HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hellow! Upon Sotarks' request.

[ General]

1. Metadata was almost copied all form this ranked version https://osu.ppy.sh/s/356357 so I think the things are fine.

[ Easy] Overall a really polished Easy. Most of the blankets are well made and the DS is actually consistent over the whole diff. Good job! I just have few things that worry me regarding the rhythm:

1. 00:10:937 (1) NC here to keep consistency in the way you just managed the NC in the beginning. Consider doing the same here 00:26:318 (4)// sure
2. 00:31:343 (2,3,4,5) Honestly, the density of circles here makes a hard pattern to follow for a beginner. It would be better if you tried out to use more slider and less circles too fill up this segment. I do believe trying something like this would make a relaxing and catchy rhythm for this diff:// i dont think so, making that will make this note 00:32:409 - clickable for no reason and this one 00:32:714 - not and it should be clickable :p
   
   

[ Normal] After testing this Normal many times, I found out some minor issues to discuss:

1. 00:04:772 (2) This reverse is making such as an uncomfortable rhythm because it's skipping such as an important beat as it is this one 00:05:241 . I highly suggest to remove the reverse and extend it until here 00:05:241 to highlight the guitar wave you were following. //im following bass here dude ;w; i think u know it since next notes are following nothing but the bass
2. 00:06:179 (5) NC here and remove the NC here 00:07:435 (1) I guess it's intentional the new combo there but it plays rather weird because only three objects fro combo look awkward. //ok
3. 00:26:927 (4) Add a note here for consistency. I know you were following vocals here but honestly between the gap between these two objects 00:27:536 (5,1) feels unrhythmical. //uhh u mean here 00:26:927 - ? im following the melody there
4. 00:30:582 (1) Only a preference, but I dislike how the slider-tail redirects to the next note. This just makes a non-perceptive flow from one note to another one. It would be way better if you add a red node in the end to make an easier pattern to beginners. Like: //yes true
   
   

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I mostly complain about the density of notes of the last two kiais. While the first one which starts here 01:02:105 uses 1/2 rhythms almost in the all the measures compared with the last kiai, which begins here 01:11:851 - , consists on 1/1 sliders and objects. Try to delete some notes and make them uniform since they're almost the same pair of kiais.//well i kinda understand wat u said but in the last kiai begining from here 01:16:876 - song forced me to not use 1/2 since it changed in term of rythme, however i atryed to add a note here 01:12:764 - so at least it can be some kind of balanced (didnt want to remove notes since bns pointed out that kiai is easy compared to the rest)

[ Hard] Nice hard, HB! Btw, what that username means? o: //its the initials of my name

1. 00:12:003 (4,5) Not sure what you were following here but I think it would make more sense if you did a ctrl + G to highlight better the slight waves you managed in this patterning. //Melody man im following melody and if i do wat u said ill be skiping a change of tone here 00:12:155 -
2. 00:16:267 (2,3) Aesthetically talking, these two sliders look rather odd due the way they flow. Besides the shape isn't really attractive. Would you mind creating a neater pattern here? What about this? //did sth similar
   
   
3. 00:29:668 (4,5) Honestly these kind of stacks create a very untidy rhythm because of how are they placed. In addition, if you make a comparison with the 1/2 you just managed here 00:30:429 (7,1) - . That 1/1 rhythm might be confusing to players to click after the dense and hardcore 1/2 the last patterning gave so it would be better if you unstacked them to a better readability purpose. Consider applying the same here 00:34:541 (4,5) //Fixed
4. 01:14:744 (2,3,4,5,6) This looks intentional but compared with this one 01:19:313 (1,2,3,4) I feel they have the same intensity which I heavily suggest make them uniform. //idk wat u mean by "uniform" but i think i got u, changed

[ Light Insane] minor issues:

1. 00:22:967 (9) Please, stack it over 00:22:663 (7) . Despite it looks you did it on purpose, it would be better to clean up some pixels here to place it properly. The same goes over 00:39:262 (7) //ok
2. 00:31:039 (2,3) Understack them. This isn't a 1/2 object and not even a 1/4 to place such as a tack on a long space pattern. Consider applying the same here 00:32:105 (5,6) //understack? if u meant unstacking them but why, there s like a 1/1 break between those two so separating them would not make much sense to me :/
3. 01:12:308 (2) Remove the finish of this slider. It feels really out of place compared to the finishes you managed just before. //yes
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First Impact Nice extra! PP plox!

