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Sawai Miku - Colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix)

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Depths
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, January 18, 2016 at 6:45:55 AM

Artist: Sawai Miku
Title: Colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix)
Source: 冴えない彼女の育てかた
Tags: Moecho drum and bass Saenai kanojo Heroine no Sodatekata Saekano 冴えカノ How to Raise a Boring Girlfriend
BPM: 175
Filesize: 9839kb
Play Time: 05:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Prismatic (5.44 stars, 1466 notes)


Download: Sawai Miku - Colorful. (Asterisk DnB Remix)
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#2 (´・ω・`)
COLLAB WITH MOECHO
(I mapped evens she mapped odds)

Enjoy
aika ><
chainpullz
no kds

00:41:517 (4,1,2,3) - This overlap is a bit awkward on the sightread due to the sudden change in direction and the urge to go to 3 thinking it's 2. Once I knew what was happening it was fine though. Like seriously, it felt like someone was stealing my lunch money at first. :?

Nothing else really stuck out but I was only playing for fun & not for mod.
Topic Starter
Depths

chainpullz wrote:

no kds

00:41:517 (4,1,2,3) - This overlap is a bit awkward on the sightread due to the sudden change in direction and the urge to go to 3 thinking it's 2. Once I knew what was happening it was fine though. Like seriously, it felt like someone was stealing my lunch money at first. :?

Nothing else really stuck out but I was only playing for fun & not for mod.
I do see what you mean, but me and Moecho both agreed that this was fine, as Skystar did this as well in his.

thank you though~
Kencho
From Moecho's requset
[General]
  1. Nothing
[Prismatic]
  1. Depths

    01:05:346 (2) - Actually this circle have no sound here, you can delete it

    02:05:689 (1,2) - This slider very hard to read, i suggest ctrl+G each

    02:36:031 (3,4,5) - Stack

    02:40:146 (3,4,5) - ^

    02:56:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here NC refer 01:26:946 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , it is 4+4+8

    02:34:488 (3) - Look like 01:05:346 (2) -

    03:48:031 (2,3,1) - Stack

    03:49:831 (2,3) - ^

    03:56:088 (6) - Here slider downward is hard to read next circles 03:56:260 (7,8,1) - , so just ctrl+G

    04:42:031 (1,2) - Look like 02:05:689 (1,2) - , ctrl+G each

  2. Moecho

    00:15:288 (5,6,1) - Blanet的不夠好

    00:36:374 (2,3,4) - Stack

    00:42:374 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡間距可以再大一點

    00:53:946 (5,1) - Stack

    01:31:403 (3,4,5,6) - 這個三連很難讀,就像Depths的03:56:088 (6) - ,因為放的太近不知道是兩個圓圈還是三個,建議把三連放遠一點

    01:36:031 (6,2) - 這兩個疊到01:35:174 (1) - 的尾巴上

    02:27:803 (4,5,6,8,9,1) - Blanket & Stack

    03:09:460 (6,2) - Stack

    04:14:088 (4,5,1) - 為什麼不疊到04:13:403 (2) - 上面
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Depths

Kencho wrote:

From Moecho's requset
[General]
  1. Nothing
[Prismatic]
  1. Depths

    01:05:346 (2) - Actually this circle have no sound here, you can delete it Without that circle, it doesn't express the intensity for a finish.

    02:05:689 (1,2) - This slider very hard to read, i suggest ctrl+G each It is following song's vocal tone.

    02:36:031 (3,4,5) - Stack It's not stacked?

    02:40:146 (3,4,5) - ^ ^

    02:56:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Here NC refer 01:26:946 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - , it is 4+4+8 The NC is following every [2] on the jumps before ( 02:54:888 (2,2,2,2) ).

    02:34:488 (3) - Look like 01:05:346 (2) -

    03:48:031 (2,3,1) - Stack

    03:49:831 (2,3) - ^

    03:56:088 (6) - Here slider downward is hard to read next circles 03:56:260 (7,8,1) - , so just ctrl+G CTRL + G has wierd flow, keep.

    04:42:031 (1,2) - Look like 02:05:689 (1,2) - , ctrl+G each Once again, same reason to refuse.

