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Buono! - My Boy (TV Size)

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--K--
37 posts
Joined December 2009
--K--
[General]
I noticed that different difficulties have slightly different combo colors. You might want to fix this.
[My Baby] has no countdown, while [My Kid] and [My Adult] have a countdown. Either add a countdown to [My Baby] or remove it from the other two difficulties.
Also, as others have mentioned, the video is a bit of an issue, but you said you're working on that, so I'll let that be.

[My Baby]
00:20:800 (1) - Spacing.
00:25:752 (1) - Spacing. Also, the timing of this beat threw me off a bit. I'd suggest moving this back a beat and turning it into a slider. The slider should last 1 beat, starting at at 00:25:460 and ending at 00:25:752.
01:18:470 (4) - Kiai makes sense for this section of the song, but it looks absolutely terrible with this pink slider. Don't worry, it's just a slightly annoying side effect of using certain combo colors during kiai time on a fast song. Under kiai, black circles flash brightly, black sliders don't flash that much (it's kinda nice to look at, actually), pink circles flash nicely, but pink sliders flash obnoxiously brightly.
01:23:421 (1,2) - I'd strongly suggest turning this into a slider, similar to the one at the end of [My Kid].

[My Kid]
00:34:781 (1) - Shorten this by half a beat so it ends on 00:35:072. It'll flow better.
00:41:771 (1,2) - Remap this section something like the following image, with all clap hitsounds:
SPOILER
00:50:218 (1,1) - Forgive the nazimod, but if you move these sliders up 1 lv3 grid each, it'll mirror a lot more nicely with 00:49:053 (1).

[My Adult]
00:30:412 (1,1,1,1) - Not really feeling these sliders. If you use repeat-sliders to follow the guitar, you could do something like this:
SPOILER
Hitsound however you like.
00:49:053 (1) - I understand that you want a break section somewhere, but why not map the little buildup hit rhythm here?

Overall, pretty solid stuff. However, if you want to make it even better, adding a tiny bit of polish certainly wouldn't be a bad idea. Be it slider shapes or nice little patterns you can form with beats, it'll look pretty pretty. Sections such as 00:49:053 (1,1,1) in [My Kid] were nice to look at. This is not to say what you have already is bad, though.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Here it is~

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [animask's Boi].osu
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Okay :3
I'll add this song on 'Modding list' ;_;
Umm...

If possible, I'll get HQ video from anime ;_;
Also, mp3 file :3...

Keep going ;_;



ps. If possible, don't use the style of Video that I had seen ;_;
It seems like blur thing outside...
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

animask wrote:

Here it is~
AWESOME thnx ani~

arien666 wrote:

Okay :3
I'll add this song on 'Modding list' ;_;
Umm...

If possible, I'll get HQ video from anime ;_;
Also, mp3 file :3...

Keep going ;_;



ps. If possible, don't use the style of Video that I had seen ;_;
It seems like blur thing outside...
Thnx again arken~
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
http://www.mediafire.com/?3ilmzeymymr
Use this file on Video and mp3 :3

BPM = 205.98
Offset = 530ms (+409 ms from previous offset)
Video Offset = 0ms
Preview Time = 00:54:127



Good luck :3



ps. If you update mp3 file, you need to notice about MP3 file change :3
And Full-submit to update video and mp3 files
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, sorry for the long wait.
Here comes my mod~

[Overall]
... Offset is wrong. Also, what are you mapping to? It's not even like you are following the music. It just seems like you are putting random notes on the timeline and going on with it.
Overuse of hitsounds. Bah.
Why are you mapping BEFORE the song even starts?

[My Baby]
... Everything seems okay... but the wrong offset makes it hard to make sure.
00:45:703 (4) - End two ticks earlier

[My Kid]
I see more of an attempt to map with the music here, but now I'm pretty sure your timings are wrong.
Also, where's your breaktime in this difficulty?
01:23:421 (1) - Pointless. One hit object after a break and the end of the beatmap. Hate it.

[My Adult]
This difficulty is pretty bad... It's not fun, and it definitely doesn't feel like a Hard or Insane map.
00:00:121 - What's up with these kinds of sliders in the beginning of the map. They sound horrible by being completely off. What's worse is that the song doesn't even START until 00:00:557, so there's a point where there's no music and the slider is going.
There's empty spots in your beatmap, such as 00:29:829; which makes this difficulty boring.

[animask's boi]
This difficulty has potential. It's just that the timing is off.
The volume is ear rape, please turn down the volume on this.

I'm not gonna star this. Things just seem quite wrong with this mapset.
You need a timing check, some overall improvements on beat placements on your maps, and your difficulties need to flow with the song.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) delete the .osb file and full submission
2) the size of your BG is 1228 x 767, try to use a 1024 x 768 or 800 x 600 instead ?
3) the timing is wrong, may be you should try this viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795 .
4) add " animask " to tag on all diff
5) the BPM and offset should be the same on all difficulties, but you should wait for the right one first.
6) seems the countdown is not suitable for this song, consider to disable it on [My Kid] and [My adult] ?
7) it's hard to mod a song with wrong timing, so may be PM me after the timing is fixed.
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, sorry for the long wait.
Here comes my mod~

[Overall]
... Offset is wrong. Also, what are you mapping to? It's not even like you are following the music. It just seems like you are putting random notes on the timeline and going on with it.
Overuse of hitsounds. Bah. (Plz Specify where)
Why are you mapping BEFORE the song even starts?

[My Baby]
... Everything seems okay... but the wrong offset makes it hard to make sure.
00:45:703 (4) - End two ticks earlier

[My Kid]
I see more of an attempt to map with the music here, but now I'm pretty sure your timings are wrong.
Also, where's your breaktime in this difficulty?
01:23:421 (1) - Pointless. One hit object after a break and the end of the beatmap. Hate it. (Srry but I'm keeping that. Its your personal preference to not have it)

[My Adult]
This difficulty is pretty bad... It's not fun, and it definitely doesn't feel like a Hard or Insane map. (Remember there are others that may not be as skilled a player)
00:00:121 - What's up with these kinds of sliders in the beginning of the map. They sound horrible by being completely off. What's worse is that the song doesn't even START until 00:00:557, so there's a point where there's no music and the slider is going.
There's empty spots in your beatmap, such as 00:29:829; which makes this difficulty boring.

[animask's boi]
This difficulty has potential. It's just that the timing is off.
The volume is ear rape, please turn down the volume on this.

I'm not gonna star this. Things just seem quite wrong with this mapset.
You need a timing check, some overall improvements on beat placements on your maps, and your difficulties need to flow with the song.

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) delete the .osb file and full submission
2) the size of your BG is 1228 x 767, try to use a 1024 x 768 or 800 x 600 instead ?
3) the timing is wrong, may be you should try this viewtopic.php?f=60&t=13795 .
4) add " animask " to tag on all diff
5) the BPM and offset should be the same on all difficulties, but you should wait for the right one first.
6) seems the countdown is not suitable for this song, consider to disable it on [My Kid] and [My adult] ?
7) it's hard to mod a song with wrong timing, so may be PM me after the timing is fixed.
Ok 1st of all i'd like to appologise for the off timing n such... somehow changes were made and the map itself decided to shift 1/2 a beat forward :? . I've made all the changes again to the correct BPM/Offset.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
[General]
1) using finish and clap too often is not a good hitsound pattern (e.g. 00:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) of [My Kid] )
2) it is not good-looking when one hitobject is covered by others (e.g. 01:03:908 01:02:283 (6,1,2,3) of [My Kid] )
3) may be turn down the volume ?
4) 00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 of [My Kid])
5) 01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 [My Kid])

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) remove the finish at the 2 reverse ?
01:13:643 add a note here?
01:14:809 ^

[My kid]
abuse of clap
00:36:358 (3,4,1) spacing
00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 )
01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 )

[My Adult]
using 3 seconds in audio lead-in is better ?
00:27:183 (5) add 1 more reverse and delete 00:27:620 (1) ?
00:42:184 (1,2) delete this 2sliders and add a break here?
00:46:116 (5) these finish is too sudden and toooo loud, may be turn down the volume ?

