Fresh Chicken wrote:

I Rape Chicken mod

owo

2016-01-21 14:30 -SoraGami-: is there some weird stuffs?
2016-01-21 14:30 Fresh Chicken: hmm I couldn't find when I was playing but
2016-01-21 14:30 Fresh Chicken: Yeah let's check it quickly
2016-01-21 14:30 Fresh Chicken: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/846184 Yooh - MariannE [4K Goddess]]
2016-01-21 14:31 -SoraGami-: okaysuu
2016-01-21 14:31 Fresh Chicken: 00:09:658 (9658|3,9815|0) - Ctrl + H can be more better I guess. for more natural pattern with 00:07:773 (7773|3,7773|2) - 00:08:401 (8401|1,8401|3) - 00:09:029 (9029|1,9029|2) - these two notes part okay applied this
2016-01-21 14:32 Fresh Chicken: 00:19:867 - Why this part doesn't have SV? it will be better to add the SV lolol there's already an SV
2016-01-21 14:33 Fresh Chicken: For good flow
2016-01-21 14:33 -SoraGami-: nice, applied
2016-01-21 14:33 Fresh Chicken: 00:26:935 (26935|1,27092|2) - You may know it but here has some 1/4 but depend on you i followed the sounds (kick and clap) that is similar to the last section before this
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: 00:49:631 (49631|2) - Isn't it 1/3? I guess so
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: ohh
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: Mistake
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: XDD
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: Sorry
2016-01-21 14:35 Fresh Chicken: Not 1/3
2016-01-21 14:36 -SoraGami-: what timestamp?
2016-01-21 14:36 -SoraGami-: lol
2016-01-21 14:36 Fresh Chicken: "Isn't it 1/3 " is wrong XD
2016-01-21 14:37 -SoraGami-: lol
2016-01-21 14:38 Fresh Chicken: 03:04:671 (184671|2,184710|3,184788|0,184828|1,184867|2) - I want to tell something about this delay
2016-01-21 14:39 Fresh Chicken: Including all same parts
2016-01-21 14:39 Fresh Chicken: I can consciousness it is too repeat when I was playing it. maybe you can try something different without it
2016-01-21 14:39 -SoraGami-: yes?
2016-01-21 14:40 Fresh Chicken: All same parts have same pattern 03:04:671 (184671|2,184710|3,184788|0,184828|1,184867|2) - okay, but this will took me some time to look for a better pattern so i may not applied it yet but soonxD
2016-01-21 14:40 Fresh Chicken: I wish you will change it including other parts too :3
2016-01-21 14:40 -SoraGami-: ohh lol okay, ill try to differ it from each other
2016-01-21 14:40 Fresh Chicken: Nice owo
2016-01-21 14:43 Fresh Chicken: 05:46:726 - How about use the four notes for emphasis last part? added it :3
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: Okay my quick checking have finished
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: Nice done!!
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: Take some star <3 thanks <3<3<3
2016-01-21 14:45 -SoraGami-: will add it then xD
2016-01-21 14:45 Fresh Chicken: :3

Lenfried- wrote:

yeee mod

DONT KDS

testplay

4k:
great as usual. Cool SVs. Last part still repetitive lol, i tried, too hard for my style xD
Could go more aggressive on the LNs but you might mess it up.

6k:
MURICA
DEMOCRACY
APPLE PIE
BALD EAGLE
NO TO GUN BAN
CLOWNPIECE

solid structure and fun bursts aside, you'll have to consider your difficulty distribution w/c will be discussed later. Also there's that one bad SV somewhere.

