tick似乎是不允许静音的Ethercastle wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
打了一遍没啥大问题就不仔细看了 (逃)
03:52:971 (1) - slidertick静音?
改到15%左右应该就没问题了
to sjoy: 你懂的
tick似乎是不允许静音的Ethercastle wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
打了一遍没啥大问题就不仔细看了 (逃)
03:52:971 (1) - slidertick静音?
感谢MOD 和射星 ~Ethercastle wrote:
From my queue~ 来晚了抱歉~.~
[General]
[Lunatic]
串实在是打不动>.< 其他打起来没啥问题...一如既往地爽但是总觉得很多地方排得稍微有点乱,部分由于spacing...试着挑挑。。。。
00:08:621 (1) - 这个没包好的样子 其实我看还行
00:10:880 (1,2,3) - equal spacing? 好
00:13:138 (1,2,3) - 这三个感觉没在跟钢琴然后又不怎么合吉他。。我比较倾向这个节奏 排列没想过 不过跟接下来的1重叠似乎还可以。。。我就是跟钢琴的,只不过把重音拉长的
00:16:041 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 整体ctrl + J 对应音阶?感觉现在挺好的
00:21:842 (2,3,4) - 这个打的时候看上去有点难看 改了
00:24:423 (2) - (342,228)?好
01:11:842 (1,2) - 这俩slider对称点会好一些?太远了
01:21:842 (6) - 这个折返滑条意义有点不明- -后面是NC换重音,这里用个折返给人一种急促感
01:23:132 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这段跳相对不是很喜欢 不过也不知道怎么摆好>_<这里我觉得超爽
01:24:584 (1,2,3) - 这里吉他是从红线开始的 直接换成单个滑条?前面已经是个长滑条了,这里加个3连没什么影响,最高难度可以适当OVERMAP
02:05:874 (1,2,3) - ^ 同理
01:47:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个stream感觉不是很好看- - 其实是我不怎么会摆串
01:50:552 (1) - (112,144)?这里不想等间距,因为换了重音
01:58:939 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个slider头最好弄成等距的吧? 7和8的位置尤其有点跟前面的不合拍...行
02:03:778 (2) - ctrl + G 因为之前一直是类似的flow这里故意的 3个重音就同一方向比较带感
02:28:294 (4) - 没包好 好
02:42:810 (4,5) - 这里flow略有点off的感觉 我感觉还行
02:58:132 (4,5) - 换成单个slider对吉他?单NOTE对应1个音
03:01:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 不是很喜欢这个三连 其一整张图里很少出现这样的节奏容易坠毁第二吉他只有4,5,6的地方是三个音...789也是有的,只是123没有
03:06:681 (3,4,5,6) - 4跟6不是很对称:好
03:20:390 (3,4,5,6) - 这个正方形歪了吧? 等间距就好啦lol
03:41:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这段吉他是1/6啊 而且似乎音还不在白线上 硬要说的话我听起来是这样的 (1/12似乎太人性= =)
这里要我说的是这个吉他是有延迟的。如果按照你这样摆反而不能玩。估计习惯打4分拍没人会觉得有问题。此外实在100%速度下进行的更不会觉得有什么奇怪的地方
感觉值得挑出来的地方就这些- - 其他不少地方也觉得略有点不美观不过太nazi了就不说了- - 好曲好图^ ^(所以Mod了好久- -)
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thanks for mod ;3Ethercastle wrote:
[Baka's Normal]
为什么要用soft音效啊- - 这么重的曲子。。。-----因为要跟着音乐啊 有些地方用N反而有些吵
00:05:073 (4) - 比较倾向于直接在白线上放个圈-----我觉得这样的节奏还蛮带感的...
00:18:299 (3) - 这个slider应该要对称吧 (前面有几个类似的大概是刻意的?)-----fixed 话说对称这个是不是用计算器算一下啊._.