[animak's Boi]
This diff is fine, but see point number 3 to 5 in [General] to make it better.
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) using finish and clap too often is not a good hitsound pattern (e.g. 00:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6) of [My Kid] )
2) it is not good-looking when one hitobject is covered by others (e.g. 01:03:908 01:02:283 (6,1,2,3) of [My Kid] )
3) may be turn down the volume ?
4) 00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 of [My Kid]) (Kiai time is going to stay where it is)
5) 01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 [My Kid]) (^)

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) remove the finish at the 2 reverse ?
01:13:643 add a note here?
01:14:809 ^

[My kid]
abuse of clap
00:36:358 (3,4,1) spacing
00:53:71 kiai time should start with a note, (e.g. start at 00:54:127 )
01:24:00 the kiai time should end with a end of hitobject (e.g. end at 01:24:421 )

[My Adult]
using 3 seconds in audio lead-in is better ?
00:27:183 (5) add 1 more reverse and delete 00:27:620 (1) ?
00:42:184 (1,2) delete this 2sliders and add a break here?
00:46:116 (5) these finish is too sudden and toooo loud, may be turn down the volume ?

[animak's Boi]
This diff is fine, but see point number 3 to 5 in [General] to make it better.
Ok all is done~ i've redone the hitsounds for my 3 difficulties and used them kinda sparingly~ Thnx for the mod Vikon
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Hai, here's a recheck~

[Overall]
I see improvement~
The correct BPM is 206 flat.
Why do you have storyboard elements in your beatmap? Are you trying to storyboard? As of right now, the storyboard is non-existant and you haven't even properly storyboarded it. If you are not going to storyboard, please delete the .osb and full submit. The .osb is in your song folder for your beatmap.

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) - This feels like it doesn't belong. It's not quite following the music.

[My Kid]
00:12:909 - (4,5) - This feels so cramped.
00:54:127 (1) - I hate how this is. You could map this better, replace it with something else.
00:52:962 (x) - Add a note here with a finish hitsound?
00:53:253 (x) - ^
01:19:760 (9) - You could replace nine with a spinner ending at 01:23:402
01:23:839 (1) - End this one tick earlier on the timeline (red tick)

[My Adult]
00:00:530 (1) - I don't understand how these sliders fix into the song. They sound off. All of those sliders like this one before the first spinner.
A bit boring for an insane difficulty but it's okay.

[animask's boi]
Great~

Almost there, just fix the storyboarded things by getting rid of the .osb and fix the BPM and you will get your star~
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai, here's a recheck~

[Overall]
I see improvement~
The correct BPM is 206 flat.
Why do you have storyboard elements in your beatmap? Are you trying to storyboard? As of right now, the storyboard is non-existant and you haven't even properly storyboarded it. If you are not going to storyboard, please delete the .osb and full submit. The .osb is in your song folder for your beatmap. (Sorry im new to this and i thought i needed to make my own section pass/fail so i added those they were probly what was keeping the SB)

[My Baby]
00:26:600 (2) - This feels like it doesn't belong. It's not quite following the music.

[My Kid]
00:12:909 - (4,5) - This feels so cramped.(Blame distance snap)
00:54:127 (1) - I hate how this is. You could map this better, replace it with something else.
00:52:962 (x) - Add a note here with a finish hitsound?
00:53:253 (x) - ^
01:19:760 (9) - You could replace nine with a spinner ending at 01:23:402
01:23:839 (1) - End this one tick earlier on the timeline (red tick)

[My Adult]
00:00:530 (1) - I don't understand how these sliders fix into the song. They sound off. All of those sliders like this one before the first spinner.(shortened so it fit better)
A bit boring for an insane difficulty but it's okay. (Its only meant to be hard~)

[animask's boi]
Great~

Almost there, just fix the storyboarded things by getting rid of the .osb and fix the BPM and you will get your star~
Tatsuo
575 posts
Joined January 2009
Tatsuo
Recheck yet again~

[My Baby]
00:27:617 (3) - Too far from (2). While this doesn't affect gameplay, you might want to keep the consistancy in this difficulty, since you did with the rest of this difficulty.

That's the only thing.
You can have this~
*star*
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Thank you very much :D
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Just a Taiko diff anyway ;_;
Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's Taiko].osu
[Followed as Muzukashii style. Oni style seems little insane for this song ;_;]
[Prefer name : aru's My Dons] <WUT???

I'll recheck whole song when this get more than +16 :3
Good luck :3
Mystearica
Mystearica
Your maps lack hitsounds and there is no stable pattern in your hitsound usage. It's also a bit loud, especially the claps, reduce them please.

Don't use black as a combo color please.

[Baby]

00:27:617 (3) - I want perfection from AIMod on Easy and Normal difficulties to move this up 1 grid please
01:17:423 (1,2,3) - As an example on my comment about hitsounding, I don't get why the finishes here

[Kid]

00:54:122 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This looks very messy in arrangement
01:04:607 (3,4) - This is a bit hard for Normal

[Adult]

This map is very...linear. Find other ways to arrange your map for some spicing up?

00:40:724 - Sudden break, remove and map it.

[animask]

eh.
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Finally, Shugo Chara Doki! ED3

My Baby
00:26:597 (2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
00:30:821 (4) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:39:267 (3) - [Suggestion] Aligning start and end seems better :3
00:54:122 - Kiai Start should be here.
00:54:704 (1) - Weird and no special to play ;_; Why don't you make better pattern instead of this slider?
01:00:529 (1,2) - Swap 'New combo' :3
01:04:607 (3,4,1,2,3) - How about move 1 grid up?
01:23:830 (1) - Finish on end part plz :3
01:24:413 - Kiai End should be here.

My Kid
00:09:850 (1) - Finish on end part plz :3
00:14:219 (6) - Delete Finish :#
00:30:821 (1) - Finish hitsound :3?
00:51:792 (1) - How about move 1 grid up?
00:54:704 (2) - Kiai Start should be here.
00:56:452 (6) - Maybe, you need to reshape this slider :3
01:02:714 (7) - Reduce length by 1/2 please :3
01:16:549 (1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
01:19:462 (8) - Delete Finish :#
01:24:413 - Kiai End should be here.

My Adult
00:09:996 (1) - Start = 00:09:850
00:13:345 (7) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:13:928 (1) - Seems hidden note by slider. If possible, re-place this note :3
00:36:355 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?
00:40:141 (3,4) - orz Quick jump ;_;
00:47:568 (3) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:54:122 - Kiai Start should be here.
00:59:219 (3,4) - This jump seems not good imo, why don't you re-place :3?
01:24:413 - [Suggestion] Kiai End? or keep Kiai :3?
01:28:199 (6) - Finish!

animask's Boi
orz at some jumps :3
01:01:118 (4,5,6,7) - How about move 1 grid up and right?
01:22:382 (2,3,4,5) - Err??? Seems weird rythem... Why don't you follow as red tick, not white tick :3?
01:24:275 (2) - [Suggestion] Move earlier 1/2?



