is fine ;_; that's the style on how i map LNs, i actually listen and made it carefully, and i really like that part, gonna ask others opinion about this
- 02:07:144 - here . . . you can start LN like 02:07:773 (127773|3,127930|0,128087|2,128244|1) - same as above aww
- 02:08:401 - add short LN for sound like 02:05:574 - okay
- 02:08:715 - until 02:09:501 - feels nothing special here, please add shor t LN for that instrument T_T just like 02:07:773 -
- 02:10:914 (130914|0,131542|3) - again . . . you make me sad sorry ;_; mm.. on my part, if i make it all LNs, i got no feels for it huhuhu so that's why i only added LNs on the sounds that you make your fingers jump (something like that) so i always put LNs that way, mmm.. dont really know now what to do xD
- that above suggestion for short LN is can be applied too until here 02:13:427 - kinda hard for that chord jacks
- 02:25:993 (145993|3,146621|0) - please kill me
- i won't repeat again, since too many stuff like that LOL (you've wasting the clear instrument here)
- 03:41:385 - does it need 3 notes ? it's really low . . . just like 03:42:014 -
- okay, the song is repeating again and again XD . . maybe that's all from me
Good Luck Sora !
really helps me with the patterning xD
lots of changes was made