[ General]
- Metadata was almost copied all form this ranked version https://osu.ppy.sh/s/356357 so I think the things are fine.
[ Easy] Overall a really polished Easy. Most of the blankets are well made and the DS is actually consistent over the whole diff. Good job! I just have few things that worry me regarding the rhythm:
- 00:10:937 (1) NC here to keep consistency in the way you just managed the NC in the beginning. Consider doing the same here 00:26:318 (4)
- 00:31:343 (2,3,4,5) Honestly, the density of circles here makes a hard pattern to follow for a beginner. It would be better if you tried out to use more slider and less circles too fill up this segment. I do believe trying something like this would make a relaxing and catchy rhythm for this diff:
[ Normal] After testing this Normal many times, I found out some minor issues to discuss:
I mostly complain about the density of notes of the last two kiais. While the first one which starts here 01:02:105 uses 1/2 rhythms almost in the all the measures compared with the last kiai, which begins here 01:11:851 - , consists on 1/1 sliders and objects. Try to delete some notes and make them uniform since they're almost the same pair of kiais.
- 00:04:772 (2) This reverse is making such as an uncomfortable rhythm because it's skipping such as an important beat as it is this one 00:05:241 . I highly suggest to remove the reverse and extend it until here 00:05:241 to highlight the guitar wave you were following.
- 00:06:179 (5) NC here and remove the NC here 00:07:435 (1) I guess it's intentional the new combo there but it plays rather weird because only three objects fro combo look awkward.
- 00:26:927 (4) Add a note here for consistency. I know you were following vocals here but honestly between the gap between these two objects 00:27:536 (5,1) feels unrhythmical.
- 00:30:582 (1) Only a preference, but I dislike how the slider-tail redirects to the next note. This just makes a non-perceptive flow from one note to another one. It would be way better if you add a red node in the end to make an easier pattern to beginners. Like:
I mostly complain about the density of notes of the last two kiais. While the first one which starts here 01:02:105 uses 1/2 rhythms almost in the all the measures compared with the last kiai, which begins here 01:11:851 - , consists on 1/1 sliders and objects. Try to delete some notes and make them uniform since they're almost the same pair of kiais.
[ Hard] Nice hard, HB! Btw, what that username means? o:
- 00:12:003 (4,5) Not sure what you were following here but I think it would make more sense if you did a ctrl + G to highlight better the slight waves you managed in this patterning.
- 00:16:267 (2,3) Aesthetically talking, these two sliders look rather odd due the way they flow. Besides the shape isn't really attractive. Would you mind creating a neater pattern here? What about this?
- 00:29:668 (4,5) Honestly these kind of stacks create a very untidy rhythm because of how are they placed. In addition, if you make a comparison with the 1/2 you just managed here 00:30:429 (7,1) - . That 1/1 rhythm might be confusing to players to click after the dense and hardcore 1/2 the last patterning gave so it would be better if you unstacked them to a better readability purpose. Consider applying the same here 00:34:541 (4,5)
- 01:14:744 (2,3,4,5,6) This looks intentional but compared with this one 01:19:313 (1,2,3,4) I feel they have the same intensity which I heavily suggest make them uniform.
[ Light Insane] minor issues:
- 00:22:967 (9) Please, stack it over 00:22:663 (7) . Despite it looks you did it on purpose, it would be better to clean up some pixels here to place it properly. The same goes over 00:39:262 (7)
- 00:31:039 (2,3) Understack them. This isn't a 1/2 object and not even a 1/4 to place such as a tack on a long space pattern. Consider applying the same here 00:32:105 (5,6)
- 01:12:308 (2) Remove the finish of this slider. It feels really out of place compared to the finishes you managed just before.
[ Sotark's Insane]
Had an IRC mod with the mapper and we discussed somethings concerning:
Had an IRC mod with the mapper and we discussed somethings concerning:
- Stack and unstacks in the patterning.
- Inconsistent Distance Snap over some jumps.
- New combos and some other nazi things.
- Here's the log.
2016-01-29 19:32 Miyaura: Ugh~
2016-01-29 19:32 Miyaura: I like turtles.
