Alphabet
Alphabet wrote:
HeyGeneral
FictionJunction is the artist of the map, you don't need this as a tag.
Change the OD to 7 or 7.5, the map is 4.3 stars and it doesn't feel hard enough for it to be OD8.Promise
00:12:199 (1,2,3) - Snap these equally Done.
00:26:737 (5,6) - How about a blanket? Bad flow, so no.
00:26:968 (6) - NC ok
00:40:814 (4,5,6) - Convert this into a slider, this is weird to read. I'll keep it for now, it doesn't work well with a slider.
00:43:583 (1) - How about make this slider identical to 00:44:968 (7) - or vice versa? Done.
00:52:352 (1) - Remove this NC and add one at 00:52:814 (2) - Done.
02:38:045 (5) - NC? It's weird to add a jump like this in contrast to the rest of the map if this isn't the start of a NC ok
02:48:429 (6) - Remove this and make 02:48:198 (5) - A repeating slider? I guess not bad...
02:55:122 (1,2,3) - I don't hear a triple in this part? Remove 02:55:237 (2) - please ok...
03:08:045 (3) - Unstack this. This slider is the only stacked slider and it looks weird. I'll keep it, it might be the only stacked slider but it's the only part with this rhythm as well.
04:23:275 (1) - I don't think this slider fits the style of the mapI think it's fine.
04:33:430 (4,5) - Remove 04:33:661 (5) - and make 04:33:430 (4) - A repeating slider ok
04:36:891 (5) - How about something like this? http://prntscr.com/96khog (Delete the note and move 04:37:122 (6,7,8,9,10) - down) Remapped.
04:59:276 (5) - NC?
05:05:737 (5) - NC
05:07:584 (9) - NC
05:08:276 (1) - Remove this NC
05:09:429 (5) - NC
05:10:353 (1) - Remove this NC
05:14:045 (5) - NC
05:15:891 (9) - NC? Changed all NCs
Good luck with this map
Thanks.