Hiya there! Another Shugo Chara song ... this was one of my favourite EDs in that show, so lucky you, you got bumped to the top of the list!
GeneralYou don't need .osb do you? Delete it and full submit
You have TWO .avi files? Delete the one you're not using
BG is a SS from the video? Maybe use one of these pictures instead? (WARNING: big pictures D:)
My baby00:12:763 (2, 3, 4) - I think it would sound better as clap, whistle (or nothing), clap
00:18:296 (1) - Get rid of finish at the end of the slider
00:18:588 (2, 3) - Switch their hitsounds
00:21:209 (1) - Switch hitsounds, so finish is at the end and clap is on beginning
00:22:665 (3) - Change finish to whistle (otherwise too much IMO)
00:38:685 (2) - Use clap instead of finish?
00:54:122 - Kiai time should start here
01:02:277 (3) - Finish instead of whistle, I think it sounds better
01:03:422 - Spacing changes here? Personally I think this one is better for an easy, but ... well, it's too late to change, huh? :S
01:04:025 (2, 3) - Change finishes to whistle, clap
01:12:034 (6) - End slider here instead
My kidUnfinished hitsounds?
00:14:219 (6) - Add clap
00:14:801 (2, 3) - Use clap for both end and beginning. Add finish on (4)
00:20:335 (6, 7) - Finish on (6), maybe change (7) to whistle?
00:21:500 (1, 6 - 10) - Hitsounds: Finish, whistle, clap, clap, clap, clap (beginning), finish (end)
00:27:617 (1) - Un new combo, new combo at (4) instead (tall white tick). Add clap at (1, 3)?
00:36:355 (3, 4) - Add clap (end of (4) only). Maybe finish at the end of (4)? You choose which one you like better haha
00:38:394 (2, 3, 5, 6) - Whistle, clap, finish, finish? Maybe two clap would sound good as well (for 5, 6). Or clap, finish ...
00:54:122 - Start Kiai time here
01:00:238 (1, 3, 6) - Add clap here
01:03:442 (1) - Finish
01:07:811 (1, 2) - Clap. Add on (1, 3) of next combo as well
01:12:763 (1, 3, 5, 6) - Whistle everything but (6), use finish
My adultUgh slider velocity X_X lol
00:48:733 (2) - Should be one grid right. Same with (1) of next combo and (2) of blue combo
00:57:034 (2, 3) - Move one grid down
01:00:238 - Add clap to all odd numbers in this combo. Except maybe (7) should be whistle? Your call
01:08:102 (2, 4, 6) - Use clap, clap, finish
01:11:597 (5, 6) - Ehmm, I think you should only use one hitsound per beat ... maybe use clap, finish?
roflninja's my elderWhy different combo colours from the rest of the difficulties? o_O They should be the same ...
Timing is definitely off here ... use same offset as all the others (current is 121, use 530?)
Please fix this ... I can't mod this ... T_T
Hmm, pretty good for your first map! Call me back when you've fixed everything, I'd like to star it ^_^