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Daerren
Goku Modding!

[My Baby]:
00:39:267 (3): You could set the middle point in the middle between the beginning and end to even it out.
01:22:083 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Kid]:
00:40:432 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Adult]:
00:08:685 (2): This could look neater.
00:36:209 (4): spacing unless this is a jump. (new combo maybe, too)

[aru's My Dons]:
everything looks alright.

[animask's boi]:
00:09:560 (9): perhaps moving it down would make it even.
00:41:310 (5): new combo maybe?

have a star~
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

When the map has custom diff names like this one, please explain in your main post what each diff is supposed to be (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane).

My Baby:
This feels like a Normal to me. I will mod it as if it were a Normal.
00:48:588 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) left: there are 14 grids between (1) and (2) but only 13 between (2) and (3).
00:54:122 - Make the kiai time start here.
00:54:704 (2,3,4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down.

01:18:879 (4) - Too close to previous object. The time distance between (3) and (4) is larger than between (2) and (3), yet the space distance is the same.

My Kid:
I take it this is a Hard diff.
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18389
00:14:219 (6,1) - Use the shift key to space those properly (then move (2,3,4) one grid left): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18390
00:21:937 (2) - Move one grid left.

00:35:190 (1) - This one's hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it away from the center of the screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18392
00:37:957 (1) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) down and one right. Don't forget to re-space the next objects.
00:46:112 (1,2) - Those two sliders overlap. You should consider changing their shape to avoid that. It's playable but it doesn't look nice.
01:05:772 (5) - Try finding a cuter shape for this slider ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18393 (use shift for the last tick)

My Adult:
I'll mod it as a Insane diff.
00:08:685 (2) - Now this is just ugly.
00:55:287 (1,2) - Stack those properly.


Animask's Boi:
00:11:307 (1) - Same remark as for My Kid 00:35:190

aru's my Dons:
Nice diff.
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

Daerren wrote:

Goku Modding!

[My Baby]:
00:39:267 (3): You could set the middle point in the middle between the beginning and end to even it out.
01:22:083 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Kid]:
00:40:432 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Adult]:
00:08:685 (2): This could look neater.
00:36:209 (4): spacing unless this is a jump. (new combo maybe, too)

[aru's My Dons]:
everything looks alright.

[animask's boi]:
00:09:560 (9): perhaps moving it down would make it even.
00:41:310 (5): new combo maybe?

have a star~
Done and Thanks!

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

When the map has custom diff names like this one, please explain in your main post what each diff is supposed to be (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane).

My Baby:
This feels like a Normal to me. I will mod it as if it were a Normal. (What Normal is 1 1/2 stars?)
00:48:588 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) left: there are 14 grids between (1) and (2) but only 13 between (2) and (3).
00:54:122 - Make the kiai time start here.
00:54:704 (2,3,4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down.

01:18:879 (4) - Too close to previous object. The time distance between (3) and (4) is larger than between (2) and (3), yet the space distance is the same.

My Kid:
I take it this is a Hard diff.
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18389
00:14:219 (6,1) - Use the shift key to space those properly (then move (2,3,4) one grid left): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18390
00:21:937 (2) - Move one grid left.

00:35:190 (1) - This one's hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it away from the center of the screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18392 (You get fair warning during the spinner)
00:37:957 (1) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) down and one right. Don't forget to re-space the next objects.
00:46:112 (1,2) - Those two sliders overlap. You should consider changing their shape to avoid that. It's playable but it doesn't look nice.
01:05:772 (5) - Try finding a cuter shape for this slider ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18393 (use shift for the last tick)

My Adult:
I'll mod it as a Insane diff.
00:08:685 (2) - Now this is just ugly.
00:55:287 (1,2) - Stack those properly.


Animask's Boi:
00:11:307 (1) - Same remark as for My Kid 00:35:190 (Again fair warning during the spinner)

aru's my Dons:
Nice diff.
I appreciate the mod but some of your suggestions or "must fix errors" don't seem all the urgent. I've fixed the 1 in [My Baby] but the one in [My Kid] is staying.
aRiskOfRain
My Adult;

01:02:277 (7,8) - Spacing.
fartownik
The BPM is other in Taiko diff and animask's gues diff. Change to 206 in both.

