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Sawai Miku - Colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix)

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Depths

fuyuyu- wrote:

Moecho
  1. 00:26:774 (2) - umm...could you try 1/4 reverse or triple ? I tried but it's not very good because there is sliderend-tripple before this and there is a a quint-note stream... I'd rather have the player to be a bit relaxed
  2. 00:44:260 - no sounds here, so 70% volume is uncomfortable for me, lower volume pls (-30~50%?) OK!
  3. 00:49:746 - here have small sound, so you can add circle. tbh 3/4 spacing is kinda unreadable With this AR it should be readable
  4. 03:10:146 (2) - stack Turn this on please
  5. 03:42:374 (4) - reserve sound's end is 03:42:546 - , so I'd change to 1/2 slider. No, her vocal doesn't end there fully(only word ends there)
  6. 03:43:060 (1,1,1) - add whistle on each head Thanks! I forgot to add that~
  7. 04:07:403 (1) - could you try blanket? Ugly imo qwq
  8. 04:27:803 - lower volume Ok; Add V -> 35%
Depths
  1. 01:14:946 (2) - stack fixed
  2. 01:15:974 (1) - ^ also fixed
  3. 01:50:946 (5) - NC my NC is normally bad sometime ><
  4. 01:51:460 - lower volume o.o i dont know how I missed this
  5. 01:54:717 (1) - why this one not use Ctrl+G or something like that on same combo? I dont think it is needed imo, would ruin flow
  6. 02:13:403 - lower volume yes~
  7. 02:57:803 (1,1,1) - add whistle on each head sure, this sounds nice too~
  8. 04:31:060 (1) - same as 01:54:717 (1) - same earlier
  9. 04:49:746 - sampleset:soft and lower volume also fixed

sry for short modding><
Winnie
You've made me proud my nigga
Asahina Momoko
ohio

colllab thing


  • moecho
  1. 00:05:860 - why don't you follow this background sound with making 00:05:688 (5) - shorten to 1/2 slider and put circle here
  2. 00:21:288 (1,2,3) - to change the order them as 2,3,1 might make better flow
  3. 00:38:946 (6) - you can change this to slider as following same sounds like 00:39:288 (1,2,3) -
  4. 01:36:717 (2) - this note kills impetus from 01:36:546 (1) - to 01:36:888 (1) - , because they require aim to be straight but a bit differ distance they have. so move 01:36:203 (7,8,1) - like below or if you don't mind stack with 01:36:031 (6,2) - , move 01:36:717 (2) - around 208/156 would be fine.
  5. 01:38:260 (2) - how about moving it to 262/239 rather than stack?

    depths
  6. 02:05:689 (1) - at least you want to do this, it should be more showed up. current pattern is just hard to read
  7. 02:47:002 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H'd pattern makes flow more dynamic to 02:47:516 (6) - i think
  8. 02:56:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mmm i think this sounds should be apart as per 4 beats like 1234,1234,1234,,, aiming change on 02:56:346 (1,1) - is so unnatural to play here

gl!
Topic Starter
Depths

Asahina Momoko wrote:

ohio

Asahina Momoko wrote:

ohio

colllab thing


  • moecho
  1. 00:05:860 - why don't you follow this background sound with making 00:05:688 (5) - shorten to 1/2 slider and put circle here I don't find that necessary
  2. 00:21:288 (1,2,3) - to change the order them as 2,3,1 might make better flow Sure
  3. 00:38:946 (6) - you can change this to slider as following same sounds like 00:39:288 (1,2,3) - But there is no "same sound" I follow here... They are obviously different
  4. 01:36:717 (2) - this note kills impetus from 01:36:546 (1) - to 01:36:888 (1) - , because they require aim to be straight but a bit differ distance they have. so move 01:36:203 (7,8,1) - like below or if you don't mind stack with 01:36:031 (6,2) - , move 01:36:717 (2) - around 208/156 would be fine. No, that was the reason I put NC on 01:36:888 (1) - since they are the same but reflected, it's not that hard to read and I have never missed because of not being able to read there owo
  5. 01:38:260 (2) - how about moving it to 262/239 rather than stack? No, the flow becomes more wierd that way. That was intended to follow the word "Yume"

    depths
  6. 02:05:689 (1) - at least you want to do this, it should be more showed up. current pattern is just hard to read Maybe, but no change now, I'll ask others what why think
  7. 02:47:002 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H'd pattern makes flow more dynamic to 02:47:516 (6) - i think 02:47:002 (2,3,4) - blankets slider end of 02:46:488 (1) - , inverting it horizontal is just wierd
  8. 02:56:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mmm i think this sounds should be apart as per 4 beats like 1234,1234,1234,,, aiming change on 02:56:346 (1,1) - is so unnatural to play here I'll get some test plays and ask about this, but for now keeping

