Garven wrote:

[General]
[Elder]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time.
OD 10? Are you serious? Bring that down at least 2.
The hit sounds are really quiet compared to the song. It's hard to hear when your beats are not on the right spot. Turn them up and give your difficulty a listen to see if you have things placed on the right beat. There are a lot of these problems in this difficulty.
Give it a good combing over. It's too difficult to play this diff and give good feedback about the design with the rhythm problems. Sorry.

Give me a call back for a re-mod after a few other mods.

Garven wrote:

[General]
The video looks really bad. Maybe try to get a little higher quality out of it?
The black combo color is hard to see against the video. Try a lighter color/shade. Actually, most of the colors are kind of bad in that regard. (workin on it)

[babby]
Uh, up OD by 2 or 3 please. HP drain by at least one.(Stays, so that beginners can play)
I wouldn't recommend you start notes on red ticks on a song like this, and the style of difficulty you have set up. It's hard to feel when they're going to be - especially with such a low OD.
00:45:266 (3,4) - Spacing
00:49:053 (1) - End this spinner at 00:52:839.
00:53:713 - Add a note.
01:12:354 (1,2) - Turn these into a slider.
01:14:684 (4,5) - ^
01:17:014 (1,2,3) - A repeating slider. Also, try not to overlap with that giant slider right afterward, if possible.(Stays)

[Kiddo]
The hit sounds aren't very good at all. :/ (I don't use em please specify where)
00:12:499 (4,5) - Try positioning these so they don't overlap each other as much.
00:36:383 (4) - End this slider at 00:37:111.
00:39:732 (5) - Spacing
00:45:266 (5) - Position this so it's not covering up the slider after it.
00:49:053 (1,1,1) - These need to end on the white tick, not the red tick.
01:10:897 (1) - This spinner is kind of short, and doesn't really fit the music well. I'd map through it. (Stays)
01:14:684 (6) - Horizontal flip this.
01:23:421 (1) - Make this symmetrical, please.

[Adult]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time. (Stays)
00:19:053 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick, then move the next slider over one tick. Sounds much better.
00:22:256 (7,1) - Spacing.
00:44:684 (3) - Extend the end of this slider to the white tick.
00:46:868 (1) - Spacing, though not that important on this one.
00:53:713 (1,2,3) - Keep the spacing the same amongst these three. (It...is? )
01:09:150 (1) - Make this go with the lyrics instead. It feels much better that way. (It...is? )

[Elder]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time.
OD 10? Are you serious? Bring that down at least 2.
The hit sounds are really quiet compared to the song. It's hard to hear when your beats are not on the right spot. Turn them up and give your difficulty a listen to see if you have things placed on the right beat. There are a lot of these problems in this difficulty.
Give it a good combing over. It's too difficult to play this diff and give good feedback about the design with the rhythm problems. Sorry.

Give me a call back for a re-mod after a few other mods.

roflninja wrote:

You know what, johnsage, just remove my difficulty

I'm tiered, sick, got a exam, and can't deal with this

I give up. Thanks

animask wrote:

Here it is~

arien666 wrote:

Okay :3
I'll add this song on 'Modding list' ;_;
Umm...

If possible, I'll get HQ video from anime ;_;
Also, mp3 file :3...

Keep going ;_;



ps. If possible, don't use the style of Video that I had seen ;_;
It seems like blur thing outside...

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, sorry for the long wait.
Here comes my mod~

[Overall]
... Offset is wrong. Also, what are you mapping to? It's not even like you are following the music. It just seems like you are putting random notes on the timeline and going on with it.
Overuse of hitsounds. Bah. (Plz Specify where)
Why are you mapping BEFORE the song even starts?

[My Baby]
... Everything seems okay... but the wrong offset makes it hard to make sure.
00:45:703 (4) - End two ticks earlier

[My Kid]
I see more of an attempt to map with the music here, but now I'm pretty sure your timings are wrong.
Also, where's your breaktime in this difficulty?
01:23:421 (1) - Pointless. One hit object after a break and the end of the beatmap. Hate it. (Srry but I'm keeping that. Its your personal preference to not have it)

[My Adult]
This difficulty is pretty bad... It's not fun, and it definitely doesn't feel like a Hard or Insane map. (Remember there are others that may not be as skilled a player)
00:00:121 - What's up with these kinds of sliders in the beginning of the map. They sound horrible by being completely off. What's worse is that the song doesn't even START until 00:00:557, so there's a point where there's no music and the slider is going.
There's empty spots in your beatmap, such as 00:29:829; which makes this difficulty boring.

