1. Easy (0,97 stars, 63 notes)
2. Hard (1,89 stars, 157 notes)
3. Normal (1,18 stars, 88 notes)

BoatKrab wrote:

so beautiful ... ~

Narrow Minds wrote:

Nene. :3

Nene, ten storyboard <3
Jestli si dělal ten timing sám, tak bych doporučoval si to někým prověřit. Možná mi už ruplo v bedně ale někdy ten offset je mimo. (Nebo to je správně, já už nevím)

Easy:
- Obecně: bys mohl nahitsoundovat i sliderticky, protože během hraní to nezní moc dobře, ale to už je na tobě. Fixed
- 01:22:581 (2) - Místo tohohle bych tady dal jednoduchý 1/2 slider s reverse arrow. Hodí se to více k tomu a taky zaplníš to prázdné místo mezi 01:22:581 (2,3) - . Tam je docela problém, že to končí na novém timing pointu a s reversem nemám šanci udělat jednu polovinu na ten timing a druhou, aby končila na tom druhém timingu.

Normal:
- Nic, co bych našel

Hard:
- Zdá se mi, že tady máš občas potíže s DS. Např. 00:52:057 (4,1) - nebo 01:20:124 (5,1) - . Dle mého to vypadá celkem divně. V Hardu jak asi víš, můžeš ten DS nějak ovlivnit. Být tebou, tak posunu ty noty trochu dál. Celkem to brzdí flow a ne moc dobře se to hraje. Pak to opravím, původně jsem na to měl nějaký důvod, ale dostal jsem další názory, že to není potřeba, takže ok.
- 01:41:389 (3) - Tady bych dal něco jiného než 1/1 slider. Je tam totiž v celku důležitý beat a je celkem škoda ho vynechat. Fixed

Dokonalost a autenticita sama. Hodně štěstí s rankem.

Sieg wrote:

nice storyboard
just one suggestion to try
maybe you can try to animate bg a bit, something like adding really-really soft pulsing glow to hair or earring

also, we don't want to get dq because of some technical stuff :3 don't kd

SPOILER

1. 01:31:122 (4) - I'd change the rhythm here so that 01:31:836 is under stress: https://tc.s-ul.eu/CodxYKCv.png (this requires you to put an additional timing section at 01:31:836, however)
2. 01:45:293 - add a note? feels a bit empty here, in the middle of kiai
3. 01:52:636 (4) - change to a slider to denote that stretched "sho-ow"? (1/1 or 3/2)

TicClick wrote:

Timing sounds okay.
[Easy]

1. 01:31:122 (4) - I'd change the rhythm here so that 01:31:836 is under stress: https://tc.s-ul.eu/CodxYKCv.png (this requires you to put an additional timing section at 01:31:836, however) Fixed, but with custom SV through .osu file, because I cannot do it any other way, it would ruin timing on hard for the red tick if I added timing section.
2. 01:45:293 - add a note? feels a bit empty here, in the middle of kiai Fixed
3. 01:52:636 (4) - change to a slider to denote that stretched "sho-ow"? (1/1 or 3/2) I know what you mean, but that's not really my style. I was never fan of mapping something that is not a direct sound.

There's nothing else to mod, really. The only thing that I found unattractive is bottom of bar.png, when a smooth and rounded ending would look better. You can easily fix this by using a bar.png flipped upside down, which will only follow vertical movement and color changes and stretch horizontally: https://tc.s-ul.eu/jUuv8FRo.png (too lazy to tint every piece). Fixed I guess.

Crimmi wrote:

IRC Modded.

