From Nivrad00's Mania Queue
Awesome song .o.
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[Shin's 6K Liberty]
00:05:574 - this double note looks out of place
01:01:333 - and 01:06:359 - it seems like you left out these notes on purpose because they're quiet, which is fine, but in case it was an accident... you have missing notes here
01:11:857 (71857|0) - think this should be a LN
01:18:768 - this is a pretty pattern ;p;
02:43:192 - could add note for drum
02:51:438 - missing LN
02:58:506 - could add note for snare
03:01:490 - missing LN?
04:29:919 and 04:39:972 - missing LN?
04:50:809 and 04:55:836 - usually i dont point out pitch relevancy, but the LNs in this section would be PERFECTLY pitch relevant if you just moved these to lane 6 ;n;
03:32:432 - suggestion: maybe you should add a note here... I know it's hard to hear, but my ears keep saying this sound should end on the 1/2 snap instead of on the 1/6, which makes the pattern feel wrong. (if you want to apply this suggestion I've listed all the occurrences in the box)
I think one thing that can be improved are the strange sounds at 00:22:380 -, 00:38:872 -, and 00:49:867 - (and repeated throughout the map). The patterns are creative, but I don't think they represent the sounds very well. Also, in the intro I can't figure out why some of the notes are doubles and some are triples... it seems strange because I remember your charts being very consistent in chords
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[4K Goddess]
00:24:343 - my ears suck but this might be a ghost note (maybe)
05:45:783 - it might be a better effect if you deleted this note... to show how all the instruments suddenly stop here
I don't play 4k, but I really love your charting! I like the section that starts at 00:10:286 - where every kick is a 1-2 or 3-4 chord and every snare is a "separated" chord... I haven't seen that very often. Everything is extremely consistent and you gave a lot of thought to pitch relevancy while still making VERY neat and playable patterns. Great map.
I would suggest the same thing I told Shinzo that the pattern at 00:38:872 - doesn't seem to represent the sound very well (two LNs might be better).
Awesome song .o.
1|2|3|4|5|6
[Shin's 6K Liberty]
00:05:574 - this double note looks out of place
01:01:333 - and 01:06:359 - it seems like you left out these notes on purpose because they're quiet, which is fine, but in case it was an accident... you have missing notes here
01:11:857 (71857|0) - think this should be a LN
01:18:768 - this is a pretty pattern ;p;
02:43:192 - could add note for drum
02:51:438 - missing LN
02:58:506 - could add note for snare
03:01:490 - missing LN?
04:29:919 and 04:39:972 - missing LN?
04:50:809 and 04:55:836 - usually i dont point out pitch relevancy, but the LNs in this section would be PERFECTLY pitch relevant if you just moved these to lane 6 ;n;
03:32:432 - suggestion: maybe you should add a note here... I know it's hard to hear, but my ears keep saying this sound should end on the 1/2 snap instead of on the 1/6, which makes the pattern feel wrong. (if you want to apply this suggestion I've listed all the occurrences in the box)
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I like that you subtly added pitch relevancy in this map, for example the lane-6 notes at 01:27:092 -, but still let the patterns vary. Shows you're flexible! I also think it's great that you made the repetitive ending gradually increase in difficulty (i mean just look at the density graph http://puu.sh/nkBrz.png)03:32:432
03:33:689
03:34:946
03:52:537
03:53:794
03:55:050
04:02:590
04:12:642
04:13:898
04:15:155
04:22:694
04:32:747
04:34:003
04:35:260
04:42:799
04:44:055
03:33:689
03:34:946
03:52:537
03:53:794
03:55:050
04:02:590
04:12:642
04:13:898
04:15:155
04:22:694
04:32:747
04:34:003
04:35:260
04:42:799
04:44:055
I think one thing that can be improved are the strange sounds at 00:22:380 -, 00:38:872 -, and 00:49:867 - (and repeated throughout the map). The patterns are creative, but I don't think they represent the sounds very well. Also, in the intro I can't figure out why some of the notes are doubles and some are triples... it seems strange because I remember your charts being very consistent in chords
1|2|3|4
[4K Goddess]
00:24:343 - my ears suck but this might be a ghost note (maybe)
05:45:783 - it might be a better effect if you deleted this note... to show how all the instruments suddenly stop here
I don't play 4k, but I really love your charting! I like the section that starts at 00:10:286 - where every kick is a 1-2 or 3-4 chord and every snare is a "separated" chord... I haven't seen that very often. Everything is extremely consistent and you gave a lot of thought to pitch relevancy while still making VERY neat and playable patterns. Great map.
I would suggest the same thing I told Shinzo that the pattern at 00:38:872 - doesn't seem to represent the sound very well (two LNs might be better).