jonathanlfj wrote:

m4m4m4m4m4m

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
BG file size is way too big for a .jpg file (its actually a png you just renamed it to jpg), here is one with a proper file size:

SPOILER

set your audio lead-in to exactly 2000 in the osu files, it is currently 2004 fixed
also the current offset is a bit early, do at least +8 on it [/color]
[Lunatic]
OD8, given the difficulty of this map its more suitable than OD7 imo umm.OK People like high od now?D:
00:31:198 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - the curve on this can look a lot betterfixed
00:59:584 (1) - remove the NC, feels kinda extra here fixed
01:02:890 (1) - would be cool if you can add a finish here and increase the volume on the tail so it can reflect the finish in the songIt sounds great
01:11:197 (3) - shorten this to 01:11:439, matches the music here better changed it
01:52:487 (3,4) - ^changed it
02:09:100 (6) - how bout position this elsewhere, gives a more natural flow for this section imo:

SPOILER

in fact I want to set a jump here.anyway thanks for your advice
02:51:842 (2,3,4) - some drum hitsounds here would be nice great
03:10:552 (4) - hmm the way you positioned this feels quite unatural to me, how bout a square formation instead? x:76 y:268ok
03:43:778 (5) - drag the end point more towards the left, right now it is rather flow breaking from the previous streamok
03:47:568 (1) - not really needed NC herefixed

yeah only thing i am a bit concerned about is the spread between the Normal and Normal+, sort that out and call me back~ok I'll talk it with them soon

jonathanlfj wrote:

[Yuki's Hard]
00:21:209 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:21:202 fixed
01:02:810 (1) - the sudden spacing change here really caught me off guard, especially 01:04:584 (5,6,7) which i thought were 1/2s; use a larger spacing here (0.8x would do) ok
01:08:939 (3) - forgot clap? yeah.. added
02:06:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm maybe try to center this? seems more cool leading into the spinner well I make it like before(01:25:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:12:971 (2) - why finish on the end? should be at 02:15:068 (1) judging from the music forget to remove it....sry crrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry
02:51:842 (1) - should put a green line here to lower the volume, its even louder than the kiai ok
03:00:229 (1) - end this at 03:02:326? the guitar is the top layer so it would be best to follow that instead of the clap sound; you can add a note at 03:02:649 to fill in for the other sound Well i think follows the clap sound is better so I kept it.
03:20:874 (1) - same as above ^
03:34:745 (4) - hmm the finish on the start here sounds a bit loud, might want to swap it for a clap instead oh fixed~
03:52:971 (1) - can barely hear the slider start here, increase the volume to ~30% would avoid rankability issues fixedi

jonathanlfj wrote:

[baka's Normal]
you might want to do OD and AR-1 here and just call this a Easy, the Normal+ is quite "Normal" anyways, i will touch on that later
00:09:267 (1) - unecessary NC here
01:26:358 (4,5) - i would just delete this and put a spinner here ending at 01:28:616, much more fitting to the music imo
02:07:649 (4,5) - same as above
02:27:165 (4) - this is overlapping the HP bar quite a bit, move it down pls
02:59:261 (2) - forgot a clap here
03:00:229 (4) - NC is supposed to be here instead of 03:01:842 (1)
03:19:907 (2) - clap
03:52:810 (2) - hmm why did you use 20% and 10% volume here? the music is quite strong so i'd suggest a higher volume to bring out the emphasis
if you are going to rename this to Easy then its best to simplify some rhythms so it is more playable by newbies and have a lower star rating

jonathanlfj wrote:

spread looks good now, so im gonna give this a go

Bubbled~

Eggache0 wrote:

好终于rank黑凤凰