gl!
Thanks for modding Moko
Nozhomi
lazy modding v2.0
2016-01-01 18:37 Nozhomi: lazy to mod the 1st january
2016-01-01 18:37 Depths: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/398167
2016-01-01 18:37 Depths: but do it
2016-01-01 18:37 Nozhomi: can't even work on my sound editing XD
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: bcuz ur my mom
2016-01-01 18:38 Nozhomi: let 's see
2016-01-01 18:38 Nozhomi: blanket kd pls
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: its a collab so
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: yea
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: thats fine
2016-01-01 18:46 Nozhomi: 01:36:203 (7,8,1) - & 01:39:288 (1,2,3) - are ass flow (the 1st more than second one)
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: not my part
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: xd
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: if you post this I'll tell her to look at the thread\
2016-01-01 18:47 Nozhomi: about parts like 02:54:717 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: but dont be mean to her mom
2016-01-01 18:48 Nozhomi: could you try to keep some consistency with spacing ?
2016-01-01 18:48 Depths: yea
2016-01-01 18:48 Nozhomi: like we pass from 3.50x before 1st kiai to 2.60x on this one
2016-01-01 18:48 Nozhomi: and makes 1st overdone
2016-01-01 18:49 Depths: I see what you mean
2016-01-01 18:49 Nozhomi: that's all I can found lol

01:36:203 (7,8,1) - & 01:39:288 (1,2,3) - Flow is awful to play like that. I would recomand to use a simple one who follow slider form.

Bye~
pkk
IRC
22:02 pkk: 01:07:403 (6,1,2) -
22:03 Depths: http://puu.sh/mgqVH/bb461bd309.jpg better?
22:03 pkk: yee sik 5/7
22:05 pkk: 01:16:660 (1,2,1,2) -
22:05 pkk: 01:16:831 (2,2) -
22:06 pkk: 01:18:203 (5) -
22:06 Depths: ok fixed
22:06 pkk: x 268 y 115
22:07 pkk: 01:22:317 (5,6) -
22:08 Depths: nah, not touching, and it plays fine
22:08 pkk: 01:45:632 (6,7) -
22:09 pkk: 01:55:917 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) -
22:10 pkk: soft sampleset on tail
22:11 pkk: 01:54:374 (1,2,1,2) -
22:11 Depths: ok dad
22:11 Depths: 01:53:003 (1,2,1,2) -
22:11 pkk: 01:55:231 (2) - up 2 right 2
22:15 Depths: 04:34:146 (1,2,1,2) -
22:16 pkk: 02:51:460 (5,6) -
22:17 pkk: [https://i.gyazo.com/9a5782b77d2e491493e7878b062dd57b.png d]
22:18 pkk: 02:52:488 (3,4) -
22:18 Depths: looks a lot better, and feels better
22:18 pkk: me irl
22:19 Depths: same tbh
22:19 pkk: 02:52:317 (2) - x 266 y 325
22:21 pkk: 03:44:431 (2,5,6) -
22:22 pkk: 03:44:946 (6) - x 403 y 248
22:22 Depths: ok
22:22 pkk: 03:52:317 (1) -
22:22 pkk: 03:52:831 (3,4,5) -
22:23 pkk: 04:00:031 (6) -
22:24 pkk: 7 right
22:24 pkk: 04:02:945 (5,1) - confusing spacing
22:26 pkk: 04:27:974 (1,2) -
22:26 pkk: part starting here
22:26 pkk: 04:29:346 (1,2,1,2) -
22:27 pkk: 04:47:003 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
22:27 pkk: 04:49:231 (1,2,3,4,5) -
22:29 pkk: that's all
22:29 Depths: 02:07:746 (4) -
Winnie
Thanks Dad
Topic Starter
Depths
updated from Pk, since we were talking on Discord it was easy to discuss things
Rizia
maybe soft-sliderslide10.wav unused
nothing else to say
Topic Starter
Depths