2016-01-29 19:44 Miyaura: TURTLES
2016-01-29 19:44 Miyaura: TURTLES
2016-01-29 19:44 Miyaura: HappyTurtle88
2016-01-29 19:44 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-29 19:44 HappyRocket88: idk what your new username means
2016-01-29 19:44 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: you don't want to know
2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: x)
2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: i wanted to rename in LazyMapper
2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: LazyMapper88*
2016-01-29 19:45 HappyRocket88: lazymapper69*
2016-01-29 19:46 Miyaura: 69?
2016-01-29 19:46 Miyaura: lol
2016-01-29 19:47 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: so how's it going rocket ?
2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: fine
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: how many bn check spam did u get today
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: ?
2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: university is hard
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: ow
2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: so i guess my bn activity will be dropped
2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: university is easy in France
2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: no icons until midtherms pass \o.o/
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: university is for lazy poeple here
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: xD
2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: gl dude!
2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: yeah ;w;
2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: have to study and read
2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: XDD
2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: I hate to read long stories
2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-29 19:52 Miyaura: lol
2016-01-29 19:52 Miyaura: LazyStudent88
2016-01-29 19:52 HappyRocket88: lazystudent69
2016-01-29 19:52 HappyRocket88: plz
2016-01-29 19:52 Miyaura: dude why the fuck
2016-01-29 19:53 Miyaura: 69
2016-01-29 19:53 HappyRocket88: haven't you tried the 69 yut? o:
2016-01-29 19:53 Miyaura: with my gf
2016-01-29 19:53 Miyaura: yes of course
2016-01-29 19:56 HappyRocket88: then why are you surprised everytime i wrote 69?
2016-01-29 19:56 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-29 19:56 Miyaura: i dunno
2016-01-29 19:56 Miyaura: xD
2016-01-29 19:56 HappyRocket88: do i look like a virgin, miya?
2016-01-29 19:57 HappyRocket88: am i that virgin? :c
2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: well i have no idea
2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: :(
2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: dude
2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: probably not
2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: :/
2016-01-29 19:58 HappyRocket88: XDDDDDDDD
2016-01-29 19:58 HappyRocket88: well
2016-01-29 20:01 Miyaura: are
2016-01-29 20:01 Miyaura: u
2016-01-29 20:01 Miyaura: ?
2016-01-29 20:02 HappyRocket88: i'm a
2016-01-29 20:02 HappyRocket88: little flower in the garden >u<
2016-01-29 20:03 Miyaura: ow
2016-01-29 20:03 Miyaura: so u are a virgin turtle
2016-01-29 20:03 HappyRocket88: a virgin, not a turtle
2016-01-29 20:03 HappyRocket88: otherwhise you could eat me D:
2016-01-29 20:04 Miyaura: dude
2016-01-29 20:04 Miyaura: i'll finish by eating u
2016-01-29 20:04 Miyaura: one day
2016-01-30 12:42 Miyaura: Ok.
2016-01-30 12:42 Miyaura: Wtf is this avatar ?
2016-01-30 12:43 HappyRocket88: XDD
2016-01-30 12:43 HappyRocket88: Excentric
2016-01-30 12:43 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-30 12:43 Miyaura: ><
2016-01-30 13:23 Miyaura: duude
2016-01-30 13:23 Miyaura: milan bubbled HB's map
2016-01-30 13:23 Miyaura: do u think u can qualify
2016-01-30 13:24 HappyRocket88: he already bubbled it?
2016-01-30 13:24 HappyRocket88: how fast
2016-01-30 13:24 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-30 13:25 Miyaura: yeah
2016-01-30 13:25 Miyaura: xD
2016-01-30 13:26 HappyRocket88: going to finish this GD
2016-01-30 13:26 HappyRocket88: and then i'll take part of his map xd
2016-01-30 13:26 Miyaura: cool :)
2016-01-30 19:25 Miyaura: ><
2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: >w</
2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: stop sleeping you robot
2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: (jk)
2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: But /u\
2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: I know HB24 is
2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: :(
2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: is ?
2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: so hyped because of the bubble but i told him to wait xD
2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: HB24 IS SPAMMED ME
2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: SPAMMING ME
2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: ALL DAY LONG
2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: 50% is to THANK ME BY GETTING MILAN
2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: 50% is to spam you
2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: to qualify
2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: lol
2016-01-30 19:27 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-30 19:27 HappyRocket88: Hopefully i didn't find such as
2016-01-30 19:27 HappyRocket88: a lot of issues
2016-01-30 19:28 Miyaura: on HB's map?