Okay :3
Thanks to keeping this song from RIP :3
Anyway, good luck.
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
[General]
Add arien666 to all the other diffs because he made a difficulty.
My Baby, and My Kid have a different lead-in time
I think Kiai should end here: 01:12:617
Combo Colors are kind of darkish and the approach circles blend with the background

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[My Baby]
Fine

[My Kid]
Umm got thrown off a bit but i think it's fine.

[My Adult]
00:43:345 (9) - I thought the slider just hadnt dissapeared instead of thinking this note was a slider, i suggest trying to give a hint that this note is a slider.
01:08:539 (3,4,5,6) - I recommend you stack all theese instead of doing left/right
01:15:966 (1,2) - Dont hide circles below sliders please =(

[animask's Boi]
Fine

[aru's Taiko]
Fine

Ok, just some color change and a few minor stuff, so +Star
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

Sakura301 wrote:

[General]
Add arien666 to all the other diffs because he made a difficulty.
My Baby, and My Kid have a different lead-in time
I think Kiai should end here: 01:12:617
Combo Colors are kind of darkish and the approach circles blend with the background

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[My Baby]
Fine

[My Kid]
Umm got thrown off a bit but i think it's fine.

[My Adult]
00:43:345 (9) - I thought the slider just hadnt dissapeared instead of thinking this note was a slider, i suggest trying to give a hint that this note is a slider.
01:08:539 (3,4,5,6) - I recommend you stack all theese instead of doing left/right
01:15:966 (1,2) - Dont hide circles below sliders please =(

[animask's Boi]
Fine

[aru's Taiko]
Fine

Ok, just some color change and a few minor stuff, so +Star
Finito! Changed the colors to a lighter blue and purple and a gray instead of black
lisha14_DELETED
lisha14_DELETED
star :)
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[My Baby]
00:35:190 - (1) remove note
00:54:122 - start kiai here
01:18:879 -
SPOILER
01:24:267 - end kiai here

[My kid]
00:24:559 - add circle , (1) Make this slider start at 00:24:704 , finish at 00:24:996
01:24:267 - end kiai here

[My Adult]
00:15:238 - add note
00:21:792 - ^
00:24:559 - ^
00:26:452 - ^
00:36:209 - ^
00:36:646 - ^
00:37:811 -^
00:38:976 -
SPOILER

[animask's Boi]
00:09:560 - add note , Make this spin start at 00:09:705.
00:45:680 - Make this slider finish at 00:45:971
00:46:116 - add note
00:54:127 - start kiai here
00:57:040 - add note , Make this slider start at 00:57:185 , finish 00:57:477
01:00:244 -
SPOILER
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
[my baby]
some parts have almost/no hitsounds
00:29:083 (1,2,3,4) - bah, all finish
00:30:248 (3) - finish + crap, remove 1 of the hitsounds
00:54:714 (1) - no new combo


[my kid]
some parts have almost/no hitsounds
00:22:229 (3) - move to next white tick (right)?
00:55:724 (4) - spacing
00:59:219 (3) - a little high imo

[my adult]
some parts have almost/no hitsounds
00:30:821 (1,1,1,1) - don't think you need all those new combos, have it all 1 combo

[animask's]
I got the update to latest version message after redownloading, do a full submission?
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[My Baby]

  • • 00:16:549 (1) - Start this slider 1/1 later and add here a circle
    • 00:20:627 (x) - Add a circle
[My Kid]

  • • Overall Difficulty: 4
    • 00:30:238 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:50:627 (1,1) - Remove "New combo"
[My Adult]

  • • 00:27:180 (x) - Add a circle
    • 00:30:238 (x) - ^
[animask's Boi]

  • • Overall Difficulty: 7
    • 00:53:253 (x) - Add a circle
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Hey!

Felt like I should start modding again. So I'll start here :D

Quick check through..

For the Kiai.I would start it on 54:122 instead. Looks much better to me. But it's up to you to decide since it's your map ;)
Just a personal opinion this.

[My Baby]

Looks okay to me.

[My kid]

0:30:821 (Spinner) Move it back to white tick. (30:675) and then end it at (34:607)?
1:02:277 (6) Can you move this one a bit? Might be confusing if this is a normal.
1:03:151 (End of slider 7) Remove finish and add a whistle? Or just remove it. Finish sounds bad to me there.

[My Adult]

00:42:180 (7) New combo.
1:01:549 (1) Remove new combo.
1:02:714 (3) Add finish?

[Animask's Boi]

Looks okay to me. (Don't want to line up the Nazi stuff I found)

This is all. Looks much better than when I saw it for the first time. :P
Good job.

Here's your star, you deserve it! ;)
choche_old
135 posts
Joined January 2010
choche_old
Well, I'm going to star with the mod.

I can see that it's a 21 SP map, so i think I won't be able to mod it very well, because an 21 SP map probably is a good map ;)

Things you must do
Suggestions (If you don't agree with me, you don't have to change it)


[General]

Good timing.
I don't like the song too much... xD

[My baby]

01:18:296 (3) - Maybe align it with 1 and 2 (?) something like this

Not more in this diff. It's good for an easy ^^

[My kid]

00:18:879 (2) - Add finish sound (there's too much notes without sound)
00:54:122 (1) - Move it, i think it's very close to the previous... :S

[My adult]

Fine~*

[aru's My Dons]

I won't mod this because is taiko ;)

[animask's Boi]

Only a suggestion:

Increase the HP Drain Rate by 1 (?)

Ok, this is all.

It is a very nice map ;)

Good luck, I hope this will be ranked :P

*star*
Daerren
28 posts
Joined January 2010
Daerren
Goku Modding!

[My Baby]:
00:39:267 (3): You could set the middle point in the middle between the beginning and end to even it out.
01:22:083 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Kid]:
00:40:432 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Adult]:
00:08:685 (2): This could look neater.
00:36:209 (4): spacing unless this is a jump. (new combo maybe, too)

[aru's My Dons]:
everything looks alright.

[animask's boi]:
00:09:560 (9): perhaps moving it down would make it even.
00:41:310 (5): new combo maybe?

have a star~
Shiro
Global Moderator
4,984 posts
Joined May 2009
Shiro
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

When the map has custom diff names like this one, please explain in your main post what each diff is supposed to be (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane).

My Baby:
This feels like a Normal to me. I will mod it as if it were a Normal.
00:48:588 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) left: there are 14 grids between (1) and (2) but only 13 between (2) and (3).
00:54:122 - Make the kiai time start here.
00:54:704 (2,3,4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down.
01:18:879 (4) - Too close to previous object. The time distance between (3) and (4) is larger than between (2) and (3), yet the space distance is the same.

My Kid:
I take it this is a Hard diff.
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18389
00:14:219 (6,1) - Use the shift key to space those properly (then move (2,3,4) one grid left): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18390
00:21:937 (2) - Move one grid left.
00:35:190 (1) - This one's hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it away from the center of the screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18392
00:37:957 (1) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) down and one right. Don't forget to re-space the next objects.
00:46:112 (1,2) - Those two sliders overlap. You should consider changing their shape to avoid that. It's playable but it doesn't look nice.
01:05:772 (5) - Try finding a cuter shape for this slider ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18393 (use shift for the last tick)

My Adult:
I'll mod it as a Insane diff.
00:08:685 (2) - Now this is just ugly.
00:55:287 (1,2) - Stack those properly.