1. 00:16:267 (2) Ctrl + G here to improve the flow of the previous slider. //done
2. 00:17:028 (1,2) Increase the DS of these two objects. They're slightly closer compared to the other patterns. Consider applying the same here 00:19:617 (1,2) - //fixed
3. 00:39:110 (6) NC here to keep consistency in the way you just managed the NC. Consider applying the same here 00:43:983 (4) - 00:53:881 (6) - //yeah
4. 01:10:480 (4,5,6,1) Oh, please, if this is supposed to be a star jump pattern consider to make it tidier for a nicer flower.//i tryed ;w;
5. 01:11:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Considering the angle of shape of the previous six.stream pattern, it would make more sense if this followed the same angle of flow to keep consistent the circulation of the objects in a more perceptive way. Here there are some objects. //idk why all ppl hate that stream xD but oh well did some changes
   
   
6. 01:13:830 (5,6) This stack makes this pattern to flow in a very awkward weird due the 1/4 stack you managed just before. It would make more sense if you unstacked them and try the smoother jumps you were keeping till now. //yeah done

go go power rangers!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Sotark's Insane

they're so kawaii to be food.

Had an IRC mod with the mapper and we discussed somethings concerning:

1. Stack and unstacks in the patterning.
2. Inconsistent Distance Snap over some jumps.
3. New combos and some other nazi things.
4. Here's the log.
   

