Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) using finish and clap too often is not a good hitsound pattern (e.g. 00:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) of [My Kid] )
2) it is not good-looking when one hitobject is covered by others (e.g. 01:03:908 01:02:283 (6,1,2,3) of [My Kid] )
3) may be turn down the volume ?
4) 00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 of [My Kid]) (Kiai time is going to stay where it is)
5) 01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 [My Kid]) (^)

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) remove the finish at the 2 reverse ?
01:13:643 add a note here?
01:14:809 ^

[My kid]
abuse of clap
00:36:358 (3,4,1) spacing
00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 )
01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 )

[My Adult]
using 3 seconds in audio lead-in is better ?
00:27:183 (5) add 1 more reverse and delete 00:27:620 (1) ?
00:42:184 (1,2) delete this 2sliders and add a break here?
00:46:116 (5) these finish is too sudden and toooo loud, may be turn down the volume ?

[animak's Boi]
This diff is fine, but see point number 3 to 5 in [General] to make it better.

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's a recheck~

[Overall]
I see improvement~
The correct BPM is 206 flat.
Why do you have storyboard elements in your beatmap? Are you trying to storyboard? As of right now, the storyboard is non-existant and you haven't even properly storyboarded it. If you are not going to storyboard, please delete the .osb and full submit. The .osb is in your song folder for your beatmap. (Sorry im new to this and i thought i needed to make my own section pass/fail so i added those they were probly what was keeping the SB)

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) - This feels like it doesn't belong. It's not quite following the music.

[My Kid]
00:12:909 - (4,5) - This feels so cramped.(Blame distance snap)
00:54:127 (1) - I hate how this is. You could map this better, replace it with something else.
00:52:962 (x) - Add a note here with a finish hitsound?
00:53:253 (x) - ^
01:19:760 (9) - You could replace nine with a spinner ending at 01:23:402
01:23:839 (1) - End this one tick earlier on the timeline (red tick)

[My Adult]
00:00:530 (1) - I don't understand how these sliders fix into the song. They sound off. All of those sliders like this one before the first spinner.(shortened so it fit better)
A bit boring for an insane difficulty but it's okay. (Its only meant to be hard~)

[animask's boi]
Great~

Almost there, just fix the storyboarded things by getting rid of the .osb and fix the BPM and you will get your star~

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
Add arien666 to all the other diffs because he made a difficulty.
My Baby, and My Kid have a different lead-in time
I think Kiai should end here: 01:12:617
Combo Colors are kind of darkish and the approach circles blend with the background

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[My Baby]
Fine

[My Kid]
Umm got thrown off a bit but i think it's fine.

[My Adult]
00:43:345 (9) - I thought the slider just hadnt dissapeared instead of thinking this note was a slider, i suggest trying to give a hint that this note is a slider.
01:08:539 (3,4,5,6) - I recommend you stack all theese instead of doing left/right
01:15:966 (1,2) - Dont hide circles below sliders please =(

[animask's Boi]
Fine

[aru's Taiko]
Fine

Ok, just some color change and a few minor stuff, so +Star

• • 00:16:549 (1) - Start this slider 1/1 later and add here a circle
  • 00:20:627 (x) - Add a circle

• • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • 00:30:238 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:50:627 (1,1) - Remove "New combo"

• • 00:27:180 (x) - Add a circle
  • 00:30:238 (x) - ^

• • Overall Difficulty: 7
  • 00:53:253 (x) - Add a circle

Daerren wrote:

Goku Modding!

[My Baby]:
00:39:267 (3): You could set the middle point in the middle between the beginning and end to even it out.
01:22:083 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Kid]:
00:40:432 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Adult]:
00:08:685 (2): This could look neater.
00:36:209 (4): spacing unless this is a jump. (new combo maybe, too)

[aru's My Dons]:
everything looks alright.