Animask's Boi:
00:11:307 (1) - Same remark as for My Kid 00:35:190

aru's my Dons:
Nice diff.
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

Daerren wrote:

Goku Modding!

[My Baby]:
00:39:267 (3): You could set the middle point in the middle between the beginning and end to even it out.
01:22:083 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Kid]:
00:40:432 (blank): might want to map this empty part.

[My Adult]:
00:08:685 (2): This could look neater.
00:36:209 (4): spacing unless this is a jump. (new combo maybe, too)

[aru's My Dons]:
everything looks alright.

[animask's boi]:
00:09:560 (9): perhaps moving it down would make it even.
00:41:310 (5): new combo maybe?

have a star~
Done and Thanks!

Odaril wrote:

Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.

When the map has custom diff names like this one, please explain in your main post what each diff is supposed to be (Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane).

My Baby:
This feels like a Normal to me. I will mod it as if it were a Normal. (What Normal is 1 1/2 stars?)
00:48:588 (3) - Move it one grid (lvl 3) left: there are 14 grids between (1) and (2) but only 13 between (2) and (3).
00:54:122 - Make the kiai time start here.
00:54:704 (2,3,4) - Move one grid (lvl 3) down.
01:18:879 (4) - Too close to previous object. The time distance between (3) and (4) is larger than between (2) and (3), yet the space distance is the same.

My Kid:
I take it this is a Hard diff.
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is a bit confusing. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18389
00:14:219 (6,1) - Use the shift key to space those properly (then move (2,3,4) one grid left): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18390
00:21:937 (2) - Move one grid left.
00:35:190 (1) - This one's hidden by the 300/100 when the spinner is completed. Move it away from the center of the screen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18392 (You get fair warning during the spinner)
00:37:957 (1) - Move it two grids (lvl 3) down and one right. Don't forget to re-space the next objects.
00:46:112 (1,2) - Those two sliders overlap. You should consider changing their shape to avoid that. It's playable but it doesn't look nice.
01:05:772 (5) - Try finding a cuter shape for this slider ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18393 (use shift for the last tick)

My Adult:
I'll mod it as a Insane diff.
00:08:685 (2) - Now this is just ugly.
00:55:287 (1,2) - Stack those properly.

Animask's Boi:
00:11:307 (1) - Same remark as for My Kid 00:35:190 (Again fair warning during the spinner)

aru's my Dons:
Nice diff.
I appreciate the mod but some of your suggestions or "must fix errors" don't seem all the urgent. I've fixed the 1 in [My Baby] but the one in [My Kid] is staying.
bearing019
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bearing019
My Adult;

01:02:277 (7,8) - Spacing.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
The BPM is other in Taiko diff and animask's gues diff. Change to 206 in both.

You should start kiai section on 00:54:127 instead of 00:53:763 on all diffs. It's the chorus start, so I think it's appropiate.

Using a snap from the video as the background is not good idea. Can't you find better picture?

[My Baby]

01:23:830 (1) - Ugly slider. Make it prettier.


[My Kid]

00:17:568 (4) - Add one repeat.
00:54:122 - Start kiai section here.
00:54:122 - End - And again - where are the hitsounds?
01:04:607 (3) - Flip horizontally and adjust spacing so it doesn't overlap (4).


[My Adult]

00:27:034 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:36:646 (6,1) - ^ (if it's a jump, it's not intuitive so fix this)
00:37:811 (6,1) - ^
00:40:287 (4,5) - Spacing.
00:49:462 (1,2) - Add a slider like this 00:50:627 (1) instead of these notes.
00:54:267 (2,3) - Spacing.
00:54:122 - End - Where are the hitsounds?! I heard 2, maybe 3 claps and some finishes, where's more?
01:25:578 (4,5) - Spacing.


[animask]

00:56:894 (4,5,6) - Spacing.
00:59:225 (3,4) - I quite don't agree with this. This is not an intuitive jump. Fix it.
01:01:118 (4,5,6,7,8) - I wonder why this pattern have other spacing value than the value used in the whole map.
01:24:348 - Delete this timing section, because if you hit the note too late, it makes soft-type hitsound which is not expected here (?).

This is a solid diff, I like it.

+star
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
My Baby
01:23:830 (5) - New combooo

My Kid
Fine

My Adult
Most of the map has no hitsounds. Add some!

Animask's Boi
00:56:894 (4,5,6) - Fix up that spacing
01:01:846 (5,6,7,8) - I dunno why, but these reverse stacks seem really unnatural...
01:22:236 - add a note here to go with the beat
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
added some hitsounds but they may not be that great.
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~My Baby~
00:49:462 (1) - add hitfinish

~My Kid~
00:15:675 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
00:49:462 (1,2,3) - add hitfinish at start of sliders
00:53:248 (2) - add hitfinish

~My Adult~
00:08:685 (2) - make it more symmetrical
00:09:850 (1) - add hitfinish
00:33:151 (1) - ^

~animask's Boi~
00:00:530 (1) - add hitfinish
00:09:705 (1) - start on white tick
01:22:819 (3) - new combo
01:23:402 (5) - new combo (optional)


+Star
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Thank you very much! I'm excited that all your guys' hard work is going to get payed off soon
ThunderTopaz
108 posts
Joined July 2010
ThunderTopaz
though to me the "Shugo Chara : Doki Doki" season made me lose my interest of the show, this ending theme has always been my favorite!...... wait.... was it even from that season or was it the season before that? Darn, can't remember. Ohh well.... off to play the song a couple 100 times.
I may make a mode for it later if it will let me sense I have two on pending.
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
For next-modders:
About "Why did not you add 'arien666' tag?",
I don't wanna add 'arien666' on guest diff but 'arien666'...
Just my hope ;_;



Also, I won't edit my diff name into [ari's My Dons] ;_;
ThunderTopaz
108 posts
Joined July 2010
ThunderTopaz
ok, data from what the notepad has besides those crazy random numbers [if I need to add them then I will]

osu file format v7

[General]
AudioFilename: Shugo_Chara_Doki_-_My_Boy_TV_Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54127
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9150
DistanceSpacing: 0.800000011920929
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:My Boy (TV Size)
Artist:Buono!
Creator:johnsage92
Version:ThunderTopaz-Brand Cat Nip
Source:Shugo Chara Doki
Tags:Yoru Ran Miki Su animask arien666

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"yoru.jpg"
Video,0,"My boy nosound.avi"
//Break Periods
2,40487,41280
2,43253,43901
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
530,291.26213592233,4,2,0,70,1,0
53713,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
84413,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,0,255
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

ThunderTopaz wrote:

ok, data from what the notepad has besides those crazy random numbers [if I need to add them then I will]

osu file format v7

[General]
AudioFilename: Shugo_Chara_Doki_-_My_Boy_TV_Size.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54127
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 9150
DistanceSpacing: 0.800000011920929
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:My Boy (TV Size)
Artist:Buono!
Creator:johnsage92
Version:ThunderTopaz-Brand Cat Nip
Source:Shugo Chara Doki
Tags:Yoru Ran Miki Su animask arien666