   2016-01-29 19:32 Miyaura: Ugh~
   2016-01-29 19:32 Miyaura: I like turtles.
   2016-01-29 19:44 Miyaura: TURTLES
   2016-01-29 19:44 Miyaura: TURTLES
   2016-01-29 19:44 Miyaura: HappyTurtle88
   2016-01-29 19:44 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-29 19:44 HappyRocket88: idk what your new username means
   2016-01-29 19:44 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: you don't want to know
   2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: x)
   2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: i wanted to rename in LazyMapper
   2016-01-29 19:45 Miyaura: LazyMapper88*
   2016-01-29 19:45 HappyRocket88: lazymapper69*
   2016-01-29 19:46 Miyaura: 69?
   2016-01-29 19:46 Miyaura: lol
   2016-01-29 19:47 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: so how's it going rocket ?
   2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: fine
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: how many bn check spam did u get today
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: ?
   2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: university is hard
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: ow
   2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: so i guess my bn activity will be dropped
   2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: university is easy in France
   2016-01-29 19:48 HappyRocket88: no icons until midtherms pass \o.o/
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: university is for lazy poeple here
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: xD
   2016-01-29 19:48 Miyaura: gl dude!
   2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: yeah ;w;
   2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: have to study and read
   2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: XDD
   2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: I hate to read long stories
   2016-01-29 19:49 HappyRocket88: XD
   2016-01-29 19:52 Miyaura: lol
   2016-01-29 19:52 Miyaura: LazyStudent88
   2016-01-29 19:52 HappyRocket88: lazystudent69
   2016-01-29 19:52 HappyRocket88: plz
   2016-01-29 19:52 Miyaura: dude why the fuck
   2016-01-29 19:53 Miyaura: 69
   2016-01-29 19:53 HappyRocket88: haven't you tried the 69 yut? o:
   2016-01-29 19:53 Miyaura: with my gf
   2016-01-29 19:53 Miyaura: yes of course
   2016-01-29 19:56 HappyRocket88: then why are you surprised everytime i wrote 69?
   2016-01-29 19:56 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-29 19:56 Miyaura: i dunno
   2016-01-29 19:56 Miyaura: xD
   2016-01-29 19:56 HappyRocket88: do i look like a virgin, miya? 
   2016-01-29 19:57 HappyRocket88: am i that virgin? :c
   2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: well i have no idea
   2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: :(
   2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: dude
   2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: probably not
   2016-01-29 19:58 Miyaura: :/
   2016-01-29 19:58 HappyRocket88: XDDDDDDDD
   2016-01-29 19:58 HappyRocket88: well
   2016-01-29 20:01 Miyaura: are
   2016-01-29 20:01 Miyaura: u
   2016-01-29 20:01 Miyaura: ?
   2016-01-29 20:02 HappyRocket88: i'm a 
   2016-01-29 20:02 HappyRocket88: little flower in the garden >u<
   2016-01-29 20:03 Miyaura: ow
   2016-01-29 20:03 Miyaura: so u are a virgin turtle
   2016-01-29 20:03 HappyRocket88: a virgin, not a turtle
   2016-01-29 20:03 HappyRocket88: otherwhise you could eat me D:
   2016-01-29 20:04 Miyaura: dude
   2016-01-29 20:04 Miyaura: i'll finish by eating u
   2016-01-29 20:04 Miyaura: one day
   2016-01-30 12:42 Miyaura: Ok.
   2016-01-30 12:42 Miyaura: Wtf is this avatar ?
   2016-01-30 12:43 HappyRocket88: XDD
   2016-01-30 12:43 HappyRocket88: Excentric
   2016-01-30 12:43 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-30 12:43 Miyaura: ><
   2016-01-30 13:23 Miyaura: duude
   2016-01-30 13:23 Miyaura: milan bubbled HB's map
   2016-01-30 13:23 Miyaura: do u think u can qualify
   2016-01-30 13:24 HappyRocket88: he already bubbled it?
   2016-01-30 13:24 HappyRocket88: how fast
   2016-01-30 13:24 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-30 13:25 Miyaura: yeah
   2016-01-30 13:25 Miyaura: xD