You should start kiai section on 00:54:127 instead of 00:53:763 on all diffs. It's the chorus start, so I think it's appropiate.

Using a snap from the video as the background is not good idea. Can't you find better picture?

[My Baby]


01:23:830 (1) - Ugly slider. Make it prettier.


[My Kid]

00:17:568 (4) - Add one repeat.
00:54:122 - Start kiai section here.
00:54:122 - End - And again - where are the hitsounds?
01:04:607 (3) - Flip horizontally and adjust spacing so it doesn't overlap (4).


[My Adult]

00:27:034 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:36:646 (6,1) - ^ (if it's a jump, it's not intuitive so fix this)
00:37:811 (6,1) - ^
00:40:287 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:49:462 (1,2) - Add a slider like this 00:50:627 (1) instead of these notes.
00:54:267 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:54:122 - End - Where are the hitsounds?! I heard 2, maybe 3 claps and some finishes, where's more?
01:25:578 (4,5) - Spacing.


[animask]

00:56:894 (4,5,6) - Spacing.
00:59:225 (3,4) - I quite don't agree with this. This is not an intuitive jump. Fix it.
01:01:118 (4,5,6,7,8) - I wonder why this pattern have other spacing value than the value used in the whole map.
01:24:348 - Delete this timing section, because if you hit the note too late, it makes soft-type hitsound which is not expected here (?).

This is a solid diff, I like it.

+star
Mashley
My Baby
01:23:830 (5) - New combooo

My Kid
Fine

My Adult
Most of the map has no hitsounds. Add some!

Animask's Boi
00:56:894 (4,5,6) - Fix up that spacing
01:01:846 (5,6,7,8) - I dunno why, but these reverse stacks seem really unnatural...
01:22:236 - add a note here to go with the beat
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
added some hitsounds but they may not be that great.
DJPop
~My Baby~
00:49:462 (1) - add hitfinish

~My Kid~
00:15:675 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:49:462 (1,2,3) - add hitfinish at start of sliders
00:53:248 (2) - add hitfinish

~My Adult~
00:08:685 (2) - make it more symmetrical
00:09:850 (1) - add hitfinish
00:33:151 (1) - ^

~animask's Boi~
00:00:530 (1) - add hitfinish
00:09:705 (1) - start on white tick
01:22:819 (3) - new combo
01:23:402 (5) - new combo (optional)


+Star
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Thank you very much! I'm excited that all your guys' hard work is going to get payed off soon
ThunderTopaz
though to me the "Shugo Chara : Doki Doki" season made me lose my interest of the show, this ending theme has always been my favorite!...... wait.... was it even from that season or was it the season before that? Darn, can't remember. Ohh well.... off to play the song a couple 100 times.
I may make a mode for it later if it will let me sense I have two on pending.
arien666
For next-modders:
About "Why did not you add 'arien666' tag?",
I don't wanna add 'arien666' on guest diff but 'arken1015'...
Just my hope ;_;



Also, I won't edit my diff name into [ari's My Dons] ;_;
ThunderTopaz
ok, data from what the notepad has besides those crazy random numbers [if I need to add them then I will]

osu file format v7

[General]
AudioFilename: Shugo_Chara_Doki_-_My_Boy_TV_Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54127
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9150
DistanceSpacing: 0.800000011920929
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:My Boy (TV Size)
Artist:Buono!
Creator:johnsage92
Version:ThunderTopaz-Brand Cat Nip
Source:Shugo Chara Doki
Tags:Yoru Ran Miki Su animask arken1015

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"yoru.jpg"
Video,0,"My boy nosound.avi"
//Break Periods
2,40487,41280
2,43253,43901
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
530,291.26213592233,4,2,0,70,1,0
53713,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
84413,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,0,255
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

ThunderTopaz wrote:

ok, data from what the notepad has besides those crazy random numbers [if I need to add them then I will]

osu file format v7

[General]
AudioFilename: Shugo_Chara_Doki_-_My_Boy_TV_Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54127
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9150
DistanceSpacing: 0.800000011920929
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:My Boy (TV Size)
Artist:Buono!
Creator:johnsage92
Version:ThunderTopaz-Brand Cat Nip
Source:Shugo Chara Doki
Tags:Yoru Ran Miki Su animask arken1015