  2. Moecho

    00:15:288 (5,6,1) - Blanet的不夠好

    00:36:374 (2,3,4) - Stack 没看出来哪里没stack好啊

    00:42:374 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡間距可以再大一點 还好啦 会毁梗

    00:53:946 (5,1) - Stack 没看出来哪里没stack好...

    01:31:403 (3,4,5,6) - 這個三連很難讀,就像Depths的03:56:088 (6) - ,因為放的太近不知道是兩個圓圈還是三個,建議把三連放遠一點 不会吧,节奏里如果都是kick滑条的话一般不可能是二连啊?

    01:36:031 (6,2) - 這兩個疊到01:35:174 (1) - 的尾巴上 OK

    02:27:803 (4,5,6,8,9,1) - Blanket & Stack 都还好啊,不过还是修了一点

    03:09:460 (6,2) - Stack 好 我自己都没发现w

    04:14:088 (4,5,1) - 為什麼不疊到04:13:403 (2) - 上面 其实你可以试试editor里面开stacking,我是开的 看起来没什么事啊
Good Luck~
Thanks for modding!
抱抱恳求哥哥w
Rieri
This is just fking amazing
EncoreW
hi, goddess Moecho ordered me post a mod here

soft- hitwhistle2 sounds a little weak relative to soft- hitclap2, i can't gain good feedback when i playing this map although i fc that, i can't hear percussion sound clearly, maybe my keyboard too noise but i still suggest you increase soft- hitwhistle2 volume, 70% is enough for soft- hitclap2 but not enough for soft- hitwhistle2

use some custom hitsounds to instead default normal- hitwhistle?

why not use silence slider the whole song?

combo color 1.3 and 2.4 are too close, change this plz

enable countdown is unnecessary

in another ranked version, it's AR9.2 and OD8.4, consider increase OD a little higher for example OD8.2?

AudioLeadIn: 0->2000?
02:10:660 (1,2,3) - as for me i think 02:11:003 (2) - this slider's end overlap with 02:10:660 (1) - this slider's start is better, you can consider ctrl+G this every slider if you think it's necessary

02:11:688 (1,2,3,4) - ditto

04:47:003 (1,2,3) - 04:48:031 (1,2,3,4) - ditto

02:13:231 (5) - this slider's end has too loud volume, i think it's unnecessary to use so loud volume, 02:13:403 - nothing here but you use 60%, in my opinion it can be 10%

02:56:088 (1) - why this stream has 3+3+3+7 NC but 01:26:946 (1) - this has 4+4+8? i think this two should be the same
00:40:831 (3,1) - blanket

00:41:688 (1) - 这4组感觉可以一组一组的把音量一点点加上去,如果加音量的话那么也建议相应的把每组的跳的距离一点点放大

00:43:746 (4) - 00:44:088 (8) - 这两个里面感觉得有一个NC

00:54:031 (1,2,3) - 挺建议一个个加速加上去的,另外每个滑条转的角度最好能一样

02:23:174 (1,2,3) - 同上,感觉似乎能直接抄一波前面的

01:36:717 (2,1,2,1,2) - 正五边形

03:26:774 (2) - 这滑条似乎是在 03:27:631 - 这里结束的?

04:18:374 (1) - 顺便把滑条的速度也一组一组的加一点上去?1.2x->1.3x->1.4x?

04:23:860 (1) - 04:24:031 (2) - 04:24:203 (3) - 04:24:374 (4) - ctrl+G不?

04:26:431 (2) - 这地方叠好啊否则很难看的,打的时候一下过了没什么问题,edit进去真的难看

04:49:917 (1,1,1) - 牛逼哄哄的钢琴音效呢?

05:06:289 (1) - 直接和X轴贴着啊

05:10:917 (1) - 最后结束的时候音量太大

sorry my english noob as a fuck :(
Topic Starter
Depths

T-Mac wrote:

hi, goddess Moecho ordered me post a mod here
soft- hitwhistle2 sounds a little weak relative to soft- hitclap2, i can't gain good feedback when i playing this map although i fc that, i can't hear percussion sound clearly, maybe my keyboard too noise but i still suggest you increase soft- hitwhistle2 volume, 70% is enough for soft- hitclap2 but not enough for soft- hitwhistle2 We'll see if more people complain about it, thanks for your feedback!

use some custom hitsounds to instead default normal- hitwhistle? As above, if changed, we'll add.

