00:20:045 (3,4,5) - 4 and 5 should be equally far away from 3
00:24:199 (4,5) - 4 isn't on a perfect line to 5
00:25:122 (1) - move a few pixels to the bottom right, it doesn't blanket perfectly as of now
00:27:891 (3) - make this blanket 2, it kinda looks like you're trying to do that already but the slider is too sharply shaped for that
00:28:584 (4) - i'd personally put this under 3, its nicer to interpret the next 3 notes as jumps that land on the piano
00:34:122 (4) - there is no reason for this to be a larger jump than the previous 3 notes, if anything, it should be a lower distance jump since the piano's pitch is significantly lower than on the last 3 notes. it would fit awesomely if you put this note in the middle of the triangle instead
00:35:045 (4) - the NC should be on here already because of the melodies shift
00:35:045 (4,1,2) - distance between 4, 1 and 2 should be equal
00:35:276 (1) - remove NC
00:35:737 (3) - add NC
00:35:737 (3,4,1) - increase spacing between those notes
00:39:891 (1,2,3) - please dont map 2 strong beats as sliders
00:40:929 (5,6) - both of these notes are off timing, i can't really find a fitting divisor so you probably have to use timing sections here. also these notes would be more fit for a slider since they're weaker
00:41:275 (7,1) - also off timing, make 1 blanket 7 like you did earlier
00:46:353 (5,6) - you should map the blue tick inbetween those
00:47:276 (1,2) - 2 isn't a good followup to 1
00:48:660 (7,1,2) - move 2 slightly more to the bottom left, so it is symmetrical to the position 1 lies to 7
00:50:507 (9,1) - map the blue tick inbetween
00:54:661 (1) - is off a few pixels of being on a perfect line to the next note
00:55:814 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i'd personally space those notes out more as the drums get more intense from here
00:56:968 (2,3,4) - looks awkward, use distance snap
01:02:968 (5) - make this blanket 3 kinda like this
01:03:429 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - super awkward, distance snap better, 4 in particular is heavily out of place
01:06:199 (2) - you've pretty much always used curved sliders up to now, i get you're making it linear for the stream but i would just curve the stream instead
01:08:045 (2,3,4) - i guess you can do that, 4 is a bit out of place and should be a tiny bit more to the top left
01:09:890 (2,3) - make those equally as far away from their respective sliders
01:12:198 (3,4,5,6) - make those into a kinda "rotated-Z" shape so they are more consistent
01:13:122 (1,2,3) - put 2 closer to 1 and 3 a bit further away from 2
01:15:891 (3,4,5,6,1) - make a better pentagon out of these 5
01:26:507 (2,3,4,5,6) - making a slider on 2 vocal notes and then making 1/2 jumps on vocal 1/1's doesn't really fit
01:26:507 (2,3) - also put a note on the blue tick there is quite the significant drum there
01:30:430 (3,4,5) - this really should be a 5 note burst
01:32:276 (3,4,5) - ^
01:34:814 (1,2,3) - the triangle is off
01:35:506 (4) - this note should be a lot more to the top right
01:39:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - increase spacing on these, the drums are more intense than before
01:41:506 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - the distance on these jumps varies far too much for the music essentially staying the same
01:45:545 (7) - is off
02:05:738 (5) - if you're following the guitar, this is only a double and this note doesn't exist
02:09:430 (6,7,8,9,1) - way too inconsistent spacing
02:11:506 (7,8,9) - if anything, 9 should be the biggest jump as the guitar is the most intense on it
02:14:045 (1,2) - cmon map 1/2, the song is just begging for it as this is one of the peaks in the song
02:22:353 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - revamp this whole part and pay more attention to overlap
02:24:660 (7,1) - 1/6 slider inbetween those fits perfectly
02:27:430 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make 2 triangles that form together a 6 point star thingy
02:29:276 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - just make a more symmetrical hexagon but keep the general positions the circles are in now
02:32:507 (1) - this overlapping the other slider doesn't make any sense imo
02:33:430 (4) - the slider ends when the vocal starts, remap so that slider starts on the vocal and fill with circles
02:36:199 (1) - this being shaped sharper than the previous two sliders does not look fitting
02:37:584 (5) - move a bit to the right
02:38:276 (2) - remove this one, a double would be awesome
02:38:738 (5) - move further away
03:08:507 (4) - map 1/4 out of this
03:12:430 (7,8,9,10,1) - move more to the left