   2016-01-30 13:26 HappyRocket88: going to finish this GD
   2016-01-30 13:26 HappyRocket88: and then i'll take part of his map xd
   2016-01-30 13:26 Miyaura: cool :)
   2016-01-30 19:25 Miyaura: ><
   2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: >w</
   2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: stop sleeping you robot
   2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: (jk)
   2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: But /u\
   2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: I know HB24 is
   2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: :(
   2016-01-30 19:26 Miyaura: is ?
   2016-01-30 19:26 HappyRocket88: so hyped because of the bubble but i told him to wait xD
   2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: HB24 IS SPAMMED ME
   2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: SPAMMING ME
   2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: ALL DAY LONG
   2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: 50% is to THANK ME BY GETTING MILAN
   2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: 50% is to spam you
   2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: to qualify
   2016-01-30 19:27 Miyaura: lol
   2016-01-30 19:27 HappyRocket88: XD
   2016-01-30 19:27 HappyRocket88: Hopefully i didn't find such as
   2016-01-30 19:27 HappyRocket88: a lot of issues
   2016-01-30 19:28 Miyaura: on HB's map?
   2016-01-30 19:29 HappyRocket88: yeah
   2016-01-30 19:33 Miyaura: NICE
   2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: ok
   2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: wtf
   2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: is your new avatar
   2016-01-31 16:53 Miyaura: dude pls
   2016-01-31 16:57 HappyRocket88: XD
   2016-01-31 16:57 HappyRocket88: what's the problem with it? :>
   2016-01-31 17:10 Miyaura: i stop complaining with your wtf avater
   2016-01-31 17:11 HappyRocket88: You like turtles and why should i judge your likes? xd
   2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: xDDD
   2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: dude
   2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: turtles is love
   2016-01-31 17:13 Miyaura: ACTION slaps*
   2016-01-31 17:13 HappyRocket88: turtles bite so hard d:
   2016-01-31 17:19 Miyaura: turtles suck
   2016-01-31 17:19 Miyaura: they don't bite
   2016-01-31 17:20 Miyaura: it's love
   2016-01-31 17:20 Miyaura: dude
   2016-01-31 17:20 HappyRocket88: if it's love, why do you eat them then?
   2016-01-31 17:20 HappyRocket88: xd
   2016-01-31 17:27 Miyaura: btw when you'll check my diff
   2016-01-31 17:27 Miyaura: if you want to irc
   2016-01-31 17:27 Miyaura: i'm here
   2016-01-31 17:28 HappyRocket88: i'm finishing the hard
   2016-01-31 17:28 HappyRocket88: XD
   2016-01-31 17:28 Miyaura: kk
   2016-01-31 18:06 HappyRocket88: you there? o:
   2016-01-31 18:07 Miyaura: no
   2016-01-31 18:08 Miyaura: :)
   2016-01-31 18:09 Miyaura: ?
   2016-01-31 18:09 HappyRocket88: XD
   2016-01-31 18:10 HappyRocket88: don't want to force you to do a irc mod
   2016-01-31 18:10 HappyRocket88: when youre palying. n.n
   2016-01-31 18:10 Miyaura: it will be long?
   2016-01-31 18:10 HappyRocket88: I don't know. o:
   2016-01-31 18:11 Miyaura: go irc
   2016-01-31 18:11 HappyRocket88: well
   2016-01-31 18:12 HappyRocket88: let's begin _(:3J L)_
   2016-01-31 18:13 Miyaura: ok :|
   2016-01-31 18:14 HappyRocket88: why are you mad? o:
   2016-01-31 18:14 Miyaura: i'm not mad
   2016-01-31 18:14 Miyaura: xD
   2016-01-31 18:15 HappyRocket88: Then. what's with that face? :>
   2016-01-31 18:15 HappyRocket88: Btw, shouldn't this have NC 00:07:435 (4) - ?
   2016-01-31 18:15 HappyRocket88: just as well as HB24 did it in all his diffs?
   2016-01-31 18:16 Miyaura: Yup
   2016-01-31 18:16 Miyaura: fixed
   2016-01-31 18:17 HappyRocket88: If that's so, consider removing the NC here 00:07:739 (1) - to don't make a new combing spam xd
   2016-01-31 18:17 Miyaura: fixed
   2016-01-31 18:18 HappyRocket88: 00:10:937 (1,2) - would you mind blanketing them better?
   2016-01-31 18:19 Miyaura: fixed
   2016-01-31 18:19 HappyRocket88: umm i found somehow this patterning 00:11:394 (2,3,4,5) - a little bit dull due the amount of stacks. 