why not use silence slider the whole song? It's only needed for some parts, like "ME, RII, GOO"
combo color 1.3 and 2.4 are too close, change this plz They should be fine as they are right now, since they are not directly after each other, but alternating between.

enable countdown is unnecessary Fixed

in another ranked version, it's AR9.2 and OD8.4, consider increase OD a little higher for example OD8.2? AR -> 9.3; OD -> 8.5
AudioLeadIn: 0->2000? Okay
02:10:660 (1,2,3) - as for me i think 02:11:003 (2) - this slider's end overlap with 02:10:660 (1) - this slider's start is better, you can consider ctrl+G this every slider if you think it's necessary this Looks bad imo , so keeping as is.
02:11:688 (1,2,3,4) - ditto ^

04:47:003 (1,2,3) - 04:48:031 (1,2,3,4) - ditto ^

02:13:231 (5) - this slider's end has too loud volume, i think it's unnecessary to use so loud volume, 02:13:403 - nothing here but you use 60%, in my opinion it can be 10% Fixed

02:56:088 (1) - why this stream has 3+3+3+7 NC but 01:26:946 (1) - this has 4+4+8? i think this two should be the same Please refer the the previous mod reply to see my reasoning for it being 3+3+3+7
00:40:831 (3,1) - blanket

00:41:688 (1) - 这4组感觉可以一组一组的把音量一点点加上去,如果加音量的话那么也建议相应的把每组的跳的距离一点点放大 不加了pwp

00:43:746 (4) - 00:44:088 (8) - 这两个里面感觉得有一个NC OK

00:54:031 (1,2,3) - 挺建议一个个加速加上去的,另外每个滑条转的角度最好能一样 还好吧

02:23:174 (1,2,3) - 同上,感觉似乎能直接抄一波前面的 同上啦qwq

01:36:717 (2,1,2,1,2) - 正五边形 01:36:546 (1,2) - 和 01:36:888 (1,2) - 对称,01:37:231 (1,2,3) - 跟vocal,改成五边形很麻烦

03:26:774 (2) - 这滑条似乎是在 03:27:631 - 这里结束的?带入了呼吸

04:18:374 (1) - 顺便把滑条的速度也一组一组的加一点上去?1.2x->1.3x->1.4x?不用啦 那样距离太大不好打 容易出100s

04:23:860 (1) - 04:24:031 (2) - 04:24:203 (3) - 04:24:374 (4) - ctrl+G不?不owo

04:26:431 (2) - 这地方叠好啊否则很难看的,打的时候一下过了没什么问题,edit进去真的难看
有吗?

04:49:917 (1,1,1) - 牛逼哄哄的钢琴音效呢?不是很合适 因为这里不仅仅是vocal了

05:06:289 (1) - 直接和X轴贴着啊 还好啦 qwq

05:10:917 (1) - 最后结束的时候音量太大Fixed

sorry my english noob as a fuck :(
Thanks for modding, T-Mac!
Silky
Moecho
  1. 00:26:774 (2) - umm...could you try 1/4 reverse or triple ?
  2. 00:44:260 - no sounds here, so 70% volume is uncomfortable for me, lower volume pls (-30~50%?)
  3. 00:49:746 - here have small sound, so you can add circle. tbh 3/4 spacing is kinda unreadable
  4. 03:10:146 (2) - stack
  5. 03:42:374 (4) - reserve sound's end is 03:42:546 - , so I'd change to 1/2 slider.
  6. 03:43:060 (1,1,1) - add whistle on each head
  7. 04:07:403 (1) - could you try blanket?
  8. 04:27:803 - lower volume

Depths
  1. 01:14:946 (2) - stack
  2. 01:15:974 (1) - ^
  3. 01:50:946 (5) - NC
  4. 01:51:460 - lower volume
  5. 01:54:717 (1) - why this one not use Ctrl+G or something like that on same combo?
  6. 02:13:403 - lower volume
  7. 02:57:803 (1,1,1) - add whistle on each head
  8. 04:31:060 (1) - same as 01:54:717 (1) -
  9. 04:49:746 - sampleset:soft and lower volume

sry for short modding><
Topic Starter
Depths

fuyuyu- wrote:

Moecho
  1. 00:26:774 (2) - umm...could you try 1/4 reverse or triple ? I tried but it's not very good because there is sliderend-tripple before this and there is a a quint-note stream... I'd rather have the player to be a bit relaxed
  2. 00:44:260 - no sounds here, so 70% volume is uncomfortable for me, lower volume pls (-30~50%?) OK!
  3. 00:49:746 - here have small sound, so you can add circle. tbh 3/4 spacing is kinda unreadable With this AR it should be readable
  4. 03:10:146 (2) - stack Turn this on please
  5. 03:42:374 (4) - reserve sound's end is 03:42:546 - , so I'd change to 1/2 slider. No, her vocal doesn't end there fully(only word ends there)
  6. 03:43:060 (1,1,1) - add whistle on each head Thanks! I forgot to add that~
  7. 04:07:403 (1) - could you try blanket? Ugly imo qwq
  8. 04:27:803 - lower volume Ok; Add V -> 35%

Depths
  1. 01:14:946 (2) - stack fixed
  2. 01:15:974 (1) - ^ also fixed
  3. 01:50:946 (5) - NC my NC is normally bad sometime ><
  4. 01:51:460 - lower volume o.o i dont know how I missed this
  5. 01:54:717 (1) - why this one not use Ctrl+G or something like that on same combo? I dont think it is needed imo, would ruin flow
  6. 02:13:403 - lower volume yes~
  7. 02:57:803 (1,1,1) - add whistle on each head sure, this sounds nice too~
  8. 04:31:060 (1) - same as 01:54:717 (1) - same earlier
  9. 04:49:746 - sampleset:soft and lower volume also fixed

sry for short modding><
Winnie
You've made me proud my nigga
Asahina Momoko
ohio

colllab thing


  • moecho
  1. 00:05:860 - why don't you follow this background sound with making 00:05:688 (5) - shorten to 1/2 slider and put circle here
  2. 00:21:288 (1,2,3) - to change the order them as 2,3,1 might make better flow
  3. 00:38:946 (6) - you can change this to slider as following same sounds like 00:39:288 (1,2,3) -
  4. 01:36:717 (2) - this note kills impetus from 01:36:546 (1) - to 01:36:888 (1) - , because they require aim to be straight but a bit differ distance they have. so move 01:36:203 (7,8,1) - like below or if you don't mind stack with 01:36:031 (6,2) - , move 01:36:717 (2) - around 208/156 would be fine.
  5. 01:38:260 (2) - how about moving it to 262/239 rather than stack?

    depths
  6. 02:05:689 (1) - at least you want to do this, it should be more showed up. current pattern is just hard to read
  7. 02:47:002 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H'd pattern makes flow more dynamic to 02:47:516 (6) - i think
  8. 02:56:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mmm i think this sounds should be apart as per 4 beats like 1234,1234,1234,,, aiming change on 02:56:346 (1,1) - is so unnatural to play here

gl!
Topic Starter
Depths

Asahina Momoko wrote:

ohio

Asahina Momoko wrote:

ohio

colllab thing


  • moecho
  1. 00:05:860 - why don't you follow this background sound with making 00:05:688 (5) - shorten to 1/2 slider and put circle here I don't find that necessary
  2. 00:21:288 (1,2,3) - to change the order them as 2,3,1 might make better flow Sure
  3. 00:38:946 (6) - you can change this to slider as following same sounds like 00:39:288 (1,2,3) - But there is no "same sound" I follow here... They are obviously different
  4. 01:36:717 (2) - this note kills impetus from 01:36:546 (1) - to 01:36:888 (1) - , because they require aim to be straight but a bit differ distance they have. so move 01:36:203 (7,8,1) - like below or if you don't mind stack with 01:36:031 (6,2) - , move 01:36:717 (2) - around 208/156 would be fine. No, that was the reason I put NC on 01:36:888 (1) - since they are the same but reflected, it's not that hard to read and I have never missed because of not being able to read there owo
  5. 01:38:260 (2) - how about moving it to 262/239 rather than stack? No, the flow becomes more wierd that way. That was intended to follow the word "Yume"

    depths
  6. 02:05:689 (1) - at least you want to do this, it should be more showed up. current pattern is just hard to read Maybe, but no change now, I'll ask others what why think
  7. 02:47:002 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+H'd pattern makes flow more dynamic to 02:47:516 (6) - i think 02:47:002 (2,3,4) - blankets slider end of 02:46:488 (1) - , inverting it horizontal is just wierd
  8. 02:56:088 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - mmm i think this sounds should be apart as per 4 beats like 1234,1234,1234,,, aiming change on 02:56:346 (1,1) - is so unnatural to play here I'll get some test plays and ask about this, but for now keeping

