jonathanlfj wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]
00:21:209 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:21:202 fixed
01:02:810 (1) - the sudden spacing change here really caught me off guard, especially 01:04:584 (5,6,7) which i thought were 1/2s; use a larger spacing here (0.8x would do) ok
01:08:939 (3) - forgot clap? yeah.. added
02:06:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm maybe try to center this? seems more cool leading into the spinner well I make it like before(01:25:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:12:971 (2) - why finish on the end? should be at 02:15:068 (1) judging from the music forget to remove it....sry crrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry
02:51:842 (1) - should put a green line here to lower the volume, its even louder than the kiai ok
03:00:229 (1) - end this at 03:02:326? the guitar is the top layer so it would be best to follow that instead of the clap sound; you can add a note at 03:02:649 to fill in for the other sound Well i think follows the clap sound is better so I kept it.
03:20:874 (1) - same as above ^
03:34:745 (4) - hmm the finish on the start here sounds a bit loud, might want to swap it for a clap instead oh fixed~
03:52:971 (1) - can barely hear the slider start here, increase the volume to ~30% would avoid rankability issues fixedi

jonathanlfj wrote:

[baka's Normal]
you might want to do OD and AR-1 here and just call this a Easy, the Normal+ is quite "Normal" anyways, i will touch on that later
00:09:267 (1) - unecessary NC here
01:26:358 (4,5) - i would just delete this and put a spinner here ending at 01:28:616, much more fitting to the music imo
02:07:649 (4,5) - same as above
02:27:165 (4) - this is overlapping the HP bar quite a bit, move it down pls
02:59:261 (2) - forgot a clap here
03:00:229 (4) - NC is supposed to be here instead of 03:01:842 (1)
03:19:907 (2) - clap
03:52:810 (2) - hmm why did you use 20% and 10% volume here? the music is quite strong so i'd suggest a higher volume to bring out the emphasis
if you are going to rename this to Easy then its best to simplify some rhythms so it is more playable by newbies and have a lower star rating

jonathanlfj wrote:

spread looks good now, so im gonna give this a go

Bubbled~

Eggache0 wrote:

好终于rank黑凤凰