[animask's boi]:
00:09:560 (9): perhaps moving it down would make it even.
00:41:310 (5): new combo maybe?

have a star~

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

When the map has custom diff names like this one, please explain in your main post what each diff is supposed to be (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane).

My Baby:
This feels like a Normal to me. I will mod it as if it were a Normal. (What Normal is 1 1/2 stars?)
00:48:588 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) left: there are 14 grids between (1) and (2) but only 13 between (2) and (3).
00:54:122 - Make the kiai time start here.
00:54:704 (2,3,4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down.
01:18:879 (4) - Too close to previous object. The time distance between (3) and (4) is larger than between (2) and (3), yet the space distance is the same.

My Kid:
I take it this is a Hard diff.
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18389
00:14:219 (6,1) - Use the shift key to space those properly (then move (2,3,4) one grid left): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18390
00:21:937 (2) - Move one grid left.
00:35:190 (1) - This one's hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it away from the center of the screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18392 (You get fair warning during the spinner)
00:37:957 (1) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) down and one right. Don't forget to re-space the next objects.
00:46:112 (1,2) - Those two sliders overlap. You should consider changing their shape to avoid that. It's playable but it doesn't look nice.
01:05:772 (5) - Try finding a cuter shape for this slider ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18393 (use shift for the last tick)

My Adult:
I'll mod it as a Insane diff.
00:08:685 (2) - Now this is just ugly.
00:55:287 (1,2) - Stack those properly.

Animask's Boi:
00:11:307 (1) - Same remark as for My Kid 00:35:190 (Again fair warning during the spinner)

aru's my Dons:
Nice diff.

ThunderTopaz wrote:

ok, data from what the notepad has besides those crazy random numbers [if I need to add them then I will]

osu file format v7

[General]
AudioFilename: Shugo_Chara_Doki_-_My_Boy_TV_Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54127
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9150
DistanceSpacing: 0.800000011920929
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:My Boy (TV Size)
Artist:Buono!
Creator:johnsage92
Version:ThunderTopaz-Brand Cat Nip
Source:Shugo Chara Doki
Tags:Yoru Ran Miki Su animask arien666

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"yoru.jpg"
Video,0,"My boy nosound.avi"
//Break Periods
2,40487,41280
2,43253,43901
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
530,291.26213592233,4,2,0,70,1,0
53713,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
84413,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,0,255

SPOILER

Combo1 : 225,226,227
Combo2 : 130,51,200
Combo3 : 46,87,194

wmfchris wrote:

[taiko diff]
~If possible don't make big circle spam. Suggestion: rrR rrR bbB (normal normal finish, etc)
NICE tryyyy pink star for this : >

adron zhero wrote:

[*]Change?
[>]Change!

My Dons:
> This is uberly stupid. If this is a taiko map, make it taiko. If not, map it properly.

Garven wrote:

[aru's My Dons]
00:45:680 (3) - I was expecting a K here. Due to chain, fixed :3
Nice to see a Muzukashii instead of the plethora of Onis.

adron zhero wrote:

Rename "aru's My Dons" to "aru's my Dons Taiko".

adron zhero wrote:

...wha-?

In the Japanese version, subtitles under the symbols give the pronunciation of the sounds

asforoneday wrote:

the BG is a stretched resolution & is lq... why not cut the picture out of this image and correct it? or you could use this, or a picture of Buono themselves which looks more like a regular size: here

Garven wrote:

[aru's My Dons]
00:54:127 (2,3,1,2,1) - Maybe ddkdd?
00:55:292 (1,1,2,3,1) - Maybe dkddd?
01:06:507 (1,1) - dk?

deepsea wrote:

aru's My Dons / animask's boi
The timing is different from other 3, coincident them.

Garven wrote:

There's differences in the letterboxing option, but meh. No map has a break in it anyway.

:U

Garven wrote:

You, uh, could have let me know what happened.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[animask]
01:24:413 - Still no note here as mentioned in my previous post. Forget? Or did you decide that you didn't want to do it?