   2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: heh
   2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: (it's fine no?)
   2016-01-31 18:20 HappyRocket88: what do you think of placing 00:11:394 (2) - here 312|200
   2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: fixed
   2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: xD
   2016-01-31 18:20 Miyaura: w/e
   2016-01-31 18:21 Miyaura: looks nice
   2016-01-31 18:22 HappyRocket88: 00:19:313 (5,6) - please, consider reducing the distance of these two. 
   2016-01-31 18:22 HappyRocket88: I see a bit untidy to increase the spacing there when the strong beats reside here 00:19:617 (1) - 
   2016-01-31 18:24 Miyaura: fixed
   2016-01-31 18:25 HappyRocket88: 00:21:902 (4) - not sure why the distance is shorter here when you used the same DS in the previous patterns.  it would hurt no one if you place it here 216|256
   2016-01-31 18:26 Miyaura: fixed
   2016-01-31 18:28 HappyRocket88: 00:34:084 (4,1) - The DS of this part is a bit exaggerated considering is the most calm part of the song. /u\ it would flow better if you short the distance here for a nicer flow.
   2016-01-31 18:28 Miyaura: if I stack
   2016-01-31 18:28 Miyaura: 00:34:084 (4) -
   2016-01-31 18:29 Miyaura: 00:33:780 (3) - on this slider end
   2016-01-31 18:29 Miyaura: ?
   2016-01-31 18:29 HappyRocket88: ohhh
   2016-01-31 18:29 HappyRocket88: that would be really tricky x.x
   2016-01-31 18:30 Miyaura: not really
   2016-01-31 18:31 HappyRocket88: well i guess there aren't a lot of solutions xd
   2016-01-31 18:32 HappyRocket88: 00:44:896 (4) - isn't this supposed to be turned to two objects as well as you did in the rpevious patterns?
   2016-01-31 18:32 Miyaura: dunno x.x
   2016-01-31 18:33 Miyaura: long time ago i mapped this
   2016-01-31 18:34 HappyRocket88: i guess you wanted to do the same of what you did here 00:42:155 (2,3,4,5) - or 00:39:719 (2,3,4,5) - 
   2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: no not really
   2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: but I guess i shall do the sam
   2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: same
   2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: no
   2016-01-31 18:35 Miyaura: ?
   2016-01-31 18:35 HappyRocket88: yep
   2016-01-31 18:36 HappyRocket88: I honestly find weird the transition of these objects 01:03:932 (4,5,6,7) - because it's more intutive if the spacing increases here for rhytmical purposes
   2016-01-31 18:37 Miyaura: i like it :(
   2016-01-31 18:38 HappyRocket88: then why you did this 01:13:678 (4,5,6,7) - later?
   2016-01-31 18:40 Miyaura: the same
   2016-01-31 18:40 Miyaura: patern
   2016-01-31 18:40 Miyaura: dude
   2016-01-31 18:40 HappyRocket88: but the spacing is different
   2016-01-31 18:41 HappyRocket88: in the first one you decreased the DS for 5 - > 6
   2016-01-31 18:41 HappyRocket88: and in the last one you did the oppsite. o.o
   2016-01-31 18:41 Miyaura: well i'll fix it
   2016-01-31 18:41 Miyaura: so it's the same
   2016-01-31 18:41 HappyRocket88: 01:14:744 (2,6) - could you please stack them? >u<
   2016-01-31 18:43 Miyaura: fixed
   2016-01-31 18:43 HappyRocket88: that's all! \o
   2016-01-31 18:43 HappyRocket88: it wasn't that long
   2016-01-31 18:43 HappyRocket88: XD
   2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: lol
   2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: really
   2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: xD
   2016-01-31 18:44 Miyaura: ok
   2016-01-31 18:45 HappyRocket88: now the alst diff and i'm free
   2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: to qualify?
   2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: HB is spaming me
   2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: xD
   2016-01-31 18:46 Miyaura: he'll fix just after you post the mod
   2016-01-31 18:47 HappyRocket88: not sure if he will address all the things
   2016-01-31 18:47 HappyRocket88: that fast D:
   2016-01-31 18:47 Miyaura: you'll pop bubble ?
   2016-01-31 18:48 HappyRocket88: no. o:
   2016-01-31 18:48 HappyRocket88: i didn't find anything unrankable. XD
   2016-01-31 18:49 HappyRocket88: but you know, this map is probably be dq'ed 
   2016-01-31 18:49 HappyRocket88: because of the current nazi modders