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"yoru.jpg"
Video,0,"My boy nosound.avi"
//Break Periods
2,40487,41280
2,43253,43901
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
530,291.26213592233,4,2,0,70,1,0
53713,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
84413,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,0,255
PMed with explanations
EvianBubble
Hiya there! Another Shugo Chara song ... this was one of my favourite EDs in that show, so lucky you, you got bumped to the top of the list! :P

General
You don't need .osb do you? Delete it and full submit
You have TWO .avi files? Delete the one you're not using
BG is a SS from the video? Maybe use one of these pictures instead? (WARNING: big pictures D:)
SPOILER


These two are the same but the bottom one has a design on the left which I like




My baby
00:12:763 (2, 3, 4) - I think it would sound better as clap, whistle (or nothing), clap
00:18:296 (1) - Get rid of finish at the end of the slider
00:18:588 (2, 3) - Switch their hitsounds
00:21:209 (1) - Switch hitsounds, so finish is at the end and clap is on beginning
00:22:665 (3) - Change finish to whistle (otherwise too much IMO)
00:38:685 (2) - Use clap instead of finish?
00:54:122 - Kiai time should start here
01:02:277 (3) - Finish instead of whistle, I think it sounds better
01:03:422 - Spacing changes here? Personally I think this one is better for an easy, but ... well, it's too late to change, huh? :S
01:04:025 (2, 3) - Change finishes to whistle, clap
01:12:034 (6) - End slider here instead

My kid
Unfinished hitsounds?
00:14:219 (6) - Add clap
00:14:801 (2, 3) - Use clap for both end and beginning. Add finish on (4)
00:20:335 (6, 7) - Finish on (6), maybe change (7) to whistle?
00:21:500 (1, 6 - 10) - Hitsounds: Finish, whistle, clap, clap, clap, clap (beginning), finish (end)
00:27:617 (1) - Un new combo, new combo at (4) instead (tall white tick). Add clap at (1, 3)?
00:36:355 (3, 4) - Add clap (end of (4) only). Maybe finish at the end of (4)? You choose which one you like better haha
00:38:394 (2, 3, 5, 6) - Whistle, clap, finish, finish? Maybe two clap would sound good as well (for 5, 6). Or clap, finish ...
00:54:122 - Start Kiai time here
01:00:238 (1, 3, 6) - Add clap here
01:03:442 (1) - Finish
01:07:811 (1, 2) - Clap. Add on (1, 3) of next combo as well
01:12:763 (1, 3, 5, 6) - Whistle everything but (6), use finish

My adult
Ugh slider velocity X_X lol
00:48:733 (2) - Should be one grid right. Same with (1) of next combo and (2) of blue combo
00:57:034 (2, 3) - Move one grid down
01:00:238 - Add clap to all odd numbers in this combo. Except maybe (7) should be whistle? Your call
01:08:102 (2, 4, 6) - Use clap, clap, finish
01:11:597 (5, 6) - Ehmm, I think you should only use one hitsound per beat ... maybe use clap, finish?

roflninja's my elder
Why different combo colours from the rest of the difficulties? o_O They should be the same ...
Timing is definitely off here ... use same offset as all the others (current is 121, use 530?)
Please fix this ... I can't mod this ... T_T

Hmm, pretty good for your first map! Call me back when you've fixed everything, I'd like to star it ^_^
EvianBubble
Hello there, I'm back XD
You're using the new background! Lols

My baby
00:54:122 - Kiai time should start here D<
Other than that, good!

My kid
00:54:122 - START KIAI HERE RAWR D<

Can't find anything else except that, so just fix where Kiai starts and it should be all good

+1 star! :D
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
aweshum~ :)
arien666
Some changed from my diff orz

1. Kiai edited [Same as other diffs]
2. Reduced note nums
3. else edits :3

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Dons].osu

;_;
I hope this song will be ranked :3
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- Oh shi- This song is awesome ~ I fell in love with it :3 !!
- Ehhh...try this BG ??
- Use this colors for all diff ??
Combo1 : 225,226,227
Combo2 : 130,51,200
Combo3 : 46,87,194

My baby;
- 01:02:714 >> you can end kiai time here
- 01:03:442 >> then start a new kiai time here
- 01:12:034 >> that ends here
- 01:23:830 >> kiai time that starts here and ends at 01:24:413 (the slider placed here should end at the same time as kiai time)
- Try to remap so parts, because you use to many linear sliders, which make things boring ~
- This is the easiest diff, so circle size the largest ??

