1. 00:01:780 (3) - prefer if the flow started out a little smoother at the beginning of the song before you start emphasizing things with sharp angles such as 00:02:905 (5) - suggestion: http://puu.sh/nerqc/5b0ef3bb11.jpg
2. 00:36:280 (5,1) - I think the angle between the sliderbody and 00:36:280 (5,1) - is a little too harsh. maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/nespI/a06c0e94f8.jpg
3. 00:37:780 (2,3) - could be blanketed better
4. 01:32:905 (1,2) - these look a little strange because it's almost symmetric but not quite.

1. 00:35:530 (4,5,1) - The flow could be improved if they went to a "single direction". If you re-arrange your pattern into something like this, the flow is more intact since it's going in one direction, which is curve. The pattern you created doesn't do that, because you have to move down and up at the same time when you reach 00:36:655 (1) -, so it's breaking the flow here.
2. 00:54:655 (1) - This is more of a personal taste, so it's a minor suggestion. Instead of repeating the same shape of the previous slider, making something different would fit better when the rhythm in the music is changed, which in this case is the violin that changed its rhythm. In my opinion, that also makes an emphasis that part. Maybe a straight would go well, as the circular flow will be instead linear.
3. 01:20:530 (5) - How about you make it as a curve slider? The pattern with 01:19:405 (4) - looks boring when they are plaintively straight, in my opinion.

1. 00:58:780 (4,1) - I thought there was a 1/2 gap between them lol, but I highly suggest you reduce the distance and overlap because the length of the sliders are not evident and players could fall into your trap.

sheela wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:35:530 (4,5,1) - The flow could be improved if they went to a "single direction". If you re-arrange your pattern into something like this, the flow is more intact since it's going in one direction, which is curve. The pattern you created doesn't do that, because you have to move down and up at the same time when you reach 00:36:655 (1) -, so it's breaking the flow here. I had the exact same idea at first but i didnt do it because it would look identical to 00:06:280 (2,3,4) - . I came up with something else which emphasises that part better while flowing flowing smoother aswell.
2. 00:54:655 (1) - This is more of a personal taste, so it's a minor suggestion. Instead of repeating the same shape of the previous slider, making something different would fit better when the rhythm in the music is changed, which in this case is the violin that changed its rhythm. In my opinion, that also makes an emphasis that part. Maybe a straight would go well, as the circular flow will be instead linear. I see why you wouldnt want to repeat the slider, but i dont think i like the aesthetic of having a curved and a linear one there :/ I would have to change a bunch of patterns afterwards if i wanted to have smth visually appealing (in my eyes)
3. 01:20:530 (5) - How about you make it as a curve slider? The pattern with 01:19:405 (4) - looks boring when they are plaintively straight, in my opinion. Oh yes, this looks a lot better!

[Determination]

1. 00:58:780 (4,1) - I thought there was a 1/2 gap between them lol, but I highly suggest you reduce the distance and overlap because the length of the sliders are not evident and players could fall into your trap. I didn't overlap them but moved them rly close. The distance is low enough not be mistaken with a 1/2 rythm. I dont like those overlaps :/

This map is pretty much ready, so leave me a message when you have applied anything from this recheck! pm'ed

dqs01733 wrote:

Did you change the the overlaps
Can I have a kd for it

Smokeman wrote:

°O°// we did it! Thanks everyone!

woke up in the middle of the night to take piss... and now i see this, lol.

Desperate-kun wrote:

Great! ;3

Mao wrote:

Grats!