Make sure no mod posts in the map thread have been ignored before qualifying or bubbling a map. Additionally, take care to note if any unwarranted kudosu was given out in situations that it shouldn’t have been; deny these before bubbling or qualifying.
If there are posts that should have gotten kudosu but haven’t, consult the mapper and correct the issue if necessary.

1. KASUM1
2. Louis Cyphre
3. Nathan Kiss
4. Dailycare
5. BriedisLT
6. Kloyd
7. Mazziv
8. Shirn

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Make sure no mod posts in the map thread have been ignored before qualifying or bubbling a map. Additionally, take care to note if any unwarranted kudosu was given out in situations that it shouldn’t have been; deny these before bubbling or qualifying.
If there are posts that should have gotten kudosu but haven’t, consult the mapper and correct the issue if necessary.

Where's the reply from Shirn's mod? ;w; In addittion, I didn't see you reply to all modders properly. Some of them were skipped somehow and you should provide an explanaiton of their mod since they took the time to mod your map. Here's a list:

1. KASUM1
2. Louis Cyphre
3. Nathan Kiss
4. Dailycare
5. BriedisLT
6. Kloyd
7. Mazziv
8. Shirn

I hope I didn't miss one.

Shiirn wrote:

Suggestions
Major suggestions
Aesthetic suggestions
Unrankable issues

As I've seen the walls of text in the other mods, I'm going to give more overviews than direct changes in this mod.

Your gunshot hitsound really glitches out near the end and sounds like ass. Might want to edit that feedback away.//well got that sound from a ranked map so i dont think its a problem

Easy

1. I would actually increase AR by 1. [/color]

Normal

1. 01:16:267 (4) - this blanket is pretty bad// fixed

Hard

1. 00:49:465 (7,8,9,10) - I hate stacked 1/2 doubles like this. The jerkiness of the way they play is very annoying. This section of the song is intense enough to have movement between these notes, but this is just my suggestion.// i cant use more jumps for this hard diff thats why i made a light insane
2. 00:52:054 (7,8) - These aren't as bad as they are red tick -> white tick, and there's only one of them.// is that causing a problem?
3. 00:54:338 (7,8,9,10) - more doubles

Light Insane

1. AR to 8.3 or so. As it is right now the player can barely see 2 beats into the future. 8.3 allows them to claerly see 2 beats into the future, which is a good measure for this skill level.
2. A lot of the differences in spacing here feel fairly arbitrary. If you're going to distance snap, stick to using distance snap. When you arbitrarily break distance snap, it feels very awkward. This map is fine, but this is just a tip for the future.
3. 00:17:028 (5,6) - blanket could use some work // fixed
4. 00:38:957 (5,6,7) - This plays EXTREMELY awkwardly, due to the fact you're asking the player to hop from the end of 4 and make a sharp turn to hit 6, only to reverse to hit 7 and make another sharp turn to hit 8. Stack 5 and 7 and raise 6 so that it's almost a straight back-and-forth. It's easier for a player to reverse direction entirely than it is for them to make 90 degree turns. This is why squares are much harder than triangles. // well i reduced the ds since i stacked them recently so...
5. 00:46:267 (4,5) - I don't understand why you swap back to main beat here. The instruments and vocals are still off-beat, so it'd be better to have a slider instead of (4) and allow the following stream to actually start with a circle instead of a slider.// following vocals mostly thats why
6. 00:49:160 (6,9) - blanket // fixed
7. 00:49:922 (10,1) - If you're going to have these follow the same triangular shape as the pattern before them, make sure they're stacked the right way. If you want 10 to be directly below 00:49:465 (7) - , you're gonna have to have (1) be a bit to the right of (8). Remember to move the next combo so the blankets are all kept.// well that intentional since its done to avoid confusion due to the low AR
8. 00:54:795 (10,1) - ^ since it's a copied pattern.

First Impact

1. 00:15:353 (3,1) - If you're going to do this kind of thing, space it so that (3) actually gets in the way of (1) and that (1)'s bend is blanketted by (3).// nah ill leave it as it is
2. 00:15:810 (1,2) - blanket sucks // thanks
3. 00:39:566 (7,8,9,10) - This feels awkward as hell. Probably due to the 1/2 double, but also due to the fact that 7 and 10 aren't stacked while 8 and 9 are. // as i said its some kind of custom stacking that i use in every one of my maps
4. whatever