4k

00:34:631 - add 3 i feel kinda heavy aside from that jack
00:34:946 (34946|3) - move to 2 will thing about it since i have a pattern for this
00:37:930 - bruh https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4400653 better than mine so okay~
00:39:501 (39501|1,39658|2) - add to 4 and 1 respectively mirrored instead, not feeling good with that 4,1,4,1
01:20:652 - this section has some stuff w/c could be chords (that means you add a note to the listed timestamps below) feels heavy for me, mmm idk, kinda want to make it just smooth
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01:21:909 -
01:22:537 -
01:23:165 -
01:24:422 -
01:25:679 -
01:26:935 -
01:28:192 -
01:28:820 -
01:29:448 -
They vary in sounds so check w/c deserve triples
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02:18:453 - too much motion going right. Do some random stuff lol okay, my patterns feels like, eehhh... haha
02:33:296 (153296|1) - ghost there has actually
01:10:364 (70364|2) - ghost ^
02:53:401 (173401|2) - ghost. Consistent ghosts one this pattern usage. Check them al out ^ im pretty sure with it
03:04:671 (184671|2,184710|3,184788|0,184828|1,184867|2) - find a way to make this burst go the other way. By testplaying this, this burst usage is all going to the right. cant think of a more better pattern to replace
03:44:880 (224880|2,224919|3,224998|0,225037|1,225076|2) - ^ ^
03:56:228 (236228|2) - wont list anymore of these, watch out same with before, im 100 sure with it
03:46:412 - 04:45:469 - nigga this is like 1 minute of the same stuff so do try some usage like this in the second set of 30 seconds. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4400722 ayy.. lol okay,... after testplaying, i feel awkward after following main sounds
05:02:511 - too much right movement repatterned
didn't try to nitpick

UPDATED

ArcherLove wrote:

4k

00:10:443 (10443|3) - move to 2 mm... sorry, for me it kinda make the hand balance less while playing

other is ok zz gl~

Nivrad00 wrote:

From Nivrad00's Mania Queue

1|2|3|4
[4K Goddess]
00:24:343 - my ears suck but this might be a ghost note (maybe) lol, idk but im hearing something here xD
05:45:783 - it might be a better effect if you deleted this note... to show how all the instruments suddenly stop here yah, ur right

I don't play 4k, but I really love your charting! I like the section that starts at 00:10:286 - where every kick is a 1-2 or 3-4 chord and every snare is a "separated" chord... I haven't seen that very often. Everything is extremely consistent and you gave a lot of thought to pitch relevancy while still making VERY neat and playable patterns. Great map. Thanks <3

I would suggest the same thing I told Shinzo that the pattern at 00:38:872 - doesn't seem to represent the sound very well (two LNs might be better). nice idea but the sounds are too loud, it might be to awkward for an LN, will think about this one

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

Hi Sora . . .
here is my mod, i'm sorry for delay in long time
really busy this time, so i will only point out some issues for now

|1|2|3|4|

mod inside

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  [4K]

1. 00:24:343 (24343|2) - ghost note, this part is not contains any sound . . . i suggest you to delete it gonna wait for others to point this out, idk but im hearing something
2. 00:24:579 (24579|2,24736|3) - switch that pattern to 4 3 column (LN at 4th column) it's good to make a different feel with this 00:24:893 (24893|2) - since it's different sound but... ._. they have same sound
3. 00:31:333 (31333|3,31647|2) - any important sound that need to be LN here ? maybe it's better to delete that, since you didn't use any short LN this on other next section repatterned
4. 00:40:286 (40286|1,40600|1) - suggest to not make it same column, since that part is have different music feels sure, fixed
5. 01:00:233 (60233|2,60233|3,60312|1,60312|0,60391|3,60391|2,60469|0,60469|1) - overmap, the sound in this part is still low as 01:00:155 (60155|1) - it's more better to keep using 1 note here too soft to press for a loud sound, and also that single is only single because it is not that loud
6. 01:00:705 (60705|1,61019|3) - i don't get the purpose of this LN following for what, better to change it into single note only . . . since in this part is not contains any special long sound for the synth, idk in these ears of mine xD repatterned as stated below
7. 01:05:731 (65731|2,66045|0) - same reason as above ^ repatterned as stated below
8. 01:01:490 - until 01:05:574 - why the LN . . . uhhh XD feels inconsistency and weird to plays . . . since the amount of LN itself it's not fit with the sound itself slap me then xD repatterned
9. 01:07:459 - same goes ^ repatterned
10. 01:10:364 (70364|2) - delete this ? . . . okay, it have a very very little sound, but not strong as 01:10:521 (70521|2) - okay
11. 01:33:218 (93218|0) - it just same as this part 01:31:961 (91961|0) - aaaand 01:33:846 (93846|1) - this is abuse LN @_@ . . . please make short LN on this 01:34:003 (94003|3,94160|2,94317|0) - for exchange aaaaa sorry, will change it into normal notes
12. 01:38:244 (98244|2) - same reason as above . . . should be ended here 01:39:186 - and make short LN for this 01:39:186 (99186|2,99343|0) - repatterned
13. 01:40:024 (100024|0,100076|1,100129|2) - wrong snap ? i can only hear 3 piano sound here, which 01:40:050 - are really clear sound . . . please listen it again carefully there's a sound actually xD
14. 02:05:888 (125888|3,126516|0) - you broke the rhytim and flow T_T and really abuse LN . . . why not continue like this 02:04:946 (124946|3,125260|2,125574|0) - that's already good imo, do dhat short LN until here 02:06:830 - aww i thought it is fine ;_; that's the style on how i map LNs, i actually listen and made it carefully, and i really like that part, gonna ask others opinion about this
15. 02:07:144 - here . . . you can start LN like 02:07:773 (127773|3,127930|0,128087|2,128244|1) - same as above aww
16. 02:08:401 - add short LN for sound like 02:05:574 - okay
17. 02:08:715 - until 02:09:501 - feels nothing special here, please add shor t LN for that instrument T_T just like 02:07:773 -
18. 02:10:914 (130914|0,131542|3) - again . . . you make me sad sorry ;_; mm.. on my part, if i make it all LNs, i got no feels for it huhuhu so that's why i only added LNs on the sounds that you make your fingers jump (something like that) so i always put LNs that way, mmm.. dont really know now what to do xD
19. that above suggestion for short LN is can be applied too until here 02:13:427 - kinda hard for that chord jacks
20. 02:25:993 (145993|3,146621|0) - please kill me
21. i won't repeat again, since too many stuff like that LOL (you've wasting the clear instrument here)
22. 03:41:385 - does it need 3 notes ? it's really low . . . just like 03:42:014 -
23. okay, the song is repeating again and again XD . . maybe that's all from me