2016-01-30 19:29 HappyRocket88: yeah
2016-01-30 19:33 Miyaura: NICE
2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: ok
2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: wtf
2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: is your new avatar
2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: dude pls
2016-01-31 16:57 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-31 16:57 HappyRocket88: what's the problem with it? :>
2016-01-31 17:10 Miyaura: i stop complaining with your wtf avater
2016-01-31 17:11 HappyRocket88: You like turtles and why should i judge your likes? xd
2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: xDDD
2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: dude
2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: turtles is love
2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: ACTION slaps*
2016-01-31 17:13 HappyRocket88: turtles bite so hard d:
2016-01-31 17:19 Miyaura: turtles suck
2016-01-31 17:19 Miyaura: they don't bite
2016-01-31 17:20 Miyaura: it's love
2016-01-31 17:20 Miyaura: dude
2016-01-31 17:20 HappyRocket88: if it's love, why do you eat them then?
2016-01-31 17:20 HappyRocket88: xd
2016-01-31 17:27 Miyaura: btw when you'll check my diff
2016-01-31 17:27 Miyaura: if you want to irc
2016-01-31 17:27 Miyaura: i'm here
2016-01-31 17:28 HappyRocket88: i'm finishing the hard
2016-01-31 17:28 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-31 17:28 Miyaura: kk
2016-01-31 18:06 HappyRocket88: you there? o:
2016-01-31 18:07 Miyaura: no
2016-01-31 18:08 Miyaura: :)
2016-01-31 18:09 Miyaura: ?
2016-01-31 18:09 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-31 18:10 HappyRocket88: don't want to force you to do a irc mod
2016-01-31 18:10 HappyRocket88: when youre palying. n.n
2016-01-31 18:10 Miyaura: it will be long?
2016-01-31 18:10 HappyRocket88: I don't know. o:
2016-01-31 18:11 Miyaura: go irc
2016-01-31 18:11 HappyRocket88: well
2016-01-31 18:12 HappyRocket88: let's begin _(:3J L)_
2016-01-31 18:13 Miyaura: ok :|
2016-01-31 18:14 HappyRocket88: why are you mad? o:
2016-01-31 18:14 Miyaura: i'm not mad
2016-01-31 18:14 Miyaura: xD
2016-01-31 18:15 HappyRocket88: Then. what's with that face? :>
2016-01-31 18:15 HappyRocket88: Btw, shouldn't this have NC 00:07:435 (4) - ?
2016-01-31 18:15 HappyRocket88: just as well as HB24 did it in all his diffs?
2016-01-31 18:16 Miyaura: Yup
2016-01-31 18:16 Miyaura: fixed
2016-01-31 18:17 HappyRocket88: If that's so, consider removing the NC here 00:07:739 (1) - to don't make a new combing spam xd
2016-01-31 18:17 Miyaura: fixed
2016-01-31 18:18 HappyRocket88: 00:10:937 (1,2) - would you mind blanketing them better?
2016-01-31 18:19 Miyaura: fixed
2016-01-31 18:19 HappyRocket88: umm i found somehow this patterning 00:11:394 (2,3,4,5) - a little bit dull due the amount of stacks.
2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: heh
2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: (it's fine no?)
2016-01-31 18:20 HappyRocket88: what do you think of placing 00:11:394 (2) - here 312|200
2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: fixed
2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: xD
2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: w/e
2016-01-31 18:21 Miyaura: looks nice
2016-01-31 18:22 HappyRocket88: 00:19:313 (5,6) - please, consider reducing the distance of these two.
2016-01-31 18:22 HappyRocket88: I see a bit untidy to increase the spacing there when the strong beats reside here 00:19:617 (1) -
2016-01-31 18:24 Miyaura: fixed
2016-01-31 18:25 HappyRocket88: 00:21:902 (4) - not sure why the distance is shorter here when you used the same DS in the previous patterns. it would hurt no one if you place it here 216|256
2016-01-31 18:26 Miyaura: fixed
2016-01-31 18:28 HappyRocket88: 00:34:084 (4,1) - The DS of this part is a bit exaggerated considering is the most calm part of the song. /u\ it would flow better if you short the distance here for a nicer flow.