Log

22:43 Crimmi: Okay I am going to be nitpicky here but in easy around 00:32:724 (2), the slider end isn't key sounded like you did with the head of the slider.
22:43 Wafu: I don't understand a little?
22:45 Wafu: Oh, you used wrong timestamp
22:45 Wafu: sure fixed
22:45 Crimmi: 00:32:724 (2)
22:45 Crimmi: 00:45:958 (4) - Listening to this a few times, I think this sounds a bit early or a bit late but to me it doesn't sound on point, imo.
22:48 Wafu: Doesn't seem to be noticable for me on 50% and on 25% I hear it's sort of fitting. And the important is whether it's not noticable on 50%, because less is not possible to play.
22:49 Crimmi: I know, just sometimes if a song is keysounded wrong, you're going to hear some weird shit.
22:51 Wafu: Can't really tell at this point
22:53 Crimmi: Ah well.
22:55 Crimmi: 00:21:024 - There is an unsnapped green line there.
22:56 Wafu: Green lines are fully acceptable if it doesn't change anything
22:56 Crimmi: Ah okay
22:56 Crimmi: 01:23:295 (x) - Maybe you could've placed a note there, it's a bit too obvious to be ignored.
22:57 Wafu: Probably should be okay. Added
23:00 Crimmi: 01:23:295 (x) - Here too, but it can go good whether you accept it or not.
23:01 Wafu: Gimme a second please, brb
23:01 Crimmi: np.
23:09 Wafu: We can continue
23:10 Wafu: Eh, you used same time
23:10 Wafu: I mean, pasted
23:10 Crimmi: Ah crap.
23:11 Crimmi: My keybinding are shit.
23:11 Wafu: Hehe
23:11 Crimmi: Anyways, Easy is fine, moving on to normal
23:12 Wafu: Sure
23:14 Crimmi: 00:37:707 - Maybe a note could go here?
23:16 Wafu: I don't think it's enough significant. Sorry, I would rather keep that unmapped for normal, where I attempt to make only important sounds clickable.
23:19 Crimmi: 01:48:080 - You missed a piano key there xD
23:20 Wafu: Yup, cannot say anything against it. Fixed
23:21 Crimmi: There are some points in the kiai there are clickable sounds but they are optional, I just chose the ones that would fit the best.
23:22 Wafu: I guess I should map 01:50:909 -
23:22 Crimmi: Exactly what I was going to post xD
23:23 Crimmi: Other than that, the difficulty is fine.
23:23 Wafu: And would you say a circle or slider fits more?
23:23 Wafu: I would do a slider, but I am not sure whether it's not too much
23:24 Crimmi: A circle would do good since you'll keep the original distance.
23:24 Wafu: Even with slider you can almost accomplish that and moving one object doesn't hurt I guess?
23:27 Crimmi: Yeah that could work too~
23:27 Wafu: hehe
23:36 Wafu: Still here?
23:36 Crimmi: Hmm, nothing bad on Hard.
23:36 Crimmi: It's a great map~
23:37 Wafu: Haha, thanks really much, I appreciate it
23:37 Crimmi: No prob.

YellowManul wrote:

heya, requested from pm

here's the log

good luck with the map tho <(^_^)>b

Modem wrote:

Hi~! M4M is here~ >w</

General

Beautiful ;-;. Nothing wrong, but, um, just my suggestion. There's a long pause at this part -> 00:59:672 ~ 01:03:261 in each diffs. How about inserting break time there? I already stated that in some IRC mod, I didn't want to put the break as it affects storyboard and it doesn't drain almost any HP anyway.

Easy

* Hm, how about using AR 1.5? In my opinion, AR 1.5 matches perfectly with the SV that you use here :3 That probably depends on person, I saw 1.3 as the best one because it's a little bit slower than 1.5, which gives you enough time to realize that there is a BPM change by looking at the approach circle and it's not even low, because no objects are overlapping so the readability would be decreased in any way.
* 00:08:531 (3,4) - This blanket is almost perfect. This slider -> 00:09:245 (4) needs to be less curved, but you need to use 4 GridSize in order to fix it :3 Improved a little. And I don't need 4 grid size, if I am not using grid at all haha
* 00:09:245 (4) - Add NC at this downbeat please~ It would run out of consistency, previous part like that also doeesn't have a new combo.
* 01:22:581 (2,3) - In my opinion, it would be nice if these two notes was replaced with 1/1 slider instead, since the offset was changed in each notes, which make these two notes harder to be predicted by some beginner players. They might hit these notes earlier or a little bit too soon due to the offset change I'll keep that for now, because I think 01:23:307 - should be a clickable object. BPM of the song should be fine for hitting that though.
* 01:33:289 (2) - Add whistle on the head of this slider. It would sounds nice to follow the vocal once in awhile. Moreover, the whistle's sound resulted at the head of 01:33:289 (2) would sounds less loud and softer than the whistle at 01:31:836 (1) due to the soft-hitnormal without the piano, which is matching her vocal perfectly The previous slider has a piano, anyway, I don't want to change that because it doesn't sound enough strong to me to be even emphasized by the vocal and I only wanted to add variety to the kiai part.
* 01:45:293 (2,3) - Making them into blanket? Just like what you did at 01:10:444 (2,3) I use two ways to connect with wavy slider. First one is a blanket as you described and second one is following the wavy part of it and I'd like to not make it same, if I have opportunity to make it different, but still good.
* 01:51:599 (3,4) - I guess changing these two notes into one slider would be better, since just like before, the offset was changing in these two notes, plus the gap between 01:51:599 (3) and 01:52:636 (4) was too long and makes it harder for the beginner players to predict when is the right time to hit this note -> 01:52:636 (4) Same as one at the beginning, as I said, if this is considered critically unplayable, I can change that, but in my opinion, the low BPM really allows it to be a lot more playable.