[animask's boi]
This difficulty has potential. It's just that the timing is off.
The volume is ear rape, please turn down the volume on this.

I'm not gonna star this. Things just seem quite wrong with this mapset.
You need a timing check, some overall improvements on beat placements on your maps, and your difficulties need to flow with the song.

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) delete the .osb file and full submission
2) the size of your BG is 1228 x 767, try to use a 1024 x 768 or 800 x 600 instead ?
3) the timing is wrong, may be you should try this viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795 .
4) add " animask " to tag on all diff
5) the BPM and offset should be the same on all difficulties, but you should wait for the right one first.
6) seems the countdown is not suitable for this song, consider to disable it on [My Kid] and [My adult] ?
7) it's hard to mod a song with wrong timing, so may be PM me after the timing is fixed.

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) using finish and clap too often is not a good hitsound pattern (e.g. 00:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) of [My Kid] )
2) it is not good-looking when one hitobject is covered by others (e.g. 01:03:908 01:02:283 (6,1,2,3) of [My Kid] )
3) may be turn down the volume ?
4) 00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 of [My Kid]) (Kiai time is going to stay where it is)
5) 01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 [My Kid]) (^)

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) remove the finish at the 2 reverse ?
01:13:643 add a note here?
01:14:809 ^

[My kid]
abuse of clap
00:36:358 (3,4,1) spacing
00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 )
01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 )

[My Adult]
using 3 seconds in audio lead-in is better ?
00:27:183 (5) add 1 more reverse and delete 00:27:620 (1) ?
00:42:184 (1,2) delete this 2sliders and add a break here?
00:46:116 (5) these finish is too sudden and toooo loud, may be turn down the volume ?

[animak's Boi]
This diff is fine, but see point number 3 to 5 in [General] to make it better.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's a recheck~

[Overall]
I see improvement~
The correct BPM is 206 flat.
Why do you have storyboard elements in your beatmap? Are you trying to storyboard? As of right now, the storyboard is non-existant and you haven't even properly storyboarded it. If you are not going to storyboard, please delete the .osb and full submit. The .osb is in your song folder for your beatmap. (Sorry im new to this and i thought i needed to make my own section pass/fail so i added those they were probly what was keeping the SB)

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) - This feels like it doesn't belong. It's not quite following the music.

[My Kid]
00:12:909 - (4,5) - This feels so cramped.(Blame distance snap)
00:54:127 (1) - I hate how this is. You could map this better, replace it with something else.
00:52:962 (x) - Add a note here with a finish hitsound?
00:53:253 (x) - ^
01:19:760 (9) - You could replace nine with a spinner ending at 01:23:402
01:23:839 (1) - End this one tick earlier on the timeline (red tick)

[My Adult]
00:00:530 (1) - I don't understand how these sliders fix into the song. They sound off. All of those sliders like this one before the first spinner.(shortened so it fit better)
A bit boring for an insane difficulty but it's okay. (Its only meant to be hard~)

[animask's boi]
Great~

Almost there, just fix the storyboarded things by getting rid of the .osb and fix the BPM and you will get your star~

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
Add arien666 to all the other diffs because he made a difficulty.
My Baby, and My Kid have a different lead-in time
I think Kiai should end here: 01:12:617
Combo Colors are kind of darkish and the approach circles blend with the background

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[My Baby]
Fine

[My Kid]
Umm got thrown off a bit but i think it's fine.

[My Adult]
00:43:345 (9) - I thought the slider just hadnt dissapeared instead of thinking this note was a slider, i suggest trying to give a hint that this note is a slider.
01:08:539 (3,4,5,6) - I recommend you stack all theese instead of doing left/right
01:15:966 (1,2) - Dont hide circles below sliders please =(

[animask's Boi]
Fine

[aru's Taiko]
Fine

Ok, just some color change and a few minor stuff, so +Star

• • 00:16:549 (1) - Start this slider 1/1 later and add here a circle
  • 00:20:627 (x) - Add a circle

• • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • 00:30:238 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:50:627 (1,1) - Remove "New combo"

• • 00:27:180 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:30:238 (x) - ^

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • 00:53:253 (x) - Add a circle

Daerren wrote:

Goku Modding!

