Hey o/
[Himei]
[Himei]
- What's wrong withy all the red lines before the map even start?
- 00:39:849 (5) - Add NC as your SV starts to slowly increase from here
- 00:47:459 (4) - You forgot NC
- 01:25:215 (2) - Maybe it would be wiser to put the NC here instead of 01:24:922 (1) - to prevent the new SV
- 01:36:629 (2) - ^ instead of 01:36:556 (1) - it's the slider you want to put attention!
- 02:06:995 - You miss a pretty strong beat here. I guess it's not that important though but well
- 03:21:117 (1) - Try to reduce it a bit, it touches the hp bar!
- 03:21:702 (1,2,1) - I find the rythme a bit unexpeted tbh and the slider doesn't feel catchy at all, not sure how to fix it, but I think it would sound better if you add a reverse on 03:21:702 (1) - to stay constant and not forget the beats
- 03:37:873 - Would sound really cool if you add a note here as it will call back this triple 03:38:385 (6) -
- 03:39:556 (2) - NC here?
- 06:30:219 (3) - The end of the slider is pretty big, reduce the slider to finish on the previous blue tick and add a note at 06:30:511 - ?
- 03:57:410 - I'dd add a note here and put the spinner on the next blue tick. I usually don't agree with this rhythme but your pattern feels a bit unfinished here (probably cause we can't here that downbeat)
- 04:06:483 (7) - NC for new SV
- 06:21:292 (2) - I'd remove to give more impact to 06:20:853 (4,5,6,1) -
- 06:23:633 (2) - ^
- 06:51:511 - The way you did is more natural but a note sounds great here though xD
- 07:43:755 - ah you miss a pretty strong beat once more
- 08:05:633 - why not mapping it? It's pretty strong and feels pretty natural to map it as far as I'm concerned :c
- 08:06:511 (1) - I don't know what you think about it, but for this section I'll maybe try to add a few more triples as it feels a bit empty compared to the music that is full of 1/4. I feel the patterns (rhythmically) are more appropriate from 08:10:024 (1) -
- 08:39:877 (1) - Might be just me but I feel that I'd still prefer a semicircle for more flow!
- 07:08:999 (5) - Wouldn't it be more logical to put the NC here instead of here 07:09:365 (1) - ?
- 06:55:536 (1) - NC? to prevent the new SV.