gl!
Thanks for modding Moko
Nozhomi
2016-01-01 18:37 Nozhomi: lazy to mod the 1st january
2016-01-01 18:37 Depths: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/398167
2016-01-01 18:37 Depths: but do it
2016-01-01 18:37 Nozhomi: can't even work on my sound editing XD
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: bcuz ur my mom
2016-01-01 18:38 Nozhomi: let 's see
2016-01-01 18:38 Nozhomi: blanket kd pls
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: its a collab so
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: yea
2016-01-01 18:38 Depths: thats fine
2016-01-01 18:46 Nozhomi: 01:36:203 (7,8,1) - & 01:39:288 (1,2,3) - are ass flow (the 1st more than second one)
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: not my part
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: xd
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: if you post this I'll tell her to look at the thread\
2016-01-01 18:47 Nozhomi: about parts like 02:54:717 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -
2016-01-01 18:47 Depths: but dont be mean to her mom
2016-01-01 18:48 Nozhomi: could you try to keep some consistency with spacing ?
2016-01-01 18:48 Depths: yea
2016-01-01 18:48 Nozhomi: like we pass from 3.50x before 1st kiai to 2.60x on this one
2016-01-01 18:48 Nozhomi: and makes 1st overdone
2016-01-01 18:49 Depths: I see what you mean
2016-01-01 18:49 Nozhomi: that's all I can found lol

01:36:203 (7,8,1) - & 01:39:288 (1,2,3) - Flow is awful to play like that. I would recomand to use a simple one who follow slider form.

Bye~
pkk
22:02 pkk: 01:07:403 (6,1,2) -
22:03 Depths: http://puu.sh/mgqVH/bb461bd309.jpg better?
22:03 pkk: yee sik 5/7
22:05 pkk: 01:16:660 (1,2,1,2) -
22:05 pkk: 01:16:831 (2,2) -
22:06 pkk: 01:18:203 (5) -
22:06 Depths: ok fixed
22:06 pkk: x 268 y 115
22:07 pkk: 01:22:317 (5,6) -
22:08 Depths: nah, not touching, and it plays fine
22:08 pkk: 01:45:632 (6,7) -
22:09 pkk: 01:55:917 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) -
22:10 pkk: soft sampleset on tail
22:11 pkk: 01:54:374 (1,2,1,2) -
22:11 Depths: ok dad
22:11 Depths: 01:53:003 (1,2,1,2) -
22:11 pkk: 01:55:231 (2) - up 2 right 2
22:15 Depths: 04:34:146 (1,2,1,2) -
22:16 pkk: 02:51:460 (5,6) -
22:17 pkk: [https://i.gyazo.com/9a5782b77d2e491493e7878b062dd57b.png d]
22:18 pkk: 02:52:488 (3,4) -
22:18 Depths: looks a lot better, and feels better
22:18 pkk: me irl
22:19 Depths: same tbh
22:19 pkk: 02:52:317 (2) - x 266 y 325
22:21 pkk: 03:44:431 (2,5,6) -
22:22 pkk: 03:44:946 (6) - x 403 y 248
22:22 Depths: ok
22:22 pkk: 03:52:317 (1) -
22:22 pkk: 03:52:831 (3,4,5) -
22:23 pkk: 04:00:031 (6) -
22:24 pkk: 7 right
22:24 pkk: 04:02:945 (5,1) - confusing spacing
22:26 pkk: 04:27:974 (1,2) -
22:26 pkk: part starting here
22:26 pkk: 04:29:346 (1,2,1,2) -
22:27 pkk: 04:47:003 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
22:27 pkk: 04:49:231 (1,2,3,4,5) -
22:29 pkk: that's all
22:29 Depths: 02:07:746 (4) -
Winnie
Thanks Dad
Topic Starter
Depths
updated from Pk, since we were talking on Discord it was easy to discuss things
Rizia
maybe soft-sliderslide10.wav unused
nothing else to say
Topic Starter
Depths

Rizia wrote:

maybe soft-sliderslide10.wav unused
nothing else to say
removed soft-sliderslide10

thanks Rizia
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