My kid;
- If posible do the same with the kiai time as My Baby ??
- 00:23:830 >> new combo
- 00:43:345 >> she's whispering "shitteru" so is natural to lower the sounds at this part, yes ??
- 01:23:830 >> end slider at 01:24:413
- Try to remap so parts, because you use to many linear sliders, which make things boring ~

My adult;
- If posible do the same with the kiai time as My Baby ??
- 00:43:054 >> she's whispering "shitteru" so is natural to lower the sounds at this part, yes ??
- Try to remap so parts, because you use to many linear sliders, which make things boring ~

aru's My dons;
- Can't really mod taiko, but sounds awesome :3

animask's Boi;
- - If posible do the same with the kiai time as My Baby ?? If you don't want to, them consider checking your current kiai time, it doesn't end or start on a note :3

* Star :3

Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Thanks~ Although i didn't use your BG and combo colors the rest of it was very helpful
Semi_Semi
nicee
Semi_Semi
star ~

nice song
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
nice double post ;)

Thnx for the star tho
Mellodia
Great map ^^
Star and good luck with getting it ranked :)
La Cataline
seems good, although I have no idea which one is normal, hard, insane etc.

get your star.

PS: be careful, you've posted a wrong link in my queue...
La Cataline
*forgot to give a star in my first post. bad me, talking about being careful :D*
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Well i think difficulty is rather simple to figure out if you use common sense. Babies = simple minded simple notes
and goes up from there. I'll post it on the next mod if i get one.
wmfchris
[taiko diff]
~If possible don't make big circle spam. Suggestion: rrR rrR bbB (normal normal finish, etc)
NICE tryyyy pink star for this : >

[animask's Boi]
1:01:700 (4,5,6,7,8) spacing?
1:24:275 (2) finish?

[My Adult]
0:37:811 spacing of (6,1) different from (2,3,4,5)
0:47:714 (4) right 1 grid
many different spacing, need re-snap by grid level 3
Lanttu
[My Adult]
There's some weird snap divisor changes here, is it really necessary?
00:00:530 (1) - Third square one grid right and fourth square one grid left
00:02:860 (1) - 3rd ■ one grid left and 4th ■ one grid right
00:05:190 (1) - 3rd ■ one grid right and 4th ■ one grid left
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe move this whole combo one grid right? it Would be centered then, lol
00:16:549 (1) - I think this slider would be better if it ended at 00:16:840 and then had a reverse arrow. And then of course you'd have to move it .
00:30:238 (1) - If this has to be so close to 00:28:782 (1,2) despite the distance snap, why not just move it to same spot as those 1 ans 2?
00:49:898 (x) - Add note?
00:50:335 (x) - Add note?
(00:50:627 (1,2) - if you do not add those two notes, at least flip these horisontal.)


Some hitsound stuff to My Adult~
[/b]
Most of these are only suggestions, do whatever you like.
I also think normal hitsounds would be better to this song, like in animask's diff.

