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Blue is highly recommendedRed is unrankable[General]
BG file size is way too big for a .jpg file (its actually a png you just renamed it to jpg), here is one with a proper file size:
set your audio lead-in to exactly 2000 in the osu files, it is currently 2004
also the current offset is a bit early, do at least +8 on it[baka's Normal]
you might want to do OD and AR-1 here and just call this a Easy, the Normal+ is quite "Normal" anyways, i will touch on that later
00:09:267 (1) - unecessary NC here
01:26:358 (4,5) - i would just delete this and put a spinner here ending at 01:28:616, much more fitting to the music imo
02:07:649 (4,5) - same as above
02:27:165 (4) - this is overlapping the HP bar quite a bit, move it down pls02:59:261 (2) - forgot a clap here
03:00:229 (4) - NC is supposed to be here instead of 03:01:842 (1)
03:19:907 (2) - clap
03:52:810 (2) - hmm why did you use 20% and 10% volume here? the music is quite strong so i'd suggest a higher volume to bring out the emphasis
if you are going to rename this to Easy then its best to simplify some rhythms so it is more playable by newbies and have a lower star rating
[L18N+]
after consulting some other BATs we concluded that this name is not rankable under the new diff name rule, so please rename it to [L18's Normal+], or remove the + sign if baka renames his diff to Easy00:21:209 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:21:202 00:50:552 (2,3,4,5,6) - the way this flows seems a bit unnatural, since you started with a zig-zag but ended off in a straight line. See if you can rearrange it to get rid of the straight line
01:11:197 (2) - i think you meant to stack this with 01:09:907 (3)? also i dont see a point with the green lines here since this is TR1
03:00:229 (5) - NC is supposed to be here instead of 03:01:358 (1)
03:21:842 (3,4) - hmm seems like a creative placement, but for something at this level of game play (and AR) it is really easy to mistakenly hit 03:22:003 (4) before 03:21:842 (3), so see if you can arrange the slider to be on the other side for easier readability
03:31:197 (1) - use two spinners like 03:10:552 (1,1)?
[Yuki's Hard]
00:21:209 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:21:202 01:02:810 (1) - the sudden spacing change here really caught me off guard, especially 01:04:584 (5,6,7) which i thought were 1/2s; use a larger spacing here (0.8x would do)
01:08:939 (3) - forgot clap?
02:06:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm maybe try to center this? seems more cool leading into the spinner
02:12:971 (2) - why finish on the end? should be at 02:15:068 (1) judging from the music
02:51:842 (1) - should put a green line here to lower the volume, its even louder than the kiai
03:00:229 (1) - end this at 03:02:326? the guitar is the top layer so it would be best to follow that instead of the clap sound; you can add a note at 03:02:649 to fill in for the other sound
03:20:874 (1) - same as above
03:34:745 (4) - hmm the finish on the start here sounds a bit loud, might want to swap it for a clap instead
03:52:971 (1) - can barely hear the slider start here, increase the volume to ~30% would avoid rankability issues[Lunatic]
OD8, given the difficulty of this map its more suitable than OD7 imo
00:31:198 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - the curve on this can look a lot better
00:59:584 (1) - remove the NC, feels kinda extra here
01:02:890 (1) - would be cool if you can add a finish here and increase the volume on the tail so it can reflect the finish in the song
01:11:197 (3) - shorten this to 01:11:439, matches the music here better
01:52:487 (3,4) - ^
02:09:100 (6) - how bout position this elsewhere, gives a more natural flow for this section imo:
02:51:842 (2,3,4) - some drum hitsounds here would be nice
03:10:552 (4) - hmm the way you positioned this feels quite unatural to me, how bout a square formation instead? x:76 y:268
03:43:778 (5) - drag the end point more towards the left, right now it is rather flow breaking from the previous stream
03:47:568 (1) - not really needed NC here
yeah only thing i am a bit concerned about is the spread between the Normal and Normal+, sort that out and call me back~