Hello , M4M for the two hardest diff, as we said
i could do all of it but it's 2AM here x_X
Before I start I'd like to say I'm doing my best to not look offensive ! Some people told me I was sometimes offensive in my mods and that's really not how I want it to be ! So if you feel like I'm offensive or negative in some way don't hesitate to say it , but all the things I write are purely suggestions anyways !
Collab Light Insane :
Overall : I don't really understand why AR 8.7 If you have a good reason then fair enough but since it's 200 bpm and contains some jumps i'd say ar9 is better for this diff too, same for the Hard one , i'd say ar8 is fair enough (but it's just my way of thinking)
00:00:538 (1) - I think this might look a bit neater if you make a blanket with the next circle like this http://prntscr.com/9khk1i
00:01:888 - Here also a small adjustment upwards makes this jump look way more beautiful http://prntscr.com/9khkoy
00:05:338 (1) - maybe this slider would look better curved (just suggestion)
00:14:938 (1,2) - again here a blanket looks good imo ^^
00:16:588 (3) - you should try to make these kind of sliders more regular this way : http://prntscr.com/9khlvu
00:18:238 (4,1) - here is also a small blanket mistake, but i'll stop pointing them out like a nazi, i trust you'll fix it where you can :p
00:34:738 (3,4,5,6) - i would suggest you to space them out some more because a bit later you use higher spacing and there isn't any notable difference in music intensity or anything, but it's just a suggestion
00:44:338 (3,4) - i think the spacing here is also a bit too small, when i testplayed i went too fast and missed ... (rip) but you could fix that by repeating (3), so it would also match with 00:46:888 (3,4) - (where there is no interruption)
00:50:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this spacing feels very odd also, because just few secs ago you used similar spacing for 1/2 jumps :s i'd recommend to space them out a bit more like 00:53:338 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:52:738 (1) - this one's ending should be 1/3 snapped : like this http://prntscr.com/9khp76
01:05:488 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - just a suggestion here, i think the flow is a bit better like this, you don't have to change if you don't like it this for the jumps http://prntscr.com/9khq4d and this to keep the flow after that http://prntscr.com/9khqp8
00:54:538 (1) - also i forgot, here i think a long slider might fit more than a spinner, but meh i'm not sure do as you wish
Insane :
Overall : same as previous diff, there are some blankets to fix but i'm sure you can do that by yourself
00:20:788 (3) - hmm a normal curve would look nicer but it is only my opinion
00:50:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - again i suggest a higher spacing here ^^
01:05:038 (4) - the lack of notes after this is a bit disturbing during gameplay, especially as there is still music, i'd say you could make a slider from this circle to make it less awkward
01:06:088 (2,4) - it's better to space up those two just a bit , imo
00:54:538 (1) - same suggestion as previous diff, well more like something to think about
Really cool map , I enjoyed playing it and wish you the best to get it ranked !
i could do all of it but it's 2AM here x_X
Before I start I'd like to say I'm doing my best to not look offensive ! Some people told me I was sometimes offensive in my mods and that's really not how I want it to be ! So if you feel like I'm offensive or negative in some way don't hesitate to say it , but all the things I write are purely suggestions anyways !
Collab Light Insane :
Overall : I don't really understand why AR 8.7 If you have a good reason then fair enough but since it's 200 bpm and contains some jumps i'd say ar9 is better for this diff too, same for the Hard one , i'd say ar8 is fair enough (but it's just my way of thinking)
00:00:538 (1) - I think this might look a bit neater if you make a blanket with the next circle like this http://prntscr.com/9khk1i
00:01:888 - Here also a small adjustment upwards makes this jump look way more beautiful http://prntscr.com/9khkoy
00:05:338 (1) - maybe this slider would look better curved (just suggestion)
00:14:938 (1,2) - again here a blanket looks good imo ^^
00:16:588 (3) - you should try to make these kind of sliders more regular this way : http://prntscr.com/9khlvu
00:18:238 (4,1) - here is also a small blanket mistake, but i'll stop pointing them out like a nazi, i trust you'll fix it where you can :p
00:34:738 (3,4,5,6) - i would suggest you to space them out some more because a bit later you use higher spacing and there isn't any notable difference in music intensity or anything, but it's just a suggestion
00:44:338 (3,4) - i think the spacing here is also a bit too small, when i testplayed i went too fast and missed ... (rip) but you could fix that by repeating (3), so it would also match with 00:46:888 (3,4) - (where there is no interruption)
00:50:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this spacing feels very odd also, because just few secs ago you used similar spacing for 1/2 jumps :s i'd recommend to space them out a bit more like 00:53:338 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
00:52:738 (1) - this one's ending should be 1/3 snapped : like this http://prntscr.com/9khp76
01:05:488 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - just a suggestion here, i think the flow is a bit better like this, you don't have to change if you don't like it this for the jumps http://prntscr.com/9khq4d and this to keep the flow after that http://prntscr.com/9khqp8
00:54:538 (1) - also i forgot, here i think a long slider might fit more than a spinner, but meh i'm not sure do as you wish
Insane :
Overall : same as previous diff, there are some blankets to fix but i'm sure you can do that by yourself
00:20:788 (3) - hmm a normal curve would look nicer but it is only my opinion
00:50:938 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - again i suggest a higher spacing here ^^
01:05:038 (4) - the lack of notes after this is a bit disturbing during gameplay, especially as there is still music, i'd say you could make a slider from this circle to make it less awkward
01:06:088 (2,4) - it's better to space up those two just a bit , imo
00:54:538 (1) - same suggestion as previous diff, well more like something to think about
Really cool map , I enjoyed playing it and wish you the best to get it ranked !