sorry for some of the rejects especially on the later part ;_; dont kill me pls

Hope it Helps
Good Luck Sora !

UPDATED

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

if you not going to approve this, i will kill you xD

[Baim] wrote:

hai soraa
req mod via my queue

sorry if this mod too short ;-;

4k Sora

01:29:762 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5142161 idk but i feel the current one better
03:05:888 - add one for crash sound? kinda ruinning the flow but thanks for pointing this i found something lack of chords
03:06:124 - add note for i hear sound there nice catch

Omg i can't mod it again ;-;
it's too good for me, really nice, solid pretty diff
so i'm sorry for short mod ;(
take My star
Good luck ~

Rivals_7 wrote:

Testplay from few days ago

nub play

Mod req from queue
Mainly just personal issues, you can freely reject it
1|~|6
[both diff]

05:36:752 (336752|2) - missing "Bass" HS? nice catch

[Shin's 6K LibertY]

MURICAAAA....' eh...

anyways


wtf 0% vol?? ohh i forgot to change it after applying HS for shin xD thanks

00:20:024 - SVs here... its quite sudden and also quite surprising, would recommend to null the SVs a little bit to 0,5x and 1,5x so it'll much more smoother. But, it'll be better if you start the SV at this point first - 00:19:867 - where the song get fractaled.

00:23:480 (23480|0,23480|3,23480|2,23480|1,23794|3,23794|2,23794|0,23794|1) - different noise, same density?

02:13:427 - whoa anchors

02:48:453 - Think you can add two more notes at 1|5. since there's some beats right there. the 4K noticed that

02:51:438 - hmm? i though there's should be an 1/2 LN. similar density like - 02:50:809 (170809|5,170809|3,170809|0) - (2SNs+1LN for loud beat)

03:04:003 -

OPTIONAL: @sora. think you can use 1/6 like shin does? its pretty unique in general. (yep totally optional) will try it first

03:07:144 - No 1/2 LN?

04:12:642 - guess you can add one more note? referring 4K, the fx you follow still remains

Guess thats it... Good luck again

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Shin's 6K LibertY]

MURICAAAA....' eh...

anyways


wtf 0% vol??

00:20:024 - SVs here... its quite sudden and also quite surprising, would recommend to null the SVs a little bit to 0,5x and 1,5x so it'll much more smoother. But, it'll be better if you start the SV at this point first - 00:19:867 - where the song get fractaled. still like the current SV :v

00:23:480 (23480|0,23480|3,23480|2,23480|1,23794|3,23794|2,23794|0,23794|1) - different noise, same density? [/color]

02:13:427 - whoa anchors wow

02:48:453 - Think you can add two more notes at 1|5. since there's some beats right there. the 4K noticed that fixed in other way

02:51:438 - hmm? i though there's should be an 1/2 LN. similar density like - 02:50:809 (170809|5,170809|3,170809|0) - (2SNs+1LN for loud beat)ok

03:04:003 -

OPTIONAL: @sora. think you can use 1/6 like shin does? its pretty unique in general. (yep totally optional)

03:07:144 - No 1/2 LN? added

04:12:642 - guess you can add one more note? referring 4K, the fx you follow still remains sorry im not following hithat sound

Guess thats it... Good luck again

Shinzo- wrote:

Rivals_7 wrote:

[Shin's 6K LibertY]

MURICAAAA....' eh...

anyways


wtf 0% vol??