00:36:842 - 这里最好加个圈否则不完整的感觉 (00:36:197 (4) 已经是红线节奏了)-----这里就不用了 本来红线节奏就是为了跟音乐 虽然说把这个一拍滑条换成折返的话节奏会连贯一点 但是这样一来这里的节奏就变成了“疏--密--疏--密”这样的形式 感觉作为N还是避免一下比较好
00:42:003 - ^
01:43:939 - ^
01:49:100 - ^
01:04:745 (1) - 对称-----fixed
01:26:358 (4,5) - 感觉有点多余- ------这里就不改了 而且后面隔了一小节才出break 反正是自己的想法啦 用这种方法来过渡
01:59:584 (1) - 没包好-----fixed
03:50:552 (3,4) - ^-----^
02:07:649 (4,5) - ^-----^
thanks for modding~jonathanlfj wrote:
m4m4m4m4m4m
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable
[General]
BG file size is way too big for a .jpg file (its actually a png you just renamed it to jpg), here is one with a proper file size:
set your audio lead-in to exactly 2000 in the osu files, it is currently 2004 fixed
also the current offset is a bit early, do at least +8 on it [/color]
[Lunatic]
OD8, given the difficulty of this map its more suitable than OD7 imo umm.OK People like high od now?D:
00:31:198 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - the curve on this can look a lot betterfixed
00:59:584 (1) - remove the NC, feels kinda extra here fixed
01:02:890 (1) - would be cool if you can add a finish here and increase the volume on the tail so it can reflect the finish in the songIt sounds great
01:11:197 (3) - shorten this to 01:11:439, matches the music here better changed it
01:52:487 (3,4) - ^changed it
02:09:100 (6) - how bout position this elsewhere, gives a more natural flow for this section imo: in fact I want to set a jump here.anyway thanks for your advice
02:51:842 (2,3,4) - some drum hitsounds here would be nice great
03:10:552 (4) - hmm the way you positioned this feels quite unatural to me, how bout a square formation instead? x:76 y:268ok
03:43:778 (5) - drag the end point more towards the left, right now it is rather flow breaking from the previous streamok
03:47:568 (1) - not really needed NC herefixed
yeah only thing i am a bit concerned about is the spread between the Normal and Normal+, sort that out and call me back~ok I'll talk it with them soon
really thanks for modding~jonathanlfj wrote:
[Yuki's Hard]
00:21:209 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:21:202 fixed
01:02:810 (1) - the sudden spacing change here really caught me off guard, especially 01:04:584 (5,6,7) which i thought were 1/2s; use a larger spacing here (0.8x would do) ok
01:08:939 (3) - forgot clap? yeah.. added
02:06:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm maybe try to center this? seems more cool leading into the spinner well I make it like before(01:25:398 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
02:12:971 (2) - why finish on the end? should be at 02:15:068 (1) judging from the music forget to remove it....sry crrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry
02:51:842 (1) - should put a green line here to lower the volume, its even louder than the kiai ok
03:00:229 (1) - end this at 03:02:326? the guitar is the top layer so it would be best to follow that instead of the clap sound; you can add a note at 03:02:649 to fill in for the other sound Well i think follows the clap sound is better so I kept it.
03:20:874 (1) - same as above ^
03:34:745 (4) - hmm the finish on the start here sounds a bit loud, might want to swap it for a clap instead oh fixed~
03:52:971 (1) - can barely hear the slider start here, increase the volume to ~30% would avoid rankability issues fixedi
all fixedjonathanlfj wrote:
[baka's Normal]
you might want to do OD and AR-1 here and just call this a Easy, the Normal+ is quite "Normal" anyways, i will touch on that later
00:09:267 (1) - unecessary NC here
01:26:358 (4,5) - i would just delete this and put a spinner here ending at 01:28:616, much more fitting to the music imo
02:07:649 (4,5) - same as above
02:27:165 (4) - this is overlapping the HP bar quite a bit, move it down pls
02:59:261 (2) - forgot a clap here
03:00:229 (4) - NC is supposed to be here instead of 03:01:842 (1)
03:19:907 (2) - clap
03:52:810 (2) - hmm why did you use 20% and 10% volume here? the music is quite strong so i'd suggest a higher volume to bring out the emphasis
if you are going to rename this to Easy then its best to simplify some rhythms so it is more playable by newbies and have a lower star rating
thanks~jonathanlfj wrote:
spread looks good now, so im gonna give this a go
Bubbled~
不一样的剧本啊 这是第2张Eggache0 wrote:
好终于rank黑凤凰