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:7
SliderMultiplier:0.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"yoru.jpg"
Video,0,"My boy nosound.avi"
//Break Periods
2,40487,41280
2,43253,43901
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
530,291.26213592233,4,2,0,70,1,0
53713,-100,4,2,0,70,0,1
84413,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 192,192,192
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,0,255
PMed with explanations
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Hiya there! Another Shugo Chara song ... this was one of my favourite EDs in that show, so lucky you, you got bumped to the top of the list! :P

General
You don't need .osb do you? Delete it and full submit
You have TWO .avi files? Delete the one you're not using
BG is a SS from the video? Maybe use one of these pictures instead? (WARNING: big pictures D:)
SPOILER


These two are the same but the bottom one has a design on the left which I like




My baby
00:12:763 (2, 3, 4) - I think it would sound better as clap, whistle (or nothing), clap
00:18:296 (1) - Get rid of finish at the end of the slider
00:18:588 (2, 3) - Switch their hitsounds
00:21:209 (1) - Switch hitsounds, so finish is at the end and clap is on beginning
00:22:665 (3) - Change finish to whistle (otherwise too much IMO)
00:38:685 (2) - Use clap instead of finish?
00:54:122 - Kiai time should start here
01:02:277 (3) - Finish instead of whistle, I think it sounds better
01:03:422 - Spacing changes here? Personally I think this one is better for an easy, but ... well, it's too late to change, huh? :S
01:04:025 (2, 3) - Change finishes to whistle, clap
01:12:034 (6) - End slider here instead

My kid
Unfinished hitsounds?
00:14:219 (6) - Add clap
00:14:801 (2, 3) - Use clap for both end and beginning. Add finish on (4)
00:20:335 (6, 7) - Finish on (6), maybe change (7) to whistle?
00:21:500 (1, 6 - 10) - Hitsounds: Finish, whistle, clap, clap, clap, clap (beginning), finish (end)
00:27:617 (1) - Un new combo, new combo at (4) instead (tall white tick). Add clap at (1, 3)?
00:36:355 (3, 4) - Add clap (end of (4) only). Maybe finish at the end of (4)? You choose which one you like better haha
00:38:394 (2, 3, 5, 6) - Whistle, clap, finish, finish? Maybe two clap would sound good as well (for 5, 6). Or clap, finish ...
00:54:122 - Start Kiai time here
01:00:238 (1, 3, 6) - Add clap here
01:03:442 (1) - Finish
01:07:811 (1, 2) - Clap. Add on (1, 3) of next combo as well
01:12:763 (1, 3, 5, 6) - Whistle everything but (6), use finish

My adult
Ugh slider velocity X_X lol
00:48:733 (2) - Should be one grid right. Same with (1) of next combo and (2) of blue combo
00:57:034 (2, 3) - Move one grid down
01:00:238 - Add clap to all odd numbers in this combo. Except maybe (7) should be whistle? Your call
01:08:102 (2, 4, 6) - Use clap, clap, finish
01:11:597 (5, 6) - Ehmm, I think you should only use one hitsound per beat ... maybe use clap, finish?

roflninja's my elder
Why different combo colours from the rest of the difficulties? o_O They should be the same ...
Timing is definitely off here ... use same offset as all the others (current is 121, use 530?)
Please fix this ... I can't mod this ... T_T

Hmm, pretty good for your first map! Call me back when you've fixed everything, I'd like to star it ^_^
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Hello there, I'm back XD
You're using the new background! Lols

My baby
00:54:122 - Kiai time should start here D<
Other than that, good!

My kid
00:54:122 - START KIAI HERE RAWR D<

Can't find anything else except that, so just fix where Kiai starts and it should be all good

+1 star! :D
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
aweshum~ :)
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Some changed from my diff orz

1. Kiai edited [Same as other diffs]
2. Reduced note nums
3. else edits :3

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Dons].osu

;_;
I hope this song will be ranked :3
lovhin456
1,959 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- Oh shi- This song is awesome ~ I fell in love with it :3 !!
- Ehhh...try this BG ??
SPOILER
- Use this colors for all diff ??
Combo1 : 225,226,227
Combo2 : 130,51,200
Combo3 : 46,87,194

My baby;
- 01:02:714 >> you can end kiai time here
- 01:03:442 >> then start a new kiai time here
- 01:12:034 >> that ends here
- 01:23:830 >> kiai time that starts here and ends at 01:24:413 (the slider placed here should end at the same time as kiai time)
- Try to remap so parts, because you use to many linear sliders, which make things boring ~
- This is the easiest diff, so circle size the largest ??

My kid;
- If posible do the same with the kiai time as My Baby ??
- 00:23:830 >> new combo
- 00:43:345 >> she's whispering "shitteru" so is natural to lower the sounds at this part, yes ??
- 01:23:830 >> end slider at 01:24:413
- Try to remap so parts, because you use to many linear sliders, which make things boring ~

My adult;
- If posible do the same with the kiai time as My Baby ??
- 00:43:054 >> she's whispering "shitteru" so is natural to lower the sounds at this part, yes ??
- Try to remap so parts, because you use to many linear sliders, which make things boring ~

aru's My dons;
- Can't really mod taiko, but sounds awesome :3

animask's Boi;
- - If posible do the same with the kiai time as My Baby ?? If you don't want to, them consider checking your current kiai time, it doesn't end or start on a note :3

* Star :3
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Thanks~ Although i didn't use your BG and combo colors the rest of it was very helpful
Semi_Semi
110 posts
Joined September 2009
Semi_Semi
nicee
Semi_Semi
110 posts
Joined September 2009
Semi_Semi
star ~

nice song
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
nice double post ;)

Thnx for the star tho
Mellodia
13 posts
Joined July 2010
Mellodia
Great map ^^
Star and good luck with getting it ranked :)
La Cataline
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Joined March 2010
La Cataline
seems good, although I have no idea which one is normal, hard, insane etc.

get your star.

PS: be careful, you've posted a wrong link in my queue...
La Cataline
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2010
La Cataline
*forgot to give a star in my first post. bad me, talking about being careful :D*
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Well i think difficulty is rather simple to figure out if you use common sense. Babies = simple minded simple notes
and goes up from there. I'll post it on the next mod if i get one.
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[taiko diff]
~If possible don't make big circle spam. Suggestion: rrR rrR bbB (normal normal finish, etc)
NICE tryyyy pink star for this : >

[animask's Boi]
1:01:700 (4,5,6,7,8) spacing?
1:24:275 (2) finish?

[My Adult]
0:37:811 spacing of (6,1) different from (2,3,4,5)
0:47:714 (4) right 1 grid
many different spacing, need re-snap by grid level 3
Lanttu
860 posts
Joined December 2008
Lanttu
[My Adult]
There's some weird snap divisor changes here, is it really necessary?
00:00:530 (1) - Third square one grid right and fourth square one grid left
00:02:860 (1) - 3rd ■ one grid left and 4th ■ one grid right
00:05:190 (1) - 3rd ■ one grid right and 4th ■ one grid left
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe move this whole combo one grid right? it Would be centered then, lol
00:16:549 (1) - I think this slider would be better if it ended at 00:16:840 and then had a reverse arrow. And then of course you'd have to move it .
00:30:238 (1) - If this has to be so close to 00:28:782 (1,2) despite the distance snap, why not just move it to same spot as those 1 ans 2?
00:49:898 (x) - Add note?
00:50:335 (x) - Add note?
(00:50:627 (1,2) - if you do not add those two notes, at least flip these horisontal.)


