[Pochiko]
00:12:826 (4,5) - How about a larger jump here for emphasis?
00:32:045 (5) - Is this supposed to be stacked with slide r2?
01:41:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pitch is going down here. I would have the largest jump on 1, and have the spacing go down from there instead of up.
01:53:139 (4,5) - Larger jump from 4>5 would fit the music nicely here.
02:12:202 (1) - Can you make this look nicer? xD it's too curved imo.
02:36:108 (8,1) - NC's should be swapped.
02:35:484 (7,1) - Here too. Have NC's begin on white ticks.
02:36:733 (8,1) - ^
02:59:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Imo this stream is overmapped. I don't hear a lot of 1/4's that support this stream... what do you think. (you can disagree, but just give me a reason, i think other BN's might also mention this later)
[Expert]
00:09:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Can you have the first stream like lower in spacing? So like the stream gets more spaced as the drums get louder? I think it would be a really cool effect.
00:34:858 (1,2) - This jump is a bit big for me... can you make it a bit smaller? Like move slider 1 a bit more to the left of the screen?
00:52:358 (1,2) - Ctrl+G. Flows a lot better imo. Right now 11>12>1 creates a really linear flow, and linear flow is lame xD
[Extra]
00:24:858 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Ahh I really dislike this pattern xP I think it's just too over the top with those sliderjumps ;v
00:28:295 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds really overmapped to me
01:00:483 (3,4,5) - 4>5 feels like a better place to put a jump imo. 3>4 isn't emphasizing much.
01:55:170 (2,3) - This flowbreak isn't really necessary imo
02:17:045 (9,1) - I really dislike this break too x___x The kink really makes thks pattern annoying to play lol.
Actually, looking through this diff, there are quite a few things I don't really like lol... I think it still needs a few more mods.
[Insane]
00:09:858 (1,2) - Space them out a bit more? too close together imo xD.
00:10:170 (2,3,4,5) - This is actually really hard to read at first because of the slider-end overlaps. Can you make them easier to read? Because imo the rhythm you pick is quite nice here.
01:01:889 (5,6) - I would avoid the flowbreak here and do something more simple. Make this flow nicely instead?
02:11:889 (5,1) - Can you blanket this better.
02:25:092 (2,3) - This is really hard to see because its all covered by the slider. Can you manual stack on the left of the slider instead?
02:52:201 (1,2) - Make this flow better too? D: Actually i think 02:52:670 (2) - can be a 1/2 slider and a circle instead. I think that rhhythm fits better. I wanna click on the slider-end xD.
02:58:139 (6,7,1) - Hmm I don't really like how this flows either... I would do something like this: but you might have to move some more stuff around.
03:09:858 (1,2) - Why are these so close together ;c. Spacing :C This 1/3 section, some spacings just look weird because you space the 1/1's lower than you space 1/3's lol Compare 03:11:733 (4,5,1,2) - . Please space this section out better.
03:33:451 (1) - Remake this slider, its like a 2010 slider lol.
[Light Insane]
01:17:045 (4,5) - The spacing is fine, but make this flow nicely?
02:44:233 (3,4,5) - Make them even in spacing? Visually i mean.
03:16:003 (3,4) - I would snap these onto white ticks instead since you don't really map to the vocals during this section. The rhythm you use earlier really follows instruments instead of vocals. You can maybe add a 1/3 or two here if you really want. But I would snap the sliders to white ticks.
[Hard]
00:52:358 (1,2,3) - I would move them up a bit so they don't touch slider 4.
01:24:858 (1) - Can you make this circles/sliders? :C the spinner was really random imo loool. It's also really short, i don't think players will be that prepared for it.
02:03:608 (1) - How about two circles instead? Since that's how you map it with all your other diffs xD. I think the spinner is unnecessary here too.
02:20:483 (3,1) - Space them out a bit more? Theyre too close together imo, (maybe its just me)
02:39:233 (1,2,3,1) - This arrangement looks quite confusing for new players. I would just either stack them, or make them easier to read.
02:48:608 (1,2,3,4) - the triplet should be on 02:48:854 - .
03:01:108 (5) - NC
03:27:201 (1,2,3,4) - Space them out more, they are 1/1 not 1/2, but their spacing looks similar to 1/2 spacing you use.
Normal and Easy are good. Nothing I want to point out. Find me in game, we should talk about the Extra.