Rizia wrote:

maybe soft-sliderslide10.wav unused
nothing else to say
removed soft-sliderslide10

thanks Rizia
Rieri
TAKE MY STAR.
Rizia
good
bubble #1
Rieri
congratz
Topic Starter
Depths
nice, waiting on Ike and Yuki now
BeatofIke
Looks good. Bubble #2~
Topic Starter
Depths
thanks Ike, waiting for Yuki's mod now
I want this specifically qualified on the 13th so pls no else snipe this from Yuki lol
Koiyuki
hitnormal20 has a 3ms delay which cant be passed, hitnormal2,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,16 have some kinds of delay from 1ms~3ms, i fixed all of them here, use this instead: http://puu.sh/mteW8/501854ae9c.rar

useless timing sections:
02:08:088 -
04:31:146 -
04:48:546 -

solid mapping, just some hitsound suggestions:
00:54:031 (1,2,3) - add some whistles with soft additions, quite fits
01:46:831 (3) - 01:48:203 (3) - ^
01:59:860 (1) - soft whistle?
02:08:431 (2,3,5) - ^
02:23:174 (1,2,3) - same part
03:15:631 (2,3,6,1,3,2) - also some white ticks
04:00:888 (2,3,5,2,3,5) - ^

and why not silenced sliderslide2? well, although it works fine without silenced sliderslide.

it's too late ahhh i have to go to bed now >.<
send me a pm so i can recheck it after getting up yeee
Topic Starter
Depths

Minakami Yuki wrote:

hitnormal20 has a 3ms delay which cant be passed, hitnormal2,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,16 have some kinds of delay from 1ms~3ms, i fixed all of them here, use this instead: http://puu.sh/mteW8/501854ae9c.rar

useless timing sections:
02:08:088 -
04:31:146 -
04:48:546 -

solid mapping, just some hitsound suggestions:
00:54:031 (1,2,3) - add some whistles with soft additions, quite fits
01:46:831 (3) - 01:48:203 (3) - ^
01:59:860 (1) - soft whistle?
02:08:431 (2,3,5) - ^
02:23:174 (1,2,3) - same part
03:15:631 (2,3,6,1,3,2) - also some white ticks
04:00:888 (2,3,5,2,3,5) - ^

and why not silenced sliderslide2? well, although it works fine without silenced sliderslide.

it's too late ahhh i have to go to bed now >.<
send me a pm so i can recheck it after getting up yeee
applied all suggestions with the exception of sliderslide 2 being silent, I think its fine as is..
also added your hitsounds thanks for fixing that!!
Thanks Yuki <3
called back Ike and Rizia to rebub~
BeatofIke
Bubble repaired back to #1~
Koiyuki
why reb, i can straightly qualify it :<
well... already rebbed so let's wait rizia :?
Topic Starter
Depths
sorry pwp
Rizia
Bubbled#2
Koiyuki
Happy birthday~

and is my
Topic Starter
Depths

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Happy birthday~

and is my
thank you, Yuki <3
Satellite

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Happy birthday~
hb!
hvick225
zyoi

hvick225 wrote:

happy bd and grats o3o!!
BeatofIke
Happy Birthday Yuki

^-^=
Kyouren
Happy Birthday and Gratzz!

but...

This map is unrankable because guest mapper made longer part than uploader.
t/358506/start=30
Okoratu
Yeah uhhhm

According to the description and given that i didnt fuck up basic math, the time mapped by moecho is 2:54 and depths has 2:16 so he shouldnt be uploader of this set...?
Koiyuki

KittyAdventure wrote:

Happy Birthday and Gratzz!

but...

This map is unrankable because guest mapper made longer part than uploader.
t/358506/start=30
but the guest mapper is banned, so she cant upload by herself.
also depths did the hitsounding
considering this, i think depths can upload the mapset
Topic Starter
Depths
Ok Im gonna clear all this up, Moecho is banned and cant upload this herself
since we both mapped in this and I did the hitsounding, she wanted me to upload this.
not much more I can really say
riffy
You can easily shorten Moecho's parts and map them. So, everything is fair. Considering that the difference is pretty huge I am sure that the host mapper has to contribute more to the map.

The fact that Moecho is unable to upload it doesn't change the situation at all.
Okoratu
Since collabs are explicitly judged on a case by case basis i guess this should work then but it's already in wip / help o.o
Winnie
Agreed, already known that uploader should be the one doing the most work regardless of who made it; but who cares about my opinion I'm shit (I needed an even number of posts)
riffy
The fact that Depths did the hitsounding is not enough to cover almost 39 seconds of difference.
captin1
would really be a shame if parts need to be deleted and redone just to satisfy a fairly ambiguous rule
Topic Starter
Depths

captin1 wrote:

would really be a shame if parts need to be deleted and redone just to satisfy a fairly ambiguous rule

and that looks to be the case
Winnie
Or we can pull off the yolo strats and delete the parts that Moecho did, remap them yourself the same way and say you did the work. I'm a genius, can't believe my brain works 2:30 in the morning :o
Avishay

Kocari wrote:

Or we can pull off the yolo strats and delete the parts that Moecho did, remap them yourself the same way and say you did the work. I'm a genius, can't believe my brain works 2:30 in the morning :o
Seems like a stupid solution for a stupid rule, guess that works.
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