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[4K Rara]
00:59:291 (59291|2,59291|1,59605|1,59605|3,59919|2,59919|3) - you can make these double at the same column? because they are essentially the same snare sound here. same with other part as well.
01:00:076 - add note to maintain the rythmical consistency with 00:59:448 (59448|0,59762|0) - ? also the same with other part.
01:08:087 - This section, i capture the melody as a "repeated melody", so i thought you can do mini trill with the LN as well, like this one:
http://puu.sh/sPWXr/b42deaaa6e.png01:10:286 (70286|0,70286|1) - instead of doing LN, i think you can map the 1/4 drum instead here, that would make it more consistent here.
01:13:113 (73113|2,73427|3) - shouldn't these have to become LN instead? tbh not too sure either how you measure the timing with double LN and single LN here.
02:04:631 - i saw your reasoning behind the patterning for variation, but then i still think you can make the layering scheme the same with the one at 02:09:658 - , i mean, the interval transition between this pattern and those pattern are too close, i feel it will be too sudden you change the type of layering that fast even if you want to blend many different pattern type.
04:05:260 (245260|2,245574|3,245888|2) - make these notes at column 1, 3 and 4? will be much more balance here.
04:51:516 - 04:51:673 - i still sad that the 1/4 didn't get mapped D: , even though it's the middle of dense chord, i still think it's worth it as the 1/4 is loud enough here, and this is essentially the ending part too.
04:56:464 - this too, and you can reduce the triple at 04:56:621 - to be consistent with 04:51:595 -
05:04:317 - since this is the last jumptrill i think you can do some sort of 14-23 for "final challenge" here.
[6K Zozo]
00:59:605 - 00:59:919 - masing2 tambah 1 note biar konsisten ama snare di 00:59:291 -
01:08:872 (68872|3) - pindah ke col 6? biar lebih enak ama ga ngeshield note ini D:
01:10:286 (70286|4) - ampir sama kyk diff 4K nya, lbih baik dimap drumnya biar konsisten ama dapet penekanan di 1/4 drumnya
01:15:783 - patterning LN ini lbih baik diganti columnnya biar beda ama 01:15:155 (75155|3,75155|0,75312|4,75312|1,75469|0,75469|3,75469|2,75626|1,75626|4) - karena transisi dari instrumen melodiny udah beda disini, coba pindah 01:15:783 (75783|0,75783|3) - ke col 3 dan 6, lalu pindah note 01:15:940 (75940|2) - ke column 1.
01:23:165 (83165|1,83794|3) - patterning LN ini ga dibuat sama ja kayak yang di 01:21:909 (81909|5,82537|0) - ? kalau mau, panjangin 01:23:165 (83165|1) - ampe 01:24:422 - , lalu note di 01:24:422 (84422|1) - pindah ke col.1
01:40:129 - 01:41:385 - menurutku prlu ditambah 1 note lgi, mngkin sngaja dibkin lbh simpel krna 1/6 nya.. tapi di 01:30:076 - juga sbnrnya pake 2 note (1 LN + 1 note).
02:59:919 - add note buat cymbal?
03:06:202 (186202|4) - ubah jadi LN? end LN nya di 03:07:459 -
03:43:820 - masih ada drum disini.
03:46:097 - add note lgi buat crash snareny?
04:23:480 - knp ini double LN? klo buat emphasis cymbal harusnya double LN nya di 04:24:108 -
05:25:679 - 05:25:993 - 05:26:307 - snare sengaja double? bkn triple?
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