here it goes
00:48:044 (1) - move the end point to x508 y228 to be in the same direction as 00:47:751 (2) -
00:48:922 (1,2,3,4) - had an idea for this part http://puu.sh/nujN7/0d9f055dab.jpg
00:51:849 (8) - ctrl+g and move to x104 y284?
00:59:020 (4) - blanket feels a bit weird imo, move to x207 y147?
01:04:434 (2) - ctrl+g and move 01:04:727 (3,4,5) - up feels better
01:15:410 (1) - spacing feels really weird, x264 y184 or somewhere at that distance would be better
01:25:215 (2) - the one next to it is perfectly straight, maybe make this the same?
01:28:434 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/nuk8Z/7c5186ce0a.jpg
01:36:263 (5) - stack with 01:36:337 (6) -
01:36:556 (7) - stack with 01:36:629 (1) -
01:54:776 (2) - make this a slider? http://puu.sh/nukeL/484c92de91.jpg
02:07:946 (3) - blanket with the curve on 02:07:361 (1) -
02:17:824 (5) - is there a point to this circle? try http://puu.sh/nzFMA/c2a61a16a0.jpg if you remove it
02:19:361 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try making these jumps instead of stacked 1/2s
03:09:629 (2,3,4) - this feels weird since it suddenly stops what you were doing at 03:08:239 (1,2) - i'd just make them the same
03:34:581 (3) - move to x296 y360, maybe try blanketing it with (2) like so: http://puu.sh/nzGik/ad817dcf96.jpg
03:46:727 (5,1,2,3) - try making these into jumps such as http://puu.sh/nzGmq/6851553170.jpg
04:36:922 (8) - ctrl+g
04:40:142 (3,4,5,6) - try a square?
06:02:118 (9) - move end point to x400 y220
06:12:804 - should have a circle here since you put one at 06:12:219 (2) -
06:19:389 (4) - ctrl+g
06:19:975 (6) - ctrl+g
06:36:365 (1,2,3) - really weird spacing here, try http://puu.sh/nzH1r/98b6a23b81.jpg ?
07:44:267 (6,7) - feels weird as a stack: http://puu.sh/nzHbR/b2258ab4b4.jpg
07:57:731 (2,3,4) - awkward spacing, try http://puu.sh/nzHgN/9f0ef7bca6.jpg
08:43:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this starting curve is wider compared to the rest of the stream, try having it start lower
you may have noticed my skins change between images, took me a while to finish modding this
hopefully it'll be of some help! love this map to death, good luck on ranking
00:48:044 (1) - move the end point to x508 y228 to be in the same direction as 00:47:751 (2) -
00:48:922 (1,2,3,4) - had an idea for this part http://puu.sh/nujN7/0d9f055dab.jpg
00:51:849 (8) - ctrl+g and move to x104 y284?
00:59:020 (4) - blanket feels a bit weird imo, move to x207 y147?
01:04:434 (2) - ctrl+g and move 01:04:727 (3,4,5) - up feels better
01:15:410 (1) - spacing feels really weird, x264 y184 or somewhere at that distance would be better
01:25:215 (2) - the one next to it is perfectly straight, maybe make this the same?
01:28:434 (7,8) - http://puu.sh/nuk8Z/7c5186ce0a.jpg
01:36:263 (5) - stack with 01:36:337 (6) -
01:36:556 (7) - stack with 01:36:629 (1) -
01:54:776 (2) - make this a slider? http://puu.sh/nukeL/484c92de91.jpg
02:07:946 (3) - blanket with the curve on 02:07:361 (1) -
02:17:824 (5) - is there a point to this circle? try http://puu.sh/nzFMA/c2a61a16a0.jpg if you remove it
02:19:361 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - try making these jumps instead of stacked 1/2s
03:09:629 (2,3,4) - this feels weird since it suddenly stops what you were doing at 03:08:239 (1,2) - i'd just make them the same
03:34:581 (3) - move to x296 y360, maybe try blanketing it with (2) like so: http://puu.sh/nzGik/ad817dcf96.jpg
03:46:727 (5,1,2,3) - try making these into jumps such as http://puu.sh/nzGmq/6851553170.jpg
04:36:922 (8) - ctrl+g
04:40:142 (3,4,5,6) - try a square?
06:02:118 (9) - move end point to x400 y220
06:12:804 - should have a circle here since you put one at 06:12:219 (2) -
06:19:389 (4) - ctrl+g
06:19:975 (6) - ctrl+g
06:36:365 (1,2,3) - really weird spacing here, try http://puu.sh/nzH1r/98b6a23b81.jpg ?
07:44:267 (6,7) - feels weird as a stack: http://puu.sh/nzHbR/b2258ab4b4.jpg
07:57:731 (2,3,4) - awkward spacing, try http://puu.sh/nzHgN/9f0ef7bca6.jpg
08:43:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this starting curve is wider compared to the rest of the stream, try having it start lower
you may have noticed my skins change between images, took me a while to finish modding this
hopefully it'll be of some help! love this map to death, good luck on ranking