Some hitsound stuff to My Adult~
[/b]
Most of these are only suggestions, do whatever you like.
I also think normal hitsounds would be better to this song, like in animask's diff.
00:00:675 (1) - Add whistle to every second reverse arrow.
00:02:860 (1) - ^
00:05:190 (1) - ^
00:07:520 (1) - Please do not use many finish sounds at the same time, try to leave at least one beat between the finishes. ;_; Use finish only at the first note. Then whistle to second and last notes.
00:08:685 (2) - Maybe finish at the beginning.
00:12:180 (2,7) - Clap on 2 and beginning of 7, clap off from the end of 7.
00:14:510 (3) - Clap
00:15:384 (7) - Clap at end
(00:16:549 (1) - If you did the reverse arrow thing I mentioned before, then clap at the reverse arrow. Otherwise ignore this. XD)
00:17:277 (2) - Maybe whistle in stead of a finish.
00:18:005 (4) - Clap
00:19:170 (1) - ^
00:19:462 (2,3) - I dun't like this finish spam. ): Use the finish sound only at the end of both sliders.
00:20:335 (4) - Maybe fnish instead of a whistle.
00:21:209 (1) - Whistle
00:21:500 (2) - Clap
00:22:665 (7) - I dun't like this clap spam. ): Maybe clap at the first one and two middle ones whistle.
00:23:830 (2) - Clap
00:24:122 (3,4,5,6) - I think finish would be better on 4 and 6 instead of 3 and 5.
00:25:869 (1) - Clap at the end
00:26:889 (3,4) - Clap off
00:27:326 (5) - Clap on first
00:28:491 (8) - Clap
00:28:782 (1,3) - Clap off
00:29:656 (5) - finish
00:30:821 (2,4) - Again finish spam that hurts my ears. ;_; Take some of them off

00:35:481 (2) - Finish
00:54:122 (1) - ^
00:55:287 (1) - Middle clap away.
00:56:452 (1) - Every second clap away.
00:58:782 (2) - Finish
00:59:219 (3,4) - Clap away from the beginning of both.
01:03:442 (1) - Finish

.... This is going to take forever if I keep on koing like this. So yeah with the claps, try to use them on every first beat, they sound bit random here and there now. Also try to use other hitsounds too more contolled way. Animask's diff has good use of hitsounds, try to get ideas from that also. :3

[My Kid]
00:09:850 (1) - Move the last square one grid down and then move the whole slider one grid right.
00:38:394 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing, move these all one grid down.
00:45:675 (5,1) - Spacing, these two one grid right.
00:54:704 (2) - Spacing, one grid down
00:56:452 (6) - I don't like how this overlaps 3, maybe flip it horisontaly and move to the other side of 4 and 5, forming a triangle?
01:02:277 (6) - five grids up and 4 grids left? Then fix the spacing of (7) also.
01:09:559 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, this combo one grid right.
01:16:549 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing, this combo one grid right.
01:18:879 (6,7,8) - New combo on (6) and this combo one grid down.
Try to do something to the hitsounds, too, like in other diffs.

[My Baby]
00:26:597 (2) - Flip this little slider horisontaly so it doesn't overlap with (3)
00:29:656 (2,3,4) - Any reason for this little one grid spacing change?
00:47:423 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:277 (3) - Finish to whole slider
01:03:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Any reason to this spacing change?
01:09:850 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:15:093 (4) - Spacng, one grid up and left.
01:15:966 (5) - One grid up, and them maybe this slider curve more and move the end note lower so you don't have to move the next (1)?
01:18:879 (4) - I kind of would prefer the spinner like in [My Kid] over this slider.
Try to do something to the hitsounds, too, like in other diffs.

[Animask's]
00:23:105 (x) - I think note would be nice here.
00:48:301 (6) - New combo.
01:23:111 (4,5) - W-why not reverse these two, I find this spacing pretty weird.

Nice work, star. ^^/
arien666
6,312 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666

wmfchris wrote:

[taiko diff]
~If possible don't make big circle spam. Suggestion: rrR rrR bbB (normal normal finish, etc)
NICE tryyyy pink star for this : >
Fixed :3

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Dons].osu
AdRon Zh3Ro
916 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

My Kid:
>1:17:850(5)Spacing

My Adult:
>28:345(8)Spacing
*54:850(5) Dat spacing D:

My Dons:
> This is uberly stupid. If this is a taiko map, make it taiko. If not, map it properly.

Boi:
:/
AndreasHD
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AndreasHD
ok, I`ll give you some few tips that might help a little.
Just remember, this is only my opinion ;)

My Baby:
00:20:627 try to replace that whistle with a finish instead, sounds better.
00:46:840 you can make that end of the slider to do another hitsound, try a clap on that one.
00:57:617 do the same thing here.
01:06:937 add a finish.

Animask`s boi:
01:02:137 was a bit hard to see, but its probably ok since its 4,99 stars map, I dont know.

Other than that, just fine :lol:
I`ll give your map a star.
arien666
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arien666

adron zhero wrote:

[*]Change?
[>]Change!

My Dons:
> This is uberly stupid. If this is a taiko map, make it taiko. If not, map it properly.
Actually, JUST HARD is not good on every Taiko maps...
Since, I can't overmap some Taiko maps ;_;
And this is one of these things [Since not too much 1/4 rythem on this song]
orz...
Garven
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Garven
Well, it's a recheck anyway:

I guess since you don't like hit sounds, I'll ignore them - though I will say that they are still not that well-done.

[My Baby]
00:26:597 (2) - I wouldn't recommend doing something like this in the easiest difficulty: it's confusing to new plays as to when it's going to end. I'd suggest mapping something else through it.
01:02:277 (3) - Maybe scoot this left one grid or so to center between the 1 and 2 before it?
01:18:879 (4) - Giant white kiai slider, my eyes!
You should map until where My Adult ends.
Pretty good

[My Kid]
I'd mention the no breaks, but you have sufficient pauses in there.
00:12:180 (2,3) - The way these are positioned, it's really deceptive as to the rhythm here. Even though it's technically a further distance, it's deceptive due to the almost square configuration that makes it seem like it's equidistant. I'd suggest lowering it a little more (breaking snap is okay in situations like this) or try a different pattern. Maybe something like what you did with this rhythm at 00:21:500 (1,2).
00:17:568 (4) - I still don't like this type of slider, even if it's a normal diff now.
00:26:889 (4) - This one is okay since it doesn't repeat as long though. ;)
00:56:452 (6,1,2) - I really don't like how the 6 slider completely covers up the next two hits. I'd suggest moving the 1 and 2 combo to somewhere else.
01:04:025 (2) - Lower one grid to reduce overlap. Try to line it up with the end of the 01:02:714 (7) - slider. Turn off grid snap and maybe distance snap while doing this.
01:15:093 (6) - Cntl + h this please.
You should map until where My Adult ends.

[My Adult]
00:00:530 (1,1,1) - These are kind of boring.
00:15:384 (7) - Try to make the curving nearer to the center. As is, it's kind of lopsided.
00:38:976 (1,2) - The way the singer was going, I was expecting a note at 00:39:704 -
00:41:306 (6) - This sounds better with two less repeats then add a normal beat at 00:41:889 -
01:10:869 (4) - Catmull slider detected. Looks really bad with the sharp indents.
Overall the general design felt really linear with a very strong preference towards straight lines. It'd be nice if you could try to make things more curved for a more natural play, but it's up to you.

