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Thank you so much LenLenfried- wrote:
yeee mod
DONT KDS
testplay
4k:
great as usual. Cool SVs. Last part still repetitive lol, i tried, too hard for my style xD
Could go more aggressive on the LNs but you might mess it up.
6k:
MURICA
DEMOCRACY
APPLE PIE
BALD EAGLE
NO TO GUN BAN
CLOWNPIECE
solid structure and fun bursts aside, you'll have to consider your difficulty distribution w/c will be discussed later. Also there's that one bad SV somewhere.4k00:34:631 - add 3 i feel kinda heavy aside from that jack
00:34:946 (34946|3) - move to 2 will thing about it since i have a pattern for this
00:37:930 - bruh https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4400653 better than mine so okay~
00:39:501 (39501|1,39658|2) - add to 4 and 1 respectively mirrored instead, not feeling good with that 4,1,4,1
01:20:652 - this section has some stuff w/c could be chords (that means you add a note to the listed timestamps below) feels heavy for me, mmm idk, kinda want to make it just smooth
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They vary in sounds so check w/c deserve triples
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02:18:453 - too much motion going right. Do some random stuff lol okay, my patterns feels like, eehhh... haha
02:33:296 (153296|1) - ghost there has actually
01:10:364 (70364|2) - ghost ^
02:53:401 (173401|2) - ghost. Consistent ghosts one this pattern usage. Check them al out ^ im pretty sure with it
03:04:671 (184671|2,184710|3,184788|0,184828|1,184867|2) - find a way to make this burst go the other way. By testplaying this, this burst usage is all going to the right. cant think of a more better pattern to replace
03:44:880 (224880|2,224919|3,224998|0,225037|1,225076|2) - ^ ^
03:56:228 (236228|2) - wont list anymore of these, watch out same with before, im 100 sure with it
03:46:412 - 04:45:469 - nigga this is like 1 minute of the same stuff so do try some usage like this in the second set of 30 seconds. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4400722 ayy.. lol okay,... after testplaying, i feel awkward after following main sounds
05:02:511 - too much right movement repatterned
didn't try to nitpick