00:20:024 - SVs here... its quite sudden and also quite surprising, would recommend to null the SVs a little bit to 0,5x and 1,5x so it'll much more smoother. But, it'll be better if you start the SV at this point first - 00:19:867 - where the song get fractaled. still like the current SV :v

00:23:480 (23480|0,23480|3,23480|2,23480|1,23794|3,23794|2,23794|0,23794|1) - different noise, same density? [/color]

02:13:427 - whoa anchors wow

02:48:453 - Think you can add two more notes at 1|5. since there's some beats right there. the 4K noticed that fixed in other way

02:51:438 - hmm? i though there's should be an 1/2 LN. similar density like - 02:50:809 (170809|5,170809|3,170809|0) - (2SNs+1LN for loud beat)ok

03:04:003 -

OPTIONAL: @sora. think you can use 1/6 like shin does? its pretty unique in general. (yep totally optional)

03:07:144 - No 1/2 LN? added

04:12:642 - guess you can add one more note? referring 4K, the fx you follow still remains sorry im not following hithat sound

Guess thats it... Good luck again

ok thanks for mod rivals
Shin's 6K puberty liberty ohh nice xD

UPDATED

Ryu Sei wrote:

Modding this. For prequsitions for M4M lol

Only 4K. 1234
Mostly PR and consistency check.

PS: Sometimes my mod can be one-set in one pattern, which means if you want to accept it, you should accept the others on that set. Any set mods is marked with (*) symbol.

[Goddess]
00:03:218 (3218|0,3375|1) - Swap for pitch? It's okay if the next note isn't connected as long as the \relative pitch relevancy\ (not the absolute one) is still logical and acceptable. sorry, because i kinda dont like this to happen http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5432479 feels too monotonous to me
* 00:08:401 (8401|1,8401|3) - Change to 23, then 00:08:558 (8558|2,8715|0) - Swap lane for PR too. also this, because col 4 will be free column, and i want to maintain balance here
00:09:658 (9658|2,9815|3,9972|2,10129|1,10286|0) - Repattern to anything. Seems NG for me. okay
00:10:286 (10286|2,10443|3) - Move 1 lane to L i think this is fine, the jack will represent the presence of the loud sound there
00:45:155 - 00:45:469 - Recommend to add SV since it's marathon. Alternating 1,5 - 0,5 or 1,9 - 0,1 would be good. im not sure about putting an SV here, will keep it first
00:49:631 (49631|2) - Started earlier. Move the start point 1/4 beat later, since on human's ear perception it's still snapped as 1/2. Don't do ever do an accurate-placing if you not mapping keysound maps. In my opinion. but... it's already on the most accurate snap, others will point this in the future if i move this note
01:00:548 - 01:15:312 - It has similar sound like the early intro part, so why there are some missing LNs? Add it for each 1/2. some are intended to follow mostly the obvious sound for flow, but i added some that i miss
* 01:27:720 (87720|1,88035|2) - Move one to L then 01:28:192 (88192|1,88349|3) - Swap lane for PR [/color]
* 01:29:448 (89448|3,89448|2) - Move one note to make jack. It has same sound with the previous note. it actually doesnt have same sound
01:29:762 (89762|3,89815|2,89867|0,89919|1,89972|3,90024|2,90076|0) - I'd want you to recommend alternating trill, but it's up to you. will stick on the current one
01:30:233 (90233|3,90391|1) - Move to 34 for PR it have a 1,2,3,4,3 flow i dont like the 3,4,3 flow there it doesnt suit well to pitch
01:39:815 (99815|0,99867|1,99919|2,99972|3,100024|0,100076|1,100129|2,100129|3) - Same recommendation; alternating trill. Up to you. same
01:41:071 (101071|1,101124|2,101176|3,101228|0,101281|1,101333|2,101385|3,101385|0) - ^ same also, it actually in snap 1/8 so doing a burst suits more
03:06:202 - 03:26:228 - I do recommend slowdown for 0,8-0,9 for song pace. nice
04:36:673 - There are 2 redundant inherited timing point. Delete it, please. okay
05:16:019 (316019|2) - Again, move the starting point of the LN 1/4 beat later. same with before
05:47:040 - Recommend a slowdown, maybe...? maybe not needed anymore