Normal

* I guess it would be better to use AR 4.5 instead of 4.3 Same as easy, it was again something between what I saw as the best, I'd even say going higher is really overexaggerated for a normal.
* 00:46:654 (1) - How about break this 4/3 slider into 1/1 slider and one note? I feel more comfortable for having this part -> 00:47:751 'clickable' when I test playing Yeah, why not. Fixed
The rest in this diff looks perfectly perfect \:3/

Hard

* AR 6.5 please~ :3 I don't really see the sense in it apart from making numbers dividable by 5. Like it's known that many people are angry if they cannot have 50% volume but 49% or 51% - even I do that, but in maps, so many people recommend rounding numbers like that regardless the gameplay effect. I don't say it's your case, but there were people who recommended changes like this just for sake of nice numbers. I don't see any improvement in gameplay, so that's why I don't fix that.
* 00:10:761 (3) - Add whistle at the head of this slider please~ As already stated on previous diffs, I want to vary the hitsounds only in kiai part as these vocals are not enough strong for being emphasized.
* 00:11:858 (4,1) - This blanket could be improved. This slider -> 00:12:205 (1) just needs to be less curved You're probably referring to approach circle and I don't really like that, because it hugely denies you to use high slider curves, while it actually looks clean and is exactly in the gap.
* 00:37:345 - Add a note at this part would be nice :3 Definitely not, I am not fan of overusing circles when there's no sound.
* 00:38:029 (1,2) - This blanket could be improved as well. Make this slider -> 00:38:760 (2) less curved I fixed the position a little so it's symmetrical, but I didn't really change the shape for reason above.
* 00:54:131 - Add 1/2 slider at this part from 00:54:131 (red tick) until 00:54:488 (big white tick) to follow her voice which is saying 'lors'. Since her vocal still continue until this part that I mentioned, it feels a bit weird to let this part empty. Moreover, you mapped this part 00:56:988 (2) when she was also saying 'lors' so it would be nice to have a consistent rhythm The reason I didn't put notes here, but on the second place is that 00:54:131 - is really faded out and the voice is rather disappearing, 00:54:488 - is then somewhat undefined sound as it's very long and you cannot really determine end of it. 00:56:988 (2) - Is louder, rather than fading out, that's the reason I mapped it. If it's mentioned again, I'll remove 00:56:988 (2) - , but I won't add the note on previous one.
* 01:13:353 (4) - Add whistle at the head of this slider please~ Already mentioned the reason previously.
* 01:46:689 (2,3) - Fix this blanket please~ I find this one fine.

Okay, that's all~
This mapset is sooooo beautiful! I'm crying ;-;
Oh right, here's my map that needs BN check senpai (> w<)/ : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/426548
Thanks~ :3

Good Luck in Rank senpai~

Desperate-kun wrote:

Honestly this mapset seems fine to me as it is. Minimalism is the key to flawless mapping.
I will recheck the timing one more time when I'm less tired and then move this forward. Thank you for mapping Marina! :3

Desperate-kun wrote:

Bubbled!

p3n wrote:

DQ because of old and not used 4MB .osb in the folder.

Edit: And requalified.