[aru's My Dons]
00:45:680 (3) - I was expecting a K here.
Nice to see a Muzukashii instead of the plethora of Onis.

[animask's Boi]
00:09:560 (9) - This note's position looks odd against the angles you used for the rest of that little cluster. Maybe align it with the 5?
00:17:716 (5) - Lower two grids.
00:26:454 (1,2) - Can you align these with each other/the rest of the combo? Looks random as is.
00:38:980 (1) - This'd look better if you control + r, h, and j'd it.
01:15:100 (2,3) - Can you position these to reduce overlap?
01:17:139 (7) - Lower 1/2 grid
01:22:236 - No note here?
You should map until where My Adult ends.

This was a vast improvement from when I last looked. Still needs tweaking, but it's mostly cosmetic from this point. Star~
Aoitenshi
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Aoitenshi
General:
Add Arusha Shuna to your tags.

My Baby

00:21:937 (2) = Move this note 1/2 further, it's not good for beginner.
00:25:578 (2) = Don't do things like this on easy map, I suggest change this to other pattern.

Good Map after all, Star.
arien666
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arien666

Garven wrote:

[aru's My Dons]
00:45:680 (3) - I was expecting a K here. Due to chain, fixed :3
Nice to see a Muzukashii instead of the plethora of Onis.
Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Dons].osu
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
Rename "aru's My Dons" to "aru's my Dons Taiko".
Agka
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Agka
Nothing I see wrong. Yup, have a star :P
arien666
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arien666

adron zhero wrote:

Rename "aru's My Dons" to "aru's my Dons Taiko".
I'll deny cuz 'Don' is 'ドン' which means NOT people but wada-don :3
So, that can explain that's about Taiko or Drum :3

That's why.
JhnySmthApl
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Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Ok guys all done. Sorry about being late. I've been busy with school starting up and other things
AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
...wha-?
lovhin456
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lovhin456
Hi again ~

General;
- Try this BG ??
SPOILER
- Consider lowering the sound of hitsounds, they're a bit louder than the song itself, maybe in the sound volume 50% on all timing sections, all diff ??

My baby;
- 00:13:345 >> remove whistle
- 00:15:093 >> remove whistle, add clap
- 00:15:675 >> at the of the slider you have finish and clap, remove clap
- 00:16:549 >> add clap
- 00:16:840 >> make it look like this ??
SPOILER
also add clap just at the end of the slider
- 00:18:588 (2,3,4,5,6) >> remove whistle from (2,3,5), remove finish from (4), add clap to (3,5), add finish to (6)
- 00:21:209 (1,2,3,4,5) >> add clap on the end of (1), remove finish from (2), add clap to 3, remove clap from (4), add clap at the start of 5 and finish at the end
- 00:25:869 (1,2,3) >> remove clap from end of (1), then extend (1) until where (2) starts, move (2) to 00:26:746, add clap on start and end of (2) not the reverse arrow, add clap at the end of (3)
- 00:29:073 (1,2,3,4) >> remove clap from (1,3), remove finish from (2) then add clap
- 00:35:190 (2,3,4) >> remove clap from (2), remove finish from start of (3) then add clap, remove whistle from (4) then add clap
- 00:38:102 >> remove finish
- 00:45:093 >> remove clap
- 00:46:112 >> add finish
- 00:48:005 (2,3) >> remove finish from both, add clap to (3)
- 00:54:112 (1,2,3,4) >> remove any hitsounds on (1,2,3,4), add clap on the end of (1,2,3), add clap on reverse arrow of (4) and finish or end of (4)
- 00:58:782 (1,3,4) >> remove hitsounds in (1,3,4), add finish to (1), add clap to (4)
- 01:01:112 >> remove clap
- 01:04:025 (2,3,4) >> remove hitsounds, add clap to (2,4)
- 01:05:772 (1,3) >> remove clap from (1), remove whistle from (3) then add finish
- 01:08:685 (2,3,4,5) >> add clap at the end of (2), remove clap from (3), remove whistle from (4) add clap, remove clap from (5)
- 01:12:763 >> remove finish, add clap
- 01:14:219 (3,4,5) >> add clap on the end of (3,4), add finish to the end of (5)
- 01:17:860 >> remove clap
- 01:23:830 >> end at 01:24:413, add finish, end kiai time here too

:3

arien666
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arien666

adron zhero wrote:

...wha-?
In the Japanese version, subtitles under the symbols give the pronunciation of the sounds
The most important reason of this title :3
;_;
nate_old
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nate_old
the BG is a stretched resolution & is lq... why not cut the picture out of this image and correct it? or you could use this, or a picture of Buono themselves which looks more like a regular size: here
lovhin456
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lovhin456

asforoneday wrote:

the BG is a stretched resolution & is lq... why not cut the picture out of this image and correct it? or you could use this, or a picture of Buono themselves which looks more like a regular size: here
I'm positive it would be the same if you crop the first picture you gave and resize it, since I did that. Because I used the picture that was the BG before and it was that one (the first picture you posted) I cut it then resized it to 1024x768.
arien666
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arien666
Another Taiko diff but

DO NOT ADD THIS MAP INTO MAPSET please ;_;
[Just made for fun]

:3

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Katsu].osu
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
for all of you that put your hard work into this you wont go unrewarded. I don't have as much time to go around promoting our song anymore so i call upon you. If you can find a BAT or someone willing to further mod this song tell them to.

If you know a BAT personally pull some strings for us and get this song ranked ;).

i'll be able to edit once in awhile but not every day (maybe on weekends depends on work load)

For future modders please give me some time to mod. If you find that your mod has some same requests as the ones b4 it don't worry i'll look over the mods to see if there's similarities, however i do ask you scan through them 1st.
Garven
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Garven
Random recheck, bwuhaha

[My Baby]
00:26:889 (2) - Extend this to the big white tick
00:30:238 (3,4) - This might be cooler as a slider that ends at 00:30:675 with a finish on the end
01:23:830 (1) - Remove the finish from the start of this and use a whistle instead.

[My Kid]
The kiai section feels really empty without many hit sounds. :(
01:11:306 (1) - I'd just map through this spinner. It's kind of awkwardly placed and the end leaves very little recovery time for the next note.
01:23:830 (1) - End with a finish instead. And extend to the white tick. Along with the kiai.

[My Adult]
00:40:432 (6,7) - I keep expecting these to play with the guitar instead of just kind of going on without it.
01:24:413 - Add a note here and extend kiai to here.

[aru's My Dons]
00:54:127 (2,3,1,2,1) - Maybe ddkdd?
00:55:292 (1,1,2,3,1) - Maybe dkddd?
01:06:507 (1,1) - dk?

[animask's Boi]
01:01:846 (5,6,7,8) - Just a personal gripe here, but I really don't like combos that double back on themselves like this. They're just not that fun to play for me.
arien666
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arien666

Garven wrote:

[aru's My Dons]
00:54:127 (2,3,1,2,1) - Maybe ddkdd?
00:55:292 (1,1,2,3,1) - Maybe dkddd?
01:06:507 (1,1) - dk?
:3

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Dons].osu
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
done :D
Sakura
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Sakura
[General]
I think your main flaw is that your hitsounds are soft most of the the song when the song looks like it's calling for Normal hitsounds, also you seem to be abusing finishes everywhere, in many of those spots you could just have a normal hit hitsound, also most of the claps look randomly placed, the normal clap pattern goes on (2,4) beats, and you spam claps sometimes and in other times it soudns way too silent, the low volume also makes your slider ticks almost unhearable outside of the chorus.
Your sliders could usre more work as well.