That's all what did I can do. Feel free to reject and don't kudosu if it doesn't helps. >o<)b
BTW, solid patterns on the end awawawa

Ryu Sei wrote:

Though you said it's for the snapping sake, it's clearly heard with the full-speed that the LNs on the beginning starts on 1/2 and mostly 1/2. I don't think it's necessary to do supersnapping unless you mean to map with keysound (not hitsound). It's also uncomfortable, honestly in my opinion.

Harbyter wrote:

gived a fast look on this


[4K]



just saying that Yooh always use 1/12 with his rolls , so the 1/8 burst here are all wrong snapped

had some info, seems like using 1/8 for those 1/12 is allowed now xD ohh owo i didnt know it is on 1/12 lol xD


04:03:689 - why you didn't used the 1/6 here too?_? well okay then

04:23:794 - ^ ok

04:42:642 - i don't think it's good ignoring those even if they are on purpose ok

04:43:898 - ^ ok

genkicho wrote:

FastMod
4K
i think from 00:35:574 - 00:37:930 its better to add 1 single note at every start of the LNs kind off weird for me especially for the LNs so i keep it singles only
00:51:752 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966648 and the same thing like that i will consider this
02:33:218 -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966679 okay, applied but mirrored

tbh i cant mod this... its perfect for me

UPDATED

DixonBlackwing wrote:

hello sora owo
mod here :3

[4K goddess]
00:19:396 - i'm sure the tick should be here instead of 00:19:082 - ? there's an additional sound there. i follow the sounds in here 00:10:286 (10286|0,12799|0,14055|1,15312|0,17825|1,18453|2,19082|3,19710|3,20338|3) that are the same with the intro here 00:00:234 (234|1,2747|3,4003|0,5260|1,7773|3,8401|1,9029|2,9658|2,10286|0)
01:15:469 - not sure, i don't feel a kick here. oopps fixed~
01:32:590 - add tick hs? only added tick for melody it has kick so i made it double
01:37:616 - also missing tick? same sound as 01:36:359 - same
01:41:071 - maybe you can try different type of burst? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337912 okay
01:42:014 - you can add one more LN to give accent to the rising sound and beginning of ln pattern, like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337939 nice i like it
02:03:061 (123061|2,123218|1) - turn these to LN to give emphasis to the 1/2 beast sound? don't know what it is called xd okay
02:04:631 - i was sort of hoping you'd make it jack pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6337989 , bcause: 1. these patterns are supposed to be harder from time to time, but it is in fact easier than 01:43:584 - 2. if you also apply it at ln section at 02:09:815 - , etc, it will allows smoother transition to the chord pattern at 02:13:584 - , which i find a bit sudden when your pattern before is easier. that is what my pattern looks like last time, but i give it a lot of thought to blend the layering in the whole map, i mean is that from the beginning until the end of 1st kiai, i have been mapping 1/2 nonstop that i feel is too boring and so that my pattern here 03:26:307 can blend, because it is like 50% of the map has different style of layering, want to make it balance
02:07:773 - hmm, these have 5LNs, but at 02:12:799 - are 4? D: fixed
02:22:851 (142851|3,143008|1) - i sort of wanting this to be a 1/2 LNs just for a bit twist there.. it also have a quite distinct different sound with 02:22:223 (142223|3,142380|0,142537|1,142694|2) - true.. but if the 1/4 are not there, i will map it in LN, if i map the other 2 it feels like "lacking in feels
03:02:747 - not try to map 1/6? i know you want to focus on the kick there, but surprisingly add 1/6 as a twist fits there xd https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6338260 okay but rearrange on my own
03:34:788 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6338098 try make the 1/6 different from before? bcause they have different PR, but they all same pattern. rearranged a little
04:17:511 (257511|0) - move to col 2? okay
05:47:668 - 05:48:296 - ,etc. not try to map the bell sound ? it will give more fitting ending imo. i prefer to map the fading sound instead, it doesnt feel good for me

rank it already :3 aye~
good luck -w-)/