2016-01-31 18:28 Miyaura: if I stack
2016-01-31 18:28 Miyaura: 00:34:084 (4) -
2016-01-31 18:29 Miyaura: 00:33:780 (3) - on this slider end
2016-01-31 18:29 Miyaura: ?
2016-01-31 18:29 HappyRocket88: ohhh
2016-01-31 18:29 HappyRocket88: that would be really tricky x.x
2016-01-31 18:30 Miyaura: not really
2016-01-31 18:31 HappyRocket88: well i guess there aren't a lot of solutions xd
2016-01-31 18:32 HappyRocket88: 00:44:896 (4) - isn't this supposed to be turned to two objects as well as you did in the rpevious patterns?
2016-01-31 18:32 Miyaura: dunno x.x
2016-01-31 18:33 Miyaura: long time ago i mapped this
2016-01-31 18:34 HappyRocket88: i guess you wanted to do the same of what you did here 00:42:155 (2,3,4,5) - or 00:39:719 (2,3,4,5) -
2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: no not really
2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: but I guess i shall do the sam
2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: same
2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: no
2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: ?
2016-01-31 18:35 HappyRocket88: yep
2016-01-31 18:36 HappyRocket88: I honestly find weird the transition of these objects 01:03:932 (4,5,6,7) - because it's more intutive if the spacing increases here for rhytmical purposes
2016-01-31 18:37 Miyaura: i like it :(
2016-01-31 18:38 HappyRocket88: then why you did this 01:13:678 (4,5,6,7) - later?
2016-01-31 18:40 Miyaura: the same
2016-01-31 18:40 Miyaura: patern
2016-01-31 18:40 Miyaura: dude
2016-01-31 18:40 HappyRocket88: but the spacing is different
2016-01-31 18:41 HappyRocket88: in the first one you decreased the DS for 5 - > 6
2016-01-31 18:41 HappyRocket88: and in the last one you did the oppsite. o.o
2016-01-31 18:41 Miyaura: well i'll fix it
2016-01-31 18:41 Miyaura: so it's the same
2016-01-31 18:41 HappyRocket88: 01:14:744 (2,6) - could you please stack them? >u<
2016-01-31 18:43 Miyaura: fixed
2016-01-31 18:43 HappyRocket88: that's all! \o
2016-01-31 18:43 HappyRocket88: it wasn't that long
2016-01-31 18:43 HappyRocket88: XD
2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: lol
2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: really
2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: xD
2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: ok
2016-01-31 18:45 HappyRocket88: now the alst diff and i'm free
2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: to qualify?
2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: HB is spaming me
2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: xD
2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: he'll fix just after you post the mod
2016-01-31 18:47 HappyRocket88: not sure if he will address all the things
2016-01-31 18:47 HappyRocket88: that fast D:
2016-01-31 18:47 Miyaura: you'll pop bubble ?
2016-01-31 18:48 HappyRocket88: no. o:
2016-01-31 18:48 HappyRocket88: i didn't find anything unrankable. XD
2016-01-31 18:49 HappyRocket88: but you know, this map is probably be dq'ed
2016-01-31 18:49 HappyRocket88: because of the current nazi modders
First Impact Nice extra! PP plox!
- 00:16:267 (2) Ctrl + G here to improve the flow of the previous slider.
- 00:17:028 (1,2) Increase the DS of these two objects. They're slightly closer compared to the other patterns. Consider applying the same here 00:19:617 (1,2) -
- 00:39:110 (6) NC here to keep consistency in the way you just managed the NC. Consider applying the same here 00:43:983 (4) - 00:53:881 (6) -
- 01:10:480 (4,5,6,1) Oh, please, if this is supposed to be a star jump pattern consider to make it tidier for a nicer flower.
- 01:11:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Considering the angle of shape of the previous six.stream pattern, it would make more sense if this followed the same angle of flow to keep consistent the circulation of the objects in a more perceptive way. Here there are some objects.
- 01:13:830 (5,6) This stack makes this pattern to flow in a very awkward weird due the 1/4 stack you managed just before. It would make more sense if you unstacked them and try the smoother jumps you were keeping till now.