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did some consistency check now
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[ongakus insane]
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i guess the rest is fine =w=
ahh why did you already kd the lazy irc mod <.<
did some consistency check now
- 00:04:978 (4) - phrase starts here again so put NC here too, RNC at 00:05:395 (1) then
- 00:05:707 (4) - you might nc this, too like you did at 00:02:374 (1)
- 00:09:040 (5) and 00:09:561 (1) - different NC'ing again. although the first time the phrase is ending abruptly, i still recommend to keep them the same (just seems the most logical then to me)
- 01:51:957 (2,3) - ^ different NC'ing in the last part too ;w;
- 00:04:249 (1,2) - how it comes that so different from 00:10:915 (1,2) ?
- 00:12:374 (5) - NC issue like above
- 00:20:082 - shouldnt there be a wubbly slider here?
- 00:19:353 (1) - and 00:32:686 (1,2,3,4) - sounds actually similiar (and this sound is on the same spot in the repetition) if you remove your hitsounds. so make it the same too? this is a structure issue in ther way that, as a player you wont notice that it's actually the same again (thus map feels more random)
- 00:16:020 (1) - not as important but its a different style compared to 00:22:686 (1) - but why tho
- 00:17:270 (2) - where are my 1/6? (compare to 00:23:936 (2,3,4,5) - at the repetition). on a second note NC'ing is different here again but the music making differences here too so yea
- 00:33:311 (3) - 1/1 is really bad. the jumps and NC should start at the sliderend. anyway it is completely different mapped to 00:20:186 (6,1,2,3,4)
- 00:48:311 (4) - slider is off the synth, at 00:47:374 (3) you acrificed the strong drum to get the slider togethere with the synth. you basically did it all the time before so its kinda suprising to get off the synth-line/track here. make it like at 00:51:853 (1) (altough thats not exactly the repetition but it has the same rhythm)
- 00:55:186 (2) - ctrl+g would flow waaay better. also i think pursuing the previous pattern is out of place as the music changes here
- 00:56:228 (4) - where are your 1/8 drum following sliders now huh^^ (see 01:26:020 (1,2) - mentioned in IRC). i still think you should remove hte 1/8 sliders at the second time tho^^
- 00:55:968 - ^ same as above, add your 1/8 stream here then?
- 00:59:561 (1,2) - ctrl+g, still think it would flow awesome
- 01:01:436 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not some scratch-mapping like at repetition at 01:08:311 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3)
- 01:01:645 (3) - anyway this finish is on wrong spot it should be at 01:01:540 -
i think this additional finish sounds awesome tho, so maybe instead add one at the repetitionalso missing out the finish at 01:02:999 - - 01:08:520 (2) - finish should be here like at ^
- 01:14:249 (6,1) - dafuq o.o? this should be like at 01:20:915 (1,2)
- 01:22:895 (1) - you didnt NC at 01:16:228 (4) tho
- 01:28:207 (4) - here you sacrifice the strong drum to follow the vocals, 01:27:374 (5,6) - here you didnt do this exactly
- 01:29:353 (1) - even tho the vocals are having a kind of a break here i think it is still more appropriate to make the NC at 01:29:561 (2) at the white tick/beginning of vocals (if even a NC is needed at all). i actually would make 2xcircle+2xslider at 01:29:353 (1,2,3,4) - (instead of the current 2xslider+2xcircle rhythm)
- 01:35:915 (1,2,3,4) - please make NC'ing and maybe similiar rhythm too (2xcircle+slider+circle) like at ^. this is again almost a repetition.
- 01:30:811 (4,5,6,7) - i know what youre are going for here but, this looks very similiar mapped when you followed the vocals, so when youre playing you also expect that. use a more different looking pattern here pls :s
- 01:48:832 (3) - isnt this slider like completely wring here? sounds like this to me: http://puu.sh/n90ca/202f3329c4.jpg ((5,6) are on 1/12 snap if you wanna map them)
- 01:49:353 (7) - NC here? theme is coming back again after that jazz like piano shout-in. you also did sth similiar at 01:50:915 (1)
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- 00:03:728 (2,3,4,5) low spaced - 00:10:395 (3,4,5,6) high spaced. logic
- 00:04:249 (6,7) - 00:10:915 (1,2) - why the different rhythms
- 00:28:311 - where did all my wubbly sliders go in the repetition of this part 00:14:978 - ?
- 00:32:686 (1,2,3,4) - 00:19:145 (5,1,2,3) - make them the same? more memorisable then, too not mentioning its actually completely the same thing again
- 01:07:999 (1,1,2,3) - 01:01:332 (1,1,2,3,4) - map them in kinda the same way? at least fix that slider 01:01:332 (1)
[ongakus insane]
- 00:02:374 (1) - remove NC. compare to 00:08:311 (1,2,3)
- 00:08:728 (2) - for same reason as above make this also a repeat slider or the other an antijump-non-repeat-slider
- 00:48:520 - 00:49:145 - 00:49:457 - "The Disappearance of whistle-chan". it really hurts, i wold rather remove the drum-hitsounds for that. the normal-whsitles are exclusively for the special synth of this part (while the drum HS are basiclal everywhere) so at least keep it consistent.
- 00:54:874 - 00:55:395 - 00:55:603 - same as ^, you could actually put them on the sliderend, sliderbody, sliderbody so why not add them if you can?
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i guess the rest is fine =w=
ahh why did you already kd the lazy irc mod <.<