[animask's Boi]
00:09:560 (9) - 1 grid down to keep spacing consistent as it doesnt seem intentional.

[My Adult]
00:08:685 (2) - Reverse selection.
00:43:345 (3) - Unsilence this slider, makes more sense with the musical rythm in the background.

[My Kid]
00:22:229 (3,4) - The rythm here sounds awkward with what you had until now, maybe add a couple notes in between to fill it up?
00:30:821 (1) - Split this spinner around the point the background music breaks.
00:36:792 (4) - Make a proper wave.
00:52:957 (1) - Draw closer to (2) for symmetry and to make the jump less big

I think this map needs still a lot of work before its ready for ranking, get more mods, specially some hitsounds help since it's the main problem of your map at the momment.
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
done!
roflninja
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roflninja
some crappy hitsounds

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [My Baby2].osu

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [My Kid2].osu

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [My Adult2].osu
Sakura
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Sakura
[animask's Boi]
Remove the clap spam at the end and change it for a custom hitsound or use claps on (2,4) beats, and i'll be happy enough with it.

[My Adult]
00:15:384 (7) - Add hitsound clap at slider start.
00:18:296 (X) - Add a note with a clap hitsound to keep the rythm.
00:18:588 (6) - Remove hitsound finish.
00:18:879 (7) - Replace hitsound finish with hitsound clap.
00:24:704 (6) - Add hitsound finish at the end of slider.
00:25:869 (1) - Remove hitsound finish from slider start.
00:26:452 (X) - Add a note with clap hitsound to keep the rythm.
00:50:627 (1,2) - Add hitsound clap on the slider repeat.
00:52:957 (3) - Replace hitsound finish with hitsound clap on both start and end.
01:06:500 (3,4) - Use claps on both and remove hitsound finish from (4).

Ok that's all i'll help you with for now, use what you've learned from fixing that diff, and try to fix the other 2 diffs by yourself. Good Luck!~ If after all it's hard to fix for you, call me again and i'll try my best to help you out
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
Done!
deepsea
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deepsea
aru's My Dons / animask's boi
The timing is different from other 3, coincident them.

My Adult
APR + 1 ~ 2 makes this look a lot better for me, if you set low apr for a 205 bpm map, it looks like a lot of notes crowded together and hard to read.>_>

My Kid
suggest APR + 1 make this better to read.
arien666
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arien666

deepsea wrote:

aru's My Dons / animask's boi
The timing is different from other 3, coincident them.
@johnsage92: Hey! You forgot to resnap notes ;_;
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
oops :P
arien666
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arien666
Sorry for saying this but...
As Taiko-hitsouds of Taiko skin was changed...

If possible, why don't you change my diff's hitsounds? (Soft into Normal , This is all)

;_;
ps. No kudosu please

Just fixing Low-volume Hitsound on my diff and...
Fixed diff name so replace [aru's My Dons] with this file :3

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [aru's My Don].osu
gdeath
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gdeath
I saw your request from my queue.
I'm very sorry for my pretty long delay.Coz i already quitted this community when you posted.www
Just now played your map and its really fun.
Hopefully,it can be ranked soon.

/me shoots 3 star =)
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
Thanks
Kaona
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Kaona
star~ ;)
Garven
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Garven
Oh my, let's get this going again, shall we?

[General]
Add arien666 to tags for all difficulties.

[My Baby]
00:16:840 (1,2) - Not a fan of stacking notes - especially when sliders are involved
00:26:889 (2) - If you want to go with the vocals, extend this to the white tick at 00:27:326 -
01:09:850 (3,4,5,6) - Suddenly using .6x distance snap?

[My Kid]
00:11:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't read very well. It'd probably work out a lot better if you didn't try to go for a boxy back-and-forth flow like that. Try using curved sliders that arc into the next set of beats smoothly, maybe.
00:20:627 (7) - This sounds so much better extended to 00:21:209 -
00:22:229 (3) - Can you position this so it's not overlapping with the 2 a bit? Also the spacing between 2 and 3 is a bit ambiguous.
00:28:782 (2,3) - Same spacing thing. Maybe just delete that extra beat at 3?
00:32:714 - Move this timing section to 00:32:860 -
01:11:306 (1) - I'm wary of this spinner since it's kind of short for a normal, and the note right after it is very, very soon afterward. This is something more for a hard difficulty, tbh. I'd map through the spinner.
01:23:830 (1) - Hrm, kind of soon after a spinner again. Maybe end the spinner at 01:22:083 - and add two beats at 01:23:102 - and 01:23:394 - ?

[My Adult]
00:22:374 (5,6) - This stack disrupts flow a little bit.
00:41:306 (7) - Might be better if you ended this at 00:41:743 - and added a beat at 00:42:034 -
00:42:180 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure what these are going to in the music. Maybe line it up with the vocal more closely to justify the soft hitsound set?
00:49:025 (1,1) - Remove new combos
01:27:763 - Add a beat?

[animask's Boi]
00:38:976 (1) - Control + R and control + H this and put it back in. Looks muuuuch better.
01:01:840 (5,6,7,8) - It's technically fine, but I really don't like patterns like this. They don't read or play very naturally.

Hitsounds are much better from what I recall. Good job on that. They could still use some sprucing up, but it's acceptable for ranking me thinks.
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
I think i got all of that done... Thanks again... now can i see BAT's/bubbles please lol
Garven
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Garven
Add arien666 to tags on all difficulties.

[My Kid]
00:20:627 (7,1) - Not a good spot for such a large jump imo

[My Adult]
00:37:083 (2,3,4,5) - I really have grown to dislike back and forth patterns like this. You don't have to change it, but I feel that they disrupt the flow of the map a lot.
00:38:248 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:42:180 (1,3) - Add soft whistle to the start of both of these?

Mainly add the tags and reduce that jump.
JhnySmthApl
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done that one too
Kotone
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Kotone
:D
RukiaChan_old
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RukiaChan_old
awwww i really love this song! thanks and star =)
Garven
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Garven
There's differences in the letterboxing option, but meh. No map has a break in it anyway.

:U
JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl

Garven wrote:

There's differences in the letterboxing option, but meh. No map has a break in it anyway.

:U
letterboxing option?
JhnySmthApl
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through extensive searching i've found the letterboxing stuff! and now it's all the same
arien666
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arien666
If I remove my Taiko diff from BSS and mod this again, I would bubble this
but it's not good way ;_;
Garven
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You, uh, could have let me know what happened. :P
arien666
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arien666

Garven wrote:

You, uh, could have let me know what happened. :P
You just ate Amu-chan ;_;

good for mappper XD
Keep going :3
Mafiamaster
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[My Kid]
00:33:005 (1) - Move this forward by a 1/2 tick so it starts on the white tick. Don't forget to shorten.

[animask]
01:22:520 (3,4) - Too close together compared to the rest of the combo.
01:24:413 - Possibly add a note here? Stacked on 2 seems like a good idea.
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Done~

2nd one if spacing is still too close. lol cuz idk

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [animask's Boi].osu

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [animask's Boi].osu
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