Chrono Collapse00:38:113 (1,1) - Blanket
00:48:131 (5) - The 1/4's here up until 00:52:784 - just feel unnecessary to me. I mean, they exist in the music, but I don't think you need to map them, because the music hasn't really picked up yet. Felt a bit weird transitioning into a faster-paced section but also seeing a rhythm thats less dense.
02:08:113 (1,2) - Can you make this flow better? I don't really see a need for a flowbreak here. Emphasizing 3 with a break might be better anyways since you can draw attention to the guitar.
02:17:853 (2,3,4) - See if you can make this circle pattern a bit more different from the 1/2's before? The drums are stronger here imo, compared to 02:16:869 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -, but the spacing is about the same.
03:15:548 (1,2) - Blanket's off, if it matters for this pattern.
03:19:929 (1,2,3) - This is so weird xP. The flow totally leads you to go rightward after 1, but instead you have to go leftward to 2, and then jump rightward to 3. It's really uncomfortable to play imo. I would avoid misdirecting flow like this xP.
05:07:557 (5,6) - Make the linear segments more evenly spaced?
06:48:412 (1,2,3) - Same thing as earlier ;c
07:14:472 (4) - This sounded really overmapped for me
08:17:811 (1) - Sliderart
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