00:00:675 (1) - Add whistle to every second reverse arrow.
00:02:860 (1) - ^
00:05:190 (1) - ^
00:07:520 (1) - Please do not use many finish sounds at the same time, try to leave at least one beat between the finishes. ;_; Use finish only at the first note. Then whistle to second and last notes.
00:08:685 (2) - Maybe finish at the beginning.
00:12:180 (2,7) - Clap on 2 and beginning of 7, clap off from the end of 7.
00:14:510 (3) - Clap
00:15:384 (7) - Clap at end
(00:16:549 (1) - If you did the reverse arrow thing I mentioned before, then clap at the reverse arrow. Otherwise ignore this. XD)
00:17:277 (2) - Maybe whistle in stead of a finish.
00:18:005 (4) - Clap
00:19:170 (1) - ^
00:19:462 (2,3) - I dun't like this finish spam. ): Use the finish sound only at the end of both sliders.
00:20:335 (4) - Maybe fnish instead of a whistle.
00:21:209 (1) - Whistle
00:21:500 (2) - Clap
00:22:665 (7) - I dun't like this clap spam. ): Maybe clap at the first one and two middle ones whistle.
00:23:830 (2) - Clap
00:24:122 (3,4,5,6) - I think finish would be better on 4 and 6 instead of 3 and 5.
00:25:869 (1) - Clap at the end
00:26:889 (3,4) - Clap off
00:27:326 (5) - Clap on first
00:28:491 (8) - Clap
00:28:782 (1,3) - Clap off
00:29:656 (5) - finish
00:30:821 (2,4) - Again finish spam that hurts my ears. ;_; Take some of them off

00:35:481 (2) - Finish
00:54:122 (1) - ^
00:55:287 (1) - Middle clap away.
00:56:452 (1) - Every second clap away.
00:58:782 (2) - Finish
00:59:219 (3,4) - Clap away from the beginning of both.
01:03:442 (1) - Finish

.... This is going to take forever if I keep on koing like this. So yeah with the claps, try to use them on every first beat, they sound bit random here and there now. Also try to use other hitsounds too more contolled way. Animask's diff has good use of hitsounds, try to get ideas from that also. :3

[My Kid]
00:09:850 (1) - Move the last square one grid down and then move the whole slider one grid right.
00:38:394 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing, move these all one grid down.
00:45:675 (5,1) - Spacing, these two one grid right.
00:54:704 (2) - Spacing, one grid down
00:56:452 (6) - I don't like how this overlaps 3, maybe flip it horisontaly and move to the other side of 4 and 5, forming a triangle?
01:02:277 (6) - five grids up and 4 grids left? Then fix the spacing of (7) also.
01:09:559 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this combo one grid right.
01:16:549 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, this combo one grid right.
01:18:879 (6,7,8) - New combo on (6) and this combo one grid down.
Try to do something to the hitsounds, too, like in other diffs.

[My Baby]
00:26:597 (2) - Flip this little slider horisontaly so it doesn't overlap with (3)
00:29:656 (2,3,4) - Any reason for this little one grid spacing change?
00:47:423 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:277 (3) - Finish to whole slider
01:03:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Any reason to this spacing change?
01:09:850 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:15:093 (4) - Spacng, one grid up and left.
01:15:966 (5) - One grid up, and them maybe this slider curve more and move the end note lower so you don't have to move the next (1)?
01:18:879 (4) - I kind of would prefer the spinner like in [My Kid] over this slider.
Try to do something to the hitsounds, too, like in other diffs.

[Animask's]
00:23:105 (x) - I think note would be nice here.
00:48:301 (6) - New combo.
01:23:111 (4,5) - W-why not reverse these two, I find this spacing pretty weird.

Nice work, star. ^^/
arien666

wmfchris wrote:

[taiko diff]
~If possible don't make big circle spam. Suggestion: rrR rrR bbB (normal normal finish, etc)
NICE tryyyy pink star for this : >
Fixed :3

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Dons].osu
AdRon Zh3Ro
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

My Kid:
>1:17:850(5)Spacing

My Adult:
>28:345(8)Spacing
*54:850(5) Dat spacing D:

My Dons:
> This is uberly stupid. If this is a taiko map, make it taiko. If not, map it properly.

Boi:
:/
AndreasHD
ok, I`ll give you some few tips that might help a little.
Just remember, this is only my opinion ;)

My Baby:
00:20:627 try to replace that whistle with a finish instead, sounds better.
00:46:840 you can make that end of the slider to do another hitsound, try a clap on that one.
00:57:617 do the same thing here.
01:06:937 add a finish.

Animask`s boi:
01:02:137 was a bit hard to see, but its probably ok since its 4,99 stars map, I dont know.