[My Baby]:
00:39:267 (3): You could set the middle point in the middle between the beginning and end to even it out.
01:22:083 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Kid]:
00:40:432 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Adult]:
00:08:685 (2): This could look neater.
00:36:209 (4): spacing unless this is a jump. (new combo maybe, too)

[aru's My Dons]:
everything looks alright.

[animask's boi]:
00:09:560 (9): perhaps moving it down would make it even.
00:41:310 (5): new combo maybe?

have a star~

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

When the map has custom diff names like this one, please explain in your main post what each diff is supposed to be (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane).

My Baby:
This feels like a Normal to me. I will mod it as if it were a Normal. (What Normal is 1 1/2 stars?)
00:48:588 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) left: there are 14 grids between (1) and (2) but only 13 between (2) and (3).
00:54:122 - Make the kiai time start here.
00:54:704 (2,3,4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down.
01:18:879 (4) - Too close to previous object. The time distance between (3) and (4) is larger than between (2) and (3), yet the space distance is the same.

My Kid:
I take it this is a Hard diff.
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18389
00:14:219 (6,1) - Use the shift key to space those properly (then move (2,3,4) one grid left): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18390
00:21:937 (2) - Move one grid left.
00:35:190 (1) - This one's hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it away from the center of the screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18392 (You get fair warning during the spinner)
00:37:957 (1) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) down and one right. Don't forget to re-space the next objects.
00:46:112 (1,2) - Those two sliders overlap. You should consider changing their shape to avoid that. It's playable but it doesn't look nice.
01:05:772 (5) - Try finding a cuter shape for this slider ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18393 (use shift for the last tick)

My Adult:
I'll mod it as a Insane diff.
00:08:685 (2) - Now this is just ugly.
00:55:287 (1,2) - Stack those properly.

Animask's Boi:
00:11:307 (1) - Same remark as for My Kid 00:35:190 (Again fair warning during the spinner)

aru's my Dons:
Nice diff.

ThunderTopaz wrote:

ok, data from what the notepad has besides those crazy random numbers [if I need to add them then I will]

osu file format v7

[General]
AudioFilename: Shugo_Chara_Doki_-_My_Boy_TV_Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54127
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9150
DistanceSpacing: 0.800000011920929
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:My Boy (TV Size)
Artist:Buono!
Creator:johnsage92
Version:ThunderTopaz-Brand Cat Nip
Source:Shugo Chara Doki
Tags:Yoru Ran Miki Su animask arien666

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"yoru.jpg"
Video,0,"My boy nosound.avi"
//Break Periods
2,40487,41280
2,43253,43901
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
530,291.26213592233,4,2,0,70,1,0
53713,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
84413,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,0,255

SPOILER

Combo1 : 225,226,227
Combo2 : 130,51,200
Combo3 : 46,87,194

wmfchris wrote:

[taiko diff]
~If possible don't make big circle spam. Suggestion: rrR rrR bbB (normal normal finish, etc)
NICE tryyyy pink star for this : >

adron zhero wrote:

[*]Change?
[>]Change!

My Dons:
> This is uberly stupid. If this is a taiko map, make it taiko. If not, map it properly.

Garven wrote:

[aru's My Dons]
00:45:680 (3) - I was expecting a K here. Due to chain, fixed :3
Nice to see a Muzukashii instead of the plethora of Onis.

adron zhero wrote:

Rename "aru's My Dons" to "aru's my Dons Taiko".

adron zhero wrote:

...wha-?

In the Japanese version, subtitles under the symbols give the pronunciation of the sounds

asforoneday wrote:

the BG is a stretched resolution & is lq... why not cut the picture out of this image and correct it? or you could use this, or a picture of Buono themselves which looks more like a regular size: here

Garven wrote:

[aru's My Dons]
00:54:127 (2,3,1,2,1) - Maybe ddkdd?
00:55:292 (1,1,2,3,1) - Maybe dkddd?
01:06:507 (1,1) - dk?

deepsea wrote:

aru's My Dons / animask's boi
The timing is different from other 3, coincident them.

Garven wrote:

There's differences in the letterboxing option, but meh. No map has a break in it anyway.

:U