Normal00:09:655 (1) - maybe blanket this on 00:09:280 (3) ? would look nicer, i think.
00:27:655 (1,2) - this slight offset is probably intentional but i think it looks sort of bad, especially when you followed it on the same rhythm earlier, here: 00:20:905 (4,5)
00:47:905 (1) - why NC here instead of 00:49:030 (3) like all the patterns before?
00:55:780 (1) - NC is slightly random since it is for the flute. i would recommend following the NC pattern you had before
01:08:155 (1,2) - place a circle in between? feels and sounds empty.
01:26:155 (1) - blanketing this on the end of 01:25:030 (3) looks prettier
01:31:780 (2) - slider is somewhat boring, maybe use a single red point on either end to make it just slighty different.
01:32:905 (1) - ugly slider, curve less?
01:35:905 (2,3) - barely any sound here, kind of random. why not put a circle between 01:37:030 (3,1) to follow the flute and emphasize the ending?
Advanced00:05:717 (2,3) - moving this to the left more with same DS looks much better, as all slider tracks appear roughly the same distance apart.
00:08:530 (1,2,3) - making this a perfect equilateral triangle looks much better.
(if you dont know how, take the first two, rotate them 120 degrees and put the first note on the second to see where 3 should go)00:11:905 (1) - i think copying and ctrl+h and ctrl+g would make a cool shape and pattern for 00:13:030 (4) and its barely different. and maybe even 00:14:155 (1) but its probably too much at that point
00:23:905 (3,4,5) - ugly shaping, mainly 4 slider's last 2 nodes.
00:29:530 (6) - curving this more to point towards the next slider looks better imo.
00:45:280 (3) - it looks odd for this last one to be so slightly different
00:47:530 (6,1) and 00:52:030 (6,1) - i dont think 2.0x works that well here, i think 1.8x like 00:54:280 (6,1) - plays better
01:05:342 (5,6) - pointing 5 straight at 6 looks better imo
01:20:530 (4,5,6) - NC for consistency
Determination00:00:280 (1,1) - i dont think these each need a NC, they didnt in the other difficulties.
00:04:030 (1,2) - this overlap feels forced, especially since the slider is still on the field when 2 appears.
00:09:280 (1) - much better to end this on red tick in a 3/4 pattern.
00:26:530 (1,1,1) - why not use the same rhythm as the last time? or choose one. also 00:26:530 (1) can blanket the end of 00:26:905 (1)
00:34:030 (6) - i think this fits better ending on red tick
00:55:780 (1) - this slider shape flows pretty poorly following the jumps
00:58:592 (2) - i dont think there is any reason to use 1/6 instead of 1/4, the flute is in between either and 1/4 is more consistent and makes more sense, especially since you use 1/4 a lot, right after.
01:00:842 (2,3,4) - the triplet doesnt follow well into the slider, shape-wise
01:02:530 (1) - NC to each of 01:03:092 (2,3,4) would make sense given 00:36:092 (1,1,1)
01:05:342 (2,3) - this reads like 1/2 due to the slider. i think making two doubles fits better and reads better. also you dont use any rhythm near as complicated anywhere else in the map
01:11:530 (1) - this blanket is messed up
01:20:905 (1,1) - both ending on red tick fits the music much better, especially since you just followed the flute and this time choose not to
01:31:592 (5) - no reason for this to be a 1/4 slider, nothing audible
a lot of this mod for the earlier difficulties is just opinions on shape, sorry if its annoying
good map! good luck in ranking.
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