Other than that, just fine :lol:
I`ll give your map a star.
arien666

adron zhero wrote:

[*]Change?
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My Dons:
> This is uberly stupid. If this is a taiko map, make it taiko. If not, map it properly.
Actually, JUST HARD is not good on every Taiko maps...
Since, I can't overmap some Taiko maps ;_;
And this is one of these things [Since not too much 1/4 rythem on this song]
orz...
Garven
Well, it's a recheck anyway:

I guess since you don't like hit sounds, I'll ignore them - though I will say that they are still not that well-done.

[My Baby]
00:26:597 (2) - I wouldn't recommend doing something like this in the easiest difficulty: it's confusing to new plays as to when it's going to end. I'd suggest mapping something else through it.
01:02:277 (3) - Maybe scoot this left one grid or so to center between the 1 and 2 before it?
01:18:879 (4) - Giant white kiai slider, my eyes!
You should map until where My Adult ends.
Pretty good

[My Kid]
I'd mention the no breaks, but you have sufficient pauses in there.
00:12:180 (2,3) - The way these are positioned, it's really deceptive as to the rhythm here. Even though it's technically a further distance, it's deceptive due to the almost square configuration that makes it seem like it's equidistant. I'd suggest lowering it a little more (breaking snap is okay in situations like this) or try a different pattern. Maybe something like what you did with this rhythm at 00:21:500 (1,2).
00:17:568 (4) - I still don't like this type of slider, even if it's a normal diff now.
00:26:889 (4) - This one is okay since it doesn't repeat as long though. ;)
00:56:452 (6,1,2) - I really don't like how the 6 slider completely covers up the next two hits. I'd suggest moving the 1 and 2 combo to somewhere else.
01:04:025 (2) - Lower one grid to reduce overlap. Try to line it up with the end of the 01:02:714 (7) - slider. Turn off grid snap and maybe distance snap while doing this.
01:15:093 (6) - Cntl + h this please.
You should map until where My Adult ends.

[My Adult]
00:00:530 (1,1,1) - These are kind of boring.
00:15:384 (7) - Try to make the curving nearer to the center. As is, it's kind of lopsided.
00:38:976 (1,2) - The way the singer was going, I was expecting a note at 00:39:704 -
00:41:306 (6) - This sounds better with two less repeats then add a normal beat at 00:41:889 -
01:10:869 (4) - Catmull slider detected. Looks really bad with the sharp indents.
Overall the general design felt really linear with a very strong preference towards straight lines. It'd be nice if you could try to make things more curved for a more natural play, but it's up to you.

[aru's My Dons]
00:45:680 (3) - I was expecting a K here.
Nice to see a Muzukashii instead of the plethora of Onis.

[animask's Boi]
00:09:560 (9) - This note's position looks odd against the angles you used for the rest of that little cluster. Maybe align it with the 5?
00:17:716 (5) - Lower two grids.
00:26:454 (1,2) - Can you align these with each other/the rest of the combo? Looks random as is.
00:38:980 (1) - This'd look better if you control + r, h, and j'd it.
01:15:100 (2,3) - Can you position these to reduce overlap?
01:17:139 (7) - Lower 1/2 grid
01:22:236 - No note here?
You should map until where My Adult ends.

This was a vast improvement from when I last looked. Still needs tweaking, but it's mostly cosmetic from this point. Star~
Aoitenshi
General:
Add Arusha Shuna to your tags.

My Baby

00:21:937 (2) = Move this note 1/2 further, it's not good for beginner.
00:25:578 (2) = Don't do things like this on easy map, I suggest change this to other pattern.

Good Map after all, Star.
arien666

Garven wrote:

[aru's My Dons]
00:45:680 (3) - I was expecting a K here. Due to chain, fixed :3
Nice to see a Muzukashii instead of the plethora of Onis.
Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Dons].osu
AdRon Zh3Ro
Rename "aru's My Dons" to "aru's my Dons Taiko".
Agka
Nothing I see wrong. Yup, have a star :P
arien666

adron zhero wrote:

Rename "aru's My Dons" to "aru's my Dons Taiko".
I'll deny cuz 'Don' is 'ドン' which means NOT people but wada-don :3
So, that can explain that's about Taiko or Drum :3

That's why.
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Ok guys all done. Sorry about being late. I've been busy with school starting